课件36张PPT。Sentence translation
& Writing Sentence translation
Writing boring
(无聊)terrible
(可怕)difficultSentence translationWriting得翻译、写作者得“天下“!Studying aims:
1. To learn the skills (技巧) of sentence translation(句子翻译).
2. To learn the skills of writing and improve(提高) writing abilities(能力).
3. Find out the secrets of English Learning.The old man and the seaWord for word translation(直译)Ernest Hemingway [?hemi?wei]欧内斯特·海明威 Transliteration(音译)Word for word translation(直译)在做句子翻译时,我们会更多的采用哪种翻译方式呢?Pulitzer Prize Nobel Prize in LiteratureThe old man and the sea(普利策奖)(诺贝尔文学奖)F. ExclamationsA. Positive statementsD. Wh-questionsC. Yes/No questionsB. Negative statementsF. ExclamationsE. Imperatives1. What a great fish he was!
2. Are you strong enough now for a truly ['tru?li] big fish?
3. Eat them, fish. Eat them, please.
4. Everything about him was old, except [?k'sept] his eyes.
5. Why do old men wake [we?k] so early?
6. But, nothing ['n?θ??] is easy.Tip 1: Before translating sentences, you’d better judge (判断)the sentence
type first. E. ImperativesB. Negative statementsC. Yes/No questionsD. Wh-questionsA. Positive statements[?a??n]主语(subject)谓语(verb)宾语(object)地点时间For example,
We practise volleyball at school on Wednesday.
He often … …
Make up sentences
(你能造出像这样结构的句子吗?)Tip 2: Using sentence structures can help us organize the language more easily. Important phrases:
Learn to accumulate(积累):show sb. around sp.
borrow sth. from sb.
get ready for sth.
be good at doing sth.
do well in sth.
go on a picnicshow sb. around 1. sp.borrowsth. from 2. sb.getready 3. for sth. begood at 4. doing dowell5. insth.aongo6. picnicsth.你能将这些打乱的单词排序组成正确的词组吗? (你能说出有关它们的句型吗?)thank timetakeThank you for sth.
Thanks for doing sth. It’s time for sth.
It’s time for sb. to do sth.It takes sb. some time to do sth.Tip 3: Try to remember the phrases and sentence patterns your teacher has taught you. While translating sentences, find out what are the key phrases and sentence
patterns.Important sentence patterns(重要句型)
Sentence type(句子类型)Chinglish(中式英语)Singular / plural form(单复数)Sentence structure(句子结构)Tenses and voices(时态和语态)32145Common mistakes
(常见错误)Attention!1.他步行上学要多长时间?
How long does it spend him to walk to school?Sentence structure(句子结构)take Sentence type(句子类型)2. 他们是读书俱乐部的成员吗?
They are members of the Reading Club .
Chinglish (中式英语)3. 她非常喜欢听音乐,因为音乐总能使她感觉很棒。
She very likes listening to music ,
because it can always make her feel great .Are theyvery much,?Singular / plural form(单复数)4. 这些苹果又大又红。
These apple are big and red.
5. 他们正在为野餐做准备。
They get ready for the picnic.
sare gettingTenses and voices(时态语态)Tip 4: Make as few mistakes as you can.
Checking carefully is the most important step. ? What makes a good composition (作文) ? ? How to improve (提高) writing skills?
Find out:ABAttention : Your handwriting, word count and the structure of the article are the first impression(印象) to
teachers. 书面表达
请以“我的好友”为题写一篇书面表达,包括以下内容:
1. 朋友叫乐乐,英文名字叫 Ella,今年12岁,身材高挑,长得非常漂亮。
2. 我和她都在七年级6班。乐乐学习成绩非常好,乐于助人。大家都很喜欢她。
3. 放学后喜欢和我从学校阅览室借一些书看。
4. 她的爱好是唱歌和跳舞。并且将来想要成为舞蹈家。
5. 下个星期,她将和我一起参观动物园。提示:请快速浏览作文要求! Step 1: Make a plan
体裁: A. 记叙文 B. 说明文
C. 议论文 D. 应用文
2. 人称: A. 第一人称 B. 第二人称 C. 第三人称
3. 时态: A. 一般现在时 B. 一般过去时 C. 一般将来时
√√√√√Outline Para 1: Introduction:Para 2: Main body:Para 3: Conclusion:1. 朋友叫乐乐,英文名字叫 Ella,今年12岁,身材高挑,长得非常漂亮。5. 下个星期,她将和我一起参观动物园。2. 我和她都在七年级6班。乐乐学习成绩非常好,乐于助人。大家都很喜欢她。3. 放学后喜欢和我从学校阅览室借一些书看。4. 她的爱好是唱歌和跳舞。并且将来想要成为舞蹈家。13245Step 2:Make an outline(快把它们安排进合适的段落吧!)Step 3 :DraftPara 1:Para 2: After school she likes to borrow some books from the school reading rooms with me . Her hobbies are dancing and singing. In the future she wants to be a dancer. Para 3: My good friend is Lele. Her English name is Ella. She is 12 years old. She is tall and slim . She is very beautiful. She and I are in Class 6 Grade 7. Lele studies very well. She is really helpful. We all like her very much. Next week, she will visit the zoo with me . My good friend Step 4:Revise the composition ?Tip1: Change the sentence structure or break it up.
My good friend is Lele. My good friend is called Lele.
She is 12 years old. She is a 12-year-old girl.
Her hobbies are dancing and singing.
She has many hobbies like dancing and singing.Tip2: Using synonyms (近义词)or advanced vocabulary (高级词汇).e.g. like/love/enjoy/ be fond of/ be interested in/
be crazy about/ be one’s favourite…
She is very beautiful. She is quite pretty.
Lele studies very well.
She does well in her study.
She is good at her study.Tip 3: There are many old sayings full of wisdom. While writing, quoting them in your composition can make your article attractive and vivid. ◆ No pain, no gain.(一分耕耘一分收获。)
◆ Practice ['pr?kt?s] makes perfect ['p??(r)f?kt].
(熟能生巧。)
◆ Where there is a will, there is a way.
(有志者事竟成。 )乐乐学习成绩非常好。As the saying goes “No pain, no gain.” Lele works hard, so she does well in her study. Tip 4: Using clauses(从句). She is very beautiful.
I think that she is beautiful
In the future she wants to be a dancer.
She wants to be a dancer when she grows up.
Tip 5: Expand ideas properly.
Para 3:Next week, she will visit the zoo with me .
我希望我们能一起玩的开心。
I hope we will have great fun together.
Tip 6 : Use transitional words.
like; for example; such as;
moreover; what’s more,
while; on the other hand;
since, because; as; because of;
in order to; so as to; in order that;
so that;1.表列举或说明:2.表补充:3.表对比:4.表原因:5.表目的: My good friend is called Lele ______ her English name is Ella. She is a 12-year-old girl. She is not only tall but also slim. I think that She is quite pretty. She and I are in Class 6 Grade 7. As the saying goes “No pain, no gain.” Lele works hard, so she does well in her study. ______ she is ready to help others. That’s why we all like her very much.
After school she likes to borrow some books from the school reading rooms with me . She has many hobbies like dancing and singing. She hopes that she can become a dancer in the future.
Next week, she will visit the zoo with me . I hope we
will have great fun together.
My good friend andAlso,Tip 6 : Use transitional words. Step 5 : check and copy1. 整体性:结构清晰(如:是否分段),正确使用标点符号,书写端正。
2. 优美性:语句连贯、优美(如:使用一些关联词,从句,高级词汇等)。
3. 完整性:要点齐全,适当拓展。
4. 准确性: 拼写正确、语法正确。? Tip1: Change the sentence structure or break it up.
?Tip2: Using synonyms (近义词)or advanced vocabulary.
?Tip 3: There are many old sayings full of wisdom. While writing, quoting them in your composition can make your article attractive and vivid.
?Tip 4: Using clauses(从句).
?Tip 5: Expand ideas properly.
?Tip 6 : Use transitional words.Secrets of learning English:Practice makes perfect.
2. Hard work leads to success.Thank you !