2018年高考英语一轮复习作文指导学案（全国卷地区）之申请信

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2018年高考英语一轮复习作文指导（全国卷地区）
申请信
在全国卷的高考英语作文中，申请信一直是作文的常客。作为书信体的一种，一般分为两种命题类型。
第一种：学校活动或社交活动的申请，包括英语演讲比赛、英语文化节、英语交换生、夏令营活动、志愿者服务等等；
第二种：职场求职，包括英文秘书、翻译员、管理人员的应聘求职等等。
例题评析
【全国I卷作文】假定你是李华，从互联网 (the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Li Hua
（注：从2012年此次考查之后，2013-2017年申请信的考查有所减少，但鉴于申请信为高考写作经典作文类型，加之高考考查有考点循环轮换的规律，预测2018年考查的概率较大。）
【参考范文一】
Dear Sir or Madam,
③I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp. 2-1-c-n-j-y
④Looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
①这个句子结构复杂，语法正确，使用了现在分词saying和过去分词短语aimed at，并有happen to和participate in这样的高级短语。 【出处：21教育名师】
②用到连词what’s more作为上下文的连接，用communicating with现在分词短语作伴随状语。【版权所有：21教育】
③用了do作为强调句，加强语气；be admitted to(被录取)，词汇使用地道高级。
④Looking forward to your reply是写信结束套语，需牢记。
【参考范文二】
Dear Sir/Madam,
①I’m Li Hua, a second-year high school student from China. ②I got 7.5 for IELTS early this year, which indicates that I will have little difficulty communicating with others in an English-speaking country.
③I’m writing to apply for a position in your summer camp in Singapore. I believe this is a wonderful opportunity for me to introduce China to young people from other countries and to learn from them about their countries.
④I sincerely hope that my application could be favorably considered. ⑤If more information is needed, please do not hesitate to contact me via this email.
Yours,
Li Hua
①每段的第一句为写作的主要内容，每段的其余部分为添加的具体信息。整篇文章行文清晰，语言地道，值得熟读背诵。
②用具体的例子(雅思7.5分)来说明英语水平，具体形象；本句句法更是由which引导的非限制性定语从句和indicate(意味着、暗示着)这个高级词汇引导的宾语从句。
③I’m writing to apply for a position in…这个高级句型清楚地点明了写作目的。
④I sincerely hope that…礼貌得体，sincerely更强化了这一功能。
⑤询问对方是否需要知道更多的信息(If more information is needed)，符合实际交际情境；please do not hesitate to contact me是地道的表达，让对方随时和自己联系；via是“通过……方式”的意思。
基本写作要点：
1.阐明写作目的（看到了广告，来申请参加了）；
2.参加活动或求职的目的（意图）、进行这项活动或求职申请的个人优势（特长、性格、技能等）；
3.表达自己希望被获准或者准入的迫切心情。
通过对大量的作文题目分析，我们可以发现，申请/求职信的写作要点万变不离其宗，基本点概括起来只有三个：
1.写作目的；2.参加目的及优势；3.表达愿望。
接下来我们进行逐一讲解：
写作目的（第一点）
I’m writing to apply for a position in your summer camp. 21教育名师原创作品
我写信来申请你们夏令营的一个职位。
I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to ...
我写信来申请……的机会。
The ad is really very appealing to me, so I’m now writing to you in the hope of filling in the job vacancy. www.21-cn-jy.com
这则广告非常吸引我，所以我写信给您希望能够填补这个职位的空缺。
参加目的及优势（第二点）
衔接句式：I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because ...
我真的希望得到这次珍贵的机会，因为……
接下来阐明参加活动或求职的目的：
（如果题目有具体要求，按写作点翻译；如果没有，请参考以下常见套路）
丰富阅历：Enrich my life experiences
使我的生活更加多彩：Make my life more colorful/enjoyable
提高我的口语：improve my spoken English
与他人培养友谊：build up friendships with foreign friends
对外国文化有更好的理解：make a better understanding of the foreign cultures
之后，进行衔接，由参加活动目的转向阐述自己的优势：
衔接句式：To my delight/Luckily, I have my own advantages to be a member of your team.
让我高兴的是/幸运的是，我有我自己的优势，能成为你们团队的一员。
接下来阐明自身的优势：
（如果题目有具体要求，按写作点翻译；如果没有，请参考以下常见套路）
性格：outgoing/easy-going/friendly
I’m so outgoing that I won’t have any difficulty communicating with others.
能力：master in English 精通英语
Careful enough 足够细心
表达愿望（第三点）
I sincerely hope that my application could be favorably considered. 21*cnjy*com
我真诚地希望我的申请会被考虑。
I do hope that I can be lucky enough to be admitted to your camp.
我十分希望我能幸运地被你们的夏令营录取。
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
如果您能给我这个机会，我将非常感激。
I do hope that I can meet your requirements.
我十分希望我能够满足你们的要求。
I would be grateful if I could be given the job.
如果能获得这个工作，我会非常感激。
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. 21世纪教育网版权所有
我确信我能够很好地达到你们的期望。
类似以下的句子绝对不能出现：
Without me , I do believe that your company would be less energetic.
（没有我，我坚信你们公司就会失去活力或者完蛋，你谁啊你，记住千万不能太霸气，这样的句子一旦被阅卷老师抓住，直接降一档给分，损失惨重，因为高考英语作文比较传统，请不要标新立异，过分追求个性）
补充：写作中必备单词和短语
apply for 申请
volunteer job 志愿者工作
get along with sb. 与某人相处
advantage 优势；好处
outgoing 外向的
independent 独立的
stand out 突出；显著
appealing 吸引人的
fill in the job vacancy 填补工作空缺
graduate from 从……毕业
spare time 空余时间
engage sb. in 投入做……
meet sb. requirement 满足某人的要求
have a good mastery/command of ……掌握得好
rank 排名；名列
be fond of 喜欢
local surroundings 当地的周边环境
pet 宠物
be elected as 被选举为
live up to sb. expectations 不辜负某人的期望
【课后练兵实战】
1.假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：21·cn·jy·com
●对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等）
●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）
●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）
参考词汇：
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
【范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Chenxi Hope School with their English. Through this volunteer job, not only can I help them improve their English, but I can also learn how to get along with people and benefit the whole school.21cnjy.com
I have my advantages to be a member of your team. Being outgoing and independent, I think I will stand out among the others as long as I try my best.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need. Besides, I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories, singing songs and so on.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 假定你是李华，将于今年7月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。写一封求职信，包括下列要点:2·1·c·n·j·y
1. 年龄；
2. 学习情况及英语水平；
3. 兴趣和特长；
4. 性格特点
【范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.
I do hope that I can meet your requirements. I would be grateful if I could be given the job.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【压轴大戏】
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。21教育网
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms. Chen at chenlaoshi@.www-2-1-cnjy-com
写作要点：
1.表示写信意图；
2.陈述应征目的；
3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。
写作要求：
1.邮件词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. ___________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.21·世纪*教育网
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.21*cnjy*com
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
作文一直是高考英语中的复习重难点，为了迎战2018年全国卷高考英语，洪老师英语工作室精心编写了这套《2018年高考英语一轮复习作文指导》。
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