考点66 书面表达之应用文-备战2018年中考英语核心考点全突破（有答案解析）

考点六十六 书面表达之应用文
应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体。它最突出的特点是它 的实际应用性，应用文包括很广，如书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、请柬、电报、合同等。应用文的语言应使用规范语言，重在实用，力求朴实、准确、简洁。
常用写作模板
1. 遗失启事
2. 招领启事
3. 招聘启事
（一）
假如你是阳光中初三生Daniel，写信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend，告诉他进入初三后你的烦恼。请根据下表中信息，完成一封求助信。
要求： 1. 词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
2. 要点必须包括表格中的所有信息，可以适当发挥。
3. 表达清楚，语句通顺，语义连贯。
个人信息
15岁，九年级生；
性格特点
勤奋，喜欢运动，……；
烦恼
习和兴趣之间找不到平衡；
愿望
……
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Daniel. I’m from Sunshine Middle School. ___________________________________________
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（二）
你们校今天将要举行校园歌手大赛，假如你是这个比赛的主持人萨拉(Sarah)，请根据以下提示为这个校园歌手大赛写一篇主持稿。
内容提示：
1. 开场白：到校园歌手大赛的时间了，我是主持人萨拉；
2. 介绍参赛选手：今天我们有八位参赛选手，他们来自我们校每个年级；
3. 介绍比赛规则：校园歌手大赛规则简单；每一位选手将在舞台上唱一首歌；然后将由我们的观众决定他们最喜欢的歌手；得到最多的支持的那位选手将成为这次比赛的胜利者；
4. 比赛过程：你为比赛做好准备了吗？第一个上台的选手是……；你是今天的幸运得主，你已经赢得了今天的奖品——一台电脑；
5. 结束语：感谢大家；这是今天的表演，下次见。
写作要求：
1. 词数：80词左右；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在校名称。
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（三）
连云港开展了＂真阅读＂工程，为了让阅读进校园，为了营造一种＂多读书，读好书＂的良好氛围，你班将举行一次主题班会，要求以 ＂A good book that influenced me a lot ＂ 为题作演讲，向同们介绍一本自己读过的好书(the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason...)，并谈谈自己的感悟。
注意：1. 词数：100词左右（演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 不得出现真实的校名和人名。
A good book that influenced me a lot
Boys and girls,
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That’s all. Thank you!
（一）
（2017﹒安徽）假如你是李华，你们校将举行＂弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园＂展演活动，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1. 时间：7月1日下午2点；
2. 地点：校操场；
3. 内容：文化展览、节目表演等。
提示词：戏曲opera n. 表演performance n.
注意：1. 词数80～100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. ___________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
（2017﹒四川成都）假如你是班长，今天是你班的英语活动日，你将带领同们骑车去Happy Park。请按照下面的图示用英语写一篇发言稿，在入园前向同们介绍园区设施（facilities）的位置及游园注意事项，并希望同们遵守规则，玩得开心。
注意：1. 短文应包括要求的所有信息；
2. 发言稿的格式完整；
3. 短文应结构完整、语句通顺、句式多样；
4. 发言稿中不能出现个人和校的真实信息；
5. 词数：100左右。
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（三）
（2017﹒黑龙江齐齐哈尔）尊老敬老是中华传统美德，你是老年之家(the old people’s home)的负责人王强，在假期即将到来之际，你想要招聘与你志同道合，愿为公益事业服务的志愿者。请以此为话题拟一则招聘广告。(30-50词之间)
提示：1. 要求有爱心，善沟通……
2. 请有意者给你打电话686-7729。
Volunteers Wanted
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（四）
（2017﹒江苏南通）为了满足广大生对DIY的喜爱，你们校成立了DIY俱乐部。假如你是Justin，想加入该俱乐部，请根据下表所提示的要点和内容写一份申请函，谈谈你想加入该俱乐部的理由。
要点
内容
培养独立意识
独立思考；自主选择；敢于尝试（或自拟内容）
调节习生活
获得乐趣；丰富生活；体验成功（或自拟内容）
提升个人素养
直面困难；……（请考生自拟两点内容）
参考词汇：独立independence n. ；调节adjust vt.；素养quality n.
注意：1. 申请函中必须包含所给要点，具体内容可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
3. 申请函中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the DIY Club. _____________
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I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.
Yours Sincerely,
Justin
（五）
（2017﹒北京）假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换生项目。今天下午你应邀和朋友Jim 一家外出，请用英语给接待家庭的妈妈Mrs. Smith 写一个留言条，告诉她你们要去哪里，去做什么，以及你回家的时间和方式。
提示词语：park, movie theater, go boating, watch a movie
提示问题：Where are you going?
What are you going to do?
When and how will you get home?
Dear Mrs. Smith,
My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon.______________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
（一）
（甘肃省武威市第十七中2018届九年级期末）假如你是刘梅，升入九年级后，你的习和生活都发生了很大变化。请你根据下面表格中的提示，给你的笔友玛丽亚(Maria)写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你最近在习和生活上的变化。
过去
现在
作业少，习轻松
作业多，压力大
放后有时间参加各种活动
整天习，甚至熬夜，放弃了自己的爱好
周末有时间和家人、朋友相聚
周末也要上课
要求：1. 包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
2．80词左右。
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（二）
（武汉市青山区2017-2018年度九年级期中）假如你是生会主席李雷，校想在元月调考之前组织一次秋游活动，请你组织策划，并用英文写一份书面通知传达同们你的计划安排。
内容要点如下：
1. 活动目的：缓解压力，放松心情，增进同感情；了解城市文化；
2. 时间安排：下周日上午7：30在校门口集合，乘大巴游玩，下午6：00返回；
3. 路线安排：校——东湖——黄鹤楼——木兰天池——校；
4. 请在下周二下午5点之前报名；
5. 补充一两点个人的想法。
要求：
1. 词数：60—80；
2. 内容要连贯得体。
参考词汇：sign one’s name 报名 Yellow Crane Tower 黄鹤楼 Mulan Great Lake 木兰天池
Notice
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（三）
（湖北省长阳县龙舟坪中2018届九年级期中）当前，全市各校正开展＂读书伴我成长＂活动，请你根据活动主题并结合表中的信息，以＂Growing up with good books＂为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的倡议书，向全校同发出倡议。
读书的益处
获取知识，增长见识（open one’s mind），使人快乐
存在的现象
听音乐，看电视，上，占用了大部分业余时间
发出的倡议
多读书，读好书。向世界传播中国传统文化，让读书成为我们生活的一部分。
要求：倡议书要包括所有的要点；倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总字数。
My dear friends,
Reading is very important. __________________
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跟踪训练
（一）
【参考范文】
Dear Sigmund Friend,
My name is Daniel. I’m from Sunshine Middle School. I am fifteen years old. Now I am a Grade 9 student. I love sports very much because it can bring strength to my body and mind. I am very confident and I am not afraid of making speeches in front of many people.
However, I have some problems now. I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to finish it. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class. I find it hard to achieve a balance between my homework and my hobby.
What should I do? Can you offer me some valuable suggestions? I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes.
Daniel
【名师点睛】
1. 细心审题，明确要求 。
搞清题目的要求，以便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，风格各异的文章，此外，还要注意人称、时态、地点等信息，避免出错。
2. 抓住重点，理顺要点。
草拟提纲，分清各要点之间的内在联系，寻求逻辑次序，分出层次，确定如何下手，使表达内容条理清楚。
3. 遣词造句，表达规范 。
写作时，应尽量选出你有把握的词，尽量使用短句（简单句）。如果有的单词不会写，有的思想不会用英语表达，你可以设法绕开，最好找一个同义词、同义句，或近义词、词组短语来代替。
4. 连句成篇，修改润色。
检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当，接下来检查所写内容是否切题，该交待的内容是否交待了，最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求。检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误。
（二）
【参考范文】
It’s time for the Campus Singer Competition. And I’m your host, Sara.
Today we have eight contestants. They are from every grade in our school.
The rules of the Campus Singer Competition are simple. Every contestant will sing a song on the stage. And then our audience will decide on the singer they like best. The one who gets the most support will be the winner of the competition.
Are you ready for the competition? The first contestant coming on the stage is ...
You’re today’s lucky winner. You’ve won today’s prize — a computer!
Thanks, everyone. That’s today’s show. See you next time.
【亮点说明】
这篇作文层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如It’s time for sth，sing a song on the stage，decide on，be ready for，See you next time等。而The rules of the Campus Singer Competition are simple./ The one who gets the most support will be the winner of the competition./ You’ve won today’s prize — a computer!等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。~
（三）
【思路导航】
这是一篇演讲稿，写作时注意格式：称呼语及结束语；写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。适当使用连词，同时要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章添彩。根据要求必须介绍书籍的名字，阅读时间，书籍目录，阅读理由等，可以根据需要适当增加细节。最后不要忘记谈谈自己的看法，这样才能体现文章的完整性。此外，还要考虑：如何引出自己的演讲话题，怎么介绍自己的这本好书；从书中到了什么；如何深化演讲主题，增强演讲的鼓动性。
【参考范文】
Boys and girls,
As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.
From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!
That’s all. Thank you!
【亮点说明】
真题再现
（一）
【思路导航】
这是一篇书信应用文。在信中要介绍展演的时间、地点及展演内容。根据内容主要运用一般现在时态及一般将来时。写作中尽量使用自己熟悉的句式句型，适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. It’s a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】
（二）
【思路导航】
本文是根据图画的指示图标向同们介绍园区设施（facilities）的位置及游园注意事项，所以一定要注意仔细认真读图，确定路线图。因为这是口头介绍，所以短文要符合格式。注意要使用高级词汇及句式，要注意上下文的衔接。！
【参考范文】
Hello, boys and girls! May I have your attention, please? Today we choose to rise to this beautiful place — Happy Park to celebrate our English Day! Before entering the park, there are some specific details we must know first.
To begin with, we need to be clear about the location of the facilities. After entering the park, we can see a big grassland in front of you. On the left side is a food store where you can buy some food. And on the right side stand a toilet. A beautiful swimming pool lies behind the grassland, where the water is clean enough for you to swim. What’s more, you should keep the following rules in mind. First, you must park your bikes on each side of the gate. Second, you can neither pick flowers in the park, nor play football on the grassland.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening and have a good day.
【亮点说明】
短文运用了一些短语和句式，如：choose to do sth选择做某事；need to do sth需要做某事；on the right side在右边；be enough for sb to do sth对某人来说是足够的。用了定语从句，如：there are some specific details we must know first.。用了倒装句，如：And on the right side stand a toilet.，增加了文章的亮点。
（三）
【思路导航】
【参考范文】
Volunteers Wanted
We need volunteers in the old people’s home. Do you want to help the old people? Are you good with the old? Can you sing? Can you dance? Can you play chess with the old? Do you know many stories? If you want to join us, please call Wang Qiang at 686﹣7729. Thanks.
【亮点说明】
这篇短文格式正确，叙述有条理，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。特别一些招聘句型的使用，像We need volunteers in the old people’s home．Do you want to…；Are you good with; Can you; If you want to to join us 等，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，减少错误，给文章增彩。￥
（四）
【思路导航】
本文是一篇英文演讲稿。演讲稿写作要注意结构清楚，逻辑清晰，观点明确。内容包括以下三点：1. 培养独立意识：独立思考；自主选择；敢于尝试……2. 调节习生活：获得乐趣；丰富生活；体验成功……3. 提升个人素养：直面困难；……
【参考范文】
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the DIY Club. For me, I like to do something by myself. Here are some reasons why I want to join your club.
First, making things by myself can cultivate my independent consciousness because I need to make things on my own. It’s important for teenagers to think independently and choose freely, and try things bravely.
Second, joining the club can adjust my study life. DIY has so much fun and it can enrich my life. What’s more, after I finish an object, I can experience success.
Third, DIY can improve personal qualities. It makes us face difficulties directly and be patient with questions.
I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.
Yours Sincerely,
Justin
（五）
【思路导航】
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Smith,
My friend Jim asks me to go out with his family this afternoon. I am writing to tell you that we will meet in the park. Then we will go to the movie theater to watch a movie. Finally, we are going to go boating in the lake. Don’t worry about me. We will be back at 6:00 p.m. Jim’s father will send me home by taxi. I am sure to have a lot of fun. Waiting for my back.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】
这篇短文语句通顺，表达准确。习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,特别适用了表示先后顺序的词Then，Finally，使表达具有条里性，句式Don’t worry about me. .I am sure to等的使用，更增加了文章的色彩，此文表达具有逻辑性,，有条理。
模拟检测
（一）
【参考范文】
Dear Maria’,
How are you?
My life has changed a lot since I became a student of Grade 9. I used to have less homework and I could learn easily. However, everything is different now. I have a lot of homework to do every day. I’m under great pressure. I used to take part in all kinds of activities after school, but now I have to study all the time and sometimes even stay up late. I have given up my hobbies. What’s more, I used to spend the weekends with my family and friends. Now I have to take classes on weekends. I fell so unhappy. Do you feel the same?
Yours’,
Liu Mei
（二）
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。根据材料内容可知用一般将来时，按照提示内容逐条翻译成英文，同时进行适当的发挥。
【参考范文】
Notice
The Students’ Union is going to organize a special activity next Sunday. Students feel stressed these days, I think the activity can make us relaxed. We can not only get along well with our classmates, but also know the culture of the city.
We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:30 am and take the bus to the East Lake, then we’ll go to the Yellow Crane Tower. We can enjoy the beautiful scenery. After that, we’ll go to Mulan Great Lake to have a picnic in the afternoon. We’ll take the bus back to school at 6:00 pm.
If you are interested in this activity, please sign your name before next Tuesday at 5pm. It’s also necessary for you to bring your ID card in order to buy tickets.
Wish you a wonderful time!
The Students’ Union
XX年XX月XX日
【亮点说明】
（三）
【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。根据表格内容可知用一般现在时，按照提示内容逐条进行回答，同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。
【参考范文】
My dear friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds，but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, the brighter our future will become.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going on line to play games. It takes much of their spare time, so I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books，especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world. Let’s start reading now and let it become a part of our life. zxx+k
【亮点说明】