课件25张PPT。Proof reading短 文 改 错短文改错专题复习 I work very hardly and I love my students very much. hard In my spare time, I enjoy listen to music, but I can’t sing well.listeningI am fond of dancing, but I’m a bit shy.However, I don’t like sports. I always eat a lot but I never gains weight. gain Nice to meet you here, and I hope to make friends with all of you. Warming upII I feel nervous these days. The annual college entrance examination is come. I don’t know what to deal with it. I want to be good prepared for it, but I don’t know where to start. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lesson and spend at least two hours on doing my homework at home. I want to make up what I missed but I just can’t concentrate myself. I stay up late and sometimes I fall asleep in the class, so the teachers are angry with me. Besides, my parents knew that and shouted at me yesterday. They think I am a lazy boy and they are disappointing with me. I am warned that if we don’t do my best I won’t have the chance to go to university. The pressure often make me awake at night. I nearly break down. What should I do? Can you help me? comingDear Danny,Yours,
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考点学习IIIWhen I opened the door and apologize for my being late, my English teacher did not blame me.
2. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming
has already become a very serious problem.
3. The boy went over at once, opened his umbrella for the
grandpa. (2016全国冲刺训练卷五)
4. It’s difficult to understanding why he was absent from
the meeting.
5. We must found ways to protect our environment.apologizedopeningunderstandfindTips:Observe & Discover时态、修改动词(verb)非谓语形式、情态动词、语态…6. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and
gain knowledges we can’t get from books. (2016课标全国卷II)
7. The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult
time for me. (2016课标全国卷II)
8. A group of sheeps are eating grass and leaves at the foot
of the hill. knowledgeyearssheepTips:可数与不可数、名词所有格、单复数变化修改9. At one time, I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand
me so I hoped I could be freely from them. (2016课标全国卷III)
10. It was raining heavy. Little Mary felt cold, so she stood
closely to her mother.
11. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I
decide to ask her for help. (2015高考陕西卷)
12. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.
(2009陕西)
freebestheavilycloseTips:形容词修饰名词、副词修饰动词、相互转换、
三个等级(原级、比较级、最高级)修改形容词和副词(adjective & adverb)faster13. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with
many trees around them.
14. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and
over again that I’ll concentrate more on studies.
15. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.
16. He has three children, both of whom are doctors.
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in kitchen. (2016高考四川卷)
18. If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for
another 30 minutes.
19. What a fun it is to have a cold drink on a hot day!thetheTips:特指、泛指、习惯搭配改增删20. Now I am leaving home to college. (2016课标全国卷III)
21. We got up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the
house, and then went on shopping. (2016高考四川卷)
22. On the development of industrialization, the environment
has been polluted.forWithTips: 固定短语、习惯搭配改增删23. Though it was cold, but he went out without a hat.
24. It turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the
shelf by mistake. (2010·陕西卷)
25. I said I missed them and asked that if they wanted to
spend some time together.
26. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.
(2015年课标全国卷II)
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答题指导及练习IV My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.wherehavehonestyandof ahissteadilyused
Steps of doing proof reading(解题步骤)
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .
(浏览全文,掌握大意)
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the
mistakes. (逐句研读,逐行找错)
3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers
and correct the difficult ones. (检查核对,攻克难点)
修改符号不规范不给分修改后的单词不放在错词正下方不给分RequirementsRequirements只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分用铅笔改错不给分!The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. (2016年课标全国卷III) IyearsworstmyselfsofreewearingfortoldThe more we practice,
the easier it will be. My passion is to encourage peoples and inspire them to be all that they can be. I have find my purpose. I have found my strength. And I want you to find your. Don’t be afraid failing. Every time you fall down, every time you fail, you learn something newly. You are ready for a next one. You’ve learned that how not to do something. Well then, learn from it but move on. Leave what’s behind and press forward . You can only win, if you don’t give in. Go for it. Don’t let anything hold you back. If anything is holding me back, what’s holding you back?
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