The ways to improve your writing

课件18张PPT。Glad to see you, everybody!English writing --The ways to improve your writing
activitiessubjectsclassmatesteachers…busy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantastic…
boring/terrible/so-so…Talk about your school lifePair work: What do you usually do…?
What do you think of…?
What/Who is your favorite…?
How are you getting on with…?
Do you…?
…扩写练习：likes playing sports healthyhealthyHe is a boy.He is a ____________ boy.He is a __________ boy who___________________.I like music.I like________ music.I like________ music that_______________ _ .dancedancecan make me excited仿写练习：目的原因She always______________________ to _______________ because___________________.relaxlistens to some musicmusic is fantasticrelax
study better
get some knowledge
keep healthy
have a rest
have fun
get good grades
…Miss CoolMr. Ball仿写练习：
It is__________ for____ to ________________.necessaryhimdifficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strange
dangerous/difficult/wonderful/possible
impossible/unbelievable/unexpected…
It is ___________ for children to play in the street.read booksdangerousI am going to have a trip to the West Park with my friend. I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. It is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. A找出用所学句型写的好句。 Choose good words and sentences to improve your writing .strategyCompare:B is better than A in AHow glad I am! I can do many things of my own. I am going to have a trip to the West Park with my friend. I will also do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. Isn’t my plan nice?Bbeginningkey sentencelinking words连词ending I am going to have a trip to the West Park with my friend. I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. It is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. fluency流畅
consecution条理 My hobbies
( Beginning ): ___________________________________. ( Key sentence A):______________________. I often read in my free time. I read many kinds of books. And I like the stories that have good endings.
(Key sentence B ): ______________________. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I can’t sing English songs well, I like them a lot. (Key sentence C ): _____________________.I often play ping-pong after classes. When I am doing sports, I forget all my trouble. Of course it is necessary for students to play sports.
(Ending) _______________________________________.Can you add a beginning, two other key sentences, some linking words and an ending?Practice:I am a lover of readingTitle:____________ totogeneral总specific分specific分general总I have a lot of hobbies and enjoy doing many things in my free time.I am a lover of reading.I am also a music lover.I like sports as well.In short, I enjoy my life in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.My hobbiesBeginning: Key sentence B:
Key sentence A:
Ending: Main part
(正文): Key sentence C:
(linking words)Make an outline for the following composition:
三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自拟(80词左右)（2007衢州卷)Use outline提纲 to improve your writing strategyoutline提纲According to your own outline ,use some good words and sentences to finish your composition.Writing I always…to… because…
It is … for… to …who/ that 引导的定语从句。oSum upHow to improve your writingTips :
1.Make an outline.
2.Choose good words and sentences.
More tips:1.如果复合句用不好就不要用，可以使用简单句，文
章算不上完美，但很实用。要牢记 “避繁就简”原
则。当然长句短句交叉使用最好。
2.把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也
不要少写。
3.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连
贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and ,so ,or, but, become, What’s more; not only…but also, however, neither…nor 等等。你如何写开头,结尾1.开头常用词语：
as far as we know 据我们所知
as everybody knows 众所周知
at present 目前 first of all 首先
To tell the truth 老实说
2.结尾常用词语：
after all 毕竟 at last finally, 最后
in a word 总而言之
we hope that··· 我们希望
In short 简言之 clearly 显然
如何添加过度句、连接词补充说明 for example, besides，In addition(此外）， What’s worse! What’s more! Worst of all.
转折 however, yet, but
原因 thanks to, because of
结果 as result of , so ，so···that
句式富于变化例如；1. Jack came home at 7am yesterday.
--Jack didn’t came home until 7am yesterday.
2. We are good friends. We should help each other. ( good)
-We are good friends and we should help each other. (better)
--As we are good friends , we should help each other. ( best)

3. I was careless. I lost a bag on the ground. (good )
---I was careless and lost a bag on the ground. (better)
---I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. (best)
Homework: 我市英语教学网开设了“中学生论坛”，请你结合自己的初中生活和真实感受，以A good teacher in my eyes为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
(You should make an outline first)Goodbye and good luck!