专题22书面表达-2018年高考英语备考中等生百日捷进提升系列Word版含解析
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专题22 书面表达
方法与技巧
题型介绍：
书面表达是考查考生用英语表达自己思想的能力，即运用所学的英语知识及合乎英语习惯的表达方式来传递信息，进行思想交流的能力。这将要求考生根据所给的情景和要求，在限定时间内(一般30分钟)写出100个词左右的书面材料。因此考生要做到：审题正确、要点全面，能够运用所学的语法结构、词汇知识，使上下文连贯，同时语言要准确、得当，条理清楚，书写规范。所以，具有良好的书面表达能力是非常必要的，它也进一步突出了对考生创新能力的考查。
命题形式：
一、试題突出了交际性、实用性
书面表达的内容主要取材于校园、家庭生活和一般外事活动，符合高中学生的年龄 特点和生活背景，基本都是考生己经熟悉的或将来有可能经历的事情，情景真实可信。 所提出的要求符合考生的实际英语水平，具有可写性，能够充分展示学生的书面表达能力。
二、全国新课标考查应用文的可能很大，命题形式一般是提纲作文。所以艺体生重点训练提纲式应用文。
解题技巧：
一、 重视语篇衔接，提高思维蝶变
一篇好的Writing，不仅要要点完整，表达规范，还需要有把这些内容有机联系起来的语篇衔接手段，即我们常说的关联词、连接性副词、以及一些介词和短语。这些往往是好的Writing出彩的部分。因为这样的衔接才能使句子之间、段落之间有连贯性和整体性。
有不少的同学认为语篇连接手段是个很高层次的东西，实际上，这些连接手段对于同学们来说并不陌生，常见的语篇连接手段有： 表时间/次序：First， in the first place， second……;
表并列/递进： too， also，as well as， in addition， furthermore； 表举例：For example， for instance，表总结：as a result， in summary， in short，等。
每年高考书面表达的参考范文所使用的连接手段也较为简单，有些考生的书面表达事实上已经超过了参考范文的水平。只要我们平时注意养成良好的逻辑思维和表达习惯，再掌握一些常用连接词或短语，考场作文就能得心应手。
二、掌握写作技巧，高分书面表达
“书面表达”是考查考生综合运用英语能力的一种题型，根据其一般规律，它要求考生对所给情景和要求写一篇书面材料，做到所写的内容符合所给的情景和要求，文理通顺。它既象作文，又不完全是作文，因为考生不能离开情景和要求自行立意、选材，随意发挥。它类似翻译，但又不同于翻译，因为考生必须根据需要进行适当的发挥，因而有较大的灵活性。所以在做这种题目时，要掌握一个总的原则是“不漏、不错、不多写、不乱写”。具体地则从以下四个方面去考虑、着手：
1、读题，明确要求，做好必要的准备工作。高考的书面表达，题材较多，有给文字背景材料的，有看图作文的，还有两者皆而有之的。对于文字背景材料，考生要仔细阅读，看懂题目要求，并对材料进行必要的删减。文字材料中有的是有用信息，有的是无用信息。不进行必要的删减，则会使做出来的书面表达轻者增加了错误的可能性，重者文不对题，逻辑不清。
2、组织，进行必要的语言准备。读题工作结束后，考生要就提供的信息或画面进行语言上的组织。这一环节非常重要，对“书面表达”的流畅和符合逻辑是举足轻重。读题的核心工作是作必要的删减，组织的主要工作是作适当的补充，给框架补“血”补“肉”，使所要写出来的文章意思连贯，语言畅通，逻辑严密。
3、转换，进入实质性的语言加工阶段。要做好这一阶段的工作，关键是掌握这么几条原则，多用简单句，少用复合句；多用短句，少用长句；讲究简明扼要，摒弃烦琐复杂，意思混浊不清。这一阶段是得分最终高低的关键所在。因此，除了掌握以上重要的原则外，还应在具体操作中注意选择正确的主语人称和动词的时态，多用贴切的固定短语，尽量使用自己“拿手”的句子，经常留意句子的语法是否符合要求。从更高要求来说，用英语思维并一气呵成地完成书面表达是最佳方法，这是上上策。但对于大多数英语水平尚未达到这一步的考生来说，转换过程中进行有效的控制是非常必要的。只有进行这样的控制，才能有效地控制错误的发生，才能少扣分，多得分。
4、检查，“书面表达”的最后一道工序。最后一道工序意味着一旦稍有疏忽，很难再有弥补，也就无法挽回。因此，仔细认真地检查对于最终的得分是十分重要的。在检查过程中应注意以下几个方面：
（1）信息点是否完整，有没有遗漏。根据评分标准，漏信息点是要扣大分的（2－3分）。要细致小心，一一检查，确保无一遗漏。
（2）语法正确。语法包括两个方面，一是词法，二是句法。词法方面主要检查时态、语态、主谓一致、冠词、名词单复数和词语搭配等。句法方面主要检查是否使用一些熟悉句型，特别是尽力使用简单句这一原则贯彻得如何。
总之，要做好“书面表达”是一件并非容易的事情，它需要平时的积累，需要考生在平时的英语学习中加强训练，以求水到渠成之功。当然，考前的归纳和总结也十分重要，因为它往往起着事半功倍的效果。
体验高考
1.[2017·全国卷Ⅰ]
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容：学习唐诗；
3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie，
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
2. [2017·全国卷Ⅱ]
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．展览时间、地点；
2．展览内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【解析】 题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸paper cutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
3．[2017·全国卷Ⅲ]
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
1．球队活动；
2．报名方式及截止日期。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Eric，
I was informed that our school Ping pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping pong.
As you know, playing ping pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.
Would you like to join If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.[2017·天津卷]
61. 假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
1．简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
2．告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等)；
3．希望她有机会重访天津。
注意： 1.词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs Green，
I'm so glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Jin
One possible version:
Dear Mrs Green,__
I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I'm very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.
I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.
I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again.
Yours，
Li Jin
5.[2017·浙江卷6月考]
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 参加者；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动：登山、野餐等。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【解析】 本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.
Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don't have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It's just up to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
读后续写
[2017·浙江卷6月考]
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedalled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog！” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶)．
Mac was pedalling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.________________________________________
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Paragraph 2：
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.________________________________
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【参考范文】
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing on the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
6.[2017·江苏卷]
81. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box office income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.
Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which movie shall we see
Su Hua：Whatever. We've got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West…Each sounds great!
Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.
Su Hua: And the high tech！…
Li Jiang：Perfect！Let's get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.
Su Hua：No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.
One Day in 2016.At Home.
Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film tonight
Mother：Why bother We can stay at home and watch films online. It's convenient with our new and faster network.
Son：But it feels good in a cinema.
Mother：And the price…We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.
Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.
Mother：But still we cannot get the money's worth. Some films are just boring…
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；
2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；
3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在列举理由时可以用to begin with, what's more, last but not least等；还应尽量使用较复杂的句型，如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构；在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装句等。
【参考范文】
The box office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.
The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.
China's economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.
7.[2017·北京卷]
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的线路；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【思解析】 体裁为建议信。回信是为给Jim所在的学校来中国旅游的学生提供建议，在“长江之行”和“泰山之旅”中选择其中一条线路。参考词汇和句型：
1. I am delighted to learn that…
2. Of the two routes given by…， I strongly recommend that…
3. immersed in the grandeur and splendour of the landscape
4. I promise that the trip, both fruitful and rewarding, will turn out to be a memorable experience for you.
【参考范文】
Dear Jim，
I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well known sightseeing spots. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours，
Li Hua
情景作文
[2017·北京卷]
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：视频video
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【解析】 本文为校园生活类体裁，主题为毕业纪念视频。内容有讨论、拍摄、视频制作和展示等。
参考词汇和句型：
1. In order to leave some impressive memories for all of us before graduation, our class made a special video to express our appreciation to…
2. carried out a discussion/various ideas were put forward
3. shot some wonderful videos in the school/interviewed our teachers…
4. Those who are talented in computer contributed to the making of the video.
5. edited the video/added our love to…
6. The show received a warm welcome among our fellow schoolmates.
7. Memories of the past flooded into our minds/firm bond to our school…
内容要点：
1. 讨论分工 2. 收集素材 3. 编辑制作 4. 放映视频
One possible version：
Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.
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1. 【安徽省皖南八校2018届高三第二次联考】假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Charlie来信说，他将于下个月到你所在的城市参观，并询问你是否可以提供住处。请你根据提示给他回信，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.可以提供住宿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：客房，客室guestroom
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【答案】I am very pleased to hear from you. I’m happy that you are having a visit to the city I live in next month. It’s good for you to learn more about Chinese culture by visiting different places in my country. And there is so much you will be able to learn in the city.
Of course, I can offer you some help. As long as I am here, you can always use my guestroom. Let me know your exact date and I will make sure the guestroom is ready. If necessary, I can pick up you at the airport.
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
2. 【广东省五校2018届高三12月联考】你的英国朋友Alice Bryant来信跟你谈论音乐的话题。请你根据以下要求，写一篇回信。谈谈你的看法。主要内容包括：
1.你喜欢的音乐；
2.你对音乐的看法。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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【答案】Dear Alice Bryan,
I’m glad you like music as much as I do. To tell you the truth, I like almost all kinds of music. In order to relax from the pressure of study, I always listen to light music. My favourite music is popular music and I’m a fan of many famous singers. I also like classical music, both home and abroad. And I have also made a lot of friends because of music.
Difference people have different ideas about music. Some people like classical music, some like rock and others like light music. Anyway, music can do much good to us. We can’t live without music!
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子：I’m glad you like music as much as I do.使用了比较状语从句；In order to relax from the pressure of study, I always listen to light music.使用了不定式短语；文章还使用了高级词汇和短语：To tell you the truth说实话和do much good to us对我们有好处。
3. 【河北省五个一联盟2018届高三上学期第二次模拟】假定你是李华，最近收到了你的英国朋友Jacob的来信，得知他已被剑桥大学（the University of Cambridge)录取。请你写信向他表示祝贺，并就你在大学专业选择上遇到的困惑征求他的意见。内容包括：
1.向Jacob表本祝贺；
2.谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑；
3.向对方征求意见和建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jacob,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Cambridge. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I am now in the process of university application, struggling with which major to choose. I’m a science student in high school, so I’m supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering. But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job. Do you have any suggestions on the choice of a major
I would appreciate it if you could share your opinions with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，最近收到了你的英国朋友Jacob的来信，得知他已被剑桥大学（the University of Cambridge)录取。请你写信向他表示祝贺，并就你在大学专业选择上遇到的困惑征求他的意见。注意书信的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1.向Jacob表本祝贺；2.谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑；3.向对方征求意见和建议。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: write to写信给，in the process of在……的过程中。还使用了表语从句But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。
4. 【河南省豫北豫南名校2018届高三上学期第二次联考】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter给你发来一封邮件，告诉你他被推选为学生会主席，请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.对他表示祝贺；
2.你认为他当选的原因；
3.对他未来工作祝愿。
注意： 1.文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，使文章内容充实、连贯。
3.词数100左右；
Dear Peter,
I am so happy to learn that you have been elected chairman of the Students’ Union. _____________________
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I am so happy to learn that you have been elected chairman of the Students’ Union. This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of you. Please accept my most sincere congratulations!
I have always been confident that you will succeed since you applied for this position. Your warm personality and spirit of cooperating with others make it a pleasure for others to get along with you. apart from that, being hard-working and having a strong sense of responsibility, you are quite capable of organizing students’ activities. What’s more, your ability to handle different problems also makes you deserve this title.
I hope taking on his new job will be a new beginning and a chance for you to achieve more.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文亮点】
范文有一些值得大家学习的地方，如：文章使用了很多优秀的词汇和短语：sincere真诚的， apply for申请 ，make it a pleasure for 做某事快乐，apart from除此之外，a strong sense of responsibility责任感，be capable of 有能力，What’s more而且，take on呈现等等；文章也使用了多样的句式，如宾语从句I have always been confident that you will succeed since you applied for this position.，非谓语结构being hard-working and having a strong sense of responsibility, you are quite capable of organizing students’ activities.等等。
5. 【山西省、河南省2018届高三上学期阶段性测评（四）晋豫省际大联考】假定你是李华，你的英国网友Leslie不久要来中国留学，他想了解一些日常生活中和他人保持联系的方法。请你写信向他推荐微信（WeChat）软件，并期待他早日到来。
内容包括：1.使用广泛；
2.方便快捷；
3.节省费用。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Leslie,
I’m more than delighted to hear that you will come to China for your further study and I hope you can enjoy your stay here.
There are a variety of ways to communicate with others in our daily life, of which WeChat is the most popular one. Nowadays, a good number of Chinese, especially young people, are using WeChat to keep in touch with each other. The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes. More importantly, it is free to communicate with others on WeChat, which will surely save you a lot of money.
Hopefully my advice will be of some help to you and I’m looking forward to your early arrival.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】
本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。There are a variety of ways to communicate with others in our daily life, of which WeChat is the most popular one. of which引导非限制性定语从句；The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes.句中why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句；另外，a variety of，Nowadays, especially，keep in touch with，More importantly, Hopefully等的运用为文章增色添彩。
6. 【山西省45校2018届高三第一次联考】假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部最近将开展主题为“Learning English from films”的活动。请你以短文形式为倶乐部将要举行的首场活动写一份书面通知，要点如下：
时间月9号晚7点—10点
地点：学校大礼堂
活动内容：欣赏电影《阿甘正传》( Forrest Gump)，分享观影感受
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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In order to help students learn English better, we will hold a series of film presentations. At the beginning of our “Learning English from films” campaign, a world-famous English film named Forrest Gump will be shown in our school hall. After watching the film, some people will be invited to share their opinions on it. The whole activity will last three hours from seven to ten on the evening of 9thf June. All teachers and students are welcome to join us. If you are interested, please arrive on time. Be sure not to make any noises or eat snacks during the film.
Have a good time!
【范文亮点】
条件状语从句。If you are interested, please arrive on time.
祈使句的使用。Be sure not to make any noises or eat snacks during the film.
In order to的使用。
7. 【河南省洛阳市2018届高三12月联考】假定你是校学生会主席李华，美国一学生访问团将于暑假来你校访问参观。请你写封邮件，将本次安排告知该访问团的负责人Mr. Smith，并征询他对安排的意见。
附：活动安排：
1. 体验中国绘画；
2. 品尝特色午餐；
3. 观看学生地方戏表演。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of our school Students’ Union. We are very pleased to learn that you are coming. Please allow me to tell you what we have arranged for your visit. In the morning, we will introduce Chinese painting art to you and invite you to experience the traditional art form. At noon, we want to ask you to try the local foods, a good chance, we think, to get some ideas of the local customs and a good opportunity to know each other. If you like, our school opera club will perform the local opera for you. We are eager to know if our arrangement will satisfy you.
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事；invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事。还使用了宾语从句We are very pleased to learn that you are coming.和宾语从句We are eager to know if our arrangement will satisfy you.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。
8. 【四川省内江市2018届高三第一次模拟】假设你叫李华，是你校英语俱乐部的负责人。你校汉语文学社要举办“散文诵读”比赛（Contest of Reading and Understanding Prose)。你校外教Peter因喜欢中国散文，给你发邮件说对此很感兴趣。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件,内容包括：
1.比赛的时间、地点；
2.比赛方式：朗读并回答相关问题；
3.邀请他参加比赛。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.参考词汇：散文：prose，属于不可数名词。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad you are interested in the Contest of Reading and Understanding Prose. Let me tell you something about it. It will be held by the Chinese literature Club of our school on 26th this month in the lecture hall, which will last two hours from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm. In the contest, you have to read a piece of prose and then answer some related questions from the judges. It’s great fun and meaningful and it can help you better understand Chinese prose. I know you like it very much, so why not join in it
If you need any help, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】李华是你校英语俱乐部的负责人，学校汉语文学社要举办“散文诵读”比赛（Contest of Reading and Understanding Prose)。你校外教Peter因喜欢中国散文，给你发邮件说对此很感兴趣，请你用英语给他回复一封邮件。介绍散文朗诵用一般现在时和将来时，内容包括：1.比赛的时间、地点；2.比赛方式：朗读并回答相关问题；3.邀请他参加比赛。
9. 【河北省保定市2018届高三上学期期末调研】假设你是校学生会主席李华，新年到来之际，为了帮助学校留学生们更好地了解中国文化，学生会将举办一场新年联欢会。请用英语写一个通知，主要内容包括：
1. 时间：下周五晚6:00—8:00；
2. 地点：教学楼101室；
3. 内容：学习包饺子；比赛用筷子；中国校园歌曲串烧、观看武术表演等。
注意：1.词数不少于100
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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As New Year is around the corner, we are going to hold a New Year party. It intends to help the overseas students have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
During the party, the Chinese campus songs will be presented in the form of good mixture. You will have to compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. Meanwhile, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings. Also you can enjoy Chinese martial arts (wushu) performance. The party is scheduled in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday. Make sure you won’t miss it. All of you are welcome.
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【解析】本文属于通知类文章。通知的目的为新年到来之际，为了帮助学校留学生们更好地了解中国文化，学生会将举办一场新年联欢会。主要内容包括：时间在下周五晚6:00—8:00，在点在教学楼101室，内容为学习包饺子；比赛用筷子；中国校园歌曲串烧、观看武术表演等。通知的时态以一般将来时为主。语言要简洁明了，句子不要太复杂。通常只需要用一段话讲清其内容即可。
10. 【湖北八校2018届高三上学期第一次联考】假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Steve来信说，他计划收藏一些有代表性的中国传统文化读本，请你推荐两本经典中文启蒙教材。根据下表提供的信息，请你给他写一封回信。
读本 千字文 三字经
收字 250句，994字 574句，1722字
价格 12元 18元
特点 全文为四字句，易诵易记，是中国影响很大的儿童启蒙读物。 内容涵盖广，“熟读《三字经》，可知千古事”。
参考词汇：
1. children’s primer 启蒙课本
2. Thousand-Character Classic千字文 The Three-Character Classic 三字经
注意：1. 词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Steve,
I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books.
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【答案】Dear Steve,
I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books. I’d like to recommend the following two popular children's primers.
The first is called Thousand-Character Classic, which has great influence in China and is really a good one for beginners. It has 250 sentences and 994 Chinese words. As each sentence is made up of 4 words, it’s easy to memorize and recite. The other is The Three-Character Classic and it has a collection of 1,722 words. The content of this book covers a wide range of topics. By reading it, you can have a good knowledge of what has happened in the history of China. Of the two, The Three-Character Classic is a little more expensive, costing 18 yuan, while Thousand-Character Classic costs 12 yuan.
Please let me know if you want me to buy these books.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点分析：第一段中使用了宾语从语：I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books.，简明扼要点明写信的原因。
最后一段使用祈使句+由if引导的状语结束了本文。Please let me know if you want me to buy these books.
总之，整个文章结构完整，内容齐全。句式多变，既有定语从句，名词从句，也有状语从句。既有简单句又有复合句，句式多变。同时使用了一些高级词汇，让文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，浑然一体。
方法与技巧
题型介绍：
书面表达是考查考生用英语表达自己思想的能力，即运用所学的英语知识及合乎英语习惯的表达方式来传递信息，进行思想交流的能力。这将要求考生根据所给的情景和要求，在限定时间内(一般30分钟)写出100个词左右的书面材料。因此考生要做到：审题正确、要点全面，能够运用所学的语法结构、词汇知识，使上下文连贯，同时语言要准确、得当，条理清楚，书写规范。所以，具有良好的书面表达能力是非常必要的，它也进一步突出了对考生创新能力的考查。
命题形式：
一、试題突出了交际性、实用性
书面表达的内容主要取材于校园、家庭生活和一般外事活动，符合高中学生的年龄 特点和生活背景，基本都是考生己经熟悉的或将来有可能经历的事情，情景真实可信。 所提出的要求符合考生的实际英语水平，具有可写性，能够充分展示学生的书面表达能力。
二、全国新课标考查应用文的可能很大，命题形式一般是提纲作文。所以艺体生重点训练提纲式应用文。
解题技巧：
一、 重视语篇衔接，提高思维蝶变
一篇好的Writing，不仅要要点完整，表达规范，还需要有把这些内容有机联系起来的语篇衔接手段，即我们常说的关联词、连接性副词、以及一些介词和短语。这些往往是好的Writing出彩的部分。因为这样的衔接才能使句子之间、段落之间有连贯性和整体性。
有不少的同学认为语篇连接手段是个很高层次的东西，实际上，这些连接手段对于同学们来说并不陌生，常见的语篇连接手段有： 表时间/次序：First， in the first place， second……;
表并列/递进： too， also，as well as， in addition， furthermore； 表举例：For example， for instance，表总结：as a result， in summary， in short，等。
每年高考书面表达的参考范文所使用的连接手段也较为简单，有些考生的书面表达事实上已经超过了参考范文的水平。只要我们平时注意养成良好的逻辑思维和表达习惯，再掌握一些常用连接词或短语，考场作文就能得心应手。
二、掌握写作技巧，高分书面表达
“书面表达”是考查考生综合运用英语能力的一种题型，根据其一般规律，它要求考生对所给情景和要求写一篇书面材料，做到所写的内容符合所给的情景和要求，文理通顺。它既象作文，又不完全是作文，因为考生不能离开情景和要求自行立意、选材，随意发挥。它类似翻译，但又不同于翻译，因为考生必须根据需要进行适当的发挥，因而有较大的灵活性。所以在做这种题目时，要掌握一个总的原则是“不漏、不错、不多写、不乱写”。具体地则从以下四个方面去考虑、着手：
1、读题，明确要求，做好必要的准备工作。高考的书面表达，题材较多，有给文字背景材料的，有看图作文的，还有两者皆而有之的。对于文字背景材料，考生要仔细阅读，看懂题目要求，并对材料进行必要的删减。文字材料中有的是有用信息，有的是无用信息。不进行必要的删减，则会使做出来的书面表达轻者增加了错误的可能性，重者文不对题，逻辑不清。
2、组织，进行必要的语言准备。读题工作结束后，考生要就提供的信息或画面进行语言上的组织。这一环节非常重要，对“书面表达”的流畅和符合逻辑是举足轻重。读题的核心工作是作必要的删减，组织的主要工作是作适当的补充，给框架补“血”补“肉”，使所要写出来的文章意思连贯，语言畅通，逻辑严密。
3、转换，进入实质性的语言加工阶段。要做好这一阶段的工作，关键是掌握这么几条原则，多用简单句，少用复合句；多用短句，少用长句；讲究简明扼要，摒弃烦琐复杂，意思混浊不清。这一阶段是得分最终高低的关键所在。因此，除了掌握以上重要的原则外，还应在具体操作中注意选择正确的主语人称和动词的时态，多用贴切的固定短语，尽量使用自己“拿手”的句子，经常留意句子的语法是否符合要求。从更高要求来说，用英语思维并一气呵成地完成书面表达是最佳方法，这是上上策。但对于大多数英语水平尚未达到这一步的考生来说，转换过程中进行有效的控制是非常必要的。只有进行这样的控制，才能有效地控制错误的发生，才能少扣分，多得分。
4、检查，“书面表达”的最后一道工序。最后一道工序意味着一旦稍有疏忽，很难再有弥补，也就无法挽回。因此，仔细认真地检查对于最终的得分是十分重要的。在检查过程中应注意以下几个方面：
（1）信息点是否完整，有没有遗漏。根据评分标准，漏信息点是要扣大分的（2－3分）。要细致小心，一一检查，确保无一遗漏。
（2）语法正确。语法包括两个方面，一是词法，二是句法。词法方面主要检查时态、语态、主谓一致、冠词、名词单复数和词语搭配等。句法方面主要检查是否使用一些熟悉句型，特别是尽力使用简单句这一原则贯彻得如何。
总之，要做好“书面表达”是一件并非容易的事情，它需要平时的积累，需要考生在平时的英语学习中加强训练，以求水到渠成之功。当然，考前的归纳和总结也十分重要，因为它往往起着事半功倍的效果。
体验高考
1.[2017·全国卷Ⅰ]
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容：学习唐诗；
3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie，
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
2. [2017·全国卷Ⅱ]
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．展览时间、地点；
2．展览内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【解析】 题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸paper cutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
3．[2017·全国卷Ⅲ]
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
1．球队活动；
2．报名方式及截止日期。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Eric，
I was informed that our school Ping pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping pong.
As you know, playing ping pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.
Would you like to join If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.[2017·天津卷]
61. 假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
1．简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
2．告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等)；
3．希望她有机会重访天津。
注意： 1.词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs Green，
I'm so glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Jin
One possible version:
Dear Mrs Green,__
I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I'm very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.
I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.
I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again.
Yours，
Li Jin
5.[2017·浙江卷6月考]
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 参加者；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动：登山、野餐等。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【解析】 本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.
Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don't have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It's just up to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
读后续写
[2017·浙江卷6月考]
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedalled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog！” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶)．
Mac was pedalling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
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【参考范文】
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing on the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
6.[2017·江苏卷]
81. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box office income)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.
Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which movie shall we see
Su Hua：Whatever. We've got so many choices, Kung Fu Yoga, Journey to the West…Each sounds great!
Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.
Su Hua: And the high tech！…
Li Jiang：Perfect！Let's get some food first. We only have 20 minutes left.
Su Hua：No hurry. The cinema is on the same floor.
One Day in 2016.At Home.
Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film tonight
Mother：Why bother We can stay at home and watch films online. It's convenient with our new and faster network.
Son：But it feels good in a cinema.
Mother：And the price…We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.
Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.
Mother：But still we cannot get the money's worth. Some films are just boring…
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；
2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；
3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在列举理由时可以用to begin with, what's more, last but not least等；还应尽量使用较复杂的句型，如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构；在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装句等。
【参考范文】
The box office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.
The reasons behind this are various. The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box office income. The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase. However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year. And the Internet increased options for movie lovers. Consequently, some viewers began to turn away from cinemas, leading to a slower growth.
China's economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years, so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies. Therefore, its box office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.
7.[2017·北京卷]
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的线路；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【思解析】 体裁为建议信。回信是为给Jim所在的学校来中国旅游的学生提供建议，在“长江之行”和“泰山之旅”中选择其中一条线路。参考词汇和句型：
1. I am delighted to learn that…
2. Of the two routes given by…， I strongly recommend that…
3. immersed in the grandeur and splendour of the landscape
4. I promise that the trip, both fruitful and rewarding, will turn out to be a memorable experience for you.
【参考范文】
Dear Jim，
I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well known sightseeing spots. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours，
Li Hua
情景作文
[2017·北京卷]
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：视频video
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【解析】 本文为校园生活类体裁，主题为毕业纪念视频。内容有讨论、拍摄、视频制作和展示等。
参考词汇和句型：
1. In order to leave some impressive memories for all of us before graduation, our class made a special video to express our appreciation to…
2. carried out a discussion/various ideas were put forward
3. shot some wonderful videos in the school/interviewed our teachers…
4. Those who are talented in computer contributed to the making of the video.
5. edited the video/added our love to…
6. The show received a warm welcome among our fellow schoolmates.
7. Memories of the past flooded into our minds/firm bond to our school…
内容要点：
1. 讨论分工 2. 收集素材 3. 编辑制作 4. 放映视频
One possible version：
Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.
模拟新题精选
1. 【安徽省皖南八校2018届高三第二次联考】假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Charlie来信说，他将于下个月到你所在的城市参观，并询问你是否可以提供住处。请你根据提示给他回信，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.可以提供住宿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：客房，客室guestroom
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【答案】I am very pleased to hear from you. I’m happy that you are having a visit to the city I live in next month. It’s good for you to learn more about Chinese culture by visiting different places in my country. And there is so much you will be able to learn in the city.
Of course, I can offer you some help. As long as I am here, you can always use my guestroom. Let me know your exact date and I will make sure the guestroom is ready. If necessary, I can pick up you at the airport.
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
2. 【广东省五校2018届高三12月联考】你的英国朋友Alice Bryant来信跟你谈论音乐的话题。请你根据以下要求，写一篇回信。谈谈你的看法。主要内容包括：
1.你喜欢的音乐；
2.你对音乐的看法。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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【答案】Dear Alice Bryan,
I’m glad you like music as much as I do. To tell you the truth, I like almost all kinds of music. In order to relax from the pressure of study, I always listen to light music. My favourite music is popular music and I’m a fan of many famous singers. I also like classical music, both home and abroad. And I have also made a lot of friends because of music.
Difference people have different ideas about music. Some people like classical music, some like rock and others like light music. Anyway, music can do much good to us. We can’t live without music!
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子：I’m glad you like music as much as I do.使用了比较状语从句；In order to relax from the pressure of study, I always listen to light music.使用了不定式短语；文章还使用了高级词汇和短语：To tell you the truth说实话和do much good to us对我们有好处。
3. 【河北省五个一联盟2018届高三上学期第二次模拟】假定你是李华，最近收到了你的英国朋友Jacob的来信，得知他已被剑桥大学（the University of Cambridge)录取。请你写信向他表示祝贺，并就你在大学专业选择上遇到的困惑征求他的意见。内容包括：
1.向Jacob表本祝贺；
2.谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑；
3.向对方征求意见和建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jacob,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Cambridge. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I am now in the process of university application, struggling with which major to choose. I’m a science student in high school, so I’m supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering. But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job. Do you have any suggestions on the choice of a major
I would appreciate it if you could share your opinions with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，最近收到了你的英国朋友Jacob的来信，得知他已被剑桥大学（the University of Cambridge)录取。请你写信向他表示祝贺，并就你在大学专业选择上遇到的困惑征求他的意见。注意书信的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1.向Jacob表本祝贺；2.谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑；3.向对方征求意见和建议。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: write to写信给，in the process of在……的过程中。还使用了表语从句But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。
4. 【河南省豫北豫南名校2018届高三上学期第二次联考】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter给你发来一封邮件，告诉你他被推选为学生会主席，请你用英语给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.对他表示祝贺；
2.你认为他当选的原因；
3.对他未来工作祝愿。
注意： 1.文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，使文章内容充实、连贯。
3.词数100左右；
Dear Peter,
I am so happy to learn that you have been elected chairman of the Students’ Union. _____________________
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Yours sincerely,
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I am so happy to learn that you have been elected chairman of the Students’ Union. This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of you. Please accept my most sincere congratulations!
I have always been confident that you will succeed since you applied for this position. Your warm personality and spirit of cooperating with others make it a pleasure for others to get along with you. apart from that, being hard-working and having a strong sense of responsibility, you are quite capable of organizing students’ activities. What’s more, your ability to handle different problems also makes you deserve this title.
I hope taking on his new job will be a new beginning and a chance for you to achieve more.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文亮点】
范文有一些值得大家学习的地方，如：文章使用了很多优秀的词汇和短语：sincere真诚的， apply for申请 ，make it a pleasure for 做某事快乐，apart from除此之外，a strong sense of responsibility责任感，be capable of 有能力，What’s more而且，take on呈现等等；文章也使用了多样的句式，如宾语从句I have always been confident that you will succeed since you applied for this position.，非谓语结构being hard-working and having a strong sense of responsibility, you are quite capable of organizing students’ activities.等等。
5. 【山西省、河南省2018届高三上学期阶段性测评（四）晋豫省际大联考】假定你是李华，你的英国网友Leslie不久要来中国留学，他想了解一些日常生活中和他人保持联系的方法。请你写信向他推荐微信（WeChat）软件，并期待他早日到来。
内容包括：1.使用广泛；
2.方便快捷；
3.节省费用。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Leslie,
I’m more than delighted to hear that you will come to China for your further study and I hope you can enjoy your stay here.
There are a variety of ways to communicate with others in our daily life, of which WeChat is the most popular one. Nowadays, a good number of Chinese, especially young people, are using WeChat to keep in touch with each other. The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes. More importantly, it is free to communicate with others on WeChat, which will surely save you a lot of money.
Hopefully my advice will be of some help to you and I’m looking forward to your early arrival.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】
本文是一封书信，格式正确，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。There are a variety of ways to communicate with others in our daily life, of which WeChat is the most popular one. of which引导非限制性定语从句；The reason why I like it best is that it is very fast and convenient to send word files, messages, pictures, or even video programmes.句中why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句；另外，a variety of，Nowadays, especially，keep in touch with，More importantly, Hopefully等的运用为文章增色添彩。
6. 【山西省45校2018届高三第一次联考】假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部最近将开展主题为“Learning English from films”的活动。请你以短文形式为倶乐部将要举行的首场活动写一份书面通知，要点如下：
时间月9号晚7点—10点
地点：学校大礼堂
活动内容：欣赏电影《阿甘正传》( Forrest Gump)，分享观影感受
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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In order to help students learn English better, we will hold a series of film presentations. At the beginning of our “Learning English from films” campaign, a world-famous English film named Forrest Gump will be shown in our school hall. After watching the film, some people will be invited to share their opinions on it. The whole activity will last three hours from seven to ten on the evening of 9thf June. All teachers and students are welcome to join us. If you are interested, please arrive on time. Be sure not to make any noises or eat snacks during the film.
Have a good time!
【范文亮点】
条件状语从句。If you are interested, please arrive on time.
祈使句的使用。Be sure not to make any noises or eat snacks during the film.
In order to的使用。
7. 【河南省洛阳市2018届高三12月联考】假定你是校学生会主席李华，美国一学生访问团将于暑假来你校访问参观。请你写封邮件，将本次安排告知该访问团的负责人Mr. Smith，并征询他对安排的意见。
附：活动安排：
1. 体验中国绘画；
2. 品尝特色午餐；
3. 观看学生地方戏表演。
注意：1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of our school Students’ Union. We are very pleased to learn that you are coming. Please allow me to tell you what we have arranged for your visit. In the morning, we will introduce Chinese painting art to you and invite you to experience the traditional art form. At noon, we want to ask you to try the local foods, a good chance, we think, to get some ideas of the local customs and a good opportunity to know each other. If you like, our school opera club will perform the local opera for you. We are eager to know if our arrangement will satisfy you.
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事；invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事。还使用了宾语从句We are very pleased to learn that you are coming.和宾语从句We are eager to know if our arrangement will satisfy you.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。
8. 【四川省内江市2018届高三第一次模拟】假设你叫李华，是你校英语俱乐部的负责人。你校汉语文学社要举办“散文诵读”比赛（Contest of Reading and Understanding Prose)。你校外教Peter因喜欢中国散文，给你发邮件说对此很感兴趣。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件,内容包括：
1.比赛的时间、地点；
2.比赛方式：朗读并回答相关问题；
3.邀请他参加比赛。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.参考词汇：散文：prose，属于不可数名词。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad you are interested in the Contest of Reading and Understanding Prose. Let me tell you something about it. It will be held by the Chinese literature Club of our school on 26th this month in the lecture hall, which will last two hours from 3:00 pm to 5:00 pm. In the contest, you have to read a piece of prose and then answer some related questions from the judges. It’s great fun and meaningful and it can help you better understand Chinese prose. I know you like it very much, so why not join in it
If you need any help, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】李华是你校英语俱乐部的负责人，学校汉语文学社要举办“散文诵读”比赛（Contest of Reading and Understanding Prose)。你校外教Peter因喜欢中国散文，给你发邮件说对此很感兴趣，请你用英语给他回复一封邮件。介绍散文朗诵用一般现在时和将来时，内容包括：1.比赛的时间、地点；2.比赛方式：朗读并回答相关问题；3.邀请他参加比赛。
9. 【河北省保定市2018届高三上学期期末调研】假设你是校学生会主席李华，新年到来之际，为了帮助学校留学生们更好地了解中国文化，学生会将举办一场新年联欢会。请用英语写一个通知，主要内容包括：
1. 时间：下周五晚6:00—8:00；
2. 地点：教学楼101室；
3. 内容：学习包饺子；比赛用筷子；中国校园歌曲串烧、观看武术表演等。
注意：1.词数不少于100
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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As New Year is around the corner, we are going to hold a New Year party. It intends to help the overseas students have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
During the party, the Chinese campus songs will be presented in the form of good mixture. You will have to compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. Meanwhile, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings. Also you can enjoy Chinese martial arts (wushu) performance. The party is scheduled in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday. Make sure you won’t miss it. All of you are welcome.
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【解析】本文属于通知类文章。通知的目的为新年到来之际，为了帮助学校留学生们更好地了解中国文化，学生会将举办一场新年联欢会。主要内容包括：时间在下周五晚6:00—8:00，在点在教学楼101室，内容为学习包饺子；比赛用筷子；中国校园歌曲串烧、观看武术表演等。通知的时态以一般将来时为主。语言要简洁明了，句子不要太复杂。通常只需要用一段话讲清其内容即可。
10. 【湖北八校2018届高三上学期第一次联考】假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Steve来信说，他计划收藏一些有代表性的中国传统文化读本，请你推荐两本经典中文启蒙教材。根据下表提供的信息，请你给他写一封回信。
读本 千字文 三字经
收字 250句，994字 574句，1722字
价格 12元 18元
特点 全文为四字句，易诵易记，是中国影响很大的儿童启蒙读物。 内容涵盖广，“熟读《三字经》，可知千古事”。
参考词汇：
1. children’s primer 启蒙课本
2. Thousand-Character Classic千字文 The Three-Character Classic 三字经
注意：1. 词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Steve,
I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books.
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【答案】Dear Steve,
I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books. I’d like to recommend the following two popular children's primers.
The first is called Thousand-Character Classic, which has great influence in China and is really a good one for beginners. It has 250 sentences and 994 Chinese words. As each sentence is made up of 4 words, it’s easy to memorize and recite. The other is The Three-Character Classic and it has a collection of 1,722 words. The content of this book covers a wide range of topics. By reading it, you can have a good knowledge of what has happened in the history of China. Of the two, The Three-Character Classic is a little more expensive, costing 18 yuan, while Thousand-Character Classic costs 12 yuan.
Please let me know if you want me to buy these books.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点分析：第一段中使用了宾语从语：I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books.，简明扼要点明写信的原因。
最后一段使用祈使句+由if引导的状语结束了本文。Please let me know if you want me to buy these books.
总之，整个文章结构完整，内容齐全。句式多变，既有定语从句，名词从句，也有状语从句。既有简单句又有复合句，句式多变。同时使用了一些高级词汇，让文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，浑然一体。