写作园地
正反观点类议论文写作
[感悟范文]
假如你是Tom，请你根据表格中的信息，给一家英文报社编辑写一封信，告诉他你们班同学对克隆的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。词数：120～150。
[范文]
①Recently
in
my
class,
there
is
a
heated
debate
about
“To
clone
or
not
to
clone”．
②The
students
for
cloning
say
that
cloning
can
help
the
wildlife
in
danger,
so
we
can
have
more
and
more
wildlife
in
the
world.
③Moreover,
it
can
help
the
old
and
the
sick.
④For
example,
some
cloned
organs
can
be
transplanted
in
their
bodies.
⑤However,
the
students
against
it
say
that
cloning
can
speed
up
the
rate
of
growing
old
and
death.
⑥What's
worse,
cloning
can
make
our
society
confused.
⑦There
would
be
two
or
more
of
you,
two
or
more
of
your
parents
and
so
on.⑧In
my
opinion,
cloning
is
a
new
technology,
so
scientists
should
do
their
best
to
make
full
use
of
it
to
help
human
beings.
[技法讨论]
正反观点类议论文通常给出图表或提纲，学生需将所给的信息表达准确、完整、无遗漏，然后按照要求阐述自己的看法。
正反观点类议论文写作一直是高考写作常考的体裁。此类文章一般结构如下：1．开头
提出一种论点或一个问题。
2．主体
论点提出后，我们就要根据汉语提示部分提供的事实，摆出正反双方的论据进行分析、论证，使论点得到足够的支持。因此，正反双方时常用Some...however(
while,
but)
some...；引入论据时常用表示递进关系的过渡词besides,
also,
even,
what's
more,
too,
in
addition等，也用表示列举的firstly,
secondly,
thirdly,
on
the
one
hand,
on
the
other
hand等。
3．结尾
对正反双方的观点及理由进行陈述后，在结尾部分我们就要得出结论并发表自己的观点。这部分常用的词语有：It
is
my
opinion
that...,
in
my
opinion,
in
a
word,
as
has
been
said,
finally,
therefore等。
黄金表达
Different
people
hold
different
opinions.
Opinions
are
divided.
People
have
taken
different
attitudes
towards...
People
have
different
opinions
on
this
problem.
It
is
often
said
that...
With
regard
to...,
quite
a
few
people
argue
that...,
but
other
people
think
differently.
Some
of
them
hold
the
opinion
that...
However,
each
coin
has
two
sides.
In
my
opinion,
this
point
of
view
doesn't
hold
water.
I
fully
agree
with...
As
far
as
I'm
concerned,
I
believe
that...
亮点分析：
亮点一：②⑤句中the
students
for/against
cloning
say
that...是陈述讨论双方观点的典型句式。
亮点二：②③④⑥句中的more
and
more,
moreover,
for
example,
what's
worse等句式或词汇的运用非常灵活，增强了各方的论证力度，使行文更加流畅。
亮点三：⑤句中的however表示转折，鲜明地表示出双方的不同观点。
亮点四：⑧句中in
my
opinion也是表达个人观点的常用短语。
另外，文中的cloned
organs,
speed
up
the
rate
of,
make
full
use
of也彰显了作者扎实的英语功底。
[类文演练]
克隆人这一话题在世界上引起了激烈的争论。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇题为On
Human
Cloning，词数为120左右的短文。短文的开头已为你写好。
参考词汇：干扰：interfere
with 干细胞：stem
cells
[联想词汇]
1.
________
科学突破
答案：scientific
breakthrough
2.
________
nature
干扰自然
答案：interfere
with
3.
________
依我看
答案：in
my
opinion
4.
________
聚焦于；重点放在……
答案：focus
on
[连词成句]
1.
①Human
cloning
has
caused
________.
②There
are
different
opinions
among
people
________
human
cloning.
克隆人这一话题在世界上引起了激烈的争论。
答案：①much
debate/hot
discussion ②as
to/about
2.
①Some
people
suggest...Others,
however,
________.
②Some
people
argue
that...
Others,
________，
believe
that...
③Some
people
believe...________
others
think...
④On
one
hand,
people
tend
to...________，
they
feel...
一些人认为……；而另一些人认为……。
答案：①hold
the
opposite
opinion ②in
contrast
③while ④On
the
other
hand
3.
①It
is
also
good
news
for
those_________________________.
②People
who
can't
have
babies
________the
news.
对于那些没孩子的人来说也是个好消息。
答案：①who
cannot
have
babies ②will
be
glad
to
hear
4.
①If
we
________/go
against
nature,
we
might
create
problems.
②In
order
________
problems,
we
shouldn't
interfere
with
nature.
如果我们干扰自然会造成许多麻烦。答案：①interfere
with ②not
to
create/bring
about
[连句成章]
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
On
Human
Cloning
Cloning
is
producing
an
exact
copy
of
a
plant
or
an
animal
using
its
cells.
However,
human
cloning
has
caused
much
debate.
Some
believe
it
is
a
wonderful
scientific
breakthrough.
It
could
produce
valuable
tissues
and
organs
that
could
be
used
to
save
human
lives.
And
it
is
also
good
news
for
those
who
cannot
have
babies,
while
others
think
cloning
humans
is
totally
immoral
and
against
nature,
and
should
be
made
illegal.
We
have
no
right
to
experiment
with
human
life.
If
we
interfere
with
nature,
we
might
create
problems.
Some
day,
we
could
produce
a
superhuman
race
that
could
replace
us.In
my
opinion,
cloning
is
really
a
wonderful
scientific
breakthrough.
We
should
focus
our
efforts
on
cloning
animals
and
stem
cells
to
be
used
in
medical
research.
Only
in
this
way
can
we
make
it
beneficial
to
mankind.写作园地
音乐话题电子邮件写作
[感悟范文]假若你是迈克(Mike)，特别喜欢欣赏音乐，喜欢唱歌，你对音乐有着自己独特的看法。下面请你给你新认识的好朋友约翰(John)写封电子邮件，谈论一下音乐。
词数要求：120～150。
[范文]
Dear
John，
①What
is
your
favorite
music
②Do
you
like
jazz,
popular
music,
classical
music,
folk
songs,
blues,
and
so
on
③Music
is
sometimes
called
a
universal
language.
④A
composer
who
cannot
speak
a
single
word
of
our
language
can
make
us
feel
joy,
pride,
despair
and
peace
through
his
music.
⑤Music
also
contributes
to
a
joyful
mind.
⑥Of
all
the
things
that
make
me
happy,
singing
is
what
I
like
to
do
best.
⑦I
sing
for
no
particular
reason
and
there
is
no
limit
to
what
I
sing,
so
long
as
it
can
let
out
my
emotion
and
pass
the
pleasant
voice
to
others.
⑧It
is
something
more
satisfactory
and
exciting
to
draw
echoes
from
them.
⑨Singing
helps
me
overcome
the
difficulties
rationally
and
gives
me
a
more
beautiful
life
and
courage
to
live.⑩I
would
appreciate
it
very
much
if
you
could
tell
me
something
about
you!
Yours，
Mike
[技法讨论]本模块的写作任务是通过电子邮件来介绍音乐。电子邮件是书信的一种格式，介绍音乐属于说明文范畴。
在历年的高考英语作文试题中，书信题材占有重要的位置，同学们应该重视。书信包括回信、回帖、电子邮件、自荐信、申请信、留言条等。对电子邮件的写作方法，我们在前几册中多有涉及，此处不再赘述。
介绍音乐属于说明文。说明文在高考中出题的几率比较多。写说明文时应注意：
1．时态应相对统一。
由于说明文往往是对客观事物或事理的一种介绍与解释，而这种客观的介绍与解释一般是不随时间和空间变化而改变的，比如：说明早晨锻炼的好处，解释臭氧层对人类生活的影响等等，是不受时间和空间影响的。因此，尽管有时为了特殊表达的要求，会在个别地方采用其他时态，英语说明文的基本时态还是一般现在时。
2．多用主动语态和陈述句式。
3．采用客观表述，避免主观色彩。
在很多情况下，说明文是对客观存在的说明与介绍，因此语言的表述也应该尽可能地给人以客观可信的感觉。
黄金表达
1.
回复邮件开头常用句式：
I
am
very
glad
to
receive
your
letter.
How
happy
I
am
when
I
know...
Thanks
for
your
letter,
it's
my
pleasure
to
do...
2.
结尾常用句式：
I
look
forward
to
hearing
from
you.
I
would
also
like
to
know
if
you
can/could...
I
would
be
grateful
if
you
could/would...
I
will
appreciate
it
if
you
can...
亮点分析：
亮点一：①②句用两个问句引出话题，亲切，自然；and
so
on是省略列举事情的典型用法。
亮点二：④句中用了定语从句和make
sb.
do
sth.结构，使得句式富有变化，彰显了作者的英语功底。
亮点三：⑤⑦句中的短语contribute
to,
for
no
particular
reason,
so
long
as等的运用使句子增色不少。
亮点四：⑥⑦⑧句中分别使用了what引导的名词性从句、there
is
no
limited
to和It
is...to
do等高级句型结构，很值得我们学习借鉴。
亮点五：⑩句句式运用非常得体，是书信结尾提出要求的典型句式。
[类文演练]
假设你是李华，你在杂志Panorama上读到以下广告：
读后你想要加入这一组织。请你写一封信给Greenplanet,
了解以下细节：
meetings
多久举行一次，地点
talks
专家还是会员主讲
new
settlers
是否额外收费
membership
fee
学生是否优惠
注意：词数：100左右
[联想词汇]
1.
________
首先
答案：to
begin
with
2.
be
________
对……感兴趣
答案：interested
in
3.
________
此外
答案：in
addition
4.
________
charge
额外收费
答案：extra
5.
________
盼望
答案：look
forward
to
[连词成句]
1.
I
________
if
you
could
________
about
your
organization.
你如能给我提供更多的信息我将非常感激。
答案：would
appreciate
it;
give
me
more
information
2.
I'd
like
to
know
________
the
meetings
are
held
and
________
they
take
place.我想知道会议多久举行一次，在哪儿开。
答案：how
often;
where
3.
I
________
at
your
earliest
convenience.
盼望尽早在最方便的时候收到你的来信。
答案：look
forward
to
hearing
from
you
[连句成章]
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
Dear
Sir/Madam,
I
am
writing
to
you
with
regard
to
your
advertisement
published
in
the
magazine
“Panorama”.
I
am
interested
in
environmental
protection
and
I
am
considering
joining
Greenplanet.
I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
more
information
about
your
organization.To
begin
with,
I
would
like
to
know
how
often
the
meetings
are
held
and
where
they
take
place.
I
would
also
be
interested
in
knowing
whether
the
talks
are
given
by
experts
in
the
field
or
by
members
of
your
association.
In
addition,
I
would
be
grateful
if
you
could
inform
me
whether
there
is
any
extra
charge
for
the
new
settlers.
Finally
I
would
like
to
know
if
there
is
a
reduced
membership
fee
for
students.
I
look
forward
to
hearing
from
you
at
your
earliest
convenience.
Yours
faithfully，
Li
Hua写作园地
友谊话题写作
[感悟范文]
良好的人际关系是建设和谐社会的关键。某报社就“中学生交友？”的话题征稿。假如你是王力，你们班对此话题展开了讨论，请你根据讨论的情况以及你对如何交友的看法撰写一篇稿件，以书信的形式发给该报社编辑。
注意：词数：120左右。书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
editor，
Recently
our
class
have
had
a
heated
discussion
on
making
friends
between
middle
school
students._________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，Wang
Li
[范文]
Dear
editor，
Recently
our
class
have
had
a
heated
discussion
on
making
friends
between
middle
school
students.
①A
good
personal
relationship,
as
we
all
know,
plays
an
important
role
in
building
the
harmonious
society.
②Many
students
suggest
that
we
should
make
friends
with
the
person
who
are
of
great
benefit
to
our
studies,
so
we
will
help
each
other,
learn
from
each
other
and
make
greater
progress
in
our
studies.
③Some
argue
that
we
should
have
friends
related
to
our
life.
④Whenever
we
have
difficulty
in
dealing
with
problems
in
terms
of
life,
they
can
help
rid
us
of
the
problems.⑤In
addition,
others
hold
the
view
that
we
are
supposed
to
have
some
friends
who
can
listen
to
us
attentively
and
share
our
bitterness
and
joy,
which
can
help
us
get
out
of
trouble.⑥What
I
want
to
stress
is
that
each
of
us
ought
to
have
a
true
friend.
⑦When
disagreement
does
occur,
it's
sensible
to
talk
it
over
with
each
other.⑧Friendship
is
to
be
strengthened
by
truth
and
devotion.
Yours，
Wang
Li
[技法讨论]
本模块要求写一篇与“友谊”相关的作文，其目的主要是发表一下对友谊的看法。
发表对“友谊”的看法属于对某一话题发表观点的作文，该类作文是高考作文常见命题方式。如：2007年广东的以“谁是你的偶像”为题作文、2009年江西的以“Turning
a
bad
mood
into
a
good
one”为题的作文、2010年江苏的介绍自己学英语的情况并对学校英语教学提建议等。
此类作文的写作步骤如下：
1．仔细审题，确定文章结构
本类作文一般可分为三部分，第一部分引出话题，第二部分陈述友谊的重要性，最后一部分提出自己的观点和建议。
2．根据需要确定时态
本类作文的主题为人际关系、友情，培养学生积极的友谊观及相关的语言技能，因此应以一般现在时为主。
黄金表达
A
friend
that
you
buy
with
presents
will
be
bought
from
you.
Without
confidence
there
is
no
friendship.
Good
company
on
the
road
is
the
shortest
cut.
A
friend
in
need
is
a
friend
indeed.
Without
a
friend,
the
world
is
a
wilderness.
Friendship
is
like
wine－the
older
the
better.
True
friendship
lasts
forever.
All
are
not
friends
that
speak
us
fair.
Friendship
is
to
be
strengthened
by
truth
and
devotion.
A
little
help
is
worth
a
deal
of
pity.
Be
slow
in
choosing
a
friend,
slower
in
changing.
A
real
friend
never
gets
in
your
way,
unless
you
happen
to
be
on
the
way
down.
We
shall
never
have
friends
if
we
expect
to
find
them
without
fault.亮点分析：
亮点一：①句中运用as
we
all
know引出建立良好的人际关系的重要性。
亮点二：②句中使用suggest引出一些人提出的交友建议，suggest后的宾语从句以及who引导的定语从句提升了表达的档次。
亮点三：③句中argue的使用引出了另一部分人交友的观点。
亮点四：④句中have
difficulty
in
doing
sth.结构的运用使得句子的结构更加高级。亮点五：⑤句中hold
the
view
that的使用引出了其他人的交友观点。
亮点六：⑥句中stress的使用引出了作者自己的交友观点。
亮点七：⑦句中作者使用it's
sensible
to...结构针对产生分歧时给出了相应的建议。
[类文演练]
某英文报在开展关于友谊的讨论。讨论中有这样一个问题：“你正在复习功课，你的一个朋友请你陪他上街购物。你去还是不去？”假设你是李华，在昨天下午的班会课上，你们班就这个问题进行了讨论。你的同学李雷和汤姆的观点截然不同。请你根据下表所列的观点，用英语写一篇短文，给该英文报投稿。
李雷的观点
是朋友就不能拒绝其要求；为朋友即使学习有所影响，也没有关系。
汤姆的观点
朋友的请求也不能都答应；学习比购物更重要。
你的观点
……
注意：1.开头和结尾已经为你写好，但不计入总词数；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．词数：120左右。
Dear
Editor，
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li
Hua
[联想词汇]
1.
have
a
________
on
关于……的讨论
答案：discussion
2.
________
one's
request
应某人要求
答案：at
3.
________
one's
requests
满足某人要求
答案：meet
4.
________
some
extent
在某种程度上
答案：to
5.
that
________
视情况而定
答案：depends
[连词成句]
1.
________________
with
your
friend
________
while
you
are
going
over
your
lesson 你复习功课时朋友要求与你去购物，你会去吗？
答案：Would
you
go
shopping;
at
his
request
2.
________________，
either
Li
Lei
or
Tom
is
right________________.
依我看，在某种程度上李雷和汤姆的观点都对。
答案：In
my
opinion;
to
some
extent
[连句成章]
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
Dear_Editor，
Yesterday
afternoon,
we
had
a
discussion
on
the
question：“Would
you
go
shopping
with
your
friend
at
his
request
while
you
are
going
over
your
lessons？”
My
classmates
Li
Lei
and
Tom
had
different
viewpoints.
Li
Lei
thought
that
he
couldn't
refuse
his
friends'
requests
even
though
his
studies
would
be
affected.
But
Tom
didn't
think
so.
He
said
he
wouldn't
meet
all
requests
from
his
friends,
and
studying
was
more
important
than
shopping.
In
my
opinion,
either
Li
Lei
or
Tom
is
right
to
some
extent.
We
may
meet
our
friends'
requests,
but
that
depends.
If
we
have
difficulties,
we
should
let
them
know.
Yours，
Li_Hua写作园地
回复电子邮件写作
[感悟范文]
假定你是中学生李华，在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I'm
the
mother
of
a
fourteen year old
girl.
I
have
a
rule
for
my
daughter:
be
among
the
top
5
students
or
get
punished
in
one
way
or
another.
She
has
been
doing
very
well
in
school,
but
some
friends
of
mine
keep
telling
me
that
I
put
too
much
pressure
on
her.
Am
I
wrong 写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3.提出至少两条建议。
要求：词数不少于120。
参考词汇：评价evaluate
[范文]
Hi,
TigerMom，
What
puzzles
you
is
actually
a
puzzle
for
many
parents
in
China.
①My
idea
is
that
it
is
not
quite
right
for
you
to
do
so.
②Although
high
grades
play
an
important
part
in
evaluating
students
and
their
future
university
admission,
yet
development
in
emotion,
health,
and
life
attitude
should
never
be
ignored.
③There
are
many
examples
around
us.
④Some
all A
students
in
school
have
turned
out
not
to
be
so
successful
in
society
as
expected.
⑤The
reason
is
often
that
the
pressure
from
their
parents
allows
them
almost
no
time
for
other
activities.
⑥In
addition,
punishment
is
by
no
means
a
wise
choice
to
help
them
grow
up
mentally
and
physically.⑦So
I
suggest
that
you
take
your
friends'
advice.
⑧More
importantly,
let
her
live
like
a
lovely
girl;
let
her
have
more
friends
and
social
activities
as
we
teenagers
often
do.
⑨I
hope
you
will
change
your
mind
and
things
will
go
smoothly.
Yours，
Li
Hua
[技法讨论]本模块要求回复一封电子邮件，回复电子邮件是书信的一种格式，其目的是解答有关组织或个人提出或出现的问题。其他像回帖、对于博客内容的回复，版主对于留言的回复，本质上类似于回复电子邮件，高考也经常会考到。如：2009年陕西的回帖、2009年湖北的回一封电子邮件、2009年重庆的发送一封电子邮件、2010年山东和陕西2011年天津的写一封电子邮件、2011年陕西的回复博客。电子邮件的写作步骤：
1．要有一个说明性的、合适的主题。其目的在于让收信者快速地了解电子邮件的主要内容。如：Life
in
Britain/Congratulations
from
Wang
Hai等。
2．电子邮件正文的开头部分必须呈现邮件的要点，然后再详细介绍一些辅助性的内容。作者必须根据被说明对象的特征，有序地列出写作提纲。
3．要用简练的语言。电子邮件的语言主要讲究简洁、真实、准确，如maybe，possible，most
of等不确定的表达方法是不宜多用的，但可用一些具体的数目作辅助说明。特别是在一些商务性的电子邮件中，语言的正确性尤其重要。
黄金表达
1.
开头常用句式：
I'm
glad
to
hear
from
you...
How
nice
it
was
to
receive
your
e mail...
It
gives
me
a
great
pleasure
to
receive
your
kind
letter
of...
Many
thanks
for
your
last
letter.
I'm
writing
to
ask
if
you
can
come
next
week.How
time
flies!
It's
three
months
since
we
last
met.
I
have
just
received
your
e mail.
I
must
apologize
for
not
having
written
an
e mail
to
you
previously.
2.
结尾常用句式：
Best
wishes/regards
to
you.
Waiting
for
your
good
news.
Looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Hoping
to
hear
from
you
soon.
With
best
wishes
to
you.
Please
remember
me
to
your
whole
family.
Give
my
best
regards
(wishes)
to
your
mother.
Wish
you
a
pleasant
journey.I'm
expecting
to
hear
from
you
as
soon
as
possible.亮点分析：
亮点一：①句中使用了that引导的表语从句，且从句中运用it作形式主语。
亮点二：②句中使用了让步状语从句，而且短语play
an
important
part
in和词汇ignore的使用也很恰当。
亮点三：④句中so...as结构的运用使得句子更加复杂得体。
亮点四：⑤句中使用了句式“The
reason
is
that...”阐明了④句所讲述的现象的原因。
亮点五：⑥句中连接副词in
addition和短语by
no
means的使用使作者的理由更加有力。
亮点六：⑧句中两个祈使句的使用更能触动TigerMom。
[类文演练]
假设你叫张明，你的美国网友Jane想了解你对上网的看法。请根据下面提供的信息，用英语给Jane发一封100词左右的电子邮件。
1.能获得更多的信息，可上网学习，使联系更加方便。
2.可以聊天、玩游戏，但很浪费时间，网上有有害的内容。
3.建议要学会利用网络学习，时间应有限制。
[联想词汇]
1.
上网
________________
答案：on
the
Internet
2.
最新信息
________________
答案：the
latest
information
3.
保持联系
________________
答案：keep
in
touch
4.
发送和接收电子邮件
________________
答案：send
and
receive
e mails
[连词成句]
1.
They
can
get
a
great
deal
of
________________.
通过网络他们能得大量新信息。
答案：the
latest
information
through
the
Internet
2.
____________easy
and
convenient
____________.
跟朋友保持联系更加方便容易。
答案：It
is;
to
keep
in
touch
with
friends
3.
Some
students
have
spent
too
much
time
________and
________.
一些学生花太多时间上网聊天玩游戏。
答案：chatting;
playing
games
on
the
Internet
[连句成章]
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
Dear
Jane，
I
would
like
to
give
you
my
opinion
about
being
on
the
Internet.
More
and
more
middle
school
students
here
are
starting
using
the
Internet,
through
which
they
can
get
a
great
deal
of
the
latest
information.
They
can
enjoy
lessons
given
by
the
best
teachers
of
net schools
at
home.
And
it
is
easy
and
convenient
to
keep
in
touch
with
friends
by
sending
and
receiving
e mails.
On
the
other
hand,
some
students
have
spent
too
much
time
chatting
and
playing
games
on
the
Internet.
And
there
is
something
harmful
to
the
students.
At
last,
I
suggest
that
students
should
make
good
use
of
the
Internet
for
their
studies
and
not
be
online
for
too
long
each
time.
Yours，
Zhang
Ming写作园地
影评写作
[感悟范文]
请根据下面的说明，写一则影评。词数：120～150词。
由胡玫执导，周润发、周迅等主演的电影《孔子》讲述了中国伟大的哲学家和思想家孔子的故事。电影《孔子》并没有展现孔子完整的一生，而是描写他51岁出任中都宰一直到其73岁病逝这段经历。《孔子》的精神内涵是对理想的不懈追求，是面对任何困难都不动摇的信念。[范文]
①Confucius
is
a
film
directed
by
Hu
Mei
about
China's
greatest
philosopher
and
thinker.
②Chow
Yun fat
plays
the
role
of
Confucius
and
Zhou
Xun
also
acts
in
the
movie.
③Confucius
is
widely
considered
as
representative
of
Chinese
culture
and
philosophy,
having
influenced
generations
of
scholars
and
thinkers
at
home
and
abroad.
④The
two hours
film,
reflecting
the
life
of
Confucius
from
the
age
of
51
to
his
death
at
73,
is
clearly
divided
into
two
parts.
⑤The
first
half
focuses
on
his
political
life
and
achievements,
during
which
he
led
several
wars.
⑥The
second
half
starts
with
his
dismissal
and
emphasizes
his
traveling
life
and
spreading
his
philosophy
among
the
people.
⑦The
film
stresses
the
theme
that
one
should
pursue
his
or
her
high
ideals,
no
matter
how
much
he
or
she
should
endure
or
suffer.
[技法讨论]
本模块要求写一篇影视评论，对电影作一简要的介绍，然后发表一下自己的看法。
在一篇影视评论中，评论者需要介绍电影的梗概；需要阐明自己对作品的看法；如果评论者对所介绍的电影特别推崇的话，还要用到一些具有感染力和说服力的词语或句子。写作步骤：
1．引入要介绍的影视作品，一般要涉及到影视作品的导演、演职人员等；
2．整体介绍影视作品的内容，让读者掌握作品的故事梗概；
3．从某一个角度出发，经常以主人公的命运为主线为读者提供更多的信息，让读者对所介绍的作品有进一步的了解和认识；
4.从理论和情感高度对所介绍的影视作品作一个综合评价，阐明自己的观点。对影片中演员的演技、音乐、人物对白、情节、特殊效果、内容、摄影等给予评论。评论时要求尽量客观、公正。评论时要写明你认为该影片什么地方成功，什么地方不足，也可以提出改进意见等。
这种文体常用一般现在时，以说明、评论为主。
黄金表达
1.
引入话题的常用句式：
Last
weekend
I
watched
the
film...
It
is
a
sad
(love/thriller/wuxia/adventure...)film.
...is
a
film
which
was
directed
by...
The
film
is
set
in...
The
movie
mainly
tells
us
a
story
that...
The
main
characters
are....
...is
widely
considered
the
greatest
film
ever
directed
in
any
language...
2.
发表自己的感想的常用句式：
After
watching
the
movie...,
I'm
deeply
impressed
by...,
because...
...is
a
film
which
is
an
unforgettable
one
and
a
story
of
courage
and
sacrifice.
He/She
has
never
made
one
with
such
a
strong
message...In
a
word,
the
film
is
a
success/failure...
After
all
I
think...is
(not)
worth
seeing.
Do
you
want
to
have
a
try
亮点分析：
亮点一：①句用一句话说明了电影的导演和主要内容，是很典型的介绍影视作品的句式。亮点二：②句用and连接两个句子，并用plays
the
role
of...与acts来介绍主演，遣词造句非常灵活。
亮点三：③句既有be
considered
as这样的精彩句式，又用having
influenced...非谓语动词做状语，彰显了作者的英语功底。
亮点四：④⑤⑥句是很鲜明的总分关系，The
first
half...；The
second
half...使说明内容很有层次，其间还运用了during
which...这样的非限制性定语从句，以及dismissal，emphasizes等高级词汇，表达非常出色。
亮点五：⑦句用stress
the
theme
that...阐述自己对电影的观点，非常实用；no
matter
how
much这样的让步状语从句使个人观点更加具有力度。
[类文演练]
写一篇影评，介绍《黑鹰行动》(Black
Hawk
Down)。本战斗片导演为雷德利·斯科特(Kidley
Scott)。本片以一次军事活动为背景。1993年，联合国军队进驻Somalia去支援处于内战的国家。一些美国士兵，包括由Josh
Hartnett,
Ewan
Mc
Gregor
and
Tom
Sizemore扮演的士兵进入该城市去捕获军事领袖，但是战斗一直持续到深夜，这时两架直升机被击落下来，夜战惊心动魄。这是一部绝佳的战斗片。而且为了收到更好的效果，投入了大量的财力。
参考词汇：capture捕获；warlord军事领袖
[联想词汇]
1.
________
战争片
答案：a
war
film
2.
________
以……为背景答案：be
set
in
3.
________
内战
答案：a
civil
war4.
________
拍电影
答案：make
the
film
[连词成句]
1.
________
Kidley
Scott.
由雷德利·斯科特导演。
答案：It
is
directed
by
2.
________
a
military
operation.
本片以一次军事活动为背景。
答案：The
film
is
set
in
3.
________
is
absolutely
breathtaking.
夜战惊心动魄。
答案：The
night
battle
[连句成章]
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
Black
Hawk
Down
is
a
war
film.
It
is
directed
by
Kidley
Scott.
The
film
is
set
in
a
military
operation
that
most
people
have
forgotten
about.
In
1993,
UN
forces
were
sent
to
Somalia
to
aid
the
country
where
a
civil
war
took
place.
Some
American
soldiers,
including
those
played
by
Josh
Hartnett,
Ewan
Mc
Gregor
and
Tom
Sizemore,
went
into
the
city
to
capture
some
warlords,
but
the
mission
dragged
on
into
night
when
two
helicopters
were
shot
down.
The
night
battle
is
absolutely
breathtaking.
It
is
a
magnificent
war
film.
Amounts
of
capital
were
invested
to
make
the
film.写作园地
幻想故事写作
[感悟范文]
最近，某英文报社正在举行英文幻想故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头，续写一篇幻想小故事参赛。
A
young
man
was
walking
through
a
wood
when
he
saw
a
shining
ring
lying
on
the
ground.
He
just
stood
and
wondered
and
then
the
ring
said,
“Young
man,
a
kind
girl
is
trapped
by
a
witch
in
the
castle
ahead.
If
you
are
brave
enough
to
rescue
her,
you
will
gain
happiness.
Put
me
on
and
I
will
help
you.”．..注意：词数120左右。
[范文]
A
young
man
was
walking
through
a
wood
when
he
saw
a
shining
ring
lying
on
the
ground.
He
just
stood
and
wondered
and
then
the
ring
said,
“Young
man,
a
kind
girl
is
trapped
by
a
witch
in
the
castle
ahead.
If
you
are
brave
enough
to
rescue
her,
you
will
gain
happiness.
Put
me
on
and
I
will
help
you.”
①The
young
man
didn't
hesitate
and
put
the
ring
on
his
finger.
②Much
to
his
surprise,
he
discovered
that
he
disappeared
and
was
invisible
to
any
other
people.
③Only
when
he
took
it
off
could
people
see
him.
④He
felt
more
confident
and
headed
for
the
castle.
⑤On
approaching
the
castle,
he
put
the
ring
on
and
entered
the
castle.
⑥He
eventually
found
the
crying
girl,
on
whom
the
witch
had
put
a
spell,
learning
that
the
girl
couldn't
move
unless
someone
destroyed
the
witch's
magical
club,
removing
the
spell.
⑦Having
learned
about
this,
the
young
man
put
the
ring
on,
looking
around
for
the
witch's
magical
club.
⑧Finally,
he
found
it
in
a
golden
box;
he
destroyed
it,
removing
the
spell
on
the
girl
and
saving
the
girl.
⑨The
young
man,
together
with
the
girl,
defeated
the
witch.⑩The
girl
saved
by
the
young
man
turned
out
to
be
a
princess,
and
the
king
married
her
off
to
the
young
man,
the
young
man
and
the
princess
living
a
happy
life.
[技法讨论]
本模块要求写一篇幻想故事，幻想故事一般有环境、人物、情节以及文学的艺术性，在体裁上属于记叙文，情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。虚幻故事的写作步骤：
1．仔细审题，确定文章结构
虚幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始，第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果，最后一部分提出故事的教育意义。
2．根据需要确定时态
虚幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为主。
3．筛选词汇
虚幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张。为了
吸引读者，故事的语言要生动，富于虚幻性。
黄金表达
Once
upon
a
time/Long
long
ago...
stop
doing
sth.
even
if...
keep
doing
sth.
enjoy
oneself
There
was...
That
was
why
people
called
it...
On
seeing...
From
this
fable
comes...
亮点分析：
亮点一：③句中使用了部分倒装句式凸显了魔戒的魔力。
亮点二：⑤句中使用了on
doing
sth.这个结构，引出与下文紧接着发生的动作。
亮点三：⑥句中使用了非限制性定语从句和现在分词短语，丰富了关于“the
girl”的相关信息。
亮点四：⑦句中使用了两处分词，使得句子更有层次性。
亮点五：⑩句中使用了独立主格结构，使得句子结构更加复杂高级。
亮点六：①句中hesitate，②句中much
to
his
surprise,
was
invisible
to，④句中confident,
headed
for,
⑥句中eventually，⑩句中turned
out
to
be等等这些词汇、短语的使用也为文章增色不少。
[类文演练]
假设你要给参观你校的外籍人员，讲解中国的传统文化。一名外国朋友对中国成语“自相矛盾”发生了兴趣。请你根据图片，把这个古代的寓言故事讲给他们听。词数130左右。
参考词汇：矛spear，盾shield，刺pierce。
[联想词汇]
1.
________
自相矛盾的
答案：self contradictory2.
________
adj.
锋利的
答案：sharp
3.
________
v.
吹嘘，夸大
答案：boast
4.
____________
在古代中国
答案：in
ancient
China
5.
____________
众所周知
答案：be
known
to
all
[连词成句]
1.
________________“Zi
Xiang
Mao
Dun”
is
________all.
中国成语“自相矛盾”众所周知。
答案：The
Chinese
idiom;
known
to
2.
______________can
pierce
them.
世界上没有东西能刺穿他们。答案：Nothing
in
the
world
3.
________________
in
the
world.
世上没有完美的东西。
答案：There
are
not
perfect
things
[连句成章]
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案：
The
Chinese
idiom
“Zi
Xiang
Mao
Dun”
is
known
to
all,
which
is
used
to
laugh
at
someone
whose
words
or
behaviors
are
self contradictory.
It
tells
us
a
story
that
happens
in
the
State
of
Chu
in
ancient
China.
We
see
a
man
selling
spears
and
shields
in
the
marketplace
in
the
center
of
the
picture.
A
lot
of
people
gather
around
him.
“My
spears
are
the
sharpest，”
he
boasts,
“that
there
is
nothing
they
cannot
pierce.
My
shields
are
also
the
strongest,
so
nothing
in
the
world
can
pierce
them.”
One
of
the
people
in
the
crowd
then
laughs,
“So
what
if
the
spear
pierces
the
shield？”
The
man
can
not
answer
a
word.
From
the
story
we
can
know
that
there
are
not
perfect
things
in
the
world.
We
shouldn't
say
anything
in
the
world
is
good
to
the
limit.
