考点64 书面表达之咨询建议类-备战2018年中考英语核心考点全突破（有答案解析）

考点六十四 书面表达之咨询建议类

英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现，英语书信类作文的常用表达：
开头部分：?
How?nice?to?hear?from?you?again.?
Let?me?tell?you?something?about?the?activity.?
I’m?glad?to?have?received?your?letter.?
I’m?pleased?to?hear?that?you’re?coming?to?China?for?a?visit.?
I’m?writing?to?thank?you?for?your?help?during?my?stay?in?America.?
结尾部分：?
With?best?wishes.?
I’m?looking?forward?to?your?reply.?
I’d?appreciate?it?if?you?could?reply?earlier.?
We?should?take?measures?to?control?pollution?in?order?to?save?the?world.???
We’d?better?take?effective?measures?to?prevent?students?from?cheating?on?exams.???
The?government?decided?to?take?strong?measures?against?drug?abuse.???
Urgent?measures?should?be?taken?to?prevent?terrorists?from?carrying?out?further?attacks.???
Why not.../Why don’t you...
You can have a try.../Try to do...
Don’t be afraid of...
I believe you can do it. Good luck.
In?one/a?word/Generally?speaking
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（一）
请根据下面Frank在信中所提出的困惑，以Maria的名义给他写一封回信，帮助他解决问题。80词左右。
Dear Editor,
I am a middle school student. I have many hobbies. I like playing football very much. But I can’t do it. I want to join the football team. But my parents don’t allow it. So I often argue with my parents.
Should I be allowed to make my own decisions? What should I do?
Yours,
Frank
Dear Frank,
I read your problem from your letter. __________________________________________________________
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Maria
（一（二）
张燕是九年级生。她父亲在一家公司工作，家里几乎天天来客人。他们在客厅高声谈笑，有时还一起打牌，弄出许多噪音。这种吵闹的环境使张燕无法集中精力习。她不知道如何解决这个问题。请你帮她给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，谈谈她的烦恼并请王老师提出宝贵意见。
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（三）
你班Carl同最近遇到了一些问题，希望得到一些建议和帮助。请你以Mr. Friend的身份给Car写封信，针对Carl的所有问题提出一些有益的建议。
Carl的问题
将来想当一名记者，但很安静，不喜欢与人交谈
喜欢穿红色衣服，但同嘲笑他像个女生
喜欢篮球，并且经常打，作业花的时间较少，不知如何平衡自己
的业和爱好
你的建议
……(至少四条)
要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息:
2. 不得遗漏提示信息，条理清楚，字迹工整，语意连贯可适当发挥;
3. 词数：110词左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Carl,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. _______________________
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I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.
Best wishes,
Mr. Friend
（一）
（2017﹒山东威海）假如你是＂Kids Advice Magazine＂的编辑，请针对Evan的烦恼，用英语给他写一封80词以上的回信，对他进行开导。信的开头和落款已给出，不计入词数。
要点提示：
1. 陈述有兄弟姐妹的优势：弟妹的崇拜、不孤单、会与人相处或分享……
2. 说明不同年龄段有不同的责任和义务：自己的，父母的，弟妹的……
3. 建议、鼓励：不比较、不抱怨，做好自己所能做的事
词汇提示（仅供参考）：complain抱怨（vi. & vt.），admire，compare
Dear Evan,
It’s not easy being in your situation. It’s normal to have these feelings. But every coin has two sides ________
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Yours truly,
Ron Todd
（二）
（2017﹒山东聊城）假定你是张华，你在外地习的好朋友王伟发电子邮件向你请教如何好英语。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回封电子邮件。
内容包括：
（1）看英语电影、听英语歌曲，猜测生词意思。
（2）与外教交谈。
（3）把单词写在纸条上，利用纸条记忆单词。
注意：
（1）词数：80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Wei，
I received your email yesterday. In the email，you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.
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These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.
Yours，
Zhang Hua
（三）
（2017﹒江苏苏州）假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在习和生活方而的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下而的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。
To: suhua@ china.com
From: davidsmith@ britain.com
Subject: School life
Dear Su Hua,
Glad to hear you’re graduating from junior high. I’m interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things?
●What do you like best about your school life?
●What-s the biggest problem as a junior student
●Who has helped you most? And why?
● Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not7
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
David
注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear David，
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life.
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How about your school life? Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
（一）
（深圳市宝安中2017-2018年度初三期中）你叫James，是初三的一名生，你的好朋友Joyce近期很烦恼，她上周日因为使用手机的问题与她父亲发生了争吵，她父亲把她手机都摔坏了。她这几天情绪很低落，习不认真，你很担心她，所以你给她写了一封信。
要点：
1. 你非常理解她的感受。
2.对她的问题提出至少两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：1. have a quarrel与……吵架 2. treat 对待 3. affect 影响
Dear Joyce,
I am so sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and he even broke your smart phone.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
James
（二）
（江苏省连云港市岗埠中2015-2016年度九年级）张涛是一名九年级生，面对繁重的业和升压力，他总是感到焦虑不安，晚上还经常失眠。请根据你所的知识，针对他的问题，运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。
要求：1. 书写工整，语言连贯；
2. 词数：80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Zhang Tao,
I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.
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If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.
Yours,
John
跟踪训练
（一）
【思路导航】
【参考范文】
Dear Frank,
I read your problem from your letter. Many teenagers have hobbies. Sometimes these hobbies get in the way of schoolwork and their parents may worry about their studies. Arguing is not useful. Try to talk with your parents in a friendly way. In my opinion, you can tell them it is good for your health to do sports. You should practice your hobbies after school or on weekends. But you can’t do it as much as you want. As a student，the most important thing is to study. We should have enough time to have fun but not too much. I’m sure you can do it well.
Maria
（二）
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。写作前一定要认真审题，考题要求考生帮助张燕给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，因此人称要用第一人称来表达，时态为一般现在时，注意主谓一致，同时注意书信的格式。用到的词组或短语有：in a company，talk to each other，play cards together，make a lot of noise，focus on，how to deal with，offer sb. sth.等。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。#
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Wang，
My name is Zhan Yan. I’m a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I need your help.
My father works in a company. There are always many people coming to my home. They talk to each other loudly and sometimes they even play cards together. They make a lot of noise and this is really terrible. I can’t focus on my study. I don’t know how to deal with this problem. Can you offer me some suggestions? They would be most valuable. Thanks a lot.
Best wishes！
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Yan
（三）
【思路导航】
【参考范文】
Dear Carl,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. You want to be a reporter in the future, but you are too quiet and you don’t enjoy talking with others. You like wearing red clothes but your classmates think you are like a girl and often laugh at you. You are a student, so you are busy every day. You must have lots of homework, but you are crazy about basketball. You spend a lot of time playing basketball. Like this, you will find you are tired. You should give it up. You don’t stay up late. If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed. You should talk about this to your parents or your best friends. They can help you. Please work hard to get good marks. I believe you will go to high school. I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.
Best wishes.
Mr. Friend
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Carl的问题，接下来介绍我的建议，最后我希望你认为我的建议有用。此处thank you for doing sth, want to do sth, enjoy doing sth, like doing sth, laugh at ,be crazy about, spend time doing sth, give up, stay up, work hard等这些词组的运用也给文章增色不少。
真题再现
（一）
【思路导航】
【参考范文】
Dear Evan,
It’s not easy being in your situation. It’s normal to have these feelings. But every coin has two sides. Being the eldest child in the family surely has its advantages.
Firstly. you used to enjoy all the love from your parents. You’re loved and admired by your brother and sister. You won’t feel lonely with them around you and you can learn how to share and how to get on with others. Together with them you’ll grow up more quickly.
Secondly, people of different ages have different duties. Think of your parents how hard they are working! As you are growing older, you are supposed to do more and do better than your brother and sister. Everyone has to grow up and we all have to do what we should do. We have to be responsible for ourselves
So I think if you don’t compare with babies, just think of your duty, you will feel much better. Don’t complain about your situation. Try your best to do the things of your age. zxx$k
Attitude is everything. You are sure to grow into an outstanding young man.
Yours truly,
Ron Todd
【亮点说明】
【高分句型一】Everyone has to grow up and we all have to do what we should do. 每个人都会长大，我们都要去做我们应该做的。此句是what引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】So I think ①②if you don’t compare with babies，just think of your duty，you will feel much better我认为如果你不和小孩子计较，只是想想自己的职责，你就会感觉更好。
①think后是宾语从句。②if引导的条件状语从句。
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【思路导航】
【参考范文】
Dear Wang Wei，
I received your email yesterday. In the email，you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.
Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English! Watch and listen several times，and guess the meaning of the new words.
Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way. You’d better start it with greetings or a question. Also，smile before you speak and do not feel shy. Write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them，and try to use them.
These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.
Yours，
Zhang Hua
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中great ways to do sth，having a conversation with, had better, start it with, place them in your room, try to, and等词（组）的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了动名词作主语的句型，and并列句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得习。
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【思路导航】
这是一篇给材料作文，向你的英国笔友David发一封电子邮件，介绍你初中三年来在习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾短语，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’m very happy to...，it’s an excellent chance to...，The biggest one is...，Whenever I am...，so she is...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life.
I like the Football Club best because I’ve made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, it’s an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
However, I’ve also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high.
In all, I enjoy my school life because it’s colourful and meaningful.
How about your school life? Write to me soon.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
模拟检测
（一）
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear Joyce,
I am so sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and he even broke your smart phone.
I can fully understand your feelings. We want to depend more on ourselves but sometimes our parents still treat us like a primary school student. You have different opinions on using a smart phone with your father. I think your father is worried that using a smart phone may affect your study. After all, we are in Grade 9 and we must try our best to study. Here I have two suggestions for you.
First, you should find a chance to communicate with your father when you both calm down. If you don’t want to talk to him, you can write a letter or an email to him.
Second, I think you should forget this unhappy thing and start to study hard again. Time is very valuable for us, so we can’t afford to waste it .Please raise your spirits!
Best wishes!
Yours,
James
【名师点睛】
（二）
【思路导航】
本文属于话题作文，利用色彩疗法，给张涛提些建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。21世纪教育
【参考范文】
I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.
Firstly, if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. The two colours can make you feel calm and peaceful. You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic.
Secondly, you may paint your bedroom blue if you can’t sleep well at night. Sleeping in a blue room is good for your mind and body, because blue can create a feeling of harmony.
Finally, perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study for exams, because yellow can make you wise.
If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.
Yours,
John