Module 7 Revision How to make writing better课件（33张）
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课件33张PPT。How to Make
Your Writing Bettermake up 化妆Do you want to be more beautiful or handsome? How?inner beautykind
talented
humorous...outer beautymake upa better
personHow about writing?dress upThrough this class, we will know how to make our writing better from its “outer beauty” to “inner beauty”.Learning aimWhat kind of writing is a good writing?Cover all the contents (要点全)
Be well-organized (分段、逻辑)
Use advanced words and sentences (高级表达)
Show neat handwriting(规范书写)Beautiful Handwriting&
Good Structure
Outer Beauty - Handwriting&structureInner Beauty-Phrases
Good Phrases
Task 1(1). Mother’s Day is coming/approaching.
(2). Learning English well is very important.
(3). We should use the natural resources.
(4). As the number of Chinese learners is increasing, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.
drawing near/around the corner/on the wayof great importanceare supposed toon the riseon the increaseTask1 使用短语替换黑体部分Advanced and diverse sentencesTask 2Inner Beauty-Sentences1. We students can study happily and effectively only by combining work and play.
(话题：学习生活)
用only+状语置句首部分倒装句(inversion)改写：
2. As economy develops rapidly, we are living a happy life.（话题：社会生活）
用with复合结构改写黑体部分：
Task2 按要求改写以下句子Only by combining work and play can we students can study happily and effectively.With economy developing rapidly/With the rapid development of economy, we are living a happy
life.
3. Many highways have been built in China, and that makes it easier for people to travel from one place to another.（话题：社会发展）
用现在分词做结果状语改写黑体部分：
Many highways have been built in China, making it easier for people to travel from one place to another.Task2 按要求改写以下句子用which引导非限制性定语(attributive clause)
从句改写黑体部分：Many highways have been built in China, which makes it easier for people to travel from one
place to another.4. I am eager to participate in the volunteer work because I want to help more people.(话题：活动申请)
用The reason why...is that....改写：
The reason why I am eager to participate in the volunteer work is that I want to help more people.Task2 按要求改写以下句子Proper tansitional words/phrasesTask 3Inner Beauty-Transitional wordsAlso full points! As is known to all, music plays an important role in our life. I am fond of listening to light music when I am depressed, because it can cheer me up.
As far as I’m concerned, music is of great importance in our life. , it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, which can reduce our pressure in study and life. In addition, music provides us a platform where we can learn about another culture. , music is known as a universal language, which makes it easy for people from different countries to communicate with each other.
,music is a necessary part in our daily life, which makes our life colorful and wonderful.
To begin withLast but not leastIn a wordTask3：从以下表达中选择出一个最佳的填入横线，使文章完整 Last but not least；To begin with；In addition；
As far as I’m concerned；In a word；As is known to allAll roads lead to Rome. Inner Beauty-ProverbsPlay a gameChoose your lucky number!
1.失败是成功之母。
____________________________________
2.有志者，事竟成。
_____________________________________
Failure is the mother of success.Where there is a will, there is a way.
1.覆水难收
____________________________________
2.熟能生巧
_________________________________
It is no use crying over spilt milk.Practice makes perfect.
1.只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
_________________________________________
2.凡事都有利弊
_________________________________
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.Every coin has two sides.1. As the saying goes, “ ” So you had better adapt yourself to the life here in china soon.
2. As the proverb goes, “ ” So you are supposed to practise reading every day if you want to improve your English.
3. As we all know/As is known to us(all), “ ” Therefore, have strong will power and you will make your dream come true.
Do as the Romans do when in Rome. Practice makes perfect.Where there is a will, there is a way.Task4 请运用恰当的谚语补充到下面三个小情景中We can make our writing better from the aspects:
Beautiful Handwriting
Good Phrases First
Advanced Sentences
Transitional Words
Proper Proverbs
Task 5 Consolidation in class(运用所学策略润色以下文章)How can we make our writing better? ②__________________ (过渡), keep a positive attitude towards it. You are suffering the overwhelming stress because you and your parents value this exam too much. Bear in mind that it is not your final goal in your life. In addition, you’d better keep a balance between study and rest. Just as the saying goes, “ __________________________________(运用谚语)”. Enough exercise and sleep can help you study efficiently. What’s more, communicate more with reliable adults, and they can give you some help. Last but not least, if things are getting very serious, you must turn to a doctor for professional help.Transitional WordsProverbTo begin/start withAll work and no play makes Jack a dull boyDear Linlin,
①I’m sorry to hear that as the exam is coming, you feel extremely stressed. You should take measures to face this situation timely if you want to do well in the exam.
The following tips may be very helpful. Beautiful Phrases drawing near/around the corner/on the way ② (过渡), keep a positive attitude towards it. You are suffering the overwhelming stress because you and your parents value this exam too much. Bear in mind that it is not your final goal in your life. In addition, you’d better keep a balance between study and rest. Just as the saying goes, “ ”. Enough exercise and sleep can help you study efficiently. What’s more, communicate more with reliable adults, and they can give you some help. Last but not least, if things are getting very serious, you must turn to a doctor for professional help.To begin/start withAll work and no play makes Jack a dull boyThe reason why you are suffering the overwhelming stress is that you and your parents attach great importance to this exam.communicate more with reliable adults, who can give you some help.Advanced Sentences ③I believe that you can deal with the problem properly only by following these suggestions. I hope you can adapt yourself soon and get excellent grades in the final exam. I believe, only by following these suggestions can you deal with the problem properly. Advanced Sentences
①I’m sorry to hear that as the exam is drawing near, you feel extremely stressed. You should take measures to face this situation timely if you want to do well in the exam.
The following tips may be very helpful.
②To begin with, keep a positive attitude towards it. The reason why you are suffering the overwhelming stress is that you and your parents value this exam too much. Bear in mind that it is not your final goal in your life. In addition, you’d better keep a balance between study and rest. Just as the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Enough exercise and sleep can help you study efficiently. What’s more, communicate more with reliable adults, who can give you some help. Last but not least, if things are getting very serious, you must turn to a doctor for professional help.
③I believe that only by following these suggestions can you deal with the problem properly. I hope you can adapt yourself soon and get excellent grades in the final exam.
We can make our writing better from the aspects:
Beautiful Handwriting
Good Phrases First
Advanced Sentences
Transitional Words
Proper Proverbs
Monitor's SummayHoweverIf you can't use advanced phrases and sentences correctly, simple words and sentences would be OK!1.要有主题句意识。开门见山，让人一目了然，所以我们通常把主题句放在句首，有时也放在句尾。
2.要有高分句意识。高分句可以用复合句、特殊句式（尤其是强调句等），还可以使用谚语。高分句可以放在每一段的首句，这样给人耳目一新的感觉；高分句也可以放在文章的结尾，给人以厚重的感觉。
3.要有段落意识。这样层次分明，条理清晰。每一段的段首或者段尾有一个高分句，能为文章增色不少。
4.要书写优美。一篇优秀的作文犹如一件艺术品，书写清楚，字母大小写匀称，单词间距适当，给人以美的享受，这样的作文何尝不会得高分呢？RememberTeacher's Words
You are buds of flower,
you are wings of eagle,
and you are the glory of future!
你是花季的蓓蕾，你是展翅的雄鹰，你们是未来的光辉！
高考加油！Thank You!HOMEWORK：Rewrite the following passage
I know you like Chinese traditional culture. The Dragon Boat Festival is coming, so I’d like to invite you to spend the festival with my family.
First, the Dragon Boat Festival happens on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year to show respect for Qu Yuan, a poet who gave his life to his country. According to the custom, it is a day when we prepare and eat zongzi, and it is sticky rice wrapped in leaves. If you come, I’ll show you how to make it. What’s more, the festival is best known for dragon boat races(要求强调dragon boat races), so we’ll go to Olympic Water Park to enjoy the strong atmosphere of the festival after having breakfast of zongzi. In a nutshell, you will learn more about Chinese traditional culture only by participating in these activities.
I really hope you can come and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
I know you are fond of/are keen on Chinese traditional culture. With the Dragon Boat Festival drawing near/As the Dragon Boat Festival is drawing near, I’d like to invite you to spend the festival with my family.
To begin with, the Dragon Boat Festival falls/is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year to show respect for Qu Yuan, a poet who gave his life to his country. According to the custom, it is a day when we prepare and eat zongzi, which is sticky rice wrapped in leaves. If you come, I’ll show you how to make it. What’s more, it is dragon boat races that the festival is best known for, so we’ll go to Olympic Water Park to enjoy the strong atmosphere of the festival after having breakfast of zongzi. In a nutshell, only by participating in these activities will you learn more about Chinese traditional culture.
I really hope you can come and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Your Writing Bettermake up 化妆Do you want to be more beautiful or handsome? How?inner beautykind
talented
humorous...outer beautymake upa better
personHow about writing?dress upThrough this class, we will know how to make our writing better from its “outer beauty” to “inner beauty”.Learning aimWhat kind of writing is a good writing?Cover all the contents (要点全)
Be well-organized (分段、逻辑)
Use advanced words and sentences (高级表达)
Show neat handwriting(规范书写)Beautiful Handwriting&
Good Structure
Outer Beauty - Handwriting&structureInner Beauty-Phrases
Good Phrases
Task 1(1). Mother’s Day is coming/approaching.
(2). Learning English well is very important.
(3). We should use the natural resources.
(4). As the number of Chinese learners is increasing, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.
drawing near/around the corner/on the wayof great importanceare supposed toon the riseon the increaseTask1 使用短语替换黑体部分Advanced and diverse sentencesTask 2Inner Beauty-Sentences1. We students can study happily and effectively only by combining work and play.
(话题：学习生活)
用only+状语置句首部分倒装句(inversion)改写：
2. As economy develops rapidly, we are living a happy life.（话题：社会生活）
用with复合结构改写黑体部分：
Task2 按要求改写以下句子Only by combining work and play can we students can study happily and effectively.With economy developing rapidly/With the rapid development of economy, we are living a happy
life.
3. Many highways have been built in China, and that makes it easier for people to travel from one place to another.（话题：社会发展）
用现在分词做结果状语改写黑体部分：
Many highways have been built in China, making it easier for people to travel from one place to another.Task2 按要求改写以下句子用which引导非限制性定语(attributive clause)
从句改写黑体部分：Many highways have been built in China, which makes it easier for people to travel from one
place to another.4. I am eager to participate in the volunteer work because I want to help more people.(话题：活动申请)
用The reason why...is that....改写：
The reason why I am eager to participate in the volunteer work is that I want to help more people.Task2 按要求改写以下句子Proper tansitional words/phrasesTask 3Inner Beauty-Transitional wordsAlso full points! As is known to all, music plays an important role in our life. I am fond of listening to light music when I am depressed, because it can cheer me up.
As far as I’m concerned, music is of great importance in our life. , it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, which can reduce our pressure in study and life. In addition, music provides us a platform where we can learn about another culture. , music is known as a universal language, which makes it easy for people from different countries to communicate with each other.
,music is a necessary part in our daily life, which makes our life colorful and wonderful.
To begin withLast but not leastIn a wordTask3：从以下表达中选择出一个最佳的填入横线，使文章完整 Last but not least；To begin with；In addition；
As far as I’m concerned；In a word；As is known to allAll roads lead to Rome. Inner Beauty-ProverbsPlay a gameChoose your lucky number!
1.失败是成功之母。
____________________________________
2.有志者，事竟成。
_____________________________________
Failure is the mother of success.Where there is a will, there is a way.
1.覆水难收
____________________________________
2.熟能生巧
_________________________________
It is no use crying over spilt milk.Practice makes perfect.
1.只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
_________________________________________
2.凡事都有利弊
_________________________________
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.Every coin has two sides.1. As the saying goes, “ ” So you had better adapt yourself to the life here in china soon.
2. As the proverb goes, “ ” So you are supposed to practise reading every day if you want to improve your English.
3. As we all know/As is known to us(all), “ ” Therefore, have strong will power and you will make your dream come true.
Do as the Romans do when in Rome. Practice makes perfect.Where there is a will, there is a way.Task4 请运用恰当的谚语补充到下面三个小情景中We can make our writing better from the aspects:
Beautiful Handwriting
Good Phrases First
Advanced Sentences
Transitional Words
Proper Proverbs
Task 5 Consolidation in class(运用所学策略润色以下文章)How can we make our writing better? ②__________________ (过渡), keep a positive attitude towards it. You are suffering the overwhelming stress because you and your parents value this exam too much. Bear in mind that it is not your final goal in your life. In addition, you’d better keep a balance between study and rest. Just as the saying goes, “ __________________________________(运用谚语)”. Enough exercise and sleep can help you study efficiently. What’s more, communicate more with reliable adults, and they can give you some help. Last but not least, if things are getting very serious, you must turn to a doctor for professional help.Transitional WordsProverbTo begin/start withAll work and no play makes Jack a dull boyDear Linlin,
①I’m sorry to hear that as the exam is coming, you feel extremely stressed. You should take measures to face this situation timely if you want to do well in the exam.
The following tips may be very helpful. Beautiful Phrases drawing near/around the corner/on the way ② (过渡), keep a positive attitude towards it. You are suffering the overwhelming stress because you and your parents value this exam too much. Bear in mind that it is not your final goal in your life. In addition, you’d better keep a balance between study and rest. Just as the saying goes, “ ”. Enough exercise and sleep can help you study efficiently. What’s more, communicate more with reliable adults, and they can give you some help. Last but not least, if things are getting very serious, you must turn to a doctor for professional help.To begin/start withAll work and no play makes Jack a dull boyThe reason why you are suffering the overwhelming stress is that you and your parents attach great importance to this exam.communicate more with reliable adults, who can give you some help.Advanced Sentences ③I believe that you can deal with the problem properly only by following these suggestions. I hope you can adapt yourself soon and get excellent grades in the final exam. I believe, only by following these suggestions can you deal with the problem properly. Advanced Sentences
①I’m sorry to hear that as the exam is drawing near, you feel extremely stressed. You should take measures to face this situation timely if you want to do well in the exam.
The following tips may be very helpful.
②To begin with, keep a positive attitude towards it. The reason why you are suffering the overwhelming stress is that you and your parents value this exam too much. Bear in mind that it is not your final goal in your life. In addition, you’d better keep a balance between study and rest. Just as the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Enough exercise and sleep can help you study efficiently. What’s more, communicate more with reliable adults, who can give you some help. Last but not least, if things are getting very serious, you must turn to a doctor for professional help.
③I believe that only by following these suggestions can you deal with the problem properly. I hope you can adapt yourself soon and get excellent grades in the final exam.
We can make our writing better from the aspects:
Beautiful Handwriting
Good Phrases First
Advanced Sentences
Transitional Words
Proper Proverbs
Monitor's SummayHoweverIf you can't use advanced phrases and sentences correctly, simple words and sentences would be OK!1.要有主题句意识。开门见山，让人一目了然，所以我们通常把主题句放在句首，有时也放在句尾。
2.要有高分句意识。高分句可以用复合句、特殊句式（尤其是强调句等），还可以使用谚语。高分句可以放在每一段的首句，这样给人耳目一新的感觉；高分句也可以放在文章的结尾，给人以厚重的感觉。
3.要有段落意识。这样层次分明，条理清晰。每一段的段首或者段尾有一个高分句，能为文章增色不少。
4.要书写优美。一篇优秀的作文犹如一件艺术品，书写清楚，字母大小写匀称，单词间距适当，给人以美的享受，这样的作文何尝不会得高分呢？RememberTeacher's Words
You are buds of flower,
you are wings of eagle,
and you are the glory of future!
你是花季的蓓蕾，你是展翅的雄鹰，你们是未来的光辉！
高考加油！Thank You!HOMEWORK：Rewrite the following passage
I know you like Chinese traditional culture. The Dragon Boat Festival is coming, so I’d like to invite you to spend the festival with my family.
First, the Dragon Boat Festival happens on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year to show respect for Qu Yuan, a poet who gave his life to his country. According to the custom, it is a day when we prepare and eat zongzi, and it is sticky rice wrapped in leaves. If you come, I’ll show you how to make it. What’s more, the festival is best known for dragon boat races(要求强调dragon boat races), so we’ll go to Olympic Water Park to enjoy the strong atmosphere of the festival after having breakfast of zongzi. In a nutshell, you will learn more about Chinese traditional culture only by participating in these activities.
I really hope you can come and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
I know you are fond of/are keen on Chinese traditional culture. With the Dragon Boat Festival drawing near/As the Dragon Boat Festival is drawing near, I’d like to invite you to spend the festival with my family.
To begin with, the Dragon Boat Festival falls/is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year to show respect for Qu Yuan, a poet who gave his life to his country. According to the custom, it is a day when we prepare and eat zongzi, which is sticky rice wrapped in leaves. If you come, I’ll show you how to make it. What’s more, it is dragon boat races that the festival is best known for, so we’ll go to Olympic Water Park to enjoy the strong atmosphere of the festival after having breakfast of zongzi. In a nutshell, only by participating in these activities will you learn more about Chinese traditional culture.
I really hope you can come and I’m looking forward to your early reply.