天津市静海县第一中学2017-2018学年高一下学期期中考试英语试题 Word版含答案

2017～2018学年度第二学期期中
高一英语
本试卷分为第I卷（选择题）和第II卷（非选择题）两部分，共120分，考试用时100分钟。
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第I卷
注意事项：
1．每小题选出答案后，用铅笔将答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如果改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。
2．本卷共65小题，共80分。
第一部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分50分）
第一节：听力测试（共15小题，每题1分，满分15分）
第一节:听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
1. How many bedrooms are there in the apartment?
A. One. B. Two. C. Three.
2. According to the woman, what should the man do first?
A. Read the instructions.
B. Press the buttons one by one.
C. Make the machine run fast.
3. What are the speakers going to do?
A. Stay at home. B. Write a paper. C. Go to a movie.
4. What does the man want to buy?
A. Coffee. B. Beef. C. Bread.
5. When does the conversation take place?
A. In the morning. B. In the afternoon. C. In the evening.
第二节:听下面4段对话。每段对话后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话读两遍。
听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。
6. How old is the baby?
A. Three years old. B. Three months old. C. Three weeks old.
7. What will the woman do next?
A. Feed her baby. B. Find a blanket. C. Call her husband.
听第7段材料，回答第8、9题。
8. Where should the woman get on the train?
A. On Platform 1. B. On Platform 3. C. On Platform 6.
9. To whom is the woman talking?
A. A zookeeper. B. A ticket seller. C. A train passenger.
听第8段材料，回答第10至12题。
10. Where does the girl probably live now?
A. In England. B. In America. C. In Germany.
11. What does the girl’s father do for a living?
A. He is a travel agent.
B. He is a college professor.
C. He has his own business.
12. What does the girl say about her mother?
A. She is a housewife.
B. She is interested in chemistry.
C. Her job isn’t very hard.
听第9段材料，回答第13至15题。
13. What is the girl concerned about?
A. The traffic. B. Her homework. C. Her bedtime.
14. What will the man do for the girl?
A. Get her the movie ticket.
B. Help with her homework.
C. Drop her off at the movie theater.
15. What will the girl do next?
A. Go to a bank. B. Find a mirror. C. Get some money.
第二节：单项填空（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
16. —How about the rock concert last night?
—_______. I couldn’t stand the rock band.
A. It couldn’t be any worse B. It couldn’t be any better
C. It was the best one D. There was no better one
17. The temple _______ very old _______ the Tang dynasty.
A. looks; dates back to B. which looks; dated back to
C. that looks; dated from D. looking; dates from
18. _______ the difficult math problem, I have asked our math teacher several times.
A. Worked out B. To work out
C. Working out D. Work out
19. My friends and I had to wait an hour in the restaurant _______ we had already booked a table.
A. since B. until C. although D. before
20. You’ll have to _______ yourself in your studies if you want to pass the final exams．
A. bury B. devote C. place D. lay
21. In the forest _______, some large enough to hold several towns.
A. many lakes lie B. lie many lakes
C. stand many lakes D. many lakes stand
22. John was born and _______ up in this small village, _______ he left at the age of 17.
A. brought; which B. grown; which
C. brought; where D. grown; where
23. The Smiths decided to help the little girl whose parents _______ in the earthquake.
A. had killed B. are killed
C. had been killed D. killed
24. Some people believe smoking is harmful to health, _______ others consider smoking is helpful for reducing working pressure.
A. whom B. where C. which D. while
25. It is no use _______; the company won’t do anything about it.
A. complaining B. you to complain
C. you complain D. you are complaining
26. If you read the text before class, you will find it easy to _______ what the teachers teaches.
A. take up B. take over C. take in D. take off
27. The teacher as well as his students _______ just arrived at the airport.
A. is B. has C. are D. have
28. There are many beautiful islands _______ the southeast coast of China.
A. from B. along C. on D. off
29. In Chinese traditional culture and art, designs of the fish and water are _______ of success and harvest.
A. examples B. symbols C. marks D. features
30. My bike was broken and I had no money for a bus, so I could do nothing but _______ to school yesterday.
A. to walk B. walk C. walking D. walked
第三节：完形填空（共20小题；每小题1分，满分20分）
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从31～50各题所给出的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
Everyone has lots of great memories during the life. So do I. However, I also have a few 31 memories. The worst memory is that I 32 an earthquake.
The earthquake 33 in my hometown in Texas when I was 16. I’ll never 34 what I was doing 35 the big noises and shaking began. I was reading a 36 in my textbook for an English test in my room. I felt my bed was 37 . The noises got bigger and bigger. I left my room quickly and looked for my family to 38 what was going on. An earthquake had just 39 my hometown.
The earthquake was one of the?most serious 40 in Texas. Actually, Many homes and buildings were 41 in it. Nearly 800 people 42 their lives that day and around 1,500 people got 43 because of the falling buildings. My family was 44 enough to get out of our house before the earthquake 45 destroyed it. We 46 to settle in a neighboring town. How lucky we were!
After the earthquake, my dad moved our family from Texas within a month because he 47 to make a safer life for us. He thought it 48 to stay in a place where an earthquake could strike again 49 any time. I’ll never forget that earthquake because it changed our 50 .
31. A. latest B. wonderful C. strange D. unpleasant
32. A. experienced B. happened C. met D. occurred
33. A. took out B. broke out C. came out D. picked out
34. A. recognize B. repeat C. forget? D. know
35. A. when B. that C. which D. what
36. A. novel B. plan? C. passage D. story
37. A. breaking B. increasing C. changing D. moving
38. A. find out B. look up C. make up D. pick up
39. A. beaten B. ended C. stuck D. struck
40. A. it B. ones C. one D. that
41. A. trapped B. examined C. built D. destroyed
42. A. died B. lost C. saved D. improved
43. A. frightened B. killed C. disappointed D. injured
44. A. fortunate B. anxious C. unfortunate D. clever
45. A. hardly B. completely C. exactly D. gradually
46. A. were made B. were sent C. were seen D. were ordered
47. A. avoided B. admitted C. decided D. stopped
48. A. safe B. dangerous C. amazing D. satisfying
49. A. on B. in C. for D. at
50. A. neighbors B. lives C. activities D. hobbies
第二部分：阅读理解（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。
A
During the spring vacation, I took part in an exchange program with the Diocesan Girls’ School in Hong Kong.
We were very lucky to get involved in DGS’s school courses. Unlike many Chinese dialects(方言) that are dying away, Cantonese(广东话) has been greatly protected in Hong Kong. In Chinese class, what amazed me most was hearing students read ancient Chinese poems in Cantonese together. The sound coming out of their mouths was like the song a bird makes. It was the first time I truly felt the beauty of a language.
Liberal studies is a subject that you must choose there, and it aims to encourage students’ thoughts on current articles. I found Hong Kong students behave actively in this class, expressing their opinions in a logical way. I really appreciated the depth of their knowledge.
Furthermore, the students needed to read plenty of passages written in English. I found it difficult to understand many of the words, but the students there seemed to pick them up easily. That’s mainly because every subject is taught in English there – except Chinese class, of course. This made me want to improve my English skills.
Through this program, I made friends with teachers and students at DGS. Moreover, I learnt that Hong Kong is a great mixture of the traditional and the modern, East and West. I’m sure the memories of this trip will last in my mind forever.
by Liu Yaxuan
Qinghua Univeristy High School
Beijing
51. Why did the author go to Hong Kong during last spring vacation?
A. To travel and taste local food.
B. To visit one of his relatives there.
C. To attend an exchange program and study there.
D. To experience a different lifestyle.
52. Why did students in Hong Kong read ancient poems in Cantonese?
A. Because the government protects the local language.
B. Because they think reading in Cantonese sounds more beautiful.
C. Because they only speak English and Cantonese.
D. Because schools ask them to do so.
53. What’s the author’s impression of Hong Kong?
A. It’s an old city with a long history.
B. It mixes the traditional with the modern, East with West very well.
C. It’s very modern, and everything is taught in English.
D. It’s good for students to tour and have a fun time there.
54. Which is WRONG according to the passage?
A. Many Chinese dialects are dying away in China.
B. It’s amazing to hear the students in Hong Kong read poems in Cantonese.
C. It’s easier for students in Hong Kong to understand passages in English.
D. Liberal studies is a subject that must be chosen in Beijing.
55. Why did Liu Yaxuan write this article?
A. To introduce the exchange program in Hong Kong.
B. To record an experience in Hong Kong.
C. To show Cantonese is a beautiful language.
D. To show the differences between students in Beijing and in Hong Kong.
B
Lunch breaks are important for office workers, since we all need to recharge our batteries for our minds at their best. And more importantly, it’s the part of the day when we can enjoy some time to ourselves.
A recent China Youth Daily survey found that almost 60% of the country’s office workers are unable to enjoy a good nap during their lunch breaks. If it is the same to you, take a look at the suggestions below.
Get in some fresh air and exercise. Going to a gym during lunchtime may sound more tiring than relaxing, but it works for 24-year-old Wang Xiande, a programmer for an Internet company. And just like restarting a computer, Wang says exercise helps to refresh his brain. Before allowing himself to eat, he’ll first visit the gym near his office. “It gives myself a sense that I’ve finished something today,” he explained. Zhou Yang, 25, a designer for an advertising company, prefers taking a walk outside with colleagues after her meal. “ The sunshine and fresh air is the perfect relaxation for me,” she said.“We always talk about something besides work along the way. It improves my mood.”
Keep your brain ticking over. Zhu Xiaojie, 26, is a secretary for an international school. She started weekend classes in Japanese several months ago and now uses the lunch time to review words and text, saying this helps turn her mind to something she’s interested in.
Write the day away. Writing can express feelings that cannot be said out loud. Guo Li, 24, a translator at a translation company, writes about her feelings every day after lunch. “Translating is not creative work, so I need something to refresh myself during this time at noon,” she said. Having no particular subject to write about, she usually writes a diary, covering her last 24 hours of activities.”
56. According to the author, what are the benefits of lunch time?
A. Relax the minds and enjoy a period of time.
B. Doing sports to keep healthy.
C. Having a good meal with friends.
D. Taking a short sleep.
57. Which sentence is TRUE according to the passage?
A. Most workers in China can enjoy a good nap during lunch breaks.
B. Exercise can give Wang Xiande a sense that he has completed something today.
C. Zhu Xiaojie started weekend classes in Japanese several weeks ago.
D. Guo Li always writes diaries about her work in a day.
58. How does the author come up with his suggestions?
A. By describing the facts B. By listing out figures
C. By giving examples D. By comparison
59. What can we learn from the passage?
A. Translating is a creative and interesting job.
B. Going to a gym during lunchtime is relaxing for most people.
C. Exercise can help to restart the computer.
D. When you can’t say something to others, writing is a good way.
60. What does the passage mainly talk about?
A. The lunch breaks are very important for everyone.
B. Some advice on how to relax during lunch breaks.
C. Exercise can help to relax.
D. Study after lunch can refresh yourself.
C
It’s said that men are better at math and science than women. And taking a look at the figures from college students departments, it could be difficult to disagree with that. However, one famous British university is trying to stop this theory.
At Oxford University, math and computer science are two subjects that have big gaps(差距) in grades between men and women. For example, just 21.2% of women taking math got first-class degrees in 2017, compared to 45.5% of men, reported The Times. The university believes that female students are more easily to be affected by “ time anxiety”. So to solve this problem, female students at Oxford were given 15 minutes more than male students to finish their math and computer science exams in the summer of 2017.
These changes were welcomed by some people. “I am happy when people see gaps between men and women. And they should not have such gaps.” Antonia Siu, a representative from Oxford Computer Science said.
However, others were against the decision. Amanda Foreman, a researcher at the University of Liverpool, UK, said, “I don’t think girls are weaker than boys and can’t take it. Women are not weaker.” Indeed, research from the US Department of Education suggested that girls are as good at math-based subjects as boys are. However, they’re prevented from developing an interest in math and science because women aren’t good at those subjects, a 2016 report by Forbes said. “The truth is, you probably are a math person, however, you are possibly hamstringing your own career,” wrote The Atlantic.
61. According to the passage, we can infer that _________________.
A. women are worse at math and science than men
B. more women got math graduated with first-class degrees than men did
C. women are easier to get anxious when taking exams
D. women are as good at the two subjects as men
62. Why were these changes welcomed by some people?
A. Because it shows women can be as good at these subjects as men.
B. Because people can see the differences between men and women.
C. Because it showed women were weaker sex.
D. Because it helps more women to be scientists.
63. What’s the meaning of the underlined word “hamstring” in the last paragraph?
A. Keep working B. begin changing C. keep away from D. get used to
64. What can we know from the last paragraph?
A. Girls are weaker than boys and can’t take the anxiety from exams.
B. Girls can be as good at math-based subjects as boys if they succeed in developing an interest in those subjects.
C. Girls need to work harder and longer if they want to be as successful as boys.
D. All the girls can become successful in math.
65. Where do you think the article probably comes from_________________?
A. culture B. science C. sports D. travel
第II卷
注意事项：
1．用黑色墨水的钢笔或签字笔将答案写在答题卡上。
2．本卷三个题，共40分。
第三部分：写作(满分40分）
第一节：单词填空：（共10小题；每题1分，满分10分）
根据汉意或首字母提示，用词的正确形式填空。
66. The little girl answered the questions with complete _________(诚实) and courage.
67. Education is of great importance to a country’s _________(发展) .
68. The couple found a lot of things in their house _________(偷盗) when they came back
from vacation.
69. We have to work on weekend, because the task needs _________(完成) before Tuesday.
70. The factory _________(毁坏) by the fire last week needs to take a few years to rebuild.
71. Friendship can’t be m_________ by money, but money is an effective means to test
how strong the friendship is.
72. The electric light bulb was i_________ in1879 by Thomas Edison in?the?United States.
73. According to the weather f_________, it will be windy tomorrow.
74. After the hurricane, thousands of people in California have been made h_________ .
75. People in China are increasingly concerned about pollution, especially the greenhouse
gases that cause g_________ warming.
第二节：阅读表达（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）
阅读短文，并按照题目要求用英语回答问题。
More and more Chinese students are willing to attend study tours this summer. The study tours consist of language lessons, sightseeing and international communication, which meet the demands of Chinese parents and students, although the costs of about 4,000 to 6,000 dollars are high.
Younger participants
According to a report in June, 2016, 73% of their participants were middle school students, 11 % primary school students and only 3% college students. Students of a younger age seem to be the upward trend. Chinese parents seem to be more willing to let their children go on tours at a very young age, and the youngest Chinese participant on the program was only 5 years old.
Various purposes
According to a survey on worldwide study tours, expanding children’s horizons(视野) was the main goal for parents, while improving language skills, and experiencing independence(独立) were also popular.
Zhang Fuman, a 14-year-old girl from Guangzhou, went to the U.S. for her first overseas study tour last winter. “She has been much more confident and independent since her first tour in the U.S. ,” said her mother.
Going on a study tour does not mean going to a foreign university in the future, and the parents preferred their child to go to a top Chinese university. According to China’s Ministry of Education, over 80% of Chinese students who studied abroad returned to China in 2016.
76. What’s the demands of Chinese parents and students for the study tours?(no more
than 11 words)
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
77. What does the underlined word in paragraph 2 mean?(no more than 1 word)
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________78. What were the aims for parents to send their children to participate study tours?(no more than 15 words)
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________79. What’s the attitude of Zhang Fuman’s mother towards the study tour?(no more than 5 words)
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
80. What do you think of the study tours? Explain why?(no more than 25 words)
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
第三节：书面表达（满分20分）
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom想了解孔子以及孔子文化。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1．孔子（551BC--- 479BC）是春秋时期中国最著名的的思想家和哲学家。
2．孔子重视仁爱、职责和秩序，他的思想影响中国社会2000多年，是中国传统文化的
标志之一。
3．他也是一位教育家。他开办学校，培养了很多哲学家。
4．目前，很多国家有孔子学院。
春秋时期the Spring and Autumn Period 孔子学院Confucius institutes
注意：1．词数100左右;
2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,____________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
2017～2018学年度第二学期期中
高一英语听力材料
第一部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分50分）
第一节：听力测试（共15小题，每题1分，满分15分）
第一节:听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
Text 1
W: This apartment has three bedrooms and a bathroom. (1) Here’s the kitchen.
M: It seems a little large for me. Two bedrooms are enough.
Text 2
M: This machine has so many buttons. I can’t figure out which one makes it run fast.
W: You’d better not press the buttons one by one. Read the instructions first. (2)
Text 3
W: How boring to spend Saturday evening at home! Let’s go to the movies.
M: That’s exactly what I was thinking. (3) Let me get the paper and see what’s
playing tonight.
Text 4
M: Excuse me, where can I find the beef? (4)
W: The beef is in Row Four, right next to the coffee and the bread.
Text 5
W: Hey, wake up, lazy bones! The alarm clock is ringing.
M: Five minutes more. Let me know when you get breakfast ready. (5)
W: You’re a real sound sleeper.
第二节:听下面4段对话。每段对话后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。听每段对话前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话读两遍。
听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。
Text 6
M: That is a very cute baby. How old is she? (6)
W: She is only three weeks old. (6)
M: Wow! Is she well-behaved?
W: For the most part, yes. She cries a lot at night, though.
M: Does she keep you awake?
W: Well, my husband and I take turns taking care of her when she cries. It works out
pretty well.
M: I really like her baby blanket. Oh, no! I think she is waking up. Now she is crying.
W: It’s okay. I need to feed her soon. (7)
听第7段材料，回答第8、9题。
Text 7
W: Excuse me, sir. I’m a tourist here. Do you know which train goes to the zoo?
M: You need to get to Platform 6, (8) take the No.1 train, and get off at Rocky Hill. That’s
the third stop.
W: Is that where the zoo is?
M: You’ll be nearly there. After you get off the train, turn right and you’ll see a hill in
front of you. Walk up to the top of the hill and you’ll see signs pointing to the zoo.
W: Many thanks. One ticket to Rocky Hill, please. (9)
听第8段材料，回答第10至12题。
Text 8
M: Oh, hi. Karen, right?
W: Yeah.
M: I heard you were from England.
W: Well, I was born there, but my parents are Americans.
M: Oh, a world traveler!
W: We moved to California when I was nine. (10)
M: So, what does your father do now?
W: Well, he’s a college professor, (11) and he is in Germany at the moment.
M: How interesting! What does he teach?
W: Oh, I have no idea. Nah, just joking! He teaches chemistry.
M: Oh, chemistry, and uh…what about your mother?
W: She works full-time at home. (12)
M: Oh, does she have her own business or something?
W: Nah, she takes care of me. (12)
M: Well, being a homemaker can be a real hard job.
W: I think so, too.
听第9段材料，回答第13至15题。
Text 9
M: Let me check the paper for show times.
W: The movie is playing at 3:00, 5:40, 7:15, and 9:00.
M: You already checked, I see.
W: Yeah. So is it okay? Can I go to the 9:00 showing?
M: I’d say the 5:40 showing!
W: Um…how about the 7:15 showing?
M: Why are you so concerned about the show time?
W: Well, I don’t know if I’ll get all of homework done before then. (13)
M: Sorry, but I want you to get to bed early. The traffic is heavy. I can drop you off at the movie theater about 5:30, (14) so you’ll have ten minutes to get the ticket.
W: Uh, Dad…can I have money for the movie?
M: Sure, just go into the family bank behind the secret mirror in the hall and take the
money. (15) Look, I can only spare a few dollars, so you’ll have to come up with the rest, okay?
W: Okay. Thanks, Dad.
2017～2018学年度第二学期期中
高一英语参考答案
第一部分：英语知识运用（共50分）
第一节 听力测试（每题1分，共15分）
1—5 CACBA 6—10 CACBB 11—15 BABCC
第二节 单项填空（每题1分，共15分）
16—20 ADBCA 21—25 BACDA 26--30 CBDBB
第三节 完形填空（每题1分，共20分）
31—35 DABCA 36—40 CDADB 41—45 DBDAB 46—50 BCBDB
第二部分：阅读理解（每题2分，共30分）
51—55 CABDB 56—60 ABCDB 61—65 CBCBB
第三部分：写作（共40分）
第一节：单词填空（每题1分，共10分）
66. honesty 67. development 68. stolen 69. completing(finishing) 70. destroyed/ damaged/ ruined 71. measured 72. Invented 73. forecast 74.homeless 75. global
第二节：阅读表达：（每题2分，共10分）
76. The study tours consist of language lessons, sightseeing and international communication. 含有划线部分，即可得2分。
77. increasing /rising / climbing “上升的，增加的，向上的”含有此意的词汇均可得分
78. Their aims are to expand children’s horizons, improve language skills, and experience independence. 含有划线部分，即可得2分。
79. She’s approval. / She agrees with it. /She’s in favor of it. 表示赞成的词或者句子，均可得分。
80．（open）In my opinion, language lessons, sightseeing and international communication are of great importance for me. / The study tours can help to expand my horizons, improve language skills, and experience independence. / I don’t think the study tours necessary because the study not only costs a lot but also is a waste of time. / From where I stand, the universities in China are greater than those in foreign countries.
能明确表达出自己观点并且有相应论据即可。
第三节：书面表达（共20分）
Dear Tom,
I’m so glad that you are interested in Confucius and his ideas.
Confucius, born in 551BC in the Spring and Autumn Period, is the best-known Chinese thinker and philosopher whose influence has been the greatest. He stressed the importance of kindness, duty and order in society. As we all know, Confucius’s ideas are one of the most important symbols in Chinese culture, by which Chinese society is affected for more than 2,000 years. In addition, Confucius is also a great educator because he started a school where he trained many philosophers. It was Confucius who made great contributions to the society. At present, more and more people are so interested in Confucius’s teaching that we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world.
I hope the above is of help for you and welcome to China to learn more about Confucius one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
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个别语句有点深刻
个别细节例子很好
个别语句较生动
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