2010届高三二轮复习各地模拟题短文改错汇编(16篇)
1
(浙江省金华一中2010届高三上学期9月月考)
文中共有10处错误,要求在错误的地方增加(使用符号∧,并在其下方写明所漏单词)、删除(在单词上划斜线\)或者修改某个单词(在其下方划横线_,横线下方写明修改后的单词)。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your letter. I might get use to the life in American gradually. Food here remains the same all day and the school here is more relaxed though I take 2 AP courses and have to catch up with half year's courses. All the books are in English and I have to write many articles, that might seem difficult. Much more worse, I find out my oral English retrograde (倒退的). I have been out of my school only once, and I guess there are a lot of differences. There are some funny clubs, and I participate the basketball club in this semester. It`s amazing. By the way, thank you and all the other classmates in China for making souvenirs (纪念品) for myself. Send it to me when you all finish and I will be very happy.
Hope you will reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:
第一行:① use → used / ② American → America
第二行:③ relaxed → relaxing
第三行:④ (half) a (year’s)
第四行:⑤ that → which / ⑥ 去掉more
第五行:⑦ and → but
第六行:⑧ (participate) in
第七行:⑨ myself → me / ⑩ it → them
2
(辽宁省东北育才学校2010届高补一模)
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Dear friends,
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. 56. _____
We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the 57. _____
English Club. Although we have been members for a short 58. _____
period of time, we have made a great progress. That is 59. _____
because we are all very much active and the activities are not 60. _____
only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers 61. _____
here work hard and try his best to make the activities 62. _____
lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of 63. _____
us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am 64. _____
looking forward to see all of you again in the near future! 65. _____
Thank you.
答案:
56. real→really 57. weekend→weekends 58. √ 59. 去掉a 60.去掉 much
61. and→but 62. his→their 63. interested→interesting 64. us /\ greatly加 have
65. see→seeing
3
(辽宁省抚顺一中2010届高三上学期9月月考)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A Frenchman was once visiting London. He wished to take a walk to see a
city. But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of
English. So before he left his hotel, he stopped on the first corner and carefully
copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying .Then he
walked on .At last, he got lost. In several hours he found a policeman .The
Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn’t know the
name of his hotel, however he knew the name of the street. He then showed
the policeman that he copied in his notebook. It read : “One-way street”.
答案:
A Frenchman was once visiting London. He wished to take a walk to see a
the
city. But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of
去掉being
English. So before he left his hotel, he stopped on the first corner and carefully
After at
copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying .Then he
name where
walked on .At last, he got lost. In several hours he found a policeman .The
After
Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn’t know the
explain---explain to
name of his hotel, however he knew the name of the street. He then showed
but/yet
the policeman that he copied in his notebook. It read : “One-way street”.
What
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(浙江省温州中学2010届高三9月月考)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。
例如:It was very nice to get invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at
am
around 8 pm in Friday evening.
on
A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his car stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble. “It’s the motor.” said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around.
But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something ” he asked. “ I said you should check yours motor,” the horse replied. The man rushed to the nearer house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained , “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say.”
答案:
A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his car stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out
trying
the trouble. “It’s the motor.” said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around.
a surprised
But he saw only an old horse. “Did you say something ” he asked. “ I said you should check
anything
yours motor,” the horse replied. The man rushed to the nearer house. With a very excited voice,
your nearest in
he told the farmer∧ had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He
what however
explained , “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say.”
doesn’t
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(宁夏银川一中2010届高三上学期第二次月考)
该自我介绍中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意::1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I’m eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District , not far from Nottingham. I grow up in this village, so I know everyone here. That’s the problem---- the problem is there’s nothing to do , and nobody of my age to do it with ! At the moments I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop as I work. There’s a bus at 7:30 in the morning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30 . From September, therefore, I’m going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy . I can use his room . I’m really looking forward to living in Nottingham.
答案
I’m eighteen years old and I live in^ small village in the Peak District , not far from
a
Nottingham. I grow up in this village, so I know everyone here. That’s^ the problem---- the
grew not problem is ^there’s nothing to do , and nobody of my age to do it with ! At the moments I
that moment
travel into Nottingham every day to the shop as I work. There’s a bus at 7:30 in the
where
morning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30 . From September, therefore, I’m
and however
going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy . I can
with 删掉
use his room . I’m really looking forward to living in Nottingham.
6
(辽宁省开原市高级中学2010届高三第一次月考)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:1.每处错误仅限1词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Helen,
Thank you so much for your party at Christmas Eve. All of us enjoyed it very much. We liked the dishes you had cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you taught us. We hope you’ll teach us a lot many songs in the future. We’re leaving from our hometowns to spend the winter vacations. It seems that many of us are homesick before being away from home for such a long time. What are your plans Will you join in the tourist group organizing by our school We are busy prepare for our trips. Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you.
We hope you’ll have a good time.
Yours,
Xiao Hua
答案: 76. at—on 77. but—and 78. many—more 79. from—for
80. vacations---vacation 81. before—after 82. join后的in 去掉 83. organizing—organized
84. prepare—preparing 85. not able --- not being able
7
(浙江省杭州学军中学2010届高三第二次月考)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
有10处错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese.My teacher advised me to keep diaries.I followed her advices.Happily it worked.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher.She liked it very much that she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words.
答案:
When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties.The main problem
ran
was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese.My
and
teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices.Happily it worked.Soon I
advice
began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple
talking myself
English.One day I wrote a short story and showed/\to my teacher.She liked it very
So
much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one.I was great
去掉 a greatly
encouraged by their words.
8
(浙江省华维外国语学校2010届高三第一次月考)
文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently I read an article in a magazine.It was of a mother who was worried about his son just because of he always kept his hair long.The mother thought that was not fight,but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it.Different generations have different opinions on the same thing.That is what is meaning by “the generation gap”.We can see them in our daily lives.Most of our parents like listening to old song while young people prefer pop songs. Every time my father finds me listen to rock music,he always shouted,“Shut it off.It’s awful!” How can we deal the generation gap
答案:
Recently I read an article in a magazine.It was of a mother who was worried about his
about her
son just because of he always kept his hair long.The mother thought that was not fight,but the son felt there was nothing unusually about it.Different generations have different opinions on the same thing.
unusual
That is what is meaning by “the generation gap”.We can see them in our daily lives.
meant it
Most of our parents like listening to old song while young people prefer pop.
songs
Every time my father finds me listen to rock music,he always shouted,“Shut it off.It’s awful!”
listening shouts
How can we deal /\ the generation gap
with
9
(安徽省安庆市示范高中2010届高三四校联考)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行做出判断,如无错误,在刻行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正;该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行在边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下面划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词
注意:原行没能错的不要改
Last Sunday morning Mr. Wang left home early go fishing. 76.________
Very soon he got to a river. He sat on the bank or began 77.________
to fish. But he was unlucky. When sun was setting he still 78.________
didn’t catch any fish, and they felt very disappointed. 79.________
Oh his way home, he thought of that his wife might 80.________
laugh at him because he hadn’t caught any fish. How to save 81.________
face He became very worrying. Suddenly he got an idea. 82.________
He immediately run to the fish market and bought two 83.________
big fish. Then he hurried home happy, thinking that 84.________
his wife would praise him of getting the big fish. 85.________
答案:
76.go→to go 77.or→and 78.sun→the sun
79.they→he 80.thought of→thought 81.√
82.worrying→worried 83.run→ran 84.happy→happily
85.of→for
10
(辽宁省葫芦岛市第一高级中学2010届高三上学期第一次月考)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.
答案:
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told
took
one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join
for joining
us The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We
such
can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting.
happily which
We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time ∧visit the
to
area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests
interest
in it, reply to me soon.
11
(黑龙江省哈九中2010届高三上学期阶段测试)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three
hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet.
Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Piece of paper on my desk flew high
into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of
rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried
very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing sound from the back of the
house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back
room.
答案:
1. sudden--suddenly 2. hotter---hot 3. is--was 4. Piece--Pieces
5. out--out of 6. drop—drops 7. house前加the 8. loudly---loud
9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken
12
(浙江省杭州高级中学2010届高三第二次月考 )
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
例如:
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m.
are
in Friday evening
on
Under the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult work. Just clicking your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn’t step out the room. It seems easy and quick. And there’s always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from that you want, or the size is either too small nor too big. If you want to be different, you’d better not to buy clothes online. Once you put up the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people in the street wearing the same clothes like you.
答案:
under改为with; a去掉或者work改为job; clicking改为click; out后加of;
And改为But; that改为what; nor改为or; to去掉; up改为on; like改为as
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(浙江省湖州市菱湖中学2010届高三10月月考)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加. 删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How about join us The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
答案:
Dear John,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have ∧told one
took been
more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit∧ it. How about join us The
for joining
camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear
such
birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We
happily which
usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time ∧visit the area
to
and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it,
interest
reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
14
(吉林省长春外国语学校2010届高三上学期第一次月考)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking,
though they are middle school student. As we all know, smoking
do harm to human beings. More and more people have realized
that how serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it.
Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and other think
smoking can refresh himself . In fact, smoking causes many illnesses.
The most serious illness led by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile,
smoking is the waste of money. What’s worse, careless smokers
may cause danger fires.
答案:
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking,
have
though they are middle school student. As we all know, smoking
students
do harm to human beings. More and more people have realized
does
that how serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it.
bored
Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and other think
others
smoking can refresh himself . In fact, smoking causes many illnesses.
themselves
The most serious illness led by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile,
caused
smoking is the waste of money. What’s worse, careless smokers
a
may cause danger fires.
dangerous
15
(浙江省诸暨中学2010届高三10月月考)
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
例如:It is very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8
am
p.m. in Friday evening
on
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave in studying in
Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching
the computer software. An old saying go: “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this
idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got particular interested in
foreign cultures or customs. To meet our curiosity, I read English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As for a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key to success.
答案:
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, ∧richest man in the world, gave in studying in
the up
Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching
which (or—researched)
the computer software. An old saying go: “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this
goes
idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got particular interested in
particularly
foreign cultures or customs. To meet our curiosity, I read English stories every day. It seemed
and my
to be the best “meal” of a day. As for a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key to success exams
16
(辽宁省东北育才学校2010届高三第一次模拟)
下面短文中共有10处错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
The zoo has big basket for rubbish. People can throw waste into them. On the Saturday afternoons there are usually a lot of people around the cages which the lovely animals are kept, and last Saturday nobody was there. Mr. Patties was surprised.But he was even much surprised to see few children around the basket near the tiger’s cage. He quickly went up and looked at their heads and saw a little rat run about in the basket and looking for food. The rat afraid and the children were more interested in the rat than the tigers. How a lovely scene!
The zoo has big basket for rubbish . People can throw
baskets
waste into them . On the Saturday afternoons there
are usually a lot of people around the cages which
where/in which
the lovely animals are kept , and last Saturday nobody was
but
there . Mr. Patties was surprised . But he was even much
more
surprised to see few children around the basket near
a few/many
the tiger’s cage . He quickly went up and looked at
over
their heads and saw a little rat run about in the basket
running
and looking for food . The rat ^ afraid and the children
was
were more interested in the rat than in the tigers . How a lovely scene!
what
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