2018年中考英语复习专题：题型六书面表达课件

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题型六　
书面表达
【命题特点】
1. 题型多样化
中考英语书面表达在体裁、题材、形式等方面具有多样化的特点。体裁覆盖了记叙文、说明文、议论文和应用文等; 题材涵盖了学校生活、课余活动、日常生活、人际关系、教育和社会文化等各方面; 形式涉及话题型、图表型、提纲型、漫画型及开放式作文等。
2. 地方文化特色明显
中考试题多是地市命题, 因此试题的设计往往反映出当地的人文地理特点, 这样学生既对写作内容耳熟能详, 又便于激起热爱家乡的情怀。
3. 写作内容日益生活化
作文中的内容都是考生日常生活中常见的事件或现象, 与学生的生活息息相关、与学生的认知水平相适应, 符合学生们的心理特点和认知规律。
4. 鼓励学生发表自己的看法
在设题时在某些方面鼓励学生们突破以往的某些思维定势, 创造性地思考问题, 去自由地、有创意地表达自己的看法。
【命题趋势】
1. 仍以话题作文为主, 应用文的考查力度将会加大。
2. 不仅考查英语语言的运用和理解, 更加侧重考查学生观察、分析、判断、综合、记忆、推理和想象的能力, 重视对考生思维品质的评估。
3. 书面表达继续给出部分要点, 方便考生“上手”, 理清表达思路, 同时也留下了供其个性发挥的空间。
4. 半开放式的写作是主流的书面表达, 可以让考生充分发挥自己的水平, 是基础考查和能力检测的完美结合。
5. 选材更加新颖、语言更加鲜活、更加贴近学生视角、更加注重实际应用的命题风格。
【解题思路】
1. 认真审题, 弄清要求
中考书面表达有提供文字材料的, 有看图写作的, 还有两者兼有的。对于文字材料要仔细阅读其内容, 并对材料中所给的信息进行筛选, 进行立意, 避免文不对题。
2. 总体规划, 合理布局
一定要把题读全, 找齐信息点, 用铅笔标出, 写完后再用橡皮擦掉。根据题目, 可适当增加合理内容。切忌只看表格中所列出的信息点。
3. 罗列提纲, 确定基调
列出提纲为写作做好准备。根据文章要点、短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下, 形成提纲。还要定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
4. 沉着写作, 规范书写
(1)多用简单句型, 记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(2)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误。主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。注意人称代词的宾格形式。
5. 认真检查, 改正错误
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手: 格式是否有错; 拼写有无错误; 语言是否用错; 时态、语态错误; 标点错误; 人称是否用错。
【典例剖析】
技巧1　英语思维, 妙笔生花
在英语写作中, 常会出现“汉译英”的逻辑思路, 即先在头脑中形成汉语意思, 再将汉语意思翻译成英语。考生必须掌握写作方法, 养成运用英语思维的习惯, 才能妙笔生花, 写出高分作文。
技巧2　巧妙表达, 另辟蹊径
中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定, 不以文采打分。造句越简单、越准确越好, 造复合句容易出错, 容易被扣分, 如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达, 可采用变通的办法, 化难为易, 化繁为简。总之, 所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。
技巧3　巧用连词, 行文流畅
使用一些表示并列、递进等的过渡词进行加工整理, 使文章连贯、自然、流畅。过渡词主要有: (1)表示并列关系的: and, as well as, or. . . ; (2)表示转折关系的: but, yet, however. . . ; (3)表示时间关系的: when, while, after, before, then, after that. . . ;
(4)表示因果关系的: so, therefore, as a result. . . ; (5)表示目的的: in order to, in order that, so as to, so that. . . ; (6)表示列举的: for example, such as. . . ; (7)表示总结性的: in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking. . .
技巧4　锦上添花, 量力而行
作文写完之后, 应注意检查修改润色, 但是修改要量力而行, 不宜做较大改动。首先看主题是否明确, 表达方式是否易懂, 接下来检查所写内容是否切题, 表达的内容是否完整, 最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求, 主谓是否一致。
高频话题一: 校园生活
【话题剖析】
校园生活相关的话题作文, 常常围绕“最喜欢的学科及老师”“同学及娱乐活动”“学习及生活”“规章制度”或“校园建筑”等话题展开。谈论自己最喜欢的学科或老师及原因、记叙丰富的生活内容、叙述自己遇到的困难及解决的过程等。此类话题作文写作的常用表达有:
(1)My favorite subject/teacher is. . . 　(2)I like. . . because. . .
(3)I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in different activities after school.
(4)I feel proud of my school because it’s one of the best schools in my heart.
(5)My teacher said I was good at math, science, but I needed to work harder on English.
【典型例题】
(2017·黔南州中考)
　　目前, 校园暴力时有发生, 已经危害到中学生的身心健康。作为中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯, 保护自身安全, 远离校园暴力。请以“规范自我行为, 做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇短文。
内容要求如下:
1. 遵守学校纪律, 听从老师、家长的教育, 严格要求自己。
2. 远离网吧, 按时上学, 回家。
3. 待人礼貌, 友好, 不与同学打架。
4. 遇到困难多与父母及老师沟通。
要求:
1. 必须用到以上信息, 可适当发挥;
2. 文章中请勿提及真实人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数在80词左右, 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
4. 要求句子连贯, 语义通顺, 书写规范。
参考词汇: follow the school rules, be strict with, keep away from Internet bar, fight with
　　Campus violence(校园暴力)happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful for students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student,
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___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________
【思路导引】
(1)人称: 第一人称
(2)时态: 主要使用一般现在时
(3)模板:
【佳作赏析】
　　Campus violence(校园暴力)happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful for students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student, it is important to know how to be a good teenager. We should follow the school rules to behave well at school. It’s good for us to obey the teachers and parents.
We must be strict with ourselves. To be safer, we should keep away from Internet bar, and go to school and go back home on time. As teenagers, we should be friendly to one another, and don’t fight with classmates. If we have any difficulties in life, it’s best to talk about them with your teacher and parents. In a word, we should try our best to behave well.
【话题训练】
　　为了丰富学生的校园生活, 学校正筹建各种俱乐部, 如英语俱乐部(English club)、写作俱乐部(writing club)、音乐俱乐部(music club)……你想参加哪几个俱乐部 你对该俱乐部活动的开展有何期盼 为什么 请在校园英语论坛上分享你的想法。
内容提示:
(1)Which club would you like to join
(2)What activities do you want to do in the club Why
要求: (1)中心突出, 语义连贯, 层次清晰, 书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数80个左右。
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【参考范文】
Of all the clubs, I like English club best. I want to join the English club because it can improve my English skills. Next year, I will travel to America as an exchange student. I think English club is a good place to practice my spoken English. Maybe, I can make some foreign friends there.
Also, I would like to join the music club. I love singing when I feel tired. After singing some songs, I feel relaxed and joyful.
School clubs are useful and helpful for us. Why not join them and have fun right away
【补偿训练】
(一)
　　假如你是孙莹, 升入九年级后, 你的学习和生活都发生了很大变化。请你根据下面表格中的提示, 给你的笔友(Maria)写一封电子邮件, 介绍一下你最近在学习和生活上的变化。
过去 现在
作业少, 学习轻松 作业多, 压力大
放学后有时间参加各种活动 整天学习, 甚至熬夜, 放弃了自己的爱好
周末有时间和家人、朋友相聚 周末也要上课
要求: 1. 包括表格中的所有要点, 可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Maria,
　　How are you
　　My life has changed a lot since I became a student of Grade 9.
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Yours,
Sun Ying
【参考范文】
Dear Maria,
　　How are you
　　My life has changed a lot since I became a student of Grade 9. I used to have less homework and I could learn easily. However, everything is different now. I have a lot of homework to do every day.
I’m under great pressure. I used to take part in all kinds of activities after school, but now I have to study all day and sometimes stay up too late. And I even have given up my hobbies. What’s more, I used to spend the weekends with my family and friends. Now I have to take classes on weekends. I feel so unhappy.
Do you feel the same
Yours,
Sun Ying
(二)
　　初中生活即将结束, 学校英语俱乐部邀你写一篇英语短文, 给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。
内容要点如下:
1. 初中科目更多, 好的学习方法很重要;
2. 锻炼身体, 保持健康;
3. 参加社团活动, 使学校生活丰富;
4. 多读书, 多交朋友;
5. 补充一两点个人想法。
注意:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数: 60—80
3. 内容连贯, 不要逐条翻译;
4. 短文的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: methodn. 方法　　　clubn. 社团
colorful adj. 丰富的
　　Welcome to our school!
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【参考范文】
Welcome to our school!
How time flies! My middle school life is coming to an end. How will you spend the three-year school life Here are some suggestions.
First, there are more subjects in middle school, and so it’s important to master some learning methods. Second, take more exercise to stay healthy. Take part in the clubs to make your school life more colorful. Remember to read more books and make more friends. What’s more, get on well with your classmates and help each other.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a happy life in our school!
高频话题二: 健康生活
【话题剖析】
在写与健康生活相关的话题作文时, 常常围绕“生活习惯”或“健康生活方式”等话题展开。围绕锻炼、饮食等方面谈论活动频率。写这类话题作文时最好开篇就点题, 提出自己的观点, 然后再阐述自己的理由。此类话题作文写作的常用表达有:
(1). . . is good for. . . 　　(2)It is healthy for the mind and the body.
(3)It’s necessary for. . . not to eat too much junk food.
(4)In my opinion, it’s good for children to eat fast food as little as possible.
【典型例题】
(2017·潍坊中考)
　　每个人的生命只有一次, 你平安、健康、快乐地长大是父母最大的心愿, 你保护好生命是对父母最好的报答。请你以“How to protect our lives”为题, 从安全和健康的角度入手, 写一篇如何珍惜和保护朋友的短文。
要求: 1. 100词左右。
2. 文中不要出现本人真实信息。
3. 根据提示词每个角度至少选择三个方面来写, 也可适当发挥。
提示词: traffic accident, fight, drown溺水, fire, electricity, food, exercise, sleep, Internet, smoking, drugs, happiness. . .
【思路导引】
(1)人称: 第一人称
(2)时态: 主要使用一般现在时
(3)模板:
【佳作赏析】
How to protect our lives
　　Everyone has only one life. It is our parents’best wishes to see us grow up safely and healthily. In return, we should treasure our lives. How to protect our lives
Firstly, now there are more and more cars, so when we walk on the road, we must obey the traffic rules, especially at the traffic lights. At school, we should get on well with our classmates. Don’t fight with them, or we’ll be hurt. Stay away from the dangerous places.
Secondly, in my opinion, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. We’d better have enough sleep and do exercises every day. We must refuse drugs as well as smoking. Besides, we are supposed to control the time of playing computer games. Remember, happiness is the most important thing. So smile every day! Be happy every day!
In a word, we must try our best to protect and value our lives!
【话题训练】
世纪金榜导学号97414201
　　为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召, 某校开展了“绿色港城, 健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题, 根据表格中提示, 简要描述并适当发表自己的观点, 写一篇英语短文。
主题 绿色港城, 健康生活
做法 骑车出行, 减少空气污染; 垃圾入箱, 保持城市整洁; 多种树木, 保护自然环境
你的观点 ……(至少2条)
注意:
1. 词数90左右, 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。
The Green City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of our city, it’s our duty to
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【参考范文】
The Green City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of our city, it’s our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.
In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room.
In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.
【补偿训练】
　　根据以下提示, 请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇短文。从健康的饮食习惯、良好的生活习惯以及适当的锻炼等方面, 为“how to keep healthy”提出良好的建议。
要求:
1. 表达清楚, 语句通顺, 意思连贯;
2. 不得使用真实的地名、校名和姓名等。
3. 词数: 80左右。文章的开头和结尾部分已给出, 不计入总词数。
部分参考词汇: 熬夜stay up; 垃圾食品junk food; 保持均衡的饮食keep a balanced diet; 按时饮食have meals regularly
How to Keep Healthy
　　Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. ________________
___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ 　　In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.
【参考范文】
How to Keep Healthy
Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. Then what can we do to keep healthy You can try the following tips:
First, you should have healthy eating habits. You should keep a balanced diet. You should have meals regularly. Don’t eat junk food. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much meat. Don’t drink coffee too much; it’s bad for you.
Second, you shouldn’t stay up. You can play sports. Sports can make you stronger and healthier. You can play basketball with your friends when you are free. You can go to the mountains with your family.
Third, be happy. A happy man lives longer than a sad man. So sing a song or watch a fun movie. You can do anything to make you happy.
At last, stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men. They can cause terrible illness.
In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.
高频话题三: 环境保护
【话题剖析】
在写与环境保护相关的话题作文时, 常常围绕“环境保护的重要性”及“如何进行环境保护”等话题展开。围绕提高环保意识、开展环保行动等方面进行谈论。写这类话题作文时一般应开篇就提出保护环境的重要性。然后再阐述如何进行环境保护, 提出具体的措施。
最后, 还应发出号召或倡议, 让人们都要重视环境保护。此类话题作文写作的常用表达有:
(1)It’s our duty to protect the environment. 　　(2)Something must be done to save the environment.
(3)I’m writing this. . . to call on everyone to save the world. 　　(4)In this way, we will not only. . . but also. . .
【典型例题】
(2017·攀枝花中考)
　　随着时代的发展, 人们使用越来越多的电子产品, 在享受电子产品带来的生活便利的同时, 如何处理电子垃圾已经成为一个严峻的问题。请根据以下提示, 写一篇如何处理电子垃圾的文章。
1. 造成环境污染, 威胁身体健康;
2. 加强教育, 提高认识;
3. 制定法律;
4. 不随意丢弃;
5. 鼓励回收利用, 建立回收网络。
提示词汇: 处理deal with; 电子产品electronic product; 电子垃圾e-waste; 回收网络recycling network; 提高认识raise the awareness
注意:
1. 词数80~100, 开头已给出, 但不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包括所有要点, 不要逐词翻译, 可适当发挥, 使其连贯、通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
With the development of the society, more and more electronic products are used in our daily life, making us live conveniently and comfortably.
　　However, ______________________________
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【思路导引】
(1)人称: 第一人称
(2)时态: 主要使用一般现在时
(3)模板:
【佳作赏析】
　　With the development of the society, more and more electronic products are used in our daily life, making us live conveniently and comfortably.
However, electronic products are causing some trouble. People change their phones, computers or others very often. The waste electronic products are polluting our environment. It is harmful to us. It can cause some diseases. We should tell people to realize the matter and raise the awareness so that they can know how to deal with the e-waste. Even we should make some
rules and ask people to obey them. Besides, we all don’t throw the waste electronic products everywhere.
To protect our environment, the government should do something such as setting up recycling network to encourage people to recycle the e-waste.
【话题训练】
(2017·鄂州中考)
　　为响应我市“创建国家卫生城市”的号召, 6月3日, 5000多名市民以绿色出行的方式参与了“生态鄂州——环洋澜湖健步走”活动。请以“共建绿色城市”为主题, 根据以下文字提示, 并适当发表自己的观点, 写一篇英语短文。
主题 Let’s build a green city together
具体
做法 方式 益处
1. 骑车、徒步出行 避免交通拥堵, 减少空气污染
2. 不乱扔垃圾, 不随地吐痰 让城市变得干净舒适
3. 植树造林 美化城市, 保护环境
你的
建议 联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议(至少2条)
要求:
1. 80-100词(开头的首句已给出, 不计算在总词数内)。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息, 否则不予评分。
参考词汇: 吐痰spit垃圾箱dustbin交通拥堵traffic jams环境environment
　As a middle school student of Ezhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. _______________________
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【参考范文】
　　As a middle school student of Ezhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.
【补偿训练】
(一)
　　目前雾霾严重, 减少污染、保护环境人人有责。作为中学生, 我们应从身边的小事做起, 尽我们所能为保护环境尽自己的一份力量。请根据以下要点, 以“How to Protect Our Environment”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示: (1)Why should we protect our environment
(2)What can’t we do to harm the environment
(3)What should we do to protect the environment
要求: (1)文中必须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数: 100词左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: be harmful to(对……有害); turn off the tap; wild animals
How to Protect Our Environment
　　Everyone has the duty to protect the environment because___________________________________
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【参考范文】
How to Protect Our Environment
　　Everyone has the duty to protect the environment because the bad environment is harmful to our health. If we don’t do something to protect our environment, we won’t have fresh air or clean water. I find that some students have some bad habits. For example
the lights are on when there are no students in the classroom. Some students throw litter here and there. All these things are bad for our environment, so stop them please. And we should turn off the tap to save water while we are brushing teeth. We can advise our parents to drive less. We’d better refuse to eat wild animals.
　　If we can do these, I think our environment will be better.
(二)
在学校, 一些同学不注意保护学校环境, 使学校环
境受到了损害。请你根据所给内容要点, 以“Keep Our
School Clean”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容要点:
1. 学校环境越来越差。
2. 随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾。
3. 毁坏花草树木。
4. 多植树, 循环使用教材。
5. 保护学校环境。
参考词汇: 1. spit吐痰　2. destroy毁坏　3. do something to protect. . . 采取行动保护……
要求:
1. 包括所有内容要点, 不要逐句翻译, 可以适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺、语法正确。
3. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
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【参考范文】
Keep Our School Clean
As we all know, it’s very important for us to keep our school clean and tidy. However, our school environment is becoming worse and worse. We can still see that there are many wastes on the ground, such as plastic bags, cans, old batteries and so on.
Therefore, we have to do something to protect the school environment as soon as possible. For example, we can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish anywhere, for it’s very rude. We should protect the trees and keep off the grass. At the same time, we need to plant more trees. We can also reuse
our books, and it is a good way to reduce the waste of natural resources. In this way, I’m sure that our school will be more and more beautiful in the future.
高频话题四: 休闲旅游
【话题剖析】
休闲旅游话题类作文主要是让同学们记叙参观访问、旅途见闻、假期活动等。要求能正确运用一般过去时, 记叙自己或他人的假期活动情况。写作时一定把时间、地点、人物、事件、过程、感想等要素表述清楚。此类话题作文写作的常用表达有:
(1)What a different/wonderful vacation we had! 　(2)We had a great time/had fun/enjoyed ourselves.
(3)I went to. . . on vacation with my. . . (4)We did many things to relax during the vacation.
【典型例题】
(2017·新疆生产建设兵团中考)
　　去年暑假你是在哪里度过的呢 是外出度假还是待在家里 都做了些什么呢 请以My Last Summer Vacation为题写一篇短文, 描述你去年的暑假生活, 80~100词。
要求:
1. 条理清晰, 语言流畅, 语法正确, 内容充实。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
【思路导引】
(1)人称: 第一人称
(2)时态: 主要使用一般过去时
(3)模板:
【佳作赏析】
My Last Summer Vacation
　　Last summer vacation I went to Taiwan with my parents. Taiwan is really beautiful. The weather was good. It is always warm and humid because the sea is around Taiwan. In the north, it’s cold in winter, but in the south, it is still warm in winter and you can
enjoy the sunshine every day. The typhoon season is from June to October. There are many mountains in Taiwan. A-li Mountain is one of the biggest mountains there. We went to climb A-li Mountain one afternoon. There are many trees in the forest there. They are very tall and many of them are really old. I had great fun in my last summer vacation.
【话题训练】
(一)
　　同学们, 初中生活即将结束, 本次考试后, 盼望已久的假期就要到来! 请你根据以下提示, 制订出度假计划, 可以结合自己的实际发挥。
写作内容:
1. 和家长/同学一起旅游, 享受大自然的美景, 放松心情。
2. 参加志愿活动, 帮家长做家务。
3. 读自己喜欢的书。
4. 远离危险的地方。
写作要求:
1. 80词左右, 开头部分已给出, 但不计入规定词数。
2. 内容合理, 要点齐全; 句子及篇章结构正确、连贯; 书写规范。
3. 不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。
My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holiday.
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My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holiday.
I’m going to Mount Lu with my parents. We can enjoy the natural beauty and relax there. During the vacation, I’m going to take an active part in volunteer activities with my friends. And I will help my parents do some housework, such as cooking dinner, washing clothes. Besides, I’m going to read some interesting books and will keep away from danger. For example, I won’t swim in the rivers.
I think I will have a nice vacation and have a good time.
(二)
　　假如你是王红, 你的美国笔友Lisa给你发来email, 想在暑假到天津旅游。请你根据下表提示, 为Lisa制订一份“天津一日游”计划, 并发email给她, 介绍相关内容。
时间 活动
上午 参观天津博物馆, 了解天津历史
下午 ☆登天津电视塔(Tianjin TV Tower)
☆参观动物园
晚上 ☆在美食街(the Food Street)吃晚饭
☆谈论各自的校园生活
☆去滨江道(Binjiang Road)购物
要求: 1. 要点齐全, 行文连贯, 书写工整, 可适当发挥。
2. 词数: 80~100个, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 了解……历史learn the history of. . .
校园生活school life
Dear Lisa,
　　I’m so glad to learn that you will come to Tianjin. I have planned a one-day trip for you.
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Looking forward to meeting you!
Yours,
Wang Hong
【参考范文】
Dear Lisa,
　　I’m so glad to learn that you will come to Tianjin. I have planned a one-day trip for you. In the morning, I’m going to show you around the Tianjin Museum so you can learn the history of Tianjin. In the afternoon,
we are going to climb the Tianjin TV Tower and then we’ll go to the zoo. I think it’ll be interesting to see those animals. I’m sure you’ll enjoy Chinese food in the Food Street. And then we can have a talk about our school life when having dinner together. After that we’re going to do some shopping on Binjiang Road.
Are you pleased with my plan I hope you will have a wonderful time in Tianjin.
　　Looking forward to meeting you!
Yours,
Wang Hong
【补偿训练】
　　在英语课上, 老师组织了“A trip to the countryside or to the city”的话题讨论。请根据小组讨论结果, 写一篇英语短文, 介绍两者的不同特点, 并写出你的选择与理由。
Countryside City
relaxing, fresh air. . . not easy to take public transportation. . . exciting. . . traffic jam. . . expensive. . .
注意:
1. 短文必须包含表格中的信息, 并作适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息;
3. 词数80~100, 所给的文章开头供选择, 不计入词数。
In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city.
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【参考范文】
In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city. Taking a trip to the countryside can relax you by fishing or swimming. And the fresh air might be your favorite. Yet, you might not have many choices in transportation.
Of course, a trip to the city also has its characters. If you like shopping, it’s very exciting to travel back and forth in large malls. You can visit museums to broaden your mind. Nevertheless such a trip might cost much. And the traffic jam might let you down.
If you’re from the countryside, a trip to the city is better. There, you’ll learn what you’ve never thought of.
In my opinion, a trip to the countryside is better. There, you can lie under the stars, enjoying the quiet night.
高频话题五: 人生哲理
【话题剖析】
在写与人生哲理相关的话题作文时, 常常围绕“人生中重要的事情”或“对人生的感悟”等话题展开。围绕对人生的观察、对生活的体验、对人生的看法等方面谈论一些经验或哲理。写这类话题作文时最好开篇就点题, 提出自己的观点, 然后再阐述自己的理由或做法。此类话题作文写作的常用表达有:
(1)We find most Middle School students. . . 　　　(2)As. . . , we should learn to. . .
(3)So I think a real friend is. . . 　　　　　　　　
(4)In my opinion, both of them are. . .
【典型例题】
(2016·盐城中考)
　　学校将举办英语写作比赛。请根据所给提示, 以“Getting along well with others”为题, 写一篇参赛短文。
注意事项: 1. 词数: 100词左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数);
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息, 并作适当发挥。
Getting along well with others
　　No one can live without keeping in touch with others. Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to
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【思路导引】
(1)人称: 主要是第一人称
(2)时态: 主要使用一般现在时
(3)模板:
【佳作赏析】
Getting along well with others
　　No one can live without keeping in touch with others. Therefore, it’s important for us to learn how to get along well with others. We should be kind and friendly enough to others, so we can make more friends. We can share joy and sadness with our friends.
If we are free, we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours. At home, we should communicate more with our parents. They are our closest people in the world. At school, we should respect our teachers. They are like both our parents and friends. Getting along well with others is very important. If we can get along well with others, we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything.
【话题训练】
(一)
　　感恩是一个永恒的话题, 我们应该对帮助过自己的人心存感恩。感恩之际, 我们也应该心存善念, 去帮助需要帮助的人。请你以“Learn to Be Thankful”为题, 根据以下提示和要求写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
提示:
1. 描述某人(如父母、老师、同学、朋友甚至陌生人等)在学习、生活上帮助过你的某件事;
2. 你帮助过某人的事;
3. 你对这些事的感想。
要求: 1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1-3项的内容, 可展开思路, 自由地适当发挥。
2. 文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息。
Learn to Be Thankful
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【参考范文】
Learn to Be Thankful
I still remember a rainy day when I was in Grade 7. On that day, I overslept and hurried to school by bike. At a street corner I fell down and hurt my legs so badly that I couldn’t move at all. A passer-by sent me to the hospital at once. I was so thankful that I decided to help others from then on. A few
weeks later, on my way to school, I saw a blind man standing at a crossing. I helped him cross the street and showed him to the place he wanted to go to.
It’s important for us to learn to be thankful. If everyone can help each other the world will be full of love.
(二)
　　生活中有很多重要的东西, 你认为生活中最重要的东西是什么 为什么它是最重要的(至少说出三点理由) 既然你认为它最重要, 该如何对待呢 请你以“The Most Important Thing in My Life”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
The Most Important Thing in My Life
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【参考范文】
The Most Important Thing in My Life
In my opinion, the most important thing in life is time. However long one may live, his life has only a certain number of years. And once the time goes by, nobody can get it back. Even though he is the richest person
in the world, he cannot afford to waste time, because it means that he is wasting his own life.
The only thing we can do is to make full use of our time. If we can finish more work with less time, we will have more time than other people.
高频话题六: 榜样的力量
【话题剖析】
在写与榜样的力量相关的话题作文时, 常常围绕“敬佩的人物”或“对自己影响深刻的人物”等话题展开。围绕学习榜样、感恩父母、老师等内容展开写作。写这类话题作文时最好开篇就点题, 先明确要写的人物是谁, 然后再阐述该人物对自己产生了什么样的影响,
你从他/她身上学习到了什么或受到什么益处。此类话题作文写作的常用表达有:
(1)He is honest and kind. 　　　　　　
(2)He is always ready to not only. . . but also. . .
(3)She/He plays an important role in my life, not only. . . but also. . . 　
(4)I have learned to work hard and. . .
【典型例题】
(2017·怀化中考)
　　怀化市各中小学正在开展“阳光校园, 我们是好伙伴”活动。你的身边一定有很多品学兼优阳光少年。请你根据表格中所给的信息, 写一篇关于你的好伙伴李明同学的演讲稿。
Name Li Ming
Class Class 8, Grade 9
Behaviors
(行为、表现) 1. be polite to everyone, say hello to teachers and classmates
2. get on well with others, make many friends, be ready to help others
3. be kind to other people, try his best to help people in need. . .
Wishes want to be a useful man in the future
. . .
注意:
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2. 内容应包含表格中要点并可适当发挥;
3. 词数: 80词左右;
4. 文章的开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
　　Today I am glad to introduce a good friend of mine. His name is Li Ming. He
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　　That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【思路导引】
(1)人称: 第一人称
(2)时态: 主要使用一般现在时。
(3)模板:
【佳作赏析】
Good morning, everyone!
　　I am glad to introduce a good friend of mine. His name is Li Ming. He is in Class 8, Grade 9. He is very polite. When he meets his teachers or classmates, he always says hello to them. He also gets on well with others. He has made many friends. Whenever we
have problems with our schoolwork, he is always ready to help us. He is kind to other people. He often tries his best to help people in need. Li Ming wants to be a useful man in the future. He is a model student for us and we should learn from him.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【话题训练】
(一)
　　“传递爱心, 服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念。狮子会(the Lions)就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团体。杨敏是狮子会的一名成员, 多年来她一直乐于助人。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文。向校刊的English World栏目投稿, 简要介绍杨敏的事迹, 然后谈谈你的观点和打算。
Ready to help others
Yang Min
◆help others for years
◆go to the old people’s home twice a month(cut hair, wash clothes, do some cleaning)
◆offer people umbrellas or raincoats on rainy days
◆your opinion. . .
◆your plan. . .
要求:
1. 短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点, 可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;
3. 词数: 80—100(短文开头已给出, 仅供选择使用, 不计入总词数)。
From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most. ______________________________
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【参考范文】
From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most. As a member of the Lions, she has been helping others for many years. She goes to the old people’s home twice a month to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. Besides, on rainy days she offers people umbrellas and raincoats for free.
I’m deeply moved by her story. I’m going to start with small things around me. I plan to give books and clothes to children in poor villages. What’s more, I’ll ask my parents and more friends to join me.
Small actions can make a big difference. Let’s help those who need help!
(二)
　　你校的校刊英文报以“我最尊敬的人(The Person I Respect Most)”为题进行征文, 请你投稿。介绍一下你最尊敬的人是谁, 你为什么尊敬他/她, 你从他/她身上学到了什么
要求: 1. 所给的英文提示词仅供选用;
2. 请不要写出真实的校名和姓名;
3. 词数: 80~100。
提示词语: important, learn, help
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【参考范文】
The Person I Respect Most
　　My mother is the person I respect most. She plays an important role in my life, not only as a mother but also as a friend.
As a mother, she takes good care of the family and she is never upset about my mistakes. She works hard in the company. She’s always warm-hearted and ready to help others. She sets a good example to me. I have learned to work hard and respect people around. As a friend, she knows a lot about me and gives me help whenever it’s necessary.
　My mother has a great influence on me and I respect her most.
(三)
　　假如你是某校九年级(1)班的学生, 你校英语俱乐部正在举行“Young Star Award”的评选活动。请你用英语写一篇短文, 介绍你的同学李明, 以供参评。内容要点如下:
1. 高个, 擅长篮球, 成绩优秀;
2. 乐于助人, 积极参加活动, 热衷慈善;
3. 去年, 他……;
4. 已筹集一千多元, 准备寄给贫困地区学生;
5. 得到高度赞扬, 我们以他为荣。
注意事项:
1. 短文须包括所有的内容要点, 要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 第3个要点的内容须围绕主题, 用2—3句话展开合理想象, 作适当发挥;
3. 词数在90个左右, 短文的开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
参考词汇: 慈善(charity)
　　Li Ming is my classmate.
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【参考范文】
Li Ming is my classmate. He is tall, so he is good at playing basketball. And he gets good grades in each subject. He is willing to help others. He takes an active part in different activities at school. He likes doing charity work. Last year, we learnt some students in poor areas can’t go to school because of money.
Li Ming organized a charity show in our class to raise money for the poor students. So far more than
1, 000 yuan has been raised. And he will send it to the students in poor areas. He won high praise from teachers and students in our school. We are proud of him. So I recommend him for the Young Star Award.