广东省河源市正德中学九年级英语全册写作教程课件：Unit 12 (共31张PPT)

课件31张PPT。Unit12 Life is full of the unexpected.写作话题：Daily routines (日常活动)Watch the videoPPT模板下载：www.1ppt.com/moban/ 行业PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/hangye/
节日PPT模板：www.1ppt.com/jieri/ PPT素材下载：www.1ppt.com/sucai/
PPT背景图片：www.1ppt.com/beijing/ PPT图表下载：www.1ppt.com/tubiao/
优秀PPT下载：www.1ppt.com/xiazai/ PPT教程： www.1ppt.com/powerpoint/
Word教程： www.1ppt.com/word/ Excel教程：www.1ppt.com/excel/
资料下载：www.1ppt.com/ziliao/ PPT课件下载：www.1ppt.com/kejian/
范文下载：www.1ppt.com/fanwen/ 试卷下载：www.1ppt.com/shiti/
教案下载：www.1ppt.com/jiaoan/
whoMr. BeanFound trashPut in the transh binFeeling?What happened?Then?Find out the details HappyThe first thingG u e s s !What will happen
in the end?Learning
objectives1．能使用一般过去时或者过去完成时态来讲述一件过去发生的预料不到的事情。能抓住故事发展的时间顺序，交代事情发生的时间、地点、具体经过等，还能给予一定的细节描写，使文章生动有趣。
2．让学生在描述过去曾经发生过的事情过程中，懂得正确对待生活中的挫折和人生的顺逆境。whowhenwhy/howwhat
where记叙文的要素 When talk about an event:Pre-writing 记叙文写作方法指导Pre-writing 命题作文写作方法指导命题作文的写作步骤:审题选材动笔列提纲检查修改Language box（语言工具箱）1．Unit topic languages（单元话题语言）
以连线、标序号等形式列举本单元与本话题写作相关的词块、句子。(1)Chunks（词块）动词词块：
① wake up,
② go off,
③ rush out of,
④ be about to,
⑤ drive by,⑥ give sb. a lift in one’s car
⑦be late for,
⑧be full of,
⑨turn … into…,介词词块：

①by the time,
②as soon as,
③on the street,
④at least, …(1)Chunks（词块）动词词块：
（ ）醒来，
（ ）迟到，
（ ）充满，
（ ）把……变成，
（ ）冲出……，
（ ）用小车送某人一程，
（ ）将要，
（ ）开车经过，
（ ）发出响声③④⑤①⑥②Quiz: Read aloud the chunks above and try to match the meaning by numbering.⑦⑧⑨介词词块：
（ ）至少，
（ ）在街上，
（ ）一……就……，（ ）到……时候③④①②（2）Patterns（句型）I will always remember the date…；
This was the luckiest /unluckiest day of my life…；
When I woke up that morning…；
I couldn’t believe …；
I think….；
What a lucky/an unlucky day!
It was time to…；
…2. Extensive languages（拓展性语言）Famous saying，proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、谚语、警句与经典例句） 1. Plans can never catch up with changes.
计划没有变化快。
2. Every dog has his day.
凡人皆有得意日。
3. Storms gather without warning in nature, and bad luck befalls men overnight.
天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。
4. It is the unexpected that always happens.
意外常常发生。
5. A blessing in disguise.
外表似不幸，其实为幸福；因祸得福；塞翁失马，安知非福。
6. Every cloud has a silver lining.
乌云背后是银边；否极泰来；因祸得福
7. Nothing is so certain as the unexpected.
意料之外的事必发生。Work in groups, try to find out as many sentences that can be used to show people’s feelings as possible. Write them down on your worksheet.E.g.:
I felt worried when I realized that ….
By the time I got to the station, I was upset since …. Task 1: Make sentencesDo you remember a lucky or an unlucky day? What happened? _______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________Task 2: Free talkTask 3: Fill in the formWhile writing 在成长的过程中，我们经历了许许多多的事，事情的经过或结果可能会出人意表，以致令我们至今难忘。请以“An Unexpected Day in My Life” 为题，写一篇记叙文。
要求：内容完整，语句连贯，字数80词左右。Step 1 Think and Fill（想一想，填一填）审题
体裁______________
人称______________
时态______________第一人称 一般过去时记叙文Writing TimeStep 2 Write（写一写）用词方面: 代词主格,宾格； 名词单复数；
动词搭配；副词位置 句子方面: 篇章方面: 细节方面: 句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；
连词使用内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理 单词拼写；标点符号；大小写 Step 3 Check（查一查）Appreciating & Evaluating 欣赏与评价After writing:①请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。
②你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？
③根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。
请和同伴交换习作，依据以上提示和下列评价表，相互欣赏与修改习作，然后给对方的习作打分。Step 4 同伴互赏—我欣赏，我快乐！修改习作时可使用这些符号：

优美句子～； 漏词∧；
错处：○； 删除／；
语法错误 G； 人称错误 P；
时态错误 T； 拼写错误S。 评 分 表乐在分享
乐在交流Show
TimeAn Unexpected Day in My Life
Last Monday morning, when I woke up, I found my alarm clock didn’t go off. It was already 7 o’clock! I was worried. So I rushed out my home without brushing my teeth and having breakfast. By the time I got to the bus stop, the bus had already gone. Just when I felt I was about to cry, my classmate Kevin’s dad drove by and asked if I needed a lift. I was so excited. Then he gave me a lift in his car. As soon as I reached the classroom, the bell rang. I wasn’t late for school.
Every dog has his day. I thought it was the luckiest day for me! when, so, by the time, then, as soon as等词语的使用，使时间脉络很清晰。 本文表达连贯，措辞准确，句子流畅，行文自然。文章交代清楚事件的背景、发展及结果，让读者清晰地理解事件的本身。Every dog has his day.谚语的使用，给本文增色不少，起到锦上添花的作用。An Unexpected Day in My Life
Last Friday was my birthday. After I got up, I thought my mom would say “Happy birthday” to me. But she didn’t. I was very disappointed and went to school. After school, I invited my good friends Lily and Lucy to my home for dinner. They said they would go to the movies. They must forget my birthday, either. I was so upset and went home alone. When I opened the door, I heard “Happy birthday”. My dad smiled at me. My mom bought me a big cake. Lily and Lucy gave me birthday gifts. I was quite surprised and happy.
It was really an unexpected day in my life! 文章语言表达生动，详略得当。语法正确、用词得当、语言标准。选材新颖，能读者耳目一新，引起阅读的兴趣。另外作者选取身边的事例，写出真情实感，容易打动读者。but, either反衬出作者的失望。
very disappointed, so upset描述出作者的心情，叙述亲切、自然，让读者身同感受。
quite, really与之前的心情形成强烈的对比。Summary:记叙文5要素 本文根据要求是一篇记叙文。它主要是说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（what, who, when, where, why ）和一个“ H ” (how)。人称应是第一人称，时态应是过去时态。外表似不幸，其实为幸福；因祸得福；塞翁失马，安知非福。 A blessing in disguise. Rewrite your article.Homework