社会现象式议论文写作指导2
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一.常用模板
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The past decade has witnessed ________________and consequently students show growing concern over how to _____________. To this problem, in my mind, there are at least the following three approaches. First of all,___________. Secondly, ___________. Finally, _________________.
(第1句点出存在的社会现象,第2句过渡句,第3,4,5句提出三个解决问题的措施或建议方法)
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With more and more _______________, air pollutionin in cities has been more and more serious,so if the city residents want to improve living quality, the problem has to be solved. (第一段点出存在的社会现象)
In the first place,______________. What’s more, _____________. Last but not least, _______________.Only when all the people stop pursuing personal interests at the price of air pollution can we hope to put an end to this unfavorable situation. (第二段提出三个解决问题的措施或建议方法; 结尾句使用倒装句,加强语气)
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Nowadays , with the fast development of national economy,more and more people flood into big cities, which causes serious housing problems.If we want to solve this problem, the careful planning of the government and the cooperation of all the citizens are both needed. (第一段点出存在的社会现象和简单的原因)
On the one hand, _________________.On the other,______________. (第二段提出二个解决问题的措施或建议方法)
All in all, as long as the government and the citizens make joint efforts,a sound solution is not far away. (第三段总结全文,首尾呼应)
二、 经典范文
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问题现象:城市空气污染已经越来越严重
原因:工厂越建越多,路上车辆越来越多
建议:1.工厂应该遵守环境法,不能直接把没有处理的废气排放到空气中;2. 政府应号召广大市民种树以提高空气质量;3.各种车辆所排放的尾气不能超过国家标准
1.标题:How to Solve the Problem of Air Pollution in Cities
2.必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的容。
3.将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。
审题:人称:第三人称 时态:一般现在时,现在完成时,将来时 文体:议论文
信息组合:
1) 点出现象及简单的原因
2) 3)4)建议
5)得出结论
参考例文:
How to Solve the Problem of Air Pollution in Cities
With more and more factories being set up and more and more cars and buses running on the roads, air pollution in cities has been more and more serious, so if the city residents want to improve living quality, the problem has to be solved.
First of all, factories should obey the environmental laws and rules closely, not giving off waste gases into the air directly without disposal. What’s more, the government should call on all the people to plant more trees to improve the air quality. Finally, the tail gases from cars, buses and trucks should never exceed the national standard. Only when all the people stop pursuing personal interests at the price of air pollution can we hope to put an end to this unfavorable situation.
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请你根据下面信息写一篇短文。
口语考试在英语学习中很重要,因为你考试成功的话,你将来就很有机会找到一份好工作,以下是口语考试想取得成功的几个建议:
首先,衣着要得体,对考官和其他考试者要有礼貌。其次,讲话时要清晰流利,最好事先作些准备,背诵一些典型文章,和别人演习演习。另外,自信也很重要。
写作要求:
1. 必须包括以上全部内容;
2. 使用5个句子。
审题:人称:第三人称 时态:一般现在时,将来时
信息组合:
1) 点出现象及简单的原因
2) 3)4)建议
5)得出结论
参考例文:
How to Succeed in an Oral Examination
An oral examination is important to the English-learning process because if you are successful in it, you will have a good chance to find a better job in the future, then how can we succeed in an oral examination
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In the first place , you should dress properly in order to leave a good first impression on the examiners and you should be polite toward the examiners and other examinees , helping you win respect from all of them. In the second place, you should speak both clearly and fluently --- you should make sufficient preparations by reciting classic passages and talking to partners especially foreigners. What's more, self-confidence is also an important factor, which can help you bring your oral ability into full play . You will succeed in an oral examination as long as you put the above principles into practice .
三、实战练习
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请你根据下面信息写一篇短文。
现在,由于找工作的竞争越来越激烈,大学生越来越关注毕业后如何找到一份工作。
请你就如何找到一份工作写一篇短文,建议应包括:
1. 参加大城市的招聘会。2. 浏览媒体招聘广告。3.直接去理想中的公司自荐寻找工作机会。
写作要求:
1. 必须包括以上全部内容;
2. 使用5个句子。
参考词汇:招聘会recruiting fairs
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现象:随着科学技术的发展,中国盗版行为越来越严重
后果:可能会引发新的道德危机
建议:1. 政府要出台法律保护作者的权利,严惩盗版者;2. 要让人们知道买盗版书和盗版DVD等盗版产品是不道德的,是非法的;3.如果正版产品能降低点价格会收效更多
1.标题:How to Control Piracy in China
2.必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的容。
3.将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。
参考词汇:盗版产品pirated products 盗版者 pirate 正版产品authorized products
四.Enjoy more essays and fill in the blanks.
How to Solve Population Problems
Population expansion is one of the most serious problems in the world. With better hygienic conditions and better medical care, 1_____( few )babies die today. 2_____the birth rate remains unchanged. Moreover, the death rate has been lowered considerably by various kinds of progress. People generally live longer 3______ they used to. All these contribute to a series of problems: shortage of national resources and food supply, crowded cities and high rate of 4___________ (employ).
5______solve all these problems, we must take measures 6__________ ( control )birth rate. The first important step is to educate people--to help them understand the advantages of small families. 7 ___________ important measure is to raise people's living standards. When people fully understand the consequences of population expansion, and when their standard of living is raised, the birth rate will decline 8_________ compulsion (强迫,强制).
9_________it is a difficult task, we should try our best to carry out birth control. If we fail to do so, the world will be too crowded 10______ ( live )in, and the natural resources will be used up. Then we will no longer survive on earth.
What Is Success
What is success Different people hold different views on this question. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money. 1_______argue that success means holding an important government post. Still others believe that whoever has got high academic title is successful. It is clear 2 ______there are quite different opinions on success.
In order to become successful, you should 3______of all be both perseverant and hardworking. 4_____you know, whatever you do, there are always two possible results: success and 5_______. When you fail, you should never lose heart. 6_____ the contrary, you must build up your confidence and work even harder. You should always keep 7_____mind that perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to it. In 8_______ (add), you should pay great attention to your work method. 9_____is necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work. Finally, it is important for you to get along well 10______your co-workers, care for each other 11_____ help each other. If you follow these principles, you will certainly achieve remarkable success in the future.
In my opinion, success means 12__________( achieve )brilliant results in one’s work, that is, making outstanding 13_____________ (contribute ) to the development of the country and 14__________ (bring) happiness to the people.
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社会现象式议论文写作指导2
问题/提出建议
参考范文
How to Get a Job After Graduation
Nowadays,due to a more and more fierce competition in the job market,college students show growing concern over how to get a job after graduation. To this problem, in my mind, there are at least the following three approaches.
First of all, one main approach is to take part in grand recruiting fairs in big cities,where the students can hand in thier resume ,and then wait for the notice of an interview. Secondly, the students can go over the advertisements on newspapers, TV or the Internet to find a satisfactory job. In addition, going directly to an ideal company is also a good choice and a brave behavior, which sounds pretty rare among the job hunters.
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How to Control Piracy in China
With the development of science and technology, piracy in China is getting more and more serious ,which may bring about a new moral crisis, so it's urgent to find ways to control it.
First of all, the government must introduce laws to protect the rights of the authors and punish the pirates severely. The reason why piracy in China is more serious than other countries is, at least to some extent, that we haven't got any laws to punish the pirates. Second, we shall let people know that it's both morally wrong and illegal to buy pirated products ,such as pirated books or DVDs. Third, we may achieve more by reducing the price of authorized products by a little bit, for many people just think it shouldn't be worth so much.
四.Enjoy more essays
How to Solve Population Problems
1. fewer 2. But 3. than 4. unemployment 5. To
6. to control 7. Another 8. without 9. Though 10. to live
What Is Success
1. Others 2. that 3. first 4. As 5. failure 6. On 7. in 8. addition 9. It
10. with 11. and 12. achieving 13. contributions 14. bringing
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