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2017年中考英语作文热点话题范文22篇
学术文化篇
1.沉迷网络游戏
题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢 请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。
提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in
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Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. 21·世纪*教育网
At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
2.怎样学好英语
世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。
要求： 1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
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How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
素质教育篇
3.如何减压让生活更美好
许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:
(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; (2) 我的压力是什么;
(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。 Less Pressure, Better Life
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Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!
4.学做好人好事
今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”
请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。
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Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character.
Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.
To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shortening the time for teachers when correcting them.
I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Lei Feng as our model and copy his spirit.
现在生活篇
5.怎样保持健康的生活习惯
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢 请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
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I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy.
First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we are supposed to do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.
If we don’t feel well, we are supposed go to see the doctor at once.
6.毕业感想
初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。
提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
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How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life.
One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.
I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
社会经济篇
7.低碳生活
现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
提示词语：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse
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Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.
Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.
And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.
8.节约用水
水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。
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As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers, too. 【出处：21教育名师】
Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me!
Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.
人生哲理篇
9.幸福
幸福是什么 幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，80-100
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Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child.
Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
10.感恩
对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我生命，让我健康成长;对老师心存感恩，因为他们给了我教诲，让我抛却愚昧;对朋友心存感恩，因为他们给了我友爱;对社会心存感恩，因为社会给了我智慧和力量。自从国家实施义务教育以来，书本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困助学金等。面对这些，我们应该心存感恩，感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。让我们永远记住：感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会!
请以“感恩”为话题写一篇80—100字的作文。
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What should we thank
The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for.
The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life! The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, gives us knowledge ability, and puts on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us. The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life. The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food.
Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man.21cnjy.com
11.保护环境
6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日, 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕,污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重......如何保护我们的环境 请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world ”为题写一篇短文。
提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重;2.砍伐森林严重;3. 大气污染严重;4. 白色垃圾等。
要求：如何改善/保护环境 至少:3---4个方面, 80字左右的。
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How to protect/save our environment/world
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.
Water is polluted; we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, the population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc.
Not only does it affect our lives and health, it but also has a great affection in the future. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.
We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle, reduce, reuse things .Don’t waste things. This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags. We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world becomes more and more beautiful.
12.拯救地球
地球是我们人类共同的家园，人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文参评。
1.重要性：只有一个地球 2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难
3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V. 保护
注意： (1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数;
(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
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Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.2-1-c-n-j-y
So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.
Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!
兴趣爱好
13.爱好
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My Hobby
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.
One of my favorite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xun, I come back to the old time of China.21*cnjy*com
14.兴趣
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My best subject
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
校园安全
15.校园安全
建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。
内容提示：(1)不带管制刀具到学校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。
参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things;洗澡：have a bath;打架：fight;紧急情况：emergency;交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。
写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3)严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。
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Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.
In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Li Hua
16.饮食安全
假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑.你看了下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿.
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Today, I received the reader's letter. I was shocked at it. www.21-cn-jy.com
Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. What's more, some businessmen shouldn't be only interested in making money. They must care about people's health. We'd better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.
Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.
理想交友
17.我的理想职业
最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。请根据你们小组的情况写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。
组员 理想职业 原因
Mary 时装设计师(fashion designer) 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画
Kate 园艺工(gardener) 喜爱植物，想让城市更美
Mike 作家 愿意与别人分享精彩故事 Tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物
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注意： 1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数);
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
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Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.
Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a gardener, she lives plants, and she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. He’d like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. He’d like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe.
Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
18.我最好的朋友
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My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him.
旅游交通
19.旅游介绍
介绍首都北京
请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信.
Dear Li Lei,
I haven't heard from you for a long time. I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Tommy
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Dear Tommy,
I'm glad to know you will come to Beijing.21教育网
Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.【版权所有：21教育】
Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. What's more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
20.交通问题
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢 21·cn·jy·com
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)
内容包含： (1)遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。
(2)别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。 (3)劝父母不能酒后驾车。 你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。21教育名师原创作品
参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
注：第一段已给出，不计入总数
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With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. 21世纪教育网版权所有
But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks that traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
节日活动
21.传统节日介绍
根据中文大意和英语提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于80词的短文。所给英文提示词供选用。注意：不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。2·1·c·n·j·y
假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike 写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。www-2-1-cnjy-com
内容提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间)< Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money>21*cnjy*com
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Dear Mike,
How are you I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days.
Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think that cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck. How happy we are.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Liu Wei
22.开展有意的活动
为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。
提示： 1. 衣着整洁; 2. 保持环境卫生;
3. 待人有礼，乐于助人; 4. 遵守交通规则;
5. ……
要求： 1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
3. 词数：80词左右。
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How to Behave Well
In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.
It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
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2017中考必考的英语作文
第一篇：
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现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.21教育名师原创作品
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My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
第二篇：
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每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。
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Friends
What are friends We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.21*cnjy*com
第三篇：
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最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何 根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers ”为题，写一篇短文。
原因
赞成 帮助他人是美德；帮助他人就是帮助自己；
反对 怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解；
你的观点 （至少两点）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇：美德virtue
Should We Help Strangers
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．21世纪教育网版权所有
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Should We Help Strangers
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．【版权所有：21教育】
Some think we should try to help strangers． Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．【出处：21教育名师】
However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．
In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love．
第四篇：
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某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：
1. 尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；
2. 我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”；
3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间；
4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。
5. 有问题时，我们…
要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数90个左右；
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充完整。
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How to Deal with Our Study Problems
Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.
We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don’t lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.
When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.
第五篇：
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学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：
1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；
2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；
3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时
间都奉献给了工作；
4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。
5. 我希望 ……
要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数90个左右；
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。
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The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
第六篇：
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假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下：21*cnjy*com
1. 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款
2. 10月23日，星期六
3. 路径：学校—市中心
4. 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得善款5万多元。
5. 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为…
注意：1. 报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数80个左右。
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Walk for children in poor areas
Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.
It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end.
We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
第七篇：
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“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为一名绿色使者吗？请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题，写一篇短文。
注意：
1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2.短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort21cnjy.com
How to Be a Greener Person
It’s our duty to protect our environment around us.
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How to be a greener person
It’s our duty to protect the inviyonment around us. 【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
When we go to school, we should ride a bike or take a bus. When we go out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag. At home we can save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the ligts. At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic bags. We shoudn’t listen to pop music or spit in pulic.
Let’s do something to protect our environment.
第八篇：
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“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄 ”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……www-2-1-cnjy-com
一．Dr Norman Bethune 1．Natlonality(国籍): Canada 2．Hobby: taking photos 3．Main stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; invented medical tools 二．Liu Xiang1．Nationality: China2．Hobby: singing3．Main stories: won the first4．Olympic gold medal in the men' s 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne
从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄，以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。
要求：①包含所选信息卡上的内容；②适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等；③不能出现表明你身份的信息；④词数80左右，不含已给出部分。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me,
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The Hero in My Heart
As we know， most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.
Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938， he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.
I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.2·1·c·n·j·y
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The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me， Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.
Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004， he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men，s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne. Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.
With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.
第九篇：
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请以“My Favourite Great Book”为题, 根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文, 注意适当表达自己的看法。www.21-cn-jy.com
1. Who is the writer of the great book
2. What is the main idea of the book
3. Who are the important characters
4. What’s the theme of the story
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My Favourite Great Book
My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain.
Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy. He lives with his aunt Polly. His aunt is strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends, Huck and Joe. With Huck, he goes looking for treasure; with Becky, he gets lost in a cave. And finally Tom and Huck find a box of gold. Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important characters. Becky is pretty with fair hair. Huck is Tom’s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man of the story.
The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.
第十篇：
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某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:
1. 父母规矩太多, 过于强调学习成绩, 不理解自己等问题;
2. 你对这些问题的看法;
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out
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How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.21教育网
第十一篇：
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Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club, 从那以后，她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示，写一篇英语短文。
In the past Now
Personalities shy, quiet, get nervous easily brave, outgoing…
Hobbies reading reading, singing…
Abilities good at dancing, singing…
要求:
1. 覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节；
2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
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Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time. However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing and dancing. She is good at them as well.
People sure change all the time, right What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.
第十二篇：
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以“My Weekend Housework”为题写一篇短文，谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活，并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活。用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。要求：内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，表达正确。
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My Weekend Housework
On last Saturday morning I got up at about seven o’clock. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon I cleaned the yard. After that I folded my clothes and made my bed.
第十三篇：
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实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于表达，更要善于倾听。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。
注意：1．词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分己为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名利人名。
Being a Good Listener
Good afternoon，everyone!
Today I’d like to share my ideas of“Being a Good Listener”with you.
Thank you for your listening!
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Being a Good Listener
Good afternoon, everyone!
Today I’d like to share my ideas of “Being a Good Listener” with you.
Good listening can always show respect and build good relationships with people.21·cn·jy·com
Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand them better and trust each other. Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to their classmates, then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.
We’d better be patient while listening. Don’t forget to keep silent while listening. In a word, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
第十四篇：
【写作要求】
为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
1.慎重交友 2.遇险报警 3.安全饮食 4. 其他(1-2点)
注意：1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥
2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3)词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad21·世纪*教育网
How to keep safe
As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions. 2-1-c-n-j-y
First,
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How to keep safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.
In short, safety must come first !
第十五篇：
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你喜欢阅读吗？请你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。
内容包括：
1. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。
2. 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。
3. 号召大家都读书。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80词左右。
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Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
提高英语写作水平，从积累和模仿开始！
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初中英语作文技巧和模板
(一)掌握技巧：
(1)注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。
(2)确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现
在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。
(二)巧用连接词
要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词
表示罗列增加
First, second, third,
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing…for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,
Especially / In particular,
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment
form now on, from then on,
at the same time, meanwhile,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
furthermore, in fact, actually
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other
hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of
course, after all,
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only…but also, as well as, both…and, either…or, neither
…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a
result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that
表示条件关系
as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless
表示让步关系
though, although, as, even if, even though, whether…or…, however, whoever,
whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when,
whom)
表示举例
for example, for instance, such as…, take…for example
表示比较
be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like,
just as,
表示目的
for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,
表示强调
in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,
obviously, above all,
表示概括归纳
in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far
as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in
1考生列举出解决问题的多种途径:
1.问题现状
2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).2·1·c·n·j·y
2.观点型作文：要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1.有一些人认为。。。 2.另一些人认为。。。3.我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some eople say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover,④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that⑨----------------原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them③-----------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing,⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).21·世纪*教育网
3.作文的框架
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significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.21cnjy.com
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.
On the one hand, ________.
On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.
In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons www-2-1-cnjy-com
to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.2-1-c-n-j-y
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.
I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
1：投诉信
Dear_______,
I am . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(总体介绍). In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉) to ____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).www.21-cn-jy.com
I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.【出处：21教育名师】
Yours sincerely【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
Li Ming
2：询问信
Dear ______,
I am _________________________(自我介绍). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要询问的内容)
First of all, what are _________________________________ (第一个问题) Secondly, when will________________________________ (第二个问题) Thirdly, is _________________ (第三个问题)
I would also like to inquire _________________________________(将最重要的问题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects
Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.【版权所有：21教育】
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Dear___________,
I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)21世纪教育网版权所有
The reason for ______________is that______________________________（给出原因）.I________, so I ___________________________________(给出细节)
I would also like to request ________________________(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.21·cn·jy·com
Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码). I look forward to a favorable reply.21*cnjy*com
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
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小作文热点专题及写作句型攻略
健康问题
健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样。
典型例句 （把下列句子译为汉语,注意划线部分）
1. It is very important to keep healthy.
2. How can we keep healthy
3. We can't go to sleep too late. We can't get up too late.
4. We should eat healthy food.
5. We should do more exercise.
6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a headache.
7. I didn't feel like eating anything.
8. I decided to see the doctor.
9. In the doctor's, the doctor looks over me carefully.21*cnjy*com
10. He said: "Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.
11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful.
12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.
13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.
例文
1、根据图示，简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥。要求：词数80左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
参考答案：
All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
2.健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出。
信息提示：①健康饮食。 ②.早睡早起,不熬夜。 ③.参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
【参考范文】
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
As we know, we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning. We must also have the right kind of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food. Don't forget to wash your hands before meals. Staying up late at night is bad for our health. If we can't get enough sleep. We may have a headache. We should go to bed early and go to bed early. Of course it's necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong.
3、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用）
有些学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。
参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
范文：
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.
In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
关于环境保护问题（热点）
环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现频率高。
典型句子 （把下列句子译为汉语）
1. It’s our duty to save water
2. As we know, water is very important to man,
3. We can’t live without water.
4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.
5. But some people don’t care about it.
6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. 21教育名师原创作品
7. It's our duty to protect our environment。
8. It is very important to take care of our environment
9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
15. Trees are very helpful and important for us.
17. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the
future. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
1 、 6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重……。假如你是学生Jone，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境 ”专题演讲比赛，要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题1—3方面;2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例1—3方面进行说明，字数80左右。
Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends,
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.
As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse .In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do How to protect our environment For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags .when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.
There is only one earth. I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!
2、保护环境
( 四川乐山) 从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。
内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋；
2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本；
3.离开教室应关灯；
4.最好走路或骑自行车上学；
5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等
注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。
4.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
Thank you for your listening!
3.环境问题：今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境 请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world ”为题写一篇短文。
提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3. 大气污染严重
4. 白色垃圾等。
要求：如何改善/保护环境 至少:3---4个方面， 80字左右的。
范文：
How to protect/save our environment/world
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today . Water is polluted, we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.
We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere .We want to recycle, reduce ,reuse things .Don’t waste things. This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags . We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world is more and more beautiful .www-2-1-cnjy-com
语言学习 （热点）
这是中考中的老话题，形式多样。
典型例句（把下列句子译为汉语）
1. My favorite subject is English。
2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。
3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。
4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China. English becomes more and more useful。
5. So English is very important and I like English very much。
6. We have a lot of fun in the English class。
7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。
8. I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。
9. I like English and try my best to learn it。
（浙江丽水）Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示：【出处：21教育名师】
When did you start learning English (in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)
What is difficult to learn (listening, grammar…)
What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well (watch English movies, sing English songs…)
参考作文：
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.21·世纪*教育网
兴趣与爱好（热点）
兴趣爱好是中考常考话题，难度相对较小
1、介绍你的兴趣爱好
My Hobby
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.
One of my favourite hobby is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Scorates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xu, I come back to the old time of China.
Reading really affects my life.
2、My hobby（我的爱好）
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
·What exactly your hobby is;
·When and how you became interested in this hobby;
·Why you enjoy your hobby;
·About your hopes and plans for the future.
写作要求：
1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。
3.词数60-80.
My hobby is reading books When I was seven years old. I became interested in reading books. I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books can also teach me how to be a good person. Books even can solve many problems for me. I will read more good books to improve myself.
写人记事篇
这是中考出项频率最高的话题，其特点是难度相对较小，学生都有话可写，但掌握一些基本句子和模仿范文对夺取高分非常必要。
典型例句 （把下列句子译为汉语）
1. His name is Jack。
2. He was born in London in 1982。
3. He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos。
4. He is 20 years old。
5. He comes from England。
6. He is a good ping-pong player。
7. He is medium build。
8. He has short hair。
9. He is outgoing. Every one likes to talk with him. He gets on well with us。
10. He teaches English very well。
11. He works very hard. He works in No.5 Middle School。www.21-cn-jy.com
12. He loves watching football games after work。
13. He often helps me with my English。
14. At the age of six, he began to play table tennis。【版权所有：21教育】
旅游和介绍地方篇（热点）
中考高频率话题，出题形式灵活。
典型例句 （把下列句子译为汉语）
1. Last Sunday(Saturday,…) ,it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)21cnjy.com
2. I got up very early (late). After breakfast I went to …with my friends by bike, bus，…【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
3. We enjoyed ourselves。
4. We forgot the time. We didn't come back until 5 o'clock。2·1·c·n·j·y
5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy。
6. I thought I would never forget this trip。
7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。
8. We visited a lot of places of interest。
9. We had a good time there。
10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap。
例文
1、（四川自贡）请以主人的身份向外国朋友介绍一下首都北京和北京几个著名的景点。根据以下提示写一篇短文。21教育网
1.北京是一个历史悠久的城市；
2.北京有许多名胜古迹；
3.紫禁城是最受来宾欢迎的景点之一；
4.故宫非常漂亮和著名；
5.长城也是非常美丽可去一看的地方
6.天安门广场是一个好去处，可去漫步。
注：⑴ 字数80左右。
⑵ 请不要逐字翻译，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯、意思完整、符合逻辑。
⑶ 参考词汇：紫禁城 The Forbidden City 故宫 The Summer Palace
天安门广场 Tian’anmen Square
参考作文：
Beijing is a city with a long history. There are many places of interest in it. Now let me tell you some of them.
The Forbidden City is one of the most popular ones for visitors. It is very big and you can learn much about the history of China from it. The Summer Palace is beautiful and famous, too. The Great Wall is also a wonderful place to go. And Tian' anmen Square is a good place for people to take a walk.
I hope you will enjoy your staying in Beijing.
新生事物评价（热点）
这是中考热点，这类文章的特点是写作难度大，因此需要学生掌握方法，和基本句式，以做到考试时心中不乱。
典型例句 （把下列句子译为汉语）
1. Computer is becoming more and more important
2 .We should make good use of it.
3 .It maybe get in the way of our study.
4. We can do lots of things with it’
5. It makes our life more easy
6. Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.
例文 网上购物
Doing Shopping Online
With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out of the room.
It seems easy and quick. But there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.
Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.
梦想和未来
这也是一个老话题，中考常考，难度较小。（我的理想/我的理想中（ideal）的职业/我的未来）
1.我的梦想是当一名歌手
My Dream
Now let me tell you my first dream. I will be a popular and famous singer in the future and I will sing around the world. I love singing so much.21世纪教育网版权所有
Of course, I will work hard and then buy a flat for my parents in Xiamen. I find it’s such a pleasant city to live in. I will keep a pet dog and I might even keep a cute cat. Although my dream hasn’t come true yet, I will try my best to make it come true and I won’t never give up forever！21*cnjy*com
烦恼篇
这类作文难度较大，掌握基本句式，背诵范文非常必要。
典型例句 （把下列句子译为汉语）
1.I am sorry to hear that….
2.You should learn to forget….
3.You had better….
4 You should learn to relax.
5.You can ask your teacher for help.
例文
（陕西省卷）假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile21·cn·jy·com
写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整；2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；3.词数在60-80左右
Dear Han Mei,
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, "Be careful while crossing the street." "Put on more clothes." "Did you do a good job at school " and so on. I'm annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do
Yours,
Alice
(提示：注意书信格式，标点。)
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.
If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
应 用 类
通知 Planting Trees (植树)
Boys and girls,
Attention, please! March 12 is our Tree-planting Day. We have decided to go and plant trees that day. All the students in our school are asked to take part in the activity. Each class must take five or six basins with you to water young trees. We are going to gather at the school gate at 7∶30 on the morning of March 12. And then, our school bus will take us to the West Hill. Please don’t be late.
That’s all. Thank you.
便条 Asking for Absent leave (事假条)
Mr. Zhao,
I’m sorry to tell you that my grandmother became ill suddenly last night. She got a fever and brought up everything she ate. But my parents aren’t in, I have to take her to the hospital. The doctor told me my grandma had caught a bad cold and that she had to stay in bed for several days. So I am writing to ask for a three days’ leave.
Thank you.
Your student，
Wu Ping
日记 Visiting a Farm (参观农场)
Apr 3,Sunday Fine
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. We had to say good-bye to the workers.
书信/邮件 （见上文）
启事（略。 参见课本相关内容。包括电话留言、海报等）
写景抒情 Our School Campus （我们的校园）
I am a high school student. My school campus is very big and beautiful. There are many tall buildings, such as the library and teaching buildings, and there are many tall trees and beautiful flowers. There is also a playground in our school. We often play football, play basketball, play games and have PE classes on it. Our teachers are very kind and friendly to us. They work hard and take good care of us. They are our good friends. We all love them very much and love our school campus very much, too.
事物/场所描述说明 Man-made Satellites （人造卫星）
Man-made satellites have been sent up into space by many countries. These satellites go around the earth and help us to learn more about the earth, the weather and other things. Most countries use these satellites to send and receive messages. For example, with their help China can send its TV and radio programs to the other side of the world. Foreign countries can send their programs to China. We can also use satellites to help us to make telephone calls to foreign countries.
The History of the Internet （互联网的历史）
The Internet was set up in the 1960s. At that time, computers were large and puter networks didn’t work well. If one computer in the networks broke down, the whole network stopped.2-1-c-n-j-y
At first, the Internet was only used by the government, but, in the early 1970s, universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to use it, too. By the start of the 1970s, computers had become cheaper and easier to use.
Today it is easy to get on line and it is said that millions of people use the Internet every day. Sending e-mails is more and more popular.
The Internet has now become the most important part of people’s life.
事理/规则（定）说明 Air and Pollution (空气与污染)
No air means death. Although we can’t see it, there is air around us. So air is everywhere and it gives life to every living thing. Bad air makes people ill. We must have fresh air to keep us in good health.
In the city there are a great many people and there are too many cars running on the roads. The gas which the cars spread out is full of poison. Every day we breathe it in again and again. This makes us feel sick.
Besides so many cars, there are many factories too. From chimneys of these factories, we get the smoke usually in black and grey colour. This kind of smoke, when it mixes the air, is dangerous to our health. It is because smoke contains many poisonous solids and gases. So in order to keep us healthy we have to go out to the countryside to breathe more fresh air. Or we can go up hills to get more fresh air.
叙事说理 Friends （朋友）
Many teenagers feel that the most important people in their lives are their friends. They believe that their family members, and in particular their parents, don’t know them as well as their friends do. It is very important for teenagers to have one good friend or a circle of friends. Even when they are not with their friends, they usually spend a lot of time talking among themselves on the phone. This communication is very important in children’s growing up, because they can discuss something difficult to their family members.
Friendship （友谊）
Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that people can enjoy． A true friend does indeed find pleasure in our joy and share sorrow in our grief． In time of trial， he or she is always at our side to give us his or her help and comfort．A true friend can always be trusted， loved and respected． If you tell a friend your secrets， he or she won’t tell anyone else． Friends share each other’s joys and sorrows．They help each other when they are in trouble， and cheer each other up when they are sad．The most important thing is that a friend always understands you. In conclusion，when you have made a good friend，don’t forget him or her．
We Have Only One Earth （我们只有一个地球）
The earth is our home. All the people live on it. We have only one earth. To protect it is our duty. But some people couldn’t realize this. They pour dirty water into the river and the lake. They throw rubbish about. They spit onto the ground. They cut down the trees. I think everyone should do helpful things for her. We must stop polluting the river and the lake. We should plant many trees and grasses to make our environment nice and clear. We should know we have only one earth and we should protect her.
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英语书面表达
新目标（Go for it！）中考第三轮题型专练复习
【考点扫描】
书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：
1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；
2、看图作文；
3、根据汉语提示作文。
无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。
导图分析
中考英语作文评分标准
一档1 - 5分 未完成试题规定的任务
——明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是表达能力有限。
—— 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
—— 大量语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解
—— 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。
二档6-10分 未恰当完成试题规定的任务
—— 遗漏或未描述清楚影响主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
—— 语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。
——较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，有限了对写作内容的理解。
——较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚的传达给读者。
中考英语作文评分标准
三档11 - 15分 基本完成试题规定的任务
——含有所有试题规定的主要内容。
—— 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
——语法结构或词汇方面的应用基本正确，有一些错误但不影响对写作内容的理解。
—— 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。总体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
四档16-18分 完全完成了试题规定的任务
—— 含有所有内容，布局合理。
—— 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇知识。
——体现较强的语法应用能力，语法结构和词汇方面基本没有错误。
——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
——有亮笔之处。
How can we write a good composition
文章的形成过程：
单词 短语，结构 句子
文章
可见：
句子在书面表达中起着举足轻重的作用，因此，
句子的训练成为写文章的必要手段之一。
分析文章的形成过程
方法一：用以前所记忆的短语和结构造句。
他总是鼓励我们努力学习。
她的父母不允许她 晚上一个人出去。
方法二:多记同义句和同义词。
他还没到上学的年龄。
He is so young that he can’t go to school.
He is such a young boy that he can’t go to school.
He is too young to go to school.
He isn’t old enough to go to school.
He always encourages us to work hard.
encourage sb to do sth
so—that--
such-that-
too—to--
enough-to do sth
训练句子的方法：
Her parents don’t allow her to go out alone at
night.
allow sb to do sth
例如英语九年级上有这样一句话：
I’m looking forward to this.
(仿写1) 我正期望着收到你的来信。
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
(信尾使用）
(仿写2)我正期望着你的答复。
I’m looking forward to your reply.
(仿写3)我期望着暑假的到来。
I look forward to the summer holiday.
方法三：仿写
方法四：遇到难以表达的句子，可另辟
蹊径，化难为易，化繁为简。
1.我们应该守时
2.我们不应该闯红灯(traffic lights)
我们应该按时做每件事.
当交通灯是红灯时,我们不应该过马路.
We should do everything on time
We shouldn’t go across the road when
the traffic lights are red.
1.句型、结构 --- 避免出现Chinglish 现象。
We all very like her.
We all like her very much.√
He by bike to school.
He goes to school by bike. √
避免方法：
多记短语和句型
2 注意语法项目
人称一致:
Alice is my best friend, he likes sports.
时态:
He has gone to Guilin yesterday.
主谓一致:
This pair of shoes are mine.
The shoes are new.
习惯用法:
He helps me in my English.
√
she
is
with
went
审—列—加—连—美—查—誊
书面表达七步法
审：认真审题，
找出文章要表达的中心及要求,确定人称和时态。
书面表达第一步：审
节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他, 请以 “My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇80-120词的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。
要点：(1)每天步行上学; (2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；
（3）不用水时, 记得关水龙头，循环使用水；
（4）充分使用纸张（5）不使用塑料袋。
参考词：on foot, turn off, tap(水龙头), reuse,
make full use of, plastic bag
写作要求：（1） 内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；（2） 不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。
文章中心:
我叫李明(全部考生都叫李明)，我的低碳生活
要求:
1.80-120词
2.写作要求(1)(2)
列：用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.
书面表达第二步：列
I go to school on foot every day.
I walk to school every day.
2. remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans .
3. turn off the tap, reuse water.
4. I make full use of paper.
5. Don’t use plastic bags.
I go to school on foot every day./ I walk to school every day.
2. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom.
3. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water. for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers.
4. I think saving paper is necessary, so I make full use of paper.
5. I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when I go shopping.
为了衔接紧密和避免逐条翻译的嫌疑，可
以在适当的地方添加事例或紧密相连的话,
然后连成句。
加：加首尾，使文章结构完整。可以采用总分总，分总结构。开头应注意简洁，最好采用开门见山的形式，结尾应注意与题目或开头相呼应，并且要紧扣主题。
书面表达第三步：加
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school
student. I like having a low-carbon life.
结尾：It’s important for us to protect the
environment.
It’s important for us to live a low-carbon
life to protect the environment.
开头：
（比较）
√
连：恰当运用连接词,使文章层次清晰,各部分衔接自然。
书面表达第四步:连
1.When I am not using water, I always turn
off the tap. I often reuse water. for example,
when I finish washing the clothes, I use the
water to clean the floor and water flowers。
2.I think saving paper is necessary, so I make full use of paper
恰当的连接词
时间顺序 first, second, then, finally/at last, soon, suddenly
空间顺序 here, there, next to, in front of, at the back of
对称顺序 on one hand, on the other hand
转折顺序 but, however, though
因果顺序 because, as, thanks to, as a result (of)
条件 if, unless
递进顺序 what’s more, besides,
插入语 I think, I’m afraid, you know, as we all know
书面表达第五步：美
美：写好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己
的语言功底。
1.I think saving paper is necessary, so I make full use of paper.
I make full use of paper because I think saving paper is necessary .
2.She can swim, so can I.
She can swim, I can swim, too
3. He helped an old man who was lost yesterday.
He helped an old man yesterday, the old man was lost.
但要注意：一般的同学一定要以写正确/通顺的简单句为最基本要求，切勿一味地追求高水平，反而弄巧成拙。特别是第三句，我们班能正确运用定语从句写句子的人不多。
better
better
查：检查
1 格式是否正确
2 词汇 是否用对
3 是否符合英语习惯表达
4 时态是否正确
5 用主动语态好还是用被动语态好
6 标点是否用对
7人称是否用对
8 主谓是否一致
9 名词的单复数等
书面表达第六步：查
誊：誊写。将检查后的作文整洁 地抄写在横线上
注意：横线就是我们英语作业本的第三条线（基准线），小写字母 都要穿过这条线。
卷面潦草一定要扣分。
书面表达第七步：誊
f /g /j /p /q /y
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I like having a low-carbon life.
I go to school on foot every day. I always remember
to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I
leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I
always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for
example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the
water to clean the floor and water flowers. I never use
plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I
often make full use of paper.
It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
a nice head(总)
a
nice
body
（分）
a nice tail（总）
how to
write a
good
composition
开头:开门见山
中间
结尾:
书面表达 七步法
（审-列-加-连-美-查-誊）
抓要点,列短语
短语扩句
找连接词
连句成段
与主题相呼应，
紧扣主题
假设你们班正在开展“争当文明学生”为主题班会的活动，
请同学们小组讨论。根据下列要点，可适当发挥，以“To be polite students”为题用英语写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。字数80—120字.
要点：1.在校对老师有礼貌；
2.按时完成作业，不抄别人的;
3. 积极参加各种课外活动;
4.在公共场合对人友好,礼待他人;
5.给老人和带小孩的人让座;
6.不乱丢垃圾.
用书面表达七步法写这篇短文。
