广东省河源市正德中学七年级英语上册写作教程课件：Unit 9 My favorite subject is science. (共36张PPT)

课件36张PPT。Unit 9
My favorite subject science. 写作话题：School subjects
（学校科目） Learning objectives 1.学会介绍自己喜欢的科目、喜欢的原因、喜欢的老师及上课的时间等。
2.掌握书信的格式，能够以最喜欢的科目为主线介绍喜欢的原因及如何学习该科目，并完成“My favorite subject”为题的写作任务。
3.懂得知识改变命运，热爱学习，珍爱生活。1.读写结合型的写作读写相结合类型的写作，读是为了写服务的，阅读的
篇章与写作的任务通常有许多的相关性。因此，要学
会从以下的途径分析： ③分析文本的语言特征，思考有哪些语言可以灵活迁移至自己的写作中，包括贴切的词块、漂亮的句式等。①首先要分析阅读的主题。②分析文章的篇章结构，包括整篇文章的中心句/段、支撑句/段，总结句/段，同时明晰作者使用的写作方法。Pre-writing Writing guidelines(写作方法指导)Pre-writing Writing guidelines(写作方法指导)2.话题写作的要素
①确定人称。
②确定时态。
③确定要点。
④根据中心，思考哪些材料需要拓展，避 免与中心无关的细节；
围绕中心，先列写作提纲，再连句成篇。1．Unit topic languages（单元话题语言）(1)Chunks（词块）Language box（语言工具箱）
名词词块
Days of a week
①Sunday,
②Monday,
③Tuesday,
④Wednesday,
⑤Thursday,
⑥Friday,
⑦Saturday
Subjects
①science,
②P.E.,
③music,
④math,
⑤Chinese,
⑥geography,
⑦history,
⑧art1．Unit topic languages（单元话题语言）(1)Chunks（词块）Language box（语言工具箱）
形容词词块
①fun,
②interesting,
③boring,
④difficult,
⑤easy,
⑥relaxing,
⑦busy,
⑧favorite
⑨useful
介词词块
①from Monday to Friday,
②among/ of all the subjects,
名词词块：
Days of a week:
（ ）星期二
（ ）星期四
（ ）星期一
（ ）星期六
（ ）星期三
（ ）星期五
（ ）星期天
③④⑤⑦①⑥②Quiz: Read aloud the chunks above and try to
match the meaning by numbering.
Subject:
（ ）历史
（ ）地理
（ ）体育
（ ）音乐
（ ）科学
（ ）语文
（ ）数学
（ ）艺术
③④⑤⑦⑧①⑥②动形容词词块：
（ ）忙碌的
（ ）有用的
（ ）让人放松的
（ ）容易的
（ ）无聊的
（ ）困难的
（ ）有趣的
（ ）最喜欢的
（ ）让人快乐的
③④⑤⑦⑧①⑨⑥②介词词块：
（ ）在所有的科目中
（ ）从星期一到星期五①②（2）Patterns（句型）① My favorite subject is….
② We have English classes on Monday and Tuesday .
③ I like English best because it’s useful.
④ My English teacher is Ms. Dou. 2. Extensive languages（拓展性语言）Famous saying，proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、谚语、警句与经典例句）
①“A?young?idler, an?old?beggar.?”
少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
②Interest is the best teacher.（Albert Einstein, scientist, Germany）
兴趣是最好的老师。 (德国 科学家 艾伯特爱因斯坦)
③A?man can succeed at almost anything for which he was unlimi enthusiasm.
只要有无限的热情，一个人几乎可以在任何事情上取得成功。
④Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it.
世上无难事，只怕有心人。 Guided reading(导读):ReadingWe have different classes at school.
What do you think of your
classes?
How can you have a happy life at school? I am always busy on Friday. I have math at 8:00. It is not fun. The teacher says it is useful, but I think it is difficult. Then at 9:00 I have science. It is also difficult but interesting. At 10:00 I have history. After that, I have P.E. at 11:00. It is easy and fun. Lunch is from 12:00 to 1:00, and after lunch we have Chinese. It is my favorite subject. Our Chinese teacher, Mrs. Wang, is great fun. My classes finish at 1:50, but I have an art lesson for two hours after that . It is really relaxing.
How is your Friday? What classes do you have that day? What is your favorite subject?
Your friend,
Yu Mei ReadingDear Jenny, I am always busy on Friday.Task 1.Underline the topic
sentence of this letter.Task2 Fill in the information card.
Information Card
I have mathdifficult but interesting.from 12:00 to 1:00.Chinese.Art lesson.at 8:00.Task3. Discussion 1.作者在介绍一天的活动时以_______
为顺序。
2.连接词_____________________。
3.优美句子:用“﹏”划出时间butthenafter thatDear Jenny,
I am always busy on Friday. I have math at 8:00. It is not fun. The teacher says it is useful, but I think it is difficult. Then at 9:00 I have science. It is also difficult but interesting. At 10:00 I have history. After that, I have P.E. at 11:00. It is easy and fun. Lunch is from 12:00 to 1:00, and after lunch we have Chinese. It is my favorite subject. Our Chinese teacher, Mrs. Wang, is great fun. My classes finish at 1:50, but I have an art lesson for two hours after that . It is really relaxing!
How is your Friday? What classes do you have that day? What is your favorite subject? Your friend, Yu Mei Discussion:书信的格式称谓: Dear ＊＊＊, 落款:Best wishes/
Your friend / Yours,
＊＊＊假如你是Tom，请你选择最喜欢的一门学科，给好友Frank写一封信，说说喜欢这门学科的理由以及平时是怎样学习的。
要求：①词数60左右；
②叙事清楚，语句通顺,语意连 贯。
WritingStep1 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）审题
体裁：_______________________
人称：_______________________
时态：_______________________第一人称 一般现在时态说明文My favorite subjectWhat subject_Finish your own mind map.(完成关于你自己的思维导图)Why you like itWhen you
have itWho is your
favorite teacherHow you
learn it以“My favorite subject”为题beginningEndingStep2 Structurize （列一列 ）Body介绍学校课程设置的基本情况。What subject? Why you like it?
When you have it? Who is your favorite teacher?
How you learn it?As a middle school student, l go to school from Monday to Friday. I have seven classes every day: four in the morning and three in the afternoon.表达自己的情感及以后的打算。An old Chinese saying says:“ A?young?idler, an?old?beggar.” And as the great scientist Einstein says: ”Interest is the best teacher.” ?l will study all the subjects hard to get good grades. Writing TimeStep3 Write（写一写）用词方面: 代词主格,宾格； 名词单复数；
动词搭配；副词位置 句子方面: 篇章方面: 细节方面: 句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；
连词使用内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理 单词拼写；标点符号；大小写 Step 4---Check（查一查）Step 5 Appreciating & Evaluating
欣赏与评价After writing◆自评---自我赏析与修正
朗读自己的文章，按照习作评价标准表进行自我赏析与修正。①欣赏与修正
请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句,并运用改错符号标出不足，进行适当修改。
②按照习作评价标准表给同伴的习作打分。
③点评
由亮点欣赏到不足的修正和提升（篇章结构分析-细节点评)◆同伴互赏—我欣赏，我快乐！修改习作时可使用这些符号：
优美句子﹏； 漏词∧；
错处：○； 删除／；
语法错误 G ； 人称错误 P；
时态错误 T； 拼写错误Sp ◆师生共评◆集体赏析
按照习作评价标准表进行集体赏析，并积累好词好句，进行美化和提升。乐在交流，乐在分享Show TimeDear Frank,
As a middle school student, l go to school from Monday to Friday. I have seven classes every day， four in the morning and three in the afternoon.
Among all the lessons, my favorite subject is English because English is very important. What‘s more, my English teacher Ms Li often makes her class very interesting. And she is very friendly to me，so I often listen to her carefully in class. After class I often ask her questions about English. Ms Li also tells me to watch English movies on weekends. It is really useful.
An old Chinese saying says“ A?young?idler, an?old?beggar.” And as the great scientist Einstein says “Interest is the best teacher.” ?l will study all the subjects hard to get good grades.
Yours,
Tom文章结构完整，条理清楚，开头用简练的语言介绍学校课程设置的基本情况。主体部分按照写作思路介绍清楚文章几个要素：what/why/when/who/how,并注意了连词、形容词和副词的正确使用，使句子衔接连贯，并注重长短句结合，使用了ask… about …，tell…to do ..等短语使文章语言丰富；能引用我们的古老谚语和爱因斯坦的名言，使文章增色，最后并表明了自己今后的想法，使整篇文章的结构更加完整，主题得到较好的升华Dear Frank,
At school, I learn many subjects, such as Chinese, English,
math, art, music, P.E. and so on.
Among all the lessons, my favorite subject is math because I
think it is very useful. And my math teacher Mr. Wu is good to us. He always makes his classes easy and active, so I like having math classes and I am always listening carefully to him in class. After classes, I usually spend more time on math exercises. It is really important.
We have an old Chinese saying“ A?young?idler, an?old?beggar.” And the great scientist Einstein also says: “Interest is the best teacher.” ?l will study hard to do better in my study.
Yours,
Tom本文思路清晰，结构完整，内容简明扼要。开头部分开门见山介绍自己学校课程的设置，点明我最喜欢的科目。 主体部分使用了and, so, on, among, makes…..+adj , be always doing…, spend…on等短语和结构，使文章句型多样化。能巧妙的引用了谚语“A?young?idler, an?old?beggar.”和爱因斯坦的名言“兴趣是最好的老师”，表明自己以后的学习态度和展望，整篇文章语句流利，逻辑紧密。 Summary How to write an article about
your favorite subject.
2. Learn some of the writing
skills.
写查想列评Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.
天才不过是勤奋而已。 Rewrite your article.