初中英语中考复习资料-书面表达课件

课件37张PPT。English Writing
英语书面表达训练写过去的事主要特点记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明空间顺序时间顺序能力要求逻辑顺序主要问题要点不全线索不清原因：步骤不对书面表达六 步 法书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为
何 如 何 做 了 何 事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节
连贯 呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分课堂练习请用六步法写一篇短文五个 “W”一个 “H”第一步 审题认真读题然后找出把答案写在题中相应的位置书面表达经典示例假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。　1、目击者应该准确报告事实；?? 2、词数100左右；?? 3、结尾已为你写好。
_________________________________________　　About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li Hua附图1234At 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000,
I saw a woman driving a car hit the man
in the street.第二步 抓要点一幅图，一要点时态直达 语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词第三步 扩展成句把要点变成完整的句子。注意使用介/副词第四步 连句成文增加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第五步 查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？时态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？第六步 誊写卷面整洁不一定加分，
卷面潦草一定要扣分！作业选评要改进吗？为什么？精 彩 范 文 赏 析①At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. ②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析④The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.精 彩 范 文 赏 析⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didn't. ⑥Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. 精 彩 范 文 赏 析⑦Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. ⑧After that, I went over to check out the old man.精 彩 范 文 赏 析About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua精 彩 范 文 赏 析图1图2图3图4AC864小结审题，抓点
造句，成文
改错，誉写作业复习本课要点
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