Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet?Section B 写作教学课件

课件14张PPT。Unit 8
Have you read Treasure Island yet?WritingNo.23 Wang Feng is my favorite singer. He is famous. He is not only handsome but also very talented(天赋).
He was born on June 29th,1971 in Beijing.When he was 26, he had his first album(专辑). He has sold about six albums. Some of them are “Fly higher”(飞得更高)、“Life in full bloom”(怒放的生命)and so on. His music is mainly about Rock. I listen to his songs when I am sad . These songs will cheer me up. They can make me full of energy. I hope I can see him face to face to enjoy his songs someday. My favorite singerActivity1Mind map for paragraph 1: Wang Feng is my favorite singer. He is famous. My favorite singerA brief introduction ( of Wang Feng and the relationship with you )Wang Feng singer favoritefamous He is not only handsome but also very talented(天赋). He was born on June 29th,1971 in Beijing.When When he was 26, he had his first album(专辑). He has sold about six albums. Some of them are “Fly higher”（飞得更高），“Life in full bloom”（怒放的生命） and so on. His music is mainly about Rock. I listen to his songs when I am sad .These songs will cheer me up. They can make me full of energy. Mind map for paragraph 2:Appearance/
personality
(外貌/性格)
Born:
Music works:
Style:
Feeling:handsome, talentednot only… but also… June 29th,1971“Fly higher”、 “Life in full bloom”Rockcheer me up, make me full of energy. Mind map for paragraph 3: I hope I can see him face to face to enjoy his songs someday. hoping I can see him face to face to
enjoy his songs someday.some details about personhopingnameappearance/
personality
(外貌/性格)
born:
music works
(音乐作品）:
Style(风格）：
Feeling（感受） My
favorite
singerhandsome, talatedJune 29th,1971《Fly higher》,
《Life in full bloom》Rockcheer…up,
full of energyWang Fengfavorite singersee him face to face to enjoy his songs someday. famousMindmap表达心情:happy/pleased/cheerful, excited, peaceful（平静的） ….
句型表达：1. I listen to this song when…..
2.This song makes me feel….tall/short, of medium height/build, thin/heavy, handsome, pretty…
outgoing, quiet, active,… My favorite singer/writerappearance/
personality
(外貌/性格)
born:
music works
(音乐作品）:
style（风格）:
feeling（感受）: Some
details
about
personJune 29th,1971….“Fly higher”、“Life in full bloom”...pop music, rock , country music,
light music, folk, Hip-hop, R&B….NameWang Feng, Lu Xun…HopingI hope/believe …. 根据下列提示,以“My favorite writer”为题,
写一篇介绍伟大作家莫言的英语短文。
要求：语言流畅，语意通顺，词数70左右。。
提示：
1、莫言于1955年2月17日在山东出生。
2、作品包括(including)：《红高粱》 Red Sorghum ，《蛙》Frog
3、2012年获诺贝尔文学奖（Nobel Prize for literature），是第一位获此奖项（prize)）的中国作家。中国人为他而自豪(be proud of）。Activity 3 Correct the mistakes . Underline sentences which are exellent , give reseonable marks and give the reason. Then choose one to share with the whole class.
（组内批阅作文：改正作文内所出现的错误。请将写得好的句子用横线标出来, 最后在小组中选出一篇有代表性的作文与班级同学分享）
Check your compositions in groups.作文评价标准 1.Do you use the tense (时态)，spelling(拼写)，punctuation (标点)，
capitalization( 大写字母) correctly(正确地）?
2. Is your writing complete(完整的)?
3.Is your writing coherently(连贯地)written?
4.Can you describe it in a concise（简洁的）way?

Sample: I like Mo Yan very much. He is a famous writer. He was born on February 17,1955 in Shandong. He has written some popular books, including 《Red Sorghum》, 《Frog》 and so on. Mo Yan has won many prizes and he won the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2012. He is the first Chinese writer to win the prize. All of the Chinese people are very proud of him. When I read his books, I feel powerful. Summary We reviewed:
Words and sentences about “favorite singer/writer.We learned :
Using the words and sentences we reviewed to write a composition.Homework Write a short passage in English to
introduce a writer or singer you like best.教师寄语 Keep on writing, and your writing skill will
improve sooner or later!
(坚持写作，你的写作迟早会有所提高！）