写作课 Betty city betty life

My hometown
--Hangzhou Back Street
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Better street, better life
-- Hangzhou Back Street
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My hometown
Far away over the sea
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Far away over the sea____________________________________________________________________________
Just waiting there in my hometown _________________________________________
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_________________________________________ To the far side of town
课件15张PPT。Far away over the seaThere's a river that's calling to meThat river she runs all aroundThe place that I call my hometown There's a valley on the side of the hill And flowers on an old windowsill A familiar old picture it seems And I'll go there tonight in my dreamsFar away over the seaThere's a place at the table for meWhere laughter and music aboundJust waiting there in my hometown The river she freezes When there's snow on the ground And the children can slide To the far side of townWhat’s the
hometown like?……Far away over the seaThere's a river that's calling to meThat river she runs all aroundThe place that I call my hometown There's a valley on the side of the hill And flowers on an old windowsill A familiar old picture it seems And I'll go there tonight in my dreamsFar away over the seaThere's a place at the table for meWhere laughter and music aboundJust waiting there in my hometown The river she freezes When there's snow on the ground And the children can slide To the far side of townWhat’s the
hometown like?……My hometownQianqiu Foreign Language School Zhang Chao-- Hangzhou Back Street !What's the street like today?Key sentencesWhat's the street like today?Key sentenceseg: The street is along Yuying River.
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城市，让生活更美好Better street, better life
ThemeRewriteBetter street, better life
--Hangzhou Back Street以 为题，
写一篇80词左右的短文，说说“杭州后街”这些年来的变化，让越来越多的人了解这条街，喜欢这条街，并对这条街的未来充满希望！and / but / although / because / since / …
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Better street, better life.
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and sentencesMain mistakes时态
单复数
可数，不可数
主动，被动
介词的正确使用
动词的正确形式
是否存在“Chinese English”
是否有开头和结尾
段落，标点，格式
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mistakes “Hang Zhou Back Street” is along Yuying River. In the past, It was dirty, there was “white pollution” here and there. Better street, better life. We believe that the street will be more beautiful in the future. But the street has a new face now. There are many nice buildings which are all in Chinese classical style. It is no longer polluted. Instead, the street is clean and fashion, it also attracts lots of tourists every year. It’s not only a good place for shopping, eating and entertainment, but a place where we can hold different activities. Copy out (誊写)Find out mistakesParagraphKey sentencesKey phrasesWriting Steps:Analyze the
question审题Far away over the seaThere's a river that's calling to meThat river she runs all aroundThe place that I call my hometown There's a valley on the side of the hill And flowers on an old windowsill A familiar old picture it seems And I'll go there tonight in my dreamsFar away over the seaThere's a place at the table for meWhere laughter and music aboundJust waiting there in my hometown The river she freezes When there's snow on the ground And the children can slide To the far side of townRewrite the lyrics……Street today
Street yesterday
Street tomorrowTense (时态)Future tense
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