英语中考写作课件（33张PPT）

课件33张PPT。中考英语写作中考作文评分标准：满分档（20分）：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，词汇丰富、 没有任何语法错误。
第五档(16-19分）：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，词汇丰富、有少量语法错误。
第四档（12-15分）：文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、行文基本连贯，词汇不够丰富、有一些语法错误。
第三档（8-11分）：文本长度与要求有明显距离、书写不规范，要点不完整、行文不连贯，词汇不足、错误较多，勉强看出作文意图。
第二档（5-7分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。
第一档（0-3分）：有一些英语单词；白卷0分影响作文分数的因素：
1 题目要求、内容要点；
2 句子准确、通顺；
3 层次结构清晰；
4 拼写、语法等错误；
5 卷面整洁度；怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？ 写作要点 “一审”即审题。
“二写”即列纲。
“三连”即连句成文。
“四改”即修改润色全文。 审题：做到三审1.体裁
看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，
抓住要点，注意文体是什么
2.时态
3.人称书面表达
2016年学生体质健康调查结果显示青少年的生长发育情
况良好，但视力下降问题严重。假设你是Anna，你的笔
友Tony也面临视力下降的困惑，请你给他写一封信介绍
以下情况：
眼睛的重要性： 1.眼睛可以让你阅读
2. 眼睛可以让你看到身边的许多事物
3.……
保护眼睛的措施：1.做眼保健操
2.保证充足的睡眠，养成健康的生活方式
3.不要长时间看书、看电视、玩电脑……

书信Dear ...,
I’m glad to receive your letter…
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Lucy a书信开头常用语 I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you).
Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well?
… /How is everything going (on)?
How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. I’m writing to you for some advice on how to…
I’m writing to ask if you can ... Thank you for inviting me to …. b 书信结尾常用语 Best wishes (to/for you).
Wish you good luck.
(I am) looking forward to hearing from you.写信，建议
总-分-总Dear Tony，
Nice hearing from you.
As we know, eyes are hearts’ windows. They make us could do some reading to open our eyes and see something around us. We can see flowers’ beautiful, water’s clean and sky’s blue by them. They make us see this colorful world. We can’t see anything without them. Therefore, they are so important for us.
I heard you were weak at eyes past days. I can provide some ways to protect eyes for you. First of all, you should keep enough time to sleep and keep a healthy lifestyle. You shouldn’t read books, watch TV and surf the Internet for a long time. You’d better do eye exercises every day. It’s good for your eyes. If you feel tired of eyes, you could see somewhere far likes sky.
Best wishes.Yours,
AnnaDear Tony，
Nice hearing from you.
As we know, eyes are hearts’ windows. They make us could do some reading to open our eyes and see something around us. We can see flowers’ beautiful, water’s clean and sky’s blue by them. They make us see this colorful world. We can’t see anything without them. Therefore, they are so important for us.
I heard you were weak at eyes past days. I can provide some ways to protect eyes for you. First of all, you should keep enough time to sleep and keep a healthy lifestyle. You shouldn’t read books, watch TV and surf the Internet for a long time. You’d better do eye exercises every day. It’s good for your eyes. If you feel tired of eyes, you could see somewhere far likes sky.
Best wishes.Yours,
AnnaIn your letter, you told me that there was something wrong with your eyes, I am so sorry to hear that.I hope that my suggestions can help you a little. If they really works, please write to me soon.文章分3部分：综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题
正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话
结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华 书面表达
2016年学生体质健康调查结果显示青少年的生长发育情
况良好，但视力下降问题严重。假设你是Anna，你的笔
友Tony也面临视力下降的困惑，请你给他写一封信介绍
以下情况：
眼睛的重要性： 1.眼睛可以让你阅读
2. 眼睛可以让你看到身边的许多事物
3.……
保护眼睛的措施：1.做眼保健操
2.保证充足的睡眠，养成健康的生活方式
3.不要长时间看书、看电视、玩电脑……

正文?Dear Tony，
Nice hearing from you.
As we know, eyes are hearts’ windows. They make us could do some reading to open our eyes and see something around us. We can see flowers’ beautiful, water’s clean and sky’s blue by them. They make us see this colorful world. We can’t see anything without them. Therefore, they are so important for us.
I heard you were weak at eyes past days. I can provide some ways to protect eyes for you. First of all, you should keep enough time to sleep and keep a healthy lifestyle. You shouldn’t read books, watch TV and surf the Internet for a long time. You’d better do eye exercises every day. It’s good for your eyes. If you feel tired of eyes, you could see somewhere far likes sky.
Best wishes.Yours,
Anna眼睛的重要性怎么保护眼睛列纲：做到三思 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。 连句成文
根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。 Dear Tony，
Nice hearing from you.
As we know, eyes are hearts’ windows. They make us could do some reading to open our eyes and see something around us. We can see flowers’ beautiful, water’s clean and sky’s blue by them. They make us see this colorful world. We can’t see anything without them. Therefore, they are so important for us.
I heard you were weak at eyes past days. I can provide some ways to protect eyes for you. First of all, you should keep enough time to sleep and keep a healthy lifestyle. You shouldn’t read books, watch TV and surf the Internet for a long time. You’d better do eye exercises every day. It’s good for your eyes. If you feel tired of eyes, you could see somewhere far likes sky.
Best wishes.Yours,
Anna众所周知，眼睛是心灵的窗户。它们使我们能让我们阅读来打开视野，并且能看到我们周围的东西 。通过眼睛我们可以看见花的美，水的清，天空的蓝。它们使我们看见这丰富多彩的世界。没有眼睛我们什么也看不见。因此，它们对我们而言是多么的重要。As we know, eyes are hearts’ windows. They make us could do some reading to open our eyes and see something around us. We can see flowers’ beautiful, water’s clean and sky’s blue by them. They make us see this colorful world. We can’t see anything without them. Therefore, they are so important for us.I heard you were weak at eyes past days. I can provide some ways to protect eyes for you. First of all, you should keep enough time to sleep and keep a healthy lifestyle. You shouldn’t read books, watch TV and surf the Internet for a long time. You’d better do eye exercises every day. It’s good for your eyes. If you feel tired of eyes, you could see somewhere far likes sky.我听说你在过去的日子里眼睛不好。我可以给你提供一些保护眼睛的方法。首先，你应该有足够的时间来睡觉并且要养成健康的生活习惯。你不应该长时间看书、看电视、上网。你最好每天做眼保健操，这对你的眼睛有好处。如果你感到眼睛累了，你看以看看远方比如眺望天空。修改润色全文做到三查 要点、拼写、语法是否连贯
看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。 先中文再英文Dear Tony，
Nice hearing from you. In your letter, you told me that there was something wrong with your eyes, I am amazed at that.

众所周知，眼睛是心灵的窗户。它们使我们能让我们阅读来打开视野，并且能看到我们周围的东西 。通过眼睛我们可以看见花的美，水的清，天空的蓝。它们使我们看见这丰富多彩的世界。没有眼睛我们什么也看不见。因此，它们对我们而言是多么的重要。As we know, eyes are the windows to our soul. They can open up ourselves to the outside world. We can do some reading to gain more knowledge and enjoy something wonderful around us. Such as the beauty of flowers, the clarity of water and the blue color of the sky. Because of them, we live happily in this colorful world. We can’t imagine how terrible it would be if we didn’t have them. Therefore, it is necessary for us to know how to take good care of them.众所周知，眼睛是心灵的窗户。它们使我们能让我们阅读来打开视野，并且能看到我们周围的东西 。通过眼睛我们可以看见花的美，水的清，天空的蓝。它们使我们看见这丰富多彩的世界。没有眼睛我们什么也看不见。因此，它们对我们而言是多么的重要。As we know, eyes are the windows to our soul. They can open up ourselves to the outside world. We can do some reading to gain more knowledge and enjoy something wonderful around us.Such as the beauty of flowers, the clarity of water and the blue color of the sky. Because of them, we live happily in this colorful world. We can’t imagine how terrible it would be if we didn’t have them.Therefore, it is necessary for us to know how to take good care of them. Firstly, you should have enough sleep . In my opinion, enough sleep means less work later. Secondly, make sure to keep a healthy lifestyle. For example,you shouldn’t read books, watch TV or surf the Internet for a long time. Our eyes need exercise as well as our body, so you’d better do eye exercises every day. In addition, be sure not to do eye exercises with your eyes open, it is harmful.
I hope that my suggestions can help you a little. If they really works, please write to me soon.
Best wishes!Yours,
Anna我听说你在过去的日子里眼睛不好。我可以给你提供一些保护眼睛的方法。首先，你应该有足够的时间来睡觉并且要养成健康的生活习惯。你不应该长时间看书、看电视、上网。你最好每天做眼保健操，这对你的眼睛有好处。如果你感到眼睛累了，你看以看看远方比如眺望天空。怎么提建议？linking words我听说你在过去的日子里眼睛不好。我可以给你提供一些保护眼睛的方法。首先，你应该有足够的时间来睡觉并且要养成健康的生活习惯。你不应该长时间看书、看电视、上网。你最好每天做眼保健操，这对你的眼睛有好处。如果你感到眼睛累了，你看以看看远方比如眺望天空。Firstly, you should have enough sleep . In my opinion, enough sleep means less work later. Secondly, make sure to keep a healthy lifestyle. For example,you shouldn’t read books, watch TV or surf the Internet for a long time. Our eyes need exercise as well as our body, so you’d better do eye exercises every day. In addition, be sure not to do eye exercises with your eyes open, it is harmful.卷面 和书写 很关键 ！！ 假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。
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1.要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；
3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟；
4. 词数：70左右。
Good Luck!Dear Tony，
Nice hearing from you. In your letter, you told me that there was something wrong with your eyes, I am amazed at that.
As we know, eyes are the windows to our soul. They can open up ourselves to the outside world. We can do some reading to gain more knowledge and enjoy something wonderful around us. Such as the beauty of flowers, the clarity of water and the blue color of the sky. Because of them, we live happily in this colorful world. We can’t imagine how terrible it would be if we didn’t have them. Therefore, it is necessary for us to know how to take good care of them.
Firstly, you should have enough sleep . In my opinion, enough sleep means less work later. Secondly, make sure to keep a healthy lifestyle. For example,you shouldn’t read books, watch TV or surf the Internet for a long time. Our eyes need exercise as well as our body,so you’d better do eye exercises every day. In addition, be sure not to do eye exercises with your eyes open, it is harmful.
I hope that my suggestions can help you a little. If they really works, please write to me soon.
Best wishes!Yours,
Anna写信，建议
总-分-总
I’m adj to hear that you… Here is some advice for you.
Firstly,….
Secondly,….
Finally,….
In a word,…If you…, you will…Dear Tony，
Nice hearing from you.
众所周知，眼睛是心灵的窗户。它们使我们能让我们阅读来打开视野，并且能看到我们周围的东西 。通过眼睛我们可以看见花的美，水的清，天空的蓝。它们使我们看见这丰富多彩的世界。没有眼睛我们什么也看不见。因此，它们对我们而言是多么的重要。
我听说你在过去的日子里眼睛不好。我可以给你提供一些保护眼睛的方法。首先，你应该有足够的时间来睡觉并且要养成健康的生活习惯。你不应该长时间看书、看电视、上网。你最好每天做眼保健操，这对你的眼睛有好处。如果你感到眼睛累了，你看以看看远方比如眺望天空。
祝福你！Yours,
Anna