中考英语写作策略指导（Practice makes perfect)

课件21张PPT。The writing strategies on composition Practice makes perfectWhat ’s wrong with her?She is stressed out.Could you give her some advice?She should …OpinionsShe should listen to music.listen to music
read books
have enough sleep
relax herself
...Learn to use the key wordsOpinions Writing strategies(1) (写作策略)(一)Good composition1、To write a good composition, We need : 写作策略一：
三步法搭建一个框架结构。Opinions Topic sentenceThe endingWriting strategies(1) (写作策略)(一)Good composition1、To write a good composition, We need : 写作策略一：
三步法搭建一个框架结构。Conclusion Opinions Topic sentencewriting strategies(1) (写作策略)(一)Good composition1、To write a good composition, We need : 写作策略一：
三步法搭建一个框架结构。Conclusion My family members have different hobbies.My father loves playing chess. My mother is interested in shopping. My sister likes listening to CD, and my grandparents enjoy swimming. Topic sentenceTopic sentence讲述了文章的主要内容，是文章不可缺少的部分。良好的开端是成功的一半。Topic sentenceWho?What? I enjoy_________.every daySaturdaysweekends
I can sleep on Saturday mornings. I needn’t do my homework on weekends. Instead, I can go shopping, visit my friends and go to the movies with them. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go for a ride with my brother.Topic sentence 是信息的总和。Topic sentenceWho?When?Mikelikesstamps.Mike has collected many stamps and he is interested in nearly everything about stamps. He likes watching TV programs on stamps. He also spends a lot of time on stamps. Have a try!Topic sentenceWho?What?It’s spring now. everything is alive. Trees turn green. Grass grows up. And there are flowers outside. what a beautiful world!Conclusion Conclusion也是文章不可缺少的部分，起到锦上添花的作用。Conclusion What?Leo is busy today. In the morning , he has English , math , Chinese and music . And in the afternoon ,he has P.E science and computer class. Then he plays basketball for 2 hours. In the evening , he has supper, plays the piano for an hour. He goes to sleep at nine. A. I am happy.B. What a busy day!C.I want to have
a rest.Have a try!Conclusion Who?How ?Thank you for joining CCTV’s Around The World Show. Today , we’re in Australia. It’s a beautiful, sunny day! There are many people here on vacation. Some are taking photos. Others are lying on the beach. And some are playing beach volleyball. They look cool! This is a very interesting place.
Conclusion Who?What?外教Joyce刚到你们学校不久，感觉紧张。请你根据上述情况以“How can she be healthy”为题，写一篇怎样保持健康为主题的文章。
要求：1.字数不少于80字。
2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名以及你所在的学校、班级等有关情况。
3.注意紧扣主题、意思连贯、语义通顺、书写规范。
参考词汇：have healthy food, do more exercise,
enough sleep，keep healthyHow to write opinions?She can …She had better …She is supposed to ……is helpfulIt ’s adj. for sb. to …She should …Learn to use the key words学会使用提示词！Writing strategies（2） (写作策略)（二）2.要紧扣中考的作文评分标准！第五档（13～１５分）包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词或表述顺序、逻辑关系的连接词，表达清楚．
第四档（１０～１２分）基本包含要点。遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档（７～９分）包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。
第二档（３～６分）语言错误较多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。
第一档（０～２分）白卷或文不对题；只抄写了提示词。★ ★ ★★★★ ★ ★★★ ★ ★★ ★★How can we be healthyThese day, Health is important. I am tell you some ways to be health. We should have healthy food . For example , vegetables and fruits. We ’d better to have enogh sleep. As you know, health is pretty important in our life. Here are some of my advice about how to keep healthy.
First, a balanced diet is helpful . Please take some healthy food like vegetables and fruits, do drink milk everyday. Second ,It’s a good way for you to do more exercise as much as possible. Third ,I believe that people should have enough sleep.
I hope you can enjoy your life.★ ★ ★★ ★ ★★★As you know, health is pretty important in our life. Here are some of my advice about how to keep healthy.
First, a balanced diet is
help . Please take some healthy food like vegetables and fruits, drink milk everyday.
Second ,It’s a good way for you to do more exercise as much as possible. Third ,I believe that people should have enough sleep.
I hope you can enjoy your life.Topic sentence Opinions Conclusion第五档：
a.包含内容要点；
b.语言基本无误；
c.能使用修饰词;
d.能使用表述顺序、
逻辑关系的连接词; Writing strategies
(写作策略 1)参考词汇：healthy food,
do more exercise,
enough sleep,
keep healthyDon’t miss the key points .helpfulMake less mistakesUse other beautiful wordsPut the opinions in order★ ★ ★★★Other Conjunctions(连词):(1) First …, Second …, Third …, Finally …,
(2) As we know It ’s well known that
(3)As a result In my opinion I think
In a word I hope
(4)for example, such as...,
(5) but, however, while, on the other hand, even though, except (for), instead of, after all
(6) not only… but also; neither… nor…; either… or…so … that, not … until; as … as …;中考临近，你校为了更好的帮助同学们学英语，特举办 “How can we learn English better”的征文比赛。请以此为主题写一篇文章。
要求：1.字数不少于80字。
2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名以及你所在的学校、班级等有关情况。
3.注意紧扣主题、意思连贯、语义通顺、书写规范。
参考词汇：listen carefully, study with a group, read English, watch English movies, sing English songs Just as the saying goes:*Where there is a will, there is a way.
*Rome was not built in a day.
*Work harder and practice more.
*Every little makes a nickel.积少成多
*No pains , no gains. Whose is the best one?Show timeHomeworkThe world will become more wonderful
if everyone shares their love. 1.Do you have other problems ?
2.Choose one of the problems , write a composition.