Unit 1 Nothing ventured Writing 课件(41张PPT)
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课件41张PPT。Which part make you worried most
in the English test? why?Don’t worry! My tips may help you!Writing Guidance——How to develop your ideas 文章定档 颜值当道外在美 开头美词汇美衔接美外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。颜值还是颜值！！！！
开头美：提炼题干信息，开门见山，说明原由，反复修改，避免任何错误。表达美外在美Attitude decides altitude！First impression is very important.外在美Breakdown!!!!!!Am I beautiful？外在美Think twice before acting. Teachers feel overjoyed when they read me.First impression is of great importance.五档：漂漂亮亮 （21—25分）
四档：有模有样 （16—20分）
三档：马马虎虎 （11—15分）
二档：稀里糊涂 （6—10分）
一档：一塌糊涂 （0—5分）
加拿大高中生David在互联网上登出启事，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是中学生李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一份电子邮件作一个自我介绍。主要内容如下：
1、你是如何得知他的愿望；
2、你愿意成为他的朋友；
3、你的基本情况的介绍：兴趣、爱好等；
4、打算如何帮助他。
Self-examination大家共同修正下面的卷子…I am knew you hepe made a chinese friend from online. That I want to make a foreng friend, too. so I want to make you friend. I am lihua, a from China high school student. When I was want on line see your notice. I am writing to tell you I would make friend with you and get along with you. I am Lihua, a student who from Gu Ming Middle School and I am active student. I am writing to tell you I would like to be your friend and give a lot of Chinese thing to you. I am Lihua, a student from China. Hearing the news on Internet that you intended to make a Chinese friend to have a good knowledge of Chinese language and culture. I am willing to be your pen-friend.
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抓住题干 开门见山 说明原由
Practice Makes Perfect Practice makes perfect.It means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing, you will be perfect in it. 1、 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求建议。假若你是李华，代表全班同学用英语给图书馆王老师写一封建议信，说明推荐新书的理由。 2、假设你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼，请给他写一封信。Practice (Write para1) Practice one (Write para1) 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求建议。假若你是李华，代表全班同学用英语给图书馆王老师写一封建议信，说明推荐新书的理由。 Knowing that our school library is going to buy some new books to enrich and widen students' knowledge. I am on behalf of all my classmates writing to give you some suggestions .Practice two (Write para1) 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼。Dear Li Ming,
Knowing that you are having trouble adapting to the new learning environment, and it is not uneasy to imagine that you feel very lonely. But I think the situation is easy to change if you can follow my advice below. 010203Writing structure ?How to enrich the main part? WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraphsIt is called
“ Idea ”
Your ideas count most about writing the main part.
Exercise 1 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter非常关心你的备考情况及你的高考后的安排，因此，他来信向你询问相关的情况。请你据此给 Peter写封回信。写一封邮件介绍有关情况。
Beginning?Ending?Beginning :
I’m glad to receive your letter asking about my preparations
for Gaokao and arrangements after Gaokao. I’m writing to
tell you some details. Ending:
I really appreciate your care and concern. Can you share your
plans for the coming holiday with me?
……WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraph1234IDEAS学习knowledgereview knowledge身体healthkeep healthy心态mindsetadjust mindsetPreparations ……
According to
your own
experience
I study hard and even stay up late in order to get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up later, ____ _____ ___ help me get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up later, _____ _____ get a higher mark. whichaimstoaimingto补充目的……I study hard and even stay up late.
I want to get a higher mark. ____ ______ _____I study hard and even stay up late ____ ____ I want to get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late ______ __ the fact that I want to get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late because I want to get a higher mark. The reason whyis that……补充原因because ofI study hard and even stay up late.
I want to get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late so that I can get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late, ____ ______a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late, ____ ____ help me get a higher mark. thus gettingwhich can补充结果……I study hard and even stay up late.
I want to get a higher mark. WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraph1234IDEASreview knowledgekeep healthyadjust mindset+R P R (Reasons
Purposes
Results)Preparations WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraph1234IDEASWhat about your arrangements after Gaokao?…so that…The reason why……which aims to……thus doing…… because … …in order to…Arrangements Delighted to receive your letter asking about my preparations
for the coming Gaokao and my arrangements after the exam, I’m
writing to tell you more details.
When making preparations, I spare no efforts to do
exercises every day and even stay up late so that I can be
admitted into a key university. Besides, I attach importance
to adjusting my state of mind, aiming to relieve my stress. As
for my plans after the exam, taking a part-time job comes on
the top of my list, which helps me learn to be independent
and prepare myself for my college life.
Thanks for your care and concern, so what about your holiday
plan?
Dear Peter,Yours,
Li Hua (1). 非谓语在写作中的运用to do (作目的状语，作后定表动作未发生)
doing （表伴随，原因和结果，方式状语，作后定表动作正在
进行） 主动关系
done （ 表原因和方式状语， 作后定表示被动或完成） 被动关系
eg. With a lot of work to do, he worked from morning to night.
Faced with so much school work, we have to stay up late.
When meeting problems, we can turn to teachers for help.
＊简单句到高级亮点句的蜕变（再精彩）(2). 并列句在写作中的运用 两个或两个以上的简单句用“连词”连在一起构成的句子，叫做
并列句，各个并列句中的各简单句意义同等重要，相互之间没有
从属关系，它们之间用连词连接。常用连接词如下：
（1） and/or/or else/but/so /for/ as well as/ both...and/ not...but... not only...but (also),
neither...nor , either...or..,
（2）however/therefore/otherwise/ while/ still/yet等连用。
eg. He is our teacher. He is also our friend.
He is not only our teacher but also (he is) our friend.
Not only is he our friend, but also (he is) our friend.
eg. Our teachers shouldn’t be too kind or strict .
Our teachers should be neither too kind nor (they are) too strict .
Neither should our teachers be too kind t nor (they are) too strict.
(3).复合句在作文中的运用 复合句由就是主句或几个从句，由关联词相连接，如定于从句,状语从句或
名词性从句。复合句的使用不仅能使句子结构清晰，层次分明，上下文更加流
畅，同时也能充分展示作者运用较复杂语法结构的能力。如：
1) Water is important because man can’t live without it.
Water, without which man can’t live , is of great importance.
(定从)
2) Protecting our environment is very important.
I’m firmly convinced that protecting our environment is very
important.（宾从）
There is no doubt that protecting our environment is very
important. （同从）
It’s important that protecting our environment is very important. (主从)
3) The life of Senior 3 is busy and hard .We should persist in studying hard.
Even though the life of Senior 3 is busy and hard ,we should persist in studying hard. （让步状从）
4) You study hard and you can succeed .
You efforts can pay off on condition that you persist in studying hard. ( 条件状从)
4) We should turn off the light when we leave the classroom.
Make sure to form the habit of turning off whenever we leave the classroom. (祈使句)
5) There is too much homework to do, so we stay up late at night.
With too much work to do, we stay up late at night. (with 的复合结构)
6) When some people are taking a shower, they make water run all the time.
Some people are taking a shower, with water running all the time. (with 的复合结构)
(4).其它固定句式（强调，倒装，感叹，祈使句，复合结构） 固定句式可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映考生
的语言运用能力。如：
1) We can only lead a happy life when everyone takes care of the environment.
Only when everyone takes care of the environment can we only lead a happy life. (倒装句)
2) I’m lucky to be his student.
How lucky I’m to be his student. (感叹句)
3)We make great progress with Mr Wang’s help and encouragement.
It’s with Mr Wang’s help and encouragement that we make great progress . (强调句）
(5). 高级、亮点词汇的运用在作文写作中，除多用复杂句式外，多运用高级、亮点词汇同样能
让你文章出彩和与众不同，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：
1. A good relationship between teachers and students is good for our study.
2. It’s very important to protect our environment.
3. I think only in this way can we get on well with our teachers.
4. I think we will realize our dream if we study hard.
From my point of view, our dream will be realized through our diligence and persistence.is beneficial to/bebefits of great significance/importance I’m firmly convinced that…….be on good terms with(2018天津春季高考)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为Chris的外国学生发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris留言：
（1）鼓励他来中国留学；
（2）说明来华留学的好处
（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。
Exercise 2
Beginning (Your opinion)2. Main Part (Your reasons)3. Ending (Your offer)Reasons for
studying in China……Finish the main part (Choose 2 ~ 3 ideas). （2018北京春季）
假如你是李华，请给你的澳大利亚笔友Jack写一封邮件，介绍你近期参加的学校国画社团经常举办的活动情况并谈谈收获和感受。
Exercise 3HomeworkFinish exercise 3 into a
complete composition.
. 2. Polish your composition.
in the English test? why?Don’t worry! My tips may help you!Writing Guidance——How to develop your ideas 文章定档 颜值当道外在美 开头美词汇美衔接美外在美：第一印象很重要！书写清楚，字母匀称，词、行间距适当，卷面整洁。颜值还是颜值！！！！
开头美：提炼题干信息，开门见山，说明原由，反复修改，避免任何错误。表达美外在美Attitude decides altitude！First impression is very important.外在美Breakdown!!!!!!Am I beautiful？外在美Think twice before acting. Teachers feel overjoyed when they read me.First impression is of great importance.五档：漂漂亮亮 （21—25分）
四档：有模有样 （16—20分）
三档：马马虎虎 （11—15分）
二档：稀里糊涂 （6—10分）
一档：一塌糊涂 （0—5分）
加拿大高中生David在互联网上登出启事，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是中学生李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一份电子邮件作一个自我介绍。主要内容如下：
1、你是如何得知他的愿望；
2、你愿意成为他的朋友；
3、你的基本情况的介绍：兴趣、爱好等；
4、打算如何帮助他。
Self-examination大家共同修正下面的卷子…I am knew you hepe made a chinese friend from online. That I want to make a foreng friend, too. so I want to make you friend. I am lihua, a from China high school student. When I was want on line see your notice. I am writing to tell you I would make friend with you and get along with you. I am Lihua, a student who from Gu Ming Middle School and I am active student. I am writing to tell you I would like to be your friend and give a lot of Chinese thing to you. I am Lihua, a student from China. Hearing the news on Internet that you intended to make a Chinese friend to have a good knowledge of Chinese language and culture. I am willing to be your pen-friend.
Paragraph1
抓住题干 开门见山 说明原由
Practice Makes Perfect Practice makes perfect.It means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing, you will be perfect in it. 1、 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求建议。假若你是李华，代表全班同学用英语给图书馆王老师写一封建议信，说明推荐新书的理由。 2、假设你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼，请给他写一封信。Practice (Write para1) Practice one (Write para1) 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求建议。假若你是李华，代表全班同学用英语给图书馆王老师写一封建议信，说明推荐新书的理由。 Knowing that our school library is going to buy some new books to enrich and widen students' knowledge. I am on behalf of all my classmates writing to give you some suggestions .Practice two (Write para1) 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼。Dear Li Ming,
Knowing that you are having trouble adapting to the new learning environment, and it is not uneasy to imagine that you feel very lonely. But I think the situation is easy to change if you can follow my advice below. 010203Writing structure ?How to enrich the main part? WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraphsIt is called
“ Idea ”
Your ideas count most about writing the main part.
Exercise 1 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter非常关心你的备考情况及你的高考后的安排，因此，他来信向你询问相关的情况。请你据此给 Peter写封回信。写一封邮件介绍有关情况。
Beginning?Ending?Beginning :
I’m glad to receive your letter asking about my preparations
for Gaokao and arrangements after Gaokao. I’m writing to
tell you some details. Ending:
I really appreciate your care and concern. Can you share your
plans for the coming holiday with me?
……WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraph1234IDEAS学习knowledgereview knowledge身体healthkeep healthy心态mindsetadjust mindsetPreparations ……
According to
your own
experience
I study hard and even stay up late in order to get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up later, ____ _____ ___ help me get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up later, _____ _____ get a higher mark. whichaimstoaimingto补充目的……I study hard and even stay up late.
I want to get a higher mark. ____ ______ _____I study hard and even stay up late ____ ____ I want to get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late ______ __ the fact that I want to get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late because I want to get a higher mark. The reason whyis that……补充原因because ofI study hard and even stay up late.
I want to get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late so that I can get a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late, ____ ______a higher mark. I study hard and even stay up late, ____ ____ help me get a higher mark. thus gettingwhich can补充结果……I study hard and even stay up late.
I want to get a higher mark. WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraph1234IDEASreview knowledgekeep healthyadjust mindset+R P R (Reasons
Purposes
Results)Preparations WordsPhrasesSentencesParagraph1234IDEASWhat about your arrangements after Gaokao?…so that…The reason why……which aims to……thus doing…… because … …in order to…Arrangements Delighted to receive your letter asking about my preparations
for the coming Gaokao and my arrangements after the exam, I’m
writing to tell you more details.
When making preparations, I spare no efforts to do
exercises every day and even stay up late so that I can be
admitted into a key university. Besides, I attach importance
to adjusting my state of mind, aiming to relieve my stress. As
for my plans after the exam, taking a part-time job comes on
the top of my list, which helps me learn to be independent
and prepare myself for my college life.
Thanks for your care and concern, so what about your holiday
plan?
Dear Peter,Yours,
Li Hua (1). 非谓语在写作中的运用to do (作目的状语，作后定表动作未发生)
doing （表伴随，原因和结果，方式状语，作后定表动作正在
进行） 主动关系
done （ 表原因和方式状语， 作后定表示被动或完成） 被动关系
eg. With a lot of work to do, he worked from morning to night.
Faced with so much school work, we have to stay up late.
When meeting problems, we can turn to teachers for help.
＊简单句到高级亮点句的蜕变（再精彩）(2). 并列句在写作中的运用 两个或两个以上的简单句用“连词”连在一起构成的句子，叫做
并列句，各个并列句中的各简单句意义同等重要，相互之间没有
从属关系，它们之间用连词连接。常用连接词如下：
（1） and/or/or else/but/so /for/ as well as/ both...and/ not...but... not only...but (also),
neither...nor , either...or..,
（2）however/therefore/otherwise/ while/ still/yet等连用。
eg. He is our teacher. He is also our friend.
He is not only our teacher but also (he is) our friend.
Not only is he our friend, but also (he is) our friend.
eg. Our teachers shouldn’t be too kind or strict .
Our teachers should be neither too kind nor (they are) too strict .
Neither should our teachers be too kind t nor (they are) too strict.
(3).复合句在作文中的运用 复合句由就是主句或几个从句，由关联词相连接，如定于从句,状语从句或
名词性从句。复合句的使用不仅能使句子结构清晰，层次分明，上下文更加流
畅，同时也能充分展示作者运用较复杂语法结构的能力。如：
1) Water is important because man can’t live without it.
Water, without which man can’t live , is of great importance.
(定从)
2) Protecting our environment is very important.
I’m firmly convinced that protecting our environment is very
important.（宾从）
There is no doubt that protecting our environment is very
important. （同从）
It’s important that protecting our environment is very important. (主从)
3) The life of Senior 3 is busy and hard .We should persist in studying hard.
Even though the life of Senior 3 is busy and hard ,we should persist in studying hard. （让步状从）
4) You study hard and you can succeed .
You efforts can pay off on condition that you persist in studying hard. ( 条件状从)
4) We should turn off the light when we leave the classroom.
Make sure to form the habit of turning off whenever we leave the classroom. (祈使句)
5) There is too much homework to do, so we stay up late at night.
With too much work to do, we stay up late at night. (with 的复合结构)
6) When some people are taking a shower, they make water run all the time.
Some people are taking a shower, with water running all the time. (with 的复合结构)
(4).其它固定句式（强调，倒装，感叹，祈使句，复合结构） 固定句式可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映考生
的语言运用能力。如：
1) We can only lead a happy life when everyone takes care of the environment.
Only when everyone takes care of the environment can we only lead a happy life. (倒装句)
2) I’m lucky to be his student.
How lucky I’m to be his student. (感叹句)
3)We make great progress with Mr Wang’s help and encouragement.
It’s with Mr Wang’s help and encouragement that we make great progress . (强调句）
(5). 高级、亮点词汇的运用在作文写作中，除多用复杂句式外，多运用高级、亮点词汇同样能
让你文章出彩和与众不同，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：
1. A good relationship between teachers and students is good for our study.
2. It’s very important to protect our environment.
3. I think only in this way can we get on well with our teachers.
4. I think we will realize our dream if we study hard.
From my point of view, our dream will be realized through our diligence and persistence.is beneficial to/bebefits of great significance/importance I’m firmly convinced that…….be on good terms with(2018天津春季高考)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为Chris的外国学生发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris留言：
（1）鼓励他来中国留学；
（2）说明来华留学的好处
（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。
Exercise 2
Beginning (Your opinion)2. Main Part (Your reasons)3. Ending (Your offer)Reasons for
studying in China……Finish the main part (Choose 2 ~ 3 ideas). （2018北京春季）
假如你是李华，请给你的澳大利亚笔友Jack写一封邮件，介绍你近期参加的学校国画社团经常举办的活动情况并谈谈收获和感受。
Exercise 3HomeworkFinish exercise 3 into a
complete composition.
. 2. Polish your composition.