中考英语作文写作指导课件

课件19张PPT。 中 考 专 题 复 习 课Writing检查口语 爱好与学业
1.迈克疯狂地迷恋足球，喜爱看足球比赛，
当然也喜爱踢足球；
2. 放学后，他经常花1个小时左右的时间和
同学们一起 踢足球；
3. 他的父母不喜欢这一点，要求他在5点半
之前回家；他认为在爱好上花些时间是重
要的，希望能得到父母的支持。分析结构 Hobbies and studies
Mike is crazy about football!
He loves watching football matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often spends about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents don’t like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies.
He wishes he could have his parents’ support.
IntroductionMain bodyConclusionDiscussionHow to Write English Compositions集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写规范 Writing skills—six steps自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些
同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校
园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你
用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。
内容要点包括：
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数
参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息具体做法：用笔勾画自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数主题体裁人称结构时态字数已知信息未知信息以一般现在时为主第二步：
列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：
根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！Introduction

Main body

ConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWrite an outline花太多时间在兴趣爱好上
迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏
------------合理安排时间
参加兴趣小组
------List some keywords about problems.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________
2. List some keywords about opinions.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________

3. List some keywords about suggestions.
Phrases: ____________________________________
____________________________________
第三步：抓住要点，列关键词not good for study and health,…Spend ---on, hobbies, be crazy about,- - -Make sentences with the keywords about problems.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________
3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions.
Sentences: _________________________________
_________________________________第四步：连词成句Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and can’t finish their homework on time.I don’t think it’s good for our study and health.第五步：集句成段，组段成篇There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
However, how can we make better use of our spare time? For exampleBesides these,And alsoweWe注意添加主题句，连接词！抓住要点，列关键词Problems
be crazy about (7B4) play computer games (7A1)
watch too much TV (8A1) spend too much time on their
hobbies (9A3) refuse to do homework (9A3) spend --- on (7A2)
Opinions
not good for our health and study (7A2) focus on (9A3)
Pay more attention to (9A1)
Suggestions
plan time carefully (9A3) achieve a balance between study and
bobbies (9A3) take part in different after school activities (7A2)
join interest groups (8A2) do some sports (7A4)
do some housework(7B5)
范文展示Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Today’s topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”.
Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students don’t know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they can’t finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, What’s worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We don’t think it’s good for their study and health.
However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.
Let’s make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
The structure of the article
Introduction
Main body

ConclusionSummary写作：
第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息
第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成句、集句成段、组段成篇）写作前：确定人称、时态写作后： 查错改错变换句式并列句复合句
结果状语从句Some students spend too much time on their hobbies.
They can’t finish their homework on time.Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they can’t finish their homework on timeSome students spend so much time on their hobbies that they can’t finish their homework on time常见错误时态是否正确
主谓是否一致
要点是否全面
人称是否正确
语序是否有问题
语言是否符合习惯　
固定短语是否恰当