2018年5月24日
高考频度：★★★★★ 难易程度：★★★☆☆
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。www.21-cn-jy.com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, ＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂ ＂Turning left!＂ I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
【参考答案】
In the summer holiday following my birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, once I started the car, my mind blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the , ＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂ ＂ left!＂ I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes , the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.21cnjy.com
【文章大意】
本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在暑假期间考驾照第一天发生的故事。
【答案解析】
第四处：goes改为went 考查时态。根据前文中的started可知时态为一般过去时，故将goes改为went。
第五处：word改为words 考查单复数。句意：教练一直喊＂加速！＂＂减速！＂＂左转！＂。word＂单词，消息＂，words 可以表示为word的复数，也表示某人说的话，这里指教练说的那些话，故将word改为words。 21教育网
第六处：Turning改为Turn 考查非谓语动词。分析语境可知教练的话＂加速＂，＂减速＂，＂左转＂都是祈使句，根据前文＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂也可以看得出来。祈使句应该用动词原形，故将Turning改为Turn。21·世纪*教育网
第七处：much去掉 考查固定句型。句意：我如此紧张以至于无法分辨哪个方向是左。固定句型so...that…表示＂如此……以至于……＂，much为多余成分，故将much去掉。www-2-1-cnjy-com
第八处：late改为later 考查副词。late在此作副词，late＂迟地＂，later＂稍后、随后＂。此处表示＂几分钟之后＂，故将late改为later。
第九处：suddenly改为sudden 考查形容词。句意：我来了个紧急刹车。suddenly是副词，表示＂意外地，忽然地＂。sudden为形容词，表示＂突然的；迅速的＂，修饰名词stop用形容词，故将suddenly改为sudden。a sudden stop表示＂急刹车＂。
第十处：on改为of 考查介词。分析语境可知此处表示＂在路中间急刹车＂，on the road表示＂在路上＂，the middle of the road表示＂路的中央＂，强调的是＂the middle＂，故将on改为of。
【应试必备】
高考短文改错题是在给出一篇约100词的短文，文中有10处错误，要求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错误将其改正。错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等方面的错误。每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
高考短文改错着重考查考生的语言基本功和正确使用英语进行表达的能力。此题型不仅要求考生牢固的掌握一定的词汇和语法知识，还要求考生具有一定的阅读理解和逻辑推理能力。它针对考生平时学习英语过程中，尤其是在写作中常犯的错误而设计的，考生在平时写作中常出现的错误是短文改错考查的重点。?
【试题特点】?
一般来说，短文改错的语言材料通常来自考生文章或类似于考生习作的文章。所选材料篇幅较短，约100词左右，10—12个句子；难度不大，基本上无生僻的词汇和语法结构。短文改错的话题较常见，通常是叙述一个事情或说明一个事物。从体裁上看，历年高考试题中的短文改错以记叙文和应用文为主，兼顾说明文和议论文。通常从词法，句法和行文逻辑三个角度设题，错误类型有多词，缺词，和错词三种，比例一般为错词：多词：缺词=8（7）：1（2）：1??
专家押题
（1）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。21·cn·jy·com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 () 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Which is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. In it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so much information as possible. We are often send e-mails to our classmates. We can make telephone call to our families as well as our friends. However, we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach myself English. We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games on the net. We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.21世纪教育网版权所有
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。2-1-c-n-j-y
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 () 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?【版权所有：21教育】
Perhaps some people will go to the moon for the holiday, and some people may live under the sea and in pace. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational program on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that will be able to do whatever it was told to, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on.21*cnjy*com
With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy and more colorful.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
答案
（1）
?is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get ? much information as possible. We often send e-mails to our classmates. We can make telephone ?to our families as well as our friends. , we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach ?English. We can also enjoy music, ?sports and play computer games on the net. We ?do shopping even without leaving our homes.
【答案解析】
第十处：这篇文章主要使用一般现在时。故could改为can。
（2）
【参考答案】
I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?21*cnjy*com
Perhaps some people will go to the moon for holiday, and some people may live under the sea in space. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of ?to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, ?will be able to do whatever it ?told to, such as going shopping, doing housework and so on.
With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that ?life will certainly become easier, ?and more colorful.2·1·c·n·j·y
?【答案解析】
进步，在于总结。我在这，总结在哪儿？
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2018年5月25日
高考频度：★★★★★ 难易程度：★★★☆☆
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。21cnjy.com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Once there was a tale tell of a spider with the name Anansi. He wondered what to be more intelligent. He went around the village to collect for wisdom with a basket. Soon his basket was full. To hide it on the top of the tree with the basket tied to the front part of his body, he found hard to climb the tree. Then her youngest son walked by, “Why not carry a basket on your back instead?” Following his advice, Anansi climbed the tree easily, and he wasn’t happy. “I have collected so many wisdom, but my baby son is still wise than me. Take back your wisdom!” He throw the basket of wisdom into the air. And that’s how wisdom went all over the world.
【答案】
Once there was a tale??of a spider with the name Anansi. He wondered??to be more intelligent. He went around the village to collect?wisdom with a basket. Soon his basket was full. To hide it on the top of the tree with the basket tied to the front part of his body, he found?hard to climb the tree. Then??youngest son walked by, “Why not carry??basket on your back instead?” Following his advice, Anansi climbed the tree easily,??he wasn’t happy. “I have collected so??wisdom, but my baby son is still??than me. Take back your wisdom!” He??the basket of wisdom into the air. And that’s how wisdom went all over the world.21*cnjy*com
【解析】
【应试必备】
短文改错解题口诀：
口诀一：
短文改错有妙计，完整一致看仔细。词法侧重冠名动，形副互换要留意。
分词出现多琢磨，主动被动加语气。全文一处多一词，一处少词常冠介。
时态人称要统一，连词用法重逻辑。短文改错要做好, 常见类型应记牢。
口诀二：
名词爱考数与格，冠词在前＂错、多、少＂；动词时态和语态，非谓搭配莫错了；
连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆；介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到；
句法涉及到＂一致＂，从句多考关系词。词法句法均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。
＂811＂ 排列是规律，回读复查敲定稿。
注：1. ＂一致＂包括主谓一致，数、性、格等的一致。
2. 811常指：8处错误，1处多词，1处少词。
专家押题
（1）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。21世纪教育网版权所有
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 () 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity of this kind! 21·cn·jy·com
（2）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 () 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, I, as well as my parents, were invited to my uncle’s home in the United States. My uncle, moved to America when I was five, has been living there for nearly ten years. She met us in the airport. I was exciting when I set my foot on the land of America. In the followed days, we visited some places of interest and took photos in the front of the Statue of Liberty. We all enjoyed visiting the Museum of Natural History so it enriched our knowledge great. For me, this is one of the most rewarding trips which I have ever made in my life and I look forward to go there again.21教育网
答案
（1）
【答案】
Last Friday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to ?dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he ?us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him ?watched attentively. Then we started to have a try . The old man walked around and helped us . Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking ?the figurines, we were all very . We hope we can have more ?of this kind!21·世纪*教育网
【答案解析】
第七处：修饰谓语动词helped要用副词，指“耐心地帮助我们”。故patient改为patiently。
第八处：look at是固定搭配。故on改为at。
第九处：此处指“我们非常兴奋”，表示内心的感觉用-ed结尾的形容词。故exciting改为excited。
第十处：句意：我们希望我们能有更多的这种活动！此处应该用名词的复数形式。故activity改为activities。2·1·c·n·j·y
（2）
【参考答案】
Last month, I, as well as my parents, ?invited to my uncle’s home in the United States. My uncle, ?moved to America when I was five, has been living there for nearly ten years. ?met us in the airport. I was ?when I set my foot on the land of America. In the ?days, we visited some places of interest and took photos in the front of the Statue of Liberty. We all enjoyed visiting the Museum of Natural History ?it enriched our knowledge . For me, this is one of the most rewarding trips ?I have ever made in my life and I look forward to ?there again.www.21-cn-jy.com
【答案解析】
第十处：短语look forward to中to是介词，所以后面接动名词。故go改为going。
进步，在于总结。我在这，总结在哪儿？
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2018年5月26日
高考频度：★★★★★ 难易程度：★★★☆☆
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Below are the reason why I have a preference for them21cnjy.com
It seems to me what autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat, or can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is general acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always making me happy. What is the most important is that autumn also see leaves of bushes and trees to turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!
That's why I like autumn better.
There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Below are the??why I have a preference for?21·cn·jy·com
It seems to me??autumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat,??can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is?acknowledged that autumn is?symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always??me happy. What is the most important is that autumn also??leaves of bushes and trees ?turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
That's why I like autumn?.
【答案解析】
【文章大意】本文讲述的是作者最喜欢的季节是秋天的原因。
根据句意可知此处应该用副词generally修饰acknowledged。
第六处：第二段第三句话中的symbol前加the。考查冠词。根据句意可知此处应用定冠词the表示特指。
第七处：第二段第四句话中的making改为makes。考查动词时态。根据句子结构可知make在句中作谓语动词，且为一般客观事实，结合句意可知make应用一般现在时的主动语态；主语the smile为第三人称单数，故用makes。【出处：21教育名师】
第八处：第二段第五句话中的see改为sees。考查主谓一致。主语autumn为第三人称单数，故谓语动词see应用sees的形式。【版权所有：21教育】
第九处：第二段第五句话中的to去掉。考查非谓语动词。句意：最重要的是，秋天也会目睹灌木和树的叶子变成红色、金色或橙色。根据句意可知leaves与become之间为主动关系，故应用become作see的宾语补足语。21教育名师原创作品
第十处：第三段中的better改为best。考查副词的最高级。根据上文可知此处表示“这就是我最喜欢秋天的原因”，故应用最高级best。2·1·c·n·j·y
【应试必备】
短文改错解题步骤
1 浏览全文，掌握大意
2 分句阅读，逐行找错
3 由易到难，各个击破
4 检查核对，注意方法
具体解题步骤：
做短文改错通常遵循以下几个步骤：通读文章，了解大意；逐句分析，行中找错；再读短文，检查漏洞。即按照文章→句子→行→文章的顺序。
第一步：通读全文，了解大意。短文改错是考查考生在理解的基础上对语篇整体的识错、纠错能力，必须从全篇考虑，而不能只顾一句或一行。要理解文章的谋篇布局，弄清楚整篇文章的意思。在阅读过程中，要注意行文逻辑、文章的时态以及人称等。
第二步：逐句分析，行中找错。尽管短文改错是以行设置错误的，但语言毕竟是以句子为完整意义单位的。所以，可以逐句分析，看看单句是否有错；如果有错，有几处错误，是什么错误，再看看错误在哪一行。把＂短文改错＂转化为＂单句改错＂，然后再在行中找错，这样就会降低难度。
第三步：再读短文，检查漏洞。做完以后，再把文章阅读一遍，检查是否有遗漏情况，尤其注意上下句之间的逻辑关系。多读一遍，就有可能把某些不清楚的地方理顺。
专家押题
（1）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。21世纪教育网版权所有
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 () 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Attention please, everyone. We have received the weather forecast on radio this morning that there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure to shutting the windows and doors until you leave your classrooms. The sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes fine, we’ll make other announcement. We will have classes on Wednesday as usually. Since it is colder tomorrow, please put on more clothes in times. Those who comes to school by bike, don’t keep your umbrella open while riding.21教育网
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。www.21-cn-jy.com
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 () 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before a big audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!21·世纪*教育网
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【参考答案】
Attention please, everyone. We have received the weather forecast on radio this morning that there will ?a heavy rain tonight. Be sure to ?the windows and doors you leave your classrooms. The sports meet that we planned to hold tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes fine, we’ll make ?announcement. We will have classes on Wednesday as . Since it is colder tomorrow, please put on more clothes in . Those who to school by bike, don’t keep your ?open while riding.
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【参考答案】
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed me. I had no choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t . The real moment began I stood on the platform with my legs trembling my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting . Gradually, I found back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of before a big audience disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker! www-2-1-cnjy-com
【答案解析】
进步，在于总结。我在这，总结在哪儿？
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