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课件45张PPT。英语高考专题复习短 文 改 错What’s the main trouble when correcting a composition?1. 看不出句子有错。
2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。
3. 知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确。How to correct？Any skills？Any rules？How to correct a composition 短文改错Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
06年浙江卷短文改错. Steps of correcting a composition:1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.
（检查核对，攻克难点）Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
09年浙江卷短文改错. to√itsthereyourknowledgewithhopepossible∧right wordMissing wordWrong wordUnnecessary word改错命题统计高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，10行中一般只有一行全部正确，其他9行都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为
命题特点 1：3：6即: 1行正确；
3行缺词或多词；
6行需要找出错误并改正。Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
09年浙江卷短文改错. to√itsthereyourknowledgewithhopepossible∧动词代词连词副词代词名词介词动词形容词错误类型统计 测试点 动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别，
代词格，细领悟；
介词短语常常考，
习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误须关注，
冠词连词常光顾。短文改错口诀：一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。2007四川卷：
But, to my surprise, when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket.
2007天津卷：
In Grand Eight I took physics. In one test I get only 36 percent of the answers correct.gotgot2009安徽卷：
Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.
2006安徽卷：
You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out
2006天津卷：
Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.
wishespermittedadmitted二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。2007陕西卷：Personally, I found most
lesson rather uninteresting.
2006浙江卷：Your knowledges of Greece
can help the whole class lessons knowledge2008福建卷：
If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.
2006陕西卷：
They have all sorts of course. I’m sure you will find one you like it.
2006重庆卷：
In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. interestcoursessky三、还要注意形和副 注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。2007浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself.
2006福建卷：We can hear birds singing happy all around. proudhappily2009湖北卷：
A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.
2006辽宁卷：
She was usual patient with her students and never made them disappointed. strongusually四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。2007浙江卷： I could not to run very fast and
fell behind.
2007宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every
day.
to2006天津卷：
You always gave me special attention and inspired to me to join in activities.
2006天津卷：
I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.
NMET 2003:
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.
becometalking人称代词，物主代词的使用．
２．反身代词oneself 的使用．
３．人称代词的主格和宾格．
４．不定代词的使用．
５．Both, all, either, neither, none的使用.
6. Whose 和who’s， its和 it’s的区别．五、 代词格，细领悟
（ 2007全国I）
I was only about six that he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.minewhen2007全国II：
While the others are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the ball.
2007陕西：
Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!
2006辽宁卷：
She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, and she marked strictly on student’s actual performance. students’/ourtheirmyself 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。 catch a sight of
lose my heart
in hurry
in Sunday afternoon
express us
such many people
aon∨ourselvesso六、习惯用法要记住2007陕西卷： They were used to write on the blackboard and asked us difficult questions.
2007浙江卷：So I didn’t lose my heart and kept running.
2007浙江卷：I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners.
2006天津卷：Because the help you gave me that summer, My life changed.
2006福建卷：I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it.
2006福建卷： It is so a beautiful place! fasterwithofforsuch七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。NMET 2004 : I don’t know that they don’t
like to talk with me.
2007天津卷：I was lucky enough to have a
teacher which didn’t take my
bad grades as a judgement of
my abilities, but …
whywho / that八、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。2006四川卷：That night，we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals.
NMET 2005: Some students may also save up for our college or future use.
wetheir常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。2oo7全国II：I meant to write long letter and tell
you all the things I’m doing at the
school…
2007四川卷：An Australian farmer found the
kangaroo caught in the fence around his
farms. a a九、冠词、连词常光顾2007浙江卷：Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.
2006辽宁卷：She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, but she marked strictly on our actual performance.
2007四川卷： He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal. whenandand短篇练习At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
They put them in the corner of the sitting
room. Jim was covered it with a lot of
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
really beautifully at the moment. There was
a fire burning in the fire place, but theChristmas
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
parents singing and dancing happily.1.2.3. 4.5.6.7.8.9.10.This passage is about______A. Jim’s family.
B. Christmas lights.
C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.CAt Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1._____
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
2._____
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
3._____
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4._________on_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
5._____
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
6. ____
really beautifully at the moment. There was
7. ________
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas
8. ____
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
9. ____
parents singing and dancing happily.
10.____＼_______lights_____________beautiful____and√∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词须关注短文改错应注意的问题 四不改:
①标点符号不改。
②大小写不改。
③词序错误不改。
④在纲外生词不改。
文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。
Don't forget!【解题步骤】1 浏览全文，掌握大意2 分句阅读，逐行找错3 检查核对，攻克难点4 规范答题 不留空白短文改错口诀： 动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别，
代词格，细领悟；
介词短语常常考，
习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误须关注，
冠词连词常光顾。Practice makes perfect. [谚] 熟能生巧Homework:
Finish Exercise paperNow here are the weather report for our city.
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature
will fell down below zero. The temperature
will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there
will be the strong wind and the temperature will
be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
you are driving because the strong wind.1.
2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.Now here are the weather report for our city.
1. _____
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
2. _____
3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature
3. ______
will fell down below zero. The temperature
4. _____
will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there
5. _____isaeveningfallafterwill be the strong wind and the temperature will
6. ____
be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had
7. ____
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
8. ____
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
9. ____
you are driving because the strong wind.
10. ____a√＼carefulof∧An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
between France and England in the balloon in 1784.High 1. ________
over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 2.________
hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 3._________
balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 4._________
coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 5._________
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 6.________
higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 7.________
Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 8._________
save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 9._________
England was very surprised see this when the balloon 10._______
landed in front of them.An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
between France and England in the balloon in1784.High 76.________
over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 77.__________
hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 78._________
balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 79.________
coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 80._________adiscoveredkeeping√ down
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 81._________
higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 82._________
Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 83.________
save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 84._________
England was very surprised see this when the balloon 85.________
landed in front of them.lighterButtheirfor∧to错误形式与改法1 改词（5—6个）：在文中该词下面划横线
( ___ )；在题号后横线上写出要改的词。 ?
2 添词（1—2个）：在文中标上添词符号（∧）；在题号后横线上写出要添的词。
?
3 去掉（1—2个）：在文中用斜线( )划掉该词；在题号后写上要划掉的词，并也用斜线划掉。
?
4 正确（1个）:在题号后横线上写出正确符号(√) 。 Thank You
2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。
3. 知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确。How to correct？Any skills？Any rules？How to correct a composition 短文改错Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
06年浙江卷短文改错. Steps of correcting a composition:1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.
（检查核对，攻克难点）Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
09年浙江卷短文改错. to√itsthereyourknowledgewithhopepossible∧right wordMissing wordWrong wordUnnecessary word改错命题统计高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，10行中一般只有一行全部正确，其他9行都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为
命题特点 1：3：6即: 1行正确；
3行缺词或多词；
6行需要找出错误并改正。Dear Ms, Donforth,
I’m writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. I’ve 1. .
heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. .
have been learning about it’s rich culture and long history. 3. .
Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. .
know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. .
learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. .
experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. .
help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. .
us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. .
think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .
09年浙江卷短文改错. to√itsthereyourknowledgewithhopepossible∧动词代词连词副词代词名词介词动词形容词错误类型统计 测试点 动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别，
代词格，细领悟；
介词短语常常考，
习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误须关注，
冠词连词常光顾。短文改错口诀：一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。2007四川卷：
But, to my surprise, when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket.
2007天津卷：
In Grand Eight I took physics. In one test I get only 36 percent of the answers correct.gotgot2009安徽卷：
Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.
2006安徽卷：
You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out
2006天津卷：
Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.
wishespermittedadmitted二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。2007陕西卷：Personally, I found most
lesson rather uninteresting.
2006浙江卷：Your knowledges of Greece
can help the whole class lessons knowledge2008福建卷：
If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.
2006陕西卷：
They have all sorts of course. I’m sure you will find one you like it.
2006重庆卷：
In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. interestcoursessky三、还要注意形和副 注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。2007浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself.
2006福建卷：We can hear birds singing happy all around. proudhappily2009湖北卷：
A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.
2006辽宁卷：
She was usual patient with her students and never made them disappointed. strongusually四、非谓语，细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。2007浙江卷： I could not to run very fast and
fell behind.
2007宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every
day.
to2006天津卷：
You always gave me special attention and inspired to me to join in activities.
2006天津卷：
I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.
NMET 2003:
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.
becometalking人称代词，物主代词的使用．
２．反身代词oneself 的使用．
３．人称代词的主格和宾格．
４．不定代词的使用．
５．Both, all, either, neither, none的使用.
6. Whose 和who’s， its和 it’s的区别．五、 代词格，细领悟
（ 2007全国I）
I was only about six that he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.minewhen2007全国II：
While the others are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the ball.
2007陕西：
Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!
2006辽宁卷：
She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, and she marked strictly on student’s actual performance. students’/ourtheirmyself 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。 catch a sight of
lose my heart
in hurry
in Sunday afternoon
express us
such many people
aon∨ourselvesso六、习惯用法要记住2007陕西卷： They were used to write on the blackboard and asked us difficult questions.
2007浙江卷：So I didn’t lose my heart and kept running.
2007浙江卷：I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners.
2006天津卷：Because the help you gave me that summer, My life changed.
2006福建卷：I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it.
2006福建卷： It is so a beautiful place! fasterwithofforsuch七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。NMET 2004 : I don’t know that they don’t
like to talk with me.
2007天津卷：I was lucky enough to have a
teacher which didn’t take my
bad grades as a judgement of
my abilities, but …
whywho / that八、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。2006四川卷：That night，we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals.
NMET 2005: Some students may also save up for our college or future use.
wetheir常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。2oo7全国II：I meant to write long letter and tell
you all the things I’m doing at the
school…
2007四川卷：An Australian farmer found the
kangaroo caught in the fence around his
farms. a a九、冠词、连词常光顾2007浙江卷：Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.
2006辽宁卷：She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, but she marked strictly on our actual performance.
2007四川卷： He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal. whenandand短篇练习At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
They put them in the corner of the sitting
room. Jim was covered it with a lot of
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
really beautifully at the moment. There was
a fire burning in the fire place, but theChristmas
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
parents singing and dancing happily.1.2.3. 4.5.6.7.8.9.10.This passage is about______A. Jim’s family.
B. Christmas lights.
C. How Jim’s family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Eve.CAt Christmas Eve, Jim went with his
1._____
father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
2._____
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room!
3._____
They put them in the corner of the sitting
4._________on_________chose_______tall_______it动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟room. Kate was covered it with a lot of
5._____
Christmas light. The sitting room looked
6. ____
really beautifully at the moment. There was
7. ________
a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas
8. ____
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his
9. ____
parents singing and dancing happily.
10.____＼_______lights_____________beautiful____and√∧were动词形还要注意形和副动词形名词数冠词连词须关注短文改错应注意的问题 四不改:
①标点符号不改。
②大小写不改。
③词序错误不改。
④在纲外生词不改。
文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。
Don't forget!【解题步骤】1 浏览全文，掌握大意2 分句阅读，逐行找错3 检查核对，攻克难点4 规范答题 不留空白短文改错口诀： 动词形，名词数，
还要注意形和副；
非谓语，细辨别，
代词格，细领悟；
介词短语常常考，
习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，
逻辑错误须关注，
冠词连词常光顾。Practice makes perfect. [谚] 熟能生巧Homework:
Finish Exercise paperNow here are the weather report for our city.
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature
will fell down below zero. The temperature
will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there
will be the strong wind and the temperature will
be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
you are driving because the strong wind.1.
2.3.4.5.6.7.8.9.10.Now here are the weather report for our city.
1. _____
Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature
2. _____
3℃ in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature
3. ______
will fell down below zero. The temperature
4. _____
will be －8 ℃. The day before tomorrow, there
5. _____isaeveningfallafterwill be the strong wind and the temperature will
6. ____
be low. It will fall down to －10 ℃. You had
7. ____
better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a
8. ____
driver, you’d better be more carefully when
9. ____
you are driving because the strong wind.
10. ____a√＼carefulof∧An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
between France and England in the balloon in 1784.High 1. ________
over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 2.________
hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 3._________
balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 4._________
coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 5._________
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 6.________
higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 7.________
Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 8._________
save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 9._________
England was very surprised see this when the balloon 10._______
landed in front of them.An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea
between France and England in the balloon in1784.High 76.________
over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 77.__________
hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 78._________
balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 79.________
coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 80._________adiscoveredkeeping√ down
the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 81._________
higher again. So it was still too close to the water. 82._________
Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 83.________
save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 84._________
England was very surprised see this when the balloon 85.________
landed in front of them.lighterButtheirfor∧to错误形式与改法1 改词（5—6个）：在文中该词下面划横线
( ___ )；在题号后横线上写出要改的词。 ?
2 添词（1—2个）：在文中标上添词符号（∧）；在题号后横线上写出要添的词。
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3 去掉（1—2个）：在文中用斜线( )划掉该词；在题号后写上要划掉的词，并也用斜线划掉。
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4 正确（1个）:在题号后横线上写出正确符号(√) 。 Thank You