2018中考书面表达复习指导课件

课件62张PPT。中考书面表达复习指导中考作文怎么写。
中考作文防什么中考作文写什么 A 有一些基础的学生了解公式法作文的框架，并能学
写简单的句子，逐渐连句成文 B 有较好基础的学生要求掌握公式法作文的框 架，并能按
规定要求结合公式法写作文。
教学目标：C 没有多少基础的学生能够牢记今天的内容，有考场上有所写。中考作文怎么写。
优秀的
文章布局层次过渡文采cross-questions(审题） Style(体裁） Person (人称） Tense (时态）认真审题，
勾画出要点，
并适当分析 中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。因为这种结构十分清晰。
山西中考最爱用的结构则为
“观点（+论证）——事例——总结”布局三段式
第一段：简单明了，开门见山.不超过3句话，如，我们想表达我最喜欢的运动是跑步，第一段直接说 I . My favorite sport is racing. 接着可以说：It not only makes me feel energetic but also builds up my health. 或者也可用which, 生成一个非限制定从。
第二段：用事例说。1. I can’t forget what happened several weeks ago,接着就可以说一个发生的事例，注意：1事例必须违绕观点进行。2事例必须使用一般过去时。3最好使用表示时间转移的词汇连接句与句。4段末表达自己的感受how happy I was等等。
第三段：总结，用不同的话语再现第一段的观点。Sentence connectionSentence passage
(根据写作提纲和要点，按步骤写出每一部分的具体内容，用关联词把各部分连起来成文）层次
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。
递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。
转折：but, yet, however等。
真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。亮点：当我们将前面都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。文采大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是
A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking, B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching（迷人的）等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯
加谚语文采加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to study EnglishAs the saying goes :Practice makes perfect. So Joining the English club is a good way to study English
扩写练习：likes playing sports healthyhealthyHe is a boy.He is a ____________ boy.He is a __________ boy who___________________.I like music.I like________ music.I like________ music that____________________.dancedancecan make me excited仿写练习：目的原因She always______________________ to _______________ because___________________.relaxlistens to some musicmusic is fantasticrelax
study better
get some knowledge
keep healthy
have a rest
have fun
get good grades
…Miss CoolMr. Ball采用高分句：一、开头句型。As?far?as?...is?concerned?
It?goes?without?saying?that...??
It?can?be?said?with?certainty?that...?
As?the?proverb?says?
It?has?to?be?noticed?that...?
It`s?generally?recognized?that...?It`s likely that
It’s hardly too much to say that...
What calls for special attention is that…
There’s no denying the fact that…
Nothing is more important than the fact that...
What’s far more important is that... 一、结尾句型。I will conclude by saying...
Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...
It may be safely said that...
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
It can be concluded from the discussion that…
From my point of view, it would be better if…采用高分词：
目标句：Developing a good habit is of great/much importance.原句：Developing a good habit is very important.代替important的高级词汇原句：Study is really important for us.
目标句： Study is the only thing that really matters for us.采用高分词：
目标句：I had a wonderful time at the party that night.原句：I had a very good time at the party that night.代替good的高级词汇原句：The school's examination results were very good.
目标句： The school's examination results were impressive.Steps of writingNecessaryWriting skillsIf possible
书面表达审改连列美
善用丰富词汇活用多种句型妙用格言和谚语一篇优秀的书面表达应该是：语意要合情合理
过渡要自然顺畅
段落要清晰明了
语句要有简有繁
语法要恰当正确
语言要地道顺畅
书法要规范整洁Title:____________ togeneral总specific分I can still remember what happened several months ago.At that time, I studied very hard in order to get better grades, which, unluckily, undermined my health. As a result, I was fainty all the time, feeling too weak to walk, not to mention study. My favorite sportBeginning: Key sentence B:
Key sentence A:
Main part
(正文): My favorite sport is racing, which makes me energetic, but also build up my health. As the saying goes: Health is a man's best wealth. HomeworkTitle:____________ specific分After a while, I made friends with a sportsman by chance, whose endless energy and constant confident smile infected me. Thanked to him, I began to race and fell in love with it ever since. And I soon became healthy, even healthier, again, and did better in my study too. How happy I was.My favorite sportMain part
(正文): Key sentence C:
HomeworkTitle:____________ togeneral总In short, I love racing, and I love the feeling of energy it brings me even better.My favorite sportEnding: Homework My hobbies
( Beginning ): ___________________________________. ( Key sentence A):______________________.
(Key sentence B ): ______________________. (Key sentence C ): _____________________.
(Ending) _______________________________________.Can you finish the rest besides the beginning given ?Practice:My favorite hobby is reading.中考作文防什么。
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1. 防主题偏，文章是否符合题目要求，内容是否完整。(check the theme)
2.防语法错，是否有时态错误，是否有主谓不一致，是否有语态问题，是否有词形错误，是否有不合乎搭配的词组。(check the grammar)
３.防标点错，是否有标点错误 (check the punctuation)
4.防拼写错，是否有拼写错误和大小写问题 （check the spelling)
5.防表达错，是否有不合乎英语惯用的表达，是否有中国式英语表达。(check the ways of expression)
Write at least 80 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy".The following points are for your reference: (所给提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Tell us an experience of it.
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons) The best way to make me happy is achieving good marks.
I still remember what happened last weekend. In the morning, I had a quarrel with Tom, one of my best friends. After the argument, every tiny little thing that happened between him and me that may or may not be offensive flashed in my mind. I tried to remember something positive in order to save our friendship but it just didn’t work. All my efforts only added up to my anger to him. Luckily, the teacher announced our marks in the afternoon, I turned out to be the no. 1 in our class, and it suddenly came to me that it was just Tom who had helped me when I had difficulties in my study. How happy I was, I not only got the first place in our class, but also saved our friendship.
All in all, good marks always cheer me up. And I will always cherish every achievement have I made and the person who helped with my achievements.内容不全内容（6分）+语言（6分）+文采（3分）总分15分 The winter holidays are one of the most exciting days in the year. I did a lot of things this winter holidays. the most unforgetable thing is to make my birthday cake with my mother on my birthday. My mother buy the things we need from the supermarket. We mixed the floor and eggs. Then add some special things to make the cake soft. Finally, we put it into the iron. I shared the cake with my family numbers. It was really delicions. I will never forget that day because I learned to make cakes as well as share my happiness with others.The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.What do you think of this article?错误太多Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.Find out the mistakes in the following
sentences and correct them.1. I climed slowly and was very tried.2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4. I can’t forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.I can’t forget that day because5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever.!Capital letter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）6. I will remembered that day forever.
remember7. I thought it is hungry.was8. My grandmother always tidy up my room.tidies9. How unforgettable this things is!thingTense（时态）Verb agreement (主谓一致)Word form (词形）10. In my father’s help, I became more patient than before.
With my father’s help,11. To cut a long story to short, ….To cut a long story short,… 12. I went to Shihua by a bus with my mother.by bus13. My mother told me don’t give it up.told me not to give it upPhrases(短语和固定搭配）14. I saw an old lady lay in the middle of the road.saw an old lady lying…16. We played snow in front of house.played with15. I sat on a seat , listening music.listening to 17. Then a lady asked who had broken her window. We all were afraid.were allMissing words（漏词）18. We should do things by our own hands.withthe house19. It is tired work.tiringWords’ order（词序）Using wrong word（选词错误）22. He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart.carefully21. One Sunday morning, I went to Shaanxi by bus and sat beside me was a girl.I went to Shihua on a bus and there was a girl sitting beside me. Chinese English（中式英语）In my life, many things happened.20. In my life have many things happened.2.In our life, the problems of our environment are
very important.3.We have hurt it too much by cutting down trees and pollute water and land.4.I want to be a environment protector so that save it. to polluting in order to save it/so that I can save itserious an environment自己练练？1.Environment is very important for us. 5.I’d suggest my parents to take bus instead of drive car.7.I will progress my habbits such as use a basket or a paper bag.8.If everybody can do somethings to protect the earth, our environment will be much beautiful.6.I will prevent people throw rubbish everywhere. take a bus instead of driving a car from throwing develop good habits using something much more beautiful1. 是否有大小写错误(capital letters or lowercase letters)
是否有拼写错误 (spelling mistakes)
是否有标点错误 (punctuation mistakes)
4.是否有语法错误 (grammar mistakes)
主谓是否一致
动词的时态
语态的使用是否正确
词组的搭配是否合乎习惯
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Common Errors in English writing遣词造句，争取文采考试手册上的词组
常用的句型 短语（上下连贯)逻辑关系的上下简单句
--状语从句加减合替重复、可有可无的what’s more
in addition
more importantly
on the other hand
not only … but also …条件 if/ unless
因果 because
结果 so… that
目的 so that
让步 although, though
比较 than, as…as
时间 when
中考作文写什么。
Leaving school（毕业时分）
Growing pains and gains（成长的烦恼与欢乐）
I have a dream（我有一个梦想）
Things I hate to do（我不喜欢。。。）
Love around me（我身边的爱)
I want to do something for my school(我为学校做件事）
I’m proud of myself（我为自己感到自豪）
与生活相关
与“我”相关（一）传统文化
传统文化是近几年中考的热点，相信今年考它的可能性会很大。中国传统节日是传统文化的一部分。 热点中的热点
【题目1】
中国的传统文化节日形式多样，内容丰富，是我们中华民族悠久历史文化的一部分。传统节日的形成过程是一个民族或国家历史文化长期积淀的过程，请写一篇短文谈谈你的感受，内容包括：
1. Which is your traditional festival?
2. Tell us one of the most meaningful things you did during the festival.
3. What do you think of traditional festival【参考范文】
There are many traditional festivals in China, but my favorite one is the Spring Festival, which not only gives us a chance to relax, but also provides us with opportunities of communication.
I can still remember what happened in the last Spring Festival. I was playing games with my friends in the street, when I saw a homeless man sitting in the cold street corner and eating some leftover food. I felt very sorry for him and gave all my Yasuiqian money to him, so did some of my friends. Although we left no Yasuiqian for ourselves that year, we were very happy.
All in all, though I love the Spring Festival celebration, I love the love we show to others during the festival more.【模写参照】
There are many traditional festivals in China, but my favorite one is the Spring Festival, which not only gives us a chance to relax, but also provides us with opportunities of communication.
I can still remember what happened in the last Spring Festival. I was playing games with my friends on the street, when I saw an homeless man sitting in the cold street corner and eating some leftover food. I felt very sorry for him and gave all my Yasuiqian money to him, so did some of my friends when. Although we left no Yasuiqian for ourselves that year, we were very happy.
All in all, though【题目2】中国的传统文化艺术林林总总，是我们中华民族悠久历史文化的一部分。也是我们中华民族人民智慧的结晶过程，请选一种传统艺术写一篇短文谈谈你的感受，内容包括：
1.What traditional folk arts do you like most?
2.Tell us your experience with such a traditional folk art.
3.What do you think of traditional folk art.【参考范文】
?There are many traditional folk arts in China, but my favorite one is paper cutting, which not only makes me feel the wisdom of our Chinese people, but also reminds me of my dearest granny, from whom, I first learnt the art of paper cutting.
I still remember what happened in the Spring Festival several years ago, my parents took me to my hometown after all these years, which was located in the mountain and was far away from the city where we lived. In the village, everything was fresh and interesting to me, but what attracted me most were the red paper cuttings all over the house and the yard, which were all hand-made by my dearest granny. So I begged her to teach me and was so happy when she said yes with a smile on her face, but the work of paper cutting is never as easy as it seemed, so I even considered quitting for several times, but my granny was always there encouraging me when I lost my heart. Finally, I made my first paper cutting successfully. I was so proud.
All in all, paper cutting is my favorite folk art, from which I learnt not only a folk art, but also patience and courage. I will always love my granny and love the folk art.【模写参照】
?There are many traditional folk arts in China, but paper cutting is my favorite, which not only makes me feel the wisdoms of Chinese people, but also reminds me of my dearest granny, from whom, I first learnt the art of paper cutting.
I still remember what happened the Spring Festival several years ago, my parents took me to my hometown after all these years, which was located in the mountain and was far away from the city where we lived. In the village, everything was fresh and interesting to me, but what attracted me most were the red paper cuttings all over the house and yard, which were all hand made by my dearest granny. So I begged her to teach me and was so happy when she said yes with smile on her face. But the work of paper cutting is never as easy as it seemed, so I even considered quitting for several times, but my granny was always there encouraging me when I lost my heart. Finally, I made my first paper cutting successfully. I was so happy.
All in all, paper cutting is my favorite folk art, from which I learnt not only a folk art, but also courage. I will always love my granny and love the folk art.（二）家规不成规矩，无以成方圆。初中生处于身心迅速发展阶段，规矩的设定是必然的，否则，会出现很多问题，不利于身心康发展。【题目3】
俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My Family Rules”为题，写一篇短文。
提示： 1. What family rules do you have?
2. Tell a story about one of them.
3. What do you think of them?
要求：1. 必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；2. 词数：不少于80词；3. 文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。【参考范文】
My Family Rules
As the saying goes, “ As a country has its state laws, a family also needs family rules.” In my family, the old must be respected by every family other member.
Once during a Spring Festival celebration, my mother prepared many delicious food. When the dishes were put onto the table, I jumped into an armchair even without thinking, but was stopped by my father. Only after all my elders were seated was I allowed to get into my seat. Later my father told me, we should always respect the old, which was not only a family rule but also a tradition of our nation.
From this event, I learnt there are many rules in my family, but respecting the old is the most important one. I shall always value my family rules and remember this story. My Family Rules
As the saying goes, “As a country has its state laws, a family also needs family rules.” In my family, the old must be respected by every family member.
Once during a Spring Festival celebration, my mother prepared many delicious food. When the dishes were put onto the table, I jumped into an armchair without thinking, but was stopped by my father. Only after all my elders were seated was I allowed to get into my seat. Later my father told me, we should always respect the old, which was a not only a family rule but also a tradition of our nation.
From this event, I learnt there are many rules in my family, but respecting the old is the most important. I shall always value my family rules and remember this story. 【模写参照】（三）文明礼仪【题目4】
在日常生活中，我们经常看到许多文明的行为，让人发自内心地为之点赞，但有时也会看到一些不文明的行为和一些不良现象。请你根据提示的要求，用英文写一篇80词以上的短文。
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1.Do you think good manners is important in our society?
2.Tell us an experience you had about civilization；
3.What do you think of it.
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名或地名；
【参考范文】
?In the daily life, good manners are very important, which, on the one hand, make ourselves better people, on the other hand, make our society a better one.
I can’t forget what happened several months ago. It was my first day to go to my new school so I took a bus, and it was crowded inside. A moment later, when I was thinking of what may happen when I first got into the school, whether I could fit in successfully or not, when I saw an old couple helping each other into the bus when the bus stopped. Before I could say anything, a young man beside me already stood up and walked over to help the grandpa to his seat. Seeing this, I at once gave my seat to the granny without hesitation. Although I had no seat for the rest of the trip, I was very happy.
In my views, if everyone can think more of others, we’ll have a better living environment.【模写参照】
?In the daily life, good manners is very important, which, on the one hand, makes ourselves better persons, on the other hand, makes our society a better society.
I can’t forget what happened several months ago. It was my first day to my new school so I took a bus, and it was crowded inside. A moment later, when I was thinking of what may happen when I first got into the school, could I fit in smoothly or not, when I saw an old couple helping each other into the bus when the bus stopped. Before I could say anything, a young man beside me already stood up and walked over to help the grandpa to his seat. Seeing this, I at once gave my seat to the granny without hesitation. Although I had no seat for the rest of the trip, I was very happy.
In my views, if everyone can think more of others, we’ll have a better living environment.
Homework俺的命咋这苦呢？怎么还有作业？1．把最后的四篇文章中你认为应该学习的表达列出来，依照整理出来的东西仿写四篇文章。
2．背诵四篇文章。Thank you for listening!