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2011届高考英语《短文改错》专题解析
1、 (2010· 河北省唐山市二模) 第二节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:
如无错误,该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);
如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用
斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
(请在答题卡的指定位置作答)
Animals are close friend of human beings.Their existence 76. _________
especially that the existence of rare animals,makes the whole 77. _________
world lively and colorful.Unlucky, we have heard such news that 78. _________
rare animals,even keeping in the zoo,can’t escape being hurt 79. _________
and killed.You may wonder how this can happen.The reason 80. _________
is that some people lacked understanding about these animals 81. _________
and care little about them.
However, we should make information about rare animals 82. _________
known to the public.Let’s keep on mind that protecting animals 83. _________
is duty of everyone.Meanwhile,we should take active and effective 84. _________
measures.After all,protecting animals are protecting ourselves. 85. _________
76.friends
77. that去掉
78. Unluckily
79. kept
80.√
81.1ack
82.Therefore
83. in84.the
85.is
2(2010· 河南省开封市二模)
I picked out a baby bird without any feathers on my 76.
way home. It was too young to feed itself, so I took it 77.
into my room and fed it careful. It grew up a month later. 78.
It kept in a birdcage made by myself. One morning. I 79.
happened to think that it should return to nature or that 80.
the forest should be it’s home indeed, so I set it free. To 81.
my surprise any joy, it fly down and stood on my shoulder, 82.
appeared to welcome me when I came back after school. 83.
From then on, I often saw it to fly away as I left for school 84.
and fly back when I came home. We were good friend for years. 85.
76. out – up 77. √ 78. careful – carefully 79. 在kept前加was
80. or – and 81. it’s – its 82. fly – flew 83. appeared – appearing
84. 去掉to 85. friend – friends
3(2010· 山西省大同五中二模)
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two 76. ___________
weeks ago . I have been thinking about a question you asked 77. ___________
me . In my opinion, you should go back after you finish your 78. ___________
studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly 79. ___________
needed nowadays in our country, It will be quite easily for you 80 ___________
to find a good job , In fact , I know a few big company here in 81 ___________
our city hopes to hire people like you , For another reason, . 82 ___________
I think it will be very much more convenient for you to look 83. ___________
after your parents as they are getting old, Therefore this is only 84. ___________
my point of view, It is up for you to make right choice. 85. ___________
76. √ 77. a →the 78. go →come 79. that →what 80. easily →easy
81. company →companies 82. hopes→hope 83. 去掉very
84. Therefore →But 85. for →to
4(2010· 浙江省菱湖中学二模)
When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
me, but was strict whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made great
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
thanks to our parents.
5(2010· 甘肃省天水一中三模)
On the earth, all living things need others. Each kind of life eats 76________
one another kind of life in order to live, and together they form 77________
a food chain. Some food chains are simple, while others don’t. But 78________
all food chains begin with the sun, and one of the links disappears, all 79________
food chains become break up. It is known that all lives need to live on 80________
the sunlight. But only animals can use sunlight directly. Plants are 81________
as “factors”. They make food from sunlight, water and other things. 82________
Plants feed food to other things. Animals can’t use the sun’s energy 83________
only after it has changed by the plants. Some animals feed directly 84________
by plants, while others eat smaller animals. They eat plants indirectly. 85________
76. 正确 77. 去掉one
78. don’t改为aren’t 79.and后加if/when
80. break改为broken 81. animals改为plants
82. 去掉as 83. can’t改为can
84. has后加been 85. by改为on
6(2010· 河北省衡水中学三模A卷)
Dear Carmen,
It is early afternoon and I am sitting in the small restaurant 76.____________
closed to my work . It is a terrible day in New Orleans. It is 77.____________
raining and I am feeling homesick . I am thinking you 78.____________
and my other friends in Mexico. Outside, the sidewalks 79.____________
is crowded with people. All of them are wearing coats 80.____________
and carry umbrellas. Everyone is in a hurry to get a dry place. 81.____________
Bus and cars are moving up and down the streets. Inside, 82.____________
it is warm and pleasant. I attend classes in every morning. I 83.____________
don’t have many free time. But I like my life here. I hope 84.____________
that you are good and happy. Please write soon. I enjoy your 85.____________
letters with news from home.
76.a
77.close
78.of / about 或thinking---missing
79. √
80.are
81.carrying
82.Buses
83.in
84.much
85.well
7(2010· 河北省正定中学三模)
I received your letter was dated April l6 the day 76.
before yesterday.All of our family greatly delighted to 77.
learn how you are getting along very well with your 78.
lessons.Time passes quickly.After dozens of days, you’ll 79.
finish the middle school.What pleases us most is that you 80.
do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college 81.
entrance examination this summer.What wonderful it is ! 82.
Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you.We wished 83.
you to make better use of your time.The full preparations 84.
you make, the surer of success you’ll certain be. 85.
76.was前加that或去掉was
77. greatly前加are 78.去掉how 79. After→In
80.去掉the 81.√82. what→how 83.wished→wish
84.full→fuller 85.certain→certainly
8(2010· 河南省开封市三模)
When people think about precious things, they usually
think about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have 76.
something very preciously in my room. It’s not a CD player or 77.
a cellphone. It's the view from my window. I’m lucky live 78.
near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in 79.
the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground, 80.
young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and 81.
old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before 82.
their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music, 83.
but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and 84.
enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view. 85.
76. and → but 77. preciously → precious 78. lucky后加to
79. 去with 80. tree → trees 81. walked → walking
82. 正确 83. their → my 84. 去a
85. enjoyed → enjoy
9(2010· 黑龙江省哈九中三模)
Bill enjoyed shoot very much, but he was never good at it.One day his friend was named
Jack visited his house and saw a new target Bill had put several days ago in his garden.Jack
went nearer but saw a hole in the middle of the target.When jack asked who had shot at it,
Bill said he had.“How far away are you Two feet ” But Bill said he was 50 yards away.
Then Bill’s wife explained Jack the hole.He said, “Bill went to a shop and bought a piece of
wood.He put it in the garden and shot at it from 50 yard away, only to shoot a hole.Then he
drew a target round a hole.”
改错 1. shoot → shooting 2. friend和house中间的was去掉,或者在was前加上who/that 3. ago → before 4. but → and 5. shot at it 去掉at 6. are → were
7. explained 和Jack中间加to 8. He → She 9. yard → yards 10. a → the
10(2010· 吉林省长春五中三模)
After read your advertisement, I want to offer 76._________
myself for the position. I’m twenty years old, 77._________
male, 1.78metres tall, strong and health. I will 78._________
graduate Nanjing University this year. I have been 79._________
learning English for ten years. My spoken
English is very much good and I can write 80._________
good article. I have won several prizes in 81._________ English contests. I have made a great deal of 82._________
inventions, most of them have been put into practice. 83._________
but I can use the computer skillfully. If I can 84._________
get the job, I’ll try my best do it well. Thank 85._________
you for your kindness.
76.read---reading 77.√ 78.health---healthy
79.graduate后加from 80.去掉much 81.article---articles
82.deal---number 83.them---which或在most前加and
84.but---and 85.do前加to
11(2010· 吉林省实验中学三模最后冲刺)
A few years ago, some tourists pay no attention to environmental protection.They threw waste things about, like plastic bags, fruit skins and waste papers.Sometimes they broke trees, picked up flowers and killed birds; some even made fires in the woods to cook for picnics.What dangerous it was ! Fortunate, great changes have been taken places here.All the tourists have got used to put their rubbish into dustbins.But they are making great efforts to protect birds and plants as well .They bring our own meals prevent any accidental fire.All these should be appreciated
56.pay—paid 57.papers—paper 58.up去掉 59.What—How
60.Fortunate—Fortunately 61.been去掉 62.put—putting
63.But-And 64.our—their 65.to prevent
12(2010· 陕西省普通高等学校三模最后冲刺)
A painter hang his or her finished picture on a wall, and everyone can see it. A
composer writes work, but no one can hear it until it is performing. Professional singers
and players have greater responsibilities, for the composer is utterly independent on them.
A student of music needs as long and as hardly a training to become a performer as a medical
student needs to become a doctor. Most training is concerning with technique, for musicians
have to have the muscular proficiency of an athlete or a ballet dancer. Singers practice to
breathing every day, as his voices would be not beautiful with controlled muscular support.
String(弦乐) players practice moving the finger of the left hand up and down, while drawing
the bow to and fro with the right hand---two entirely different movements.
A painter hang his or her finished picture on a wall, and everyone can see it. A
hangs
composer writes ∧work, but no one can hear it until it is performing. Professional singers
a performed
and players have greater responsibilities, for the composer is utterly independent on them.
dependent
A student of music needs as long and as hardly a training to become a performer as a medical
hard
student needs to become a doctor. Most training is concerning with technique, for musicians
concerned
have to have the muscular proficiency of an athlete or a ballet dancer. Singers practice to
breathing every day, as his voices would be not beautiful with controlled muscular support. String
their without
players practice moving the finger of the left hand up and down, while drawing the bow to and
fingers
fro with the right hand ---two entirely different movements.
13(2010· 陕西省延安中学三模)
As everyone knows, the global financial crisis has caused a great effect in the development of the global economy. What shall we do face the global challenge
I quite agree with what the President Hu Jintao said at the 7th ASEM summit. Nothing is important than confidence. Only if we have confident and hold together can we get through a variety of difficulty. For example, after the terrible earthquake in Sichuan Province, all the Chinese held together and bravely fight against the disaster with great confidence, what won the admiration of the world.
In my opinion, faced with the present global financial crisis, we should keep calmly and not be in a panic. Believe in both our Party and country, or we will certainly live through the crisis.
As everyone knows, the global financial crisis resulted from the United States have caused a
resulting或在前加that/which has
great effect in the development of the global economy. What shall we do facing the global
on
challenge
I quite agree with what the President Hu Jintao said at the 7th ASEM summit. Nothing is more
去掉
important than confidence. Only if we have confidence and hold together we get through a variety
of difficulty. For example, after the terrible earthquake in Sichuan Province, all the Chinese held together and bravely fight against the disaster with great confidence, what won the admiration of
the world.
In my opinion, facing with the present global financial crisis, we should keep calm and not be in a panic. Believe in both our Party and country, then we will certainly live through the crisis.
14(2010· 四川省成都七中冲刺)
Have you ever heard Angel Falls 66.
It is a highest waterfall in the world, deeply in the jungles 67.
of Venezuela. Few has ever seen Angel Falls. 68.
That is very hard to get there. If you go there by land, 69.
and you will have to travel for weeks through 70.
thick jungles. If you go by plane, it will take about 71.
four hours. No one knew about this high waterfall since 1930. 72.
In that year, James Angel, American pilot, flew over the area. 73.
All of a sudden he saw a waterfall, that seemed 74.
to drop straight out of from the clouds. 75.
66. hear 后加 of 67. deeply---deep 68. has—have 69. That--- It 70. 删去and
71. 正确 72. since---until 73. 在American 前加an 74. that---which 75. 删去from
15(2010· 云南省曲靖一中三模冲刺卷)
Der Jenny,
Thank you inviting me to holiday with you . I 66.___________
would have glad accepted your invitation, but 67.___________
now I am afraid I can’t. Yesterday I received a letter 68.___________
from my parents in which he said they hadn’t seen me 69.___________
for long and hope therefore I could be back at home for 70.___________
a while. I hope you can understand this. I have long 71.___________
absent from home but sometimes I felt lonely. I believe 72.___________
you have the same experience either. Thank you and, most 73.___________
important, don’t forget to let me to know and take me along 74.___________
when in future days you are to seeing some good movies, 75.___________
and go picnicking. May you have a happy holiday!
Yours,
Wang Fang
66.you 后加for 67.glad改为gladly 68.正确 69.he改为they
70.hope改为hoped 71.Long后加been 72.but改为and 73.either改为too
74.去掉to 75.seeing改为see
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