定语从句在写作中的运用课件（31张）
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课件31张PPT。Welcome to our class
He who is content is always happy.
知足者常乐
2. Everything is ready, and all that we need is an east wind.
万事俱备，只欠东风
3. All that glitters is not gold .
并非所有发光的都是金子
4. He who laughs last laughs best .
谁笑到最后，谁笑的最好
5. Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
世上无难事，只怕有心人ProverbsAttributive clauses in writing1. I will organize some campus activities, like “English Evening”, a platform ________ students can show their English （2013年天津卷）
2. My physics teacher is my role model, _______ influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.（2012安徽卷）wherewhoseStep1：Blank-filling3.But I'd like to attend the English lectures, ______________ I can get more information on British and American culture. (湖南)
4. In the English corner, I meet many friends, ________ share the same interest with me.
5. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer _________brought you great pain. （重庆）from whichwhowhichThey showed us around the farm.
we saw many beautiful flowers on the farm.They showed us around the farm _________ we saw many beautiful flowers.whereStep2：Combining the sentencesThe elderly always feel lonely.
We sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.
We sent the elderly ______ always feel lonely some fruits, _______ the rooms and had a good chat with them.whocleanedI'd like to attend the English lecture.
I can get more information on British and American culture from the English lecture.I'd like to attend the English lecture, ___________ I can get more information on British and American culture.from whichHe refused the invitation for the reason.
The reason is not clear. The reason ______ he refused the invitation
is not clear. why
I've always longed for the days.
I will be able to go out to enjoy the beauty of nature then.I've always longed for the days ________ I will be able to go out to enjoy the beauty of nature.when1.Children eat a lot of sugar often get bad teeth.
2.David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village. (全国卷)
3. The weather turned out to be very good, that was more than we had expected.
4. Anyone who want to go to the film tonight writes down your name here.
who^__which__wantsStep3：Error-correction1. Born in a poor family in South Africa, Nelson Mandela, the son of the black people, grew up in a society which the white people looked down upon him, is one of the most famous people in the world.
—where—growingAppreciate and correct the
students ' writing 2. Lang lang, a brilliant pianist, who expressed a keen interest in music at the age of two when he was attracted by a piece of music from cartoon.
3. As a teacher, who often helps those who have difficulty in doing their homework , is kind, helpful and patient.^heCommon mistakes1. 误用关系词：thatwhichwhere
2. 只有从句，无主句
3. 定语从句的主谓一致问题
4. 从句中多了代词
5.乱用关系词：多用或少用
2013新课标I假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。
1.我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。
My uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.
2. 我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。
I’ve asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you have asked for before.Step4：Translation2012年【全国卷I新课标卷】
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
1. I have learnt the news on the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp in Singapore, which I am fond of for a long time.
2. I’ve learned on the Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held in Singapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.
3. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
多样化表达（2013年高考山东卷）
描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.which will enrich my life and broaden my horizons.I plan to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to the society.I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,2016 合肥三模作文
近年，青少年学生的体质问题越来越受到关注，假如你是李华，请你给某学生英语报写一封信，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，倡议同学们积极锻炼，强身健体。建议内容包括：
1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动兴趣的培养
1. make a plan .
keep us on the right track./ live a regular life./stick to it.
2. take part in both in and after-class activities.
make our school life colorful ./ improve our learning/relax ourselves.
3. develop our interest.
motivate us to do more sports.
enhance our academic performances/achievements.
2016 合肥三模作文
近年，青少年学生的体质问题越来越受到关注，假如你是李华，请你给某学生英语报写一封信，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，倡议同学们积极锻炼，强身健体。建议内容包括：
1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动兴趣的培养
It is a good idea to make a practical exercise plan and stick to it, which can keep us on the right track.
We need to take an active part in both in and after-class activities , which will not only make our school life colorful , but also improve our learning.
where we can relax ourselves both physically and mentally.1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动兴趣的培养
The most important thing ( that) we should keep in mind is to develop our interest in sports. As the saying goes, interest is the best teacher. Our love for sports will motivate us to do more activities , which in turn can enhance our academic achievements.
__________________, it is a good idea to make a practical exercise plan and stick to it, which can keep us on the right track.
_____________, We need to take an active part in both in and after-class activities , which will not only make our school life colorful , but also improve our learning.
where we can relax ourselves both physically and mentally. The most important thing ( that) we should keep in mind is to develop our interest in sports. As the saying goes, interest is the best teacher. Our love for sports will motivate us to do more activities , which in turn can enhance our academic achievements.First and foremostIn addition向一位外国朋友介绍中国的基本情况：
面积：960万平方公里，是世界第三大国
民族：56个民族，其中汉族(the Han Ethnic Group)是最大的一个，占94%
河流：许多大河流，其中最重要的河流有长江、黄河
经济状况：曾经落后于世界许多国家，但随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返，所有中国人都为此感到自豪。 HomeworkThank you! 1. 众所周知，中国有960万平方公里的土地， 是世界第三大国。
2. 中国有56个民族，其中汉族(the Han Ethnic Group)是最大的一个，占94%。
3. 中国有许多大河流，其中长江、黄河是最重要 的河流。
4. 曾有一段时间，中国的经济落后于世界许多 国家。
5. 随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去 不复返，所有中国人都为此感到自豪。
【5个句子】* Group work: 根据写作内容，构思正确的定语从句。1. 众所周知，中国有960万平方公里的土地，是世界第三大国.
As is known to all, China, with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest country in the world.3.中国有许多大河流，其中长江、黄河是最重要的河流。
There are many big rivers in China, the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.2. 中国有56个民族，其中汉族(the Han Ethnic Group) 是最大的一个，占94%。
China has 56 peoples , among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, accounting for 94% of the whole.4. 曾有一段时间，中国的经济落后于世界许多国家。
There was a time when China's economy was far behind many other countries’ in the world.5.随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返，所有中国人都为此感到自豪.
With the development of economy, the days are gone when the Chinese people were looked down upon, which all Chinese are proud of. As is known to all, China, with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest country in the world. China has 56 peoples, among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, accounting for 94% of the whole. Besides, there are many big rivers in China, the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River. There was a time when China's economy was far behind many other countries’ in the world. However, with the development of economy, the days are gone when the Chinese people were looked down upon, which all Chinese are proud of.Thank you!
He who is content is always happy.
知足者常乐
2. Everything is ready, and all that we need is an east wind.
万事俱备，只欠东风
3. All that glitters is not gold .
并非所有发光的都是金子
4. He who laughs last laughs best .
谁笑到最后，谁笑的最好
5. Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
世上无难事，只怕有心人ProverbsAttributive clauses in writing1. I will organize some campus activities, like “English Evening”, a platform ________ students can show their English （2013年天津卷）
2. My physics teacher is my role model, _______ influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.（2012安徽卷）wherewhoseStep1：Blank-filling3.But I'd like to attend the English lectures, ______________ I can get more information on British and American culture. (湖南)
4. In the English corner, I meet many friends, ________ share the same interest with me.
5. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer _________brought you great pain. （重庆）from whichwhowhichThey showed us around the farm.
we saw many beautiful flowers on the farm.They showed us around the farm _________ we saw many beautiful flowers.whereStep2：Combining the sentencesThe elderly always feel lonely.
We sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.
We sent the elderly ______ always feel lonely some fruits, _______ the rooms and had a good chat with them.whocleanedI'd like to attend the English lecture.
I can get more information on British and American culture from the English lecture.I'd like to attend the English lecture, ___________ I can get more information on British and American culture.from whichHe refused the invitation for the reason.
The reason is not clear. The reason ______ he refused the invitation
is not clear. why
I've always longed for the days.
I will be able to go out to enjoy the beauty of nature then.I've always longed for the days ________ I will be able to go out to enjoy the beauty of nature.when1.Children eat a lot of sugar often get bad teeth.
2.David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village. (全国卷)
3. The weather turned out to be very good, that was more than we had expected.
4. Anyone who want to go to the film tonight writes down your name here.
who^__which__wantsStep3：Error-correction1. Born in a poor family in South Africa, Nelson Mandela, the son of the black people, grew up in a society which the white people looked down upon him, is one of the most famous people in the world.
—where—growingAppreciate and correct the
students ' writing 2. Lang lang, a brilliant pianist, who expressed a keen interest in music at the age of two when he was attracted by a piece of music from cartoon.
3. As a teacher, who often helps those who have difficulty in doing their homework , is kind, helpful and patient.^heCommon mistakes1. 误用关系词：thatwhichwhere
2. 只有从句，无主句
3. 定语从句的主谓一致问题
4. 从句中多了代词
5.乱用关系词：多用或少用
2013新课标I假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。
1.我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。
My uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.
2. 我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。
I’ve asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you have asked for before.Step4：Translation2012年【全国卷I新课标卷】
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
1. I have learnt the news on the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp in Singapore, which I am fond of for a long time.
2. I’ve learned on the Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held in Singapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.
3. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
多样化表达（2013年高考山东卷）
描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.which will enrich my life and broaden my horizons.I plan to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to the society.I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,2016 合肥三模作文
近年，青少年学生的体质问题越来越受到关注，假如你是李华，请你给某学生英语报写一封信，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，倡议同学们积极锻炼，强身健体。建议内容包括：
1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动兴趣的培养
1. make a plan .
keep us on the right track./ live a regular life./stick to it.
2. take part in both in and after-class activities.
make our school life colorful ./ improve our learning/relax ourselves.
3. develop our interest.
motivate us to do more sports.
enhance our academic performances/achievements.
2016 合肥三模作文
近年，青少年学生的体质问题越来越受到关注，假如你是李华，请你给某学生英语报写一封信，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，倡议同学们积极锻炼，强身健体。建议内容包括：
1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动兴趣的培养
It is a good idea to make a practical exercise plan and stick to it, which can keep us on the right track.
We need to take an active part in both in and after-class activities , which will not only make our school life colorful , but also improve our learning.
where we can relax ourselves both physically and mentally.1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动兴趣的培养
The most important thing ( that) we should keep in mind is to develop our interest in sports. As the saying goes, interest is the best teacher. Our love for sports will motivate us to do more activities , which in turn can enhance our academic achievements.
__________________, it is a good idea to make a practical exercise plan and stick to it, which can keep us on the right track.
_____________, We need to take an active part in both in and after-class activities , which will not only make our school life colorful , but also improve our learning.
where we can relax ourselves both physically and mentally. The most important thing ( that) we should keep in mind is to develop our interest in sports. As the saying goes, interest is the best teacher. Our love for sports will motivate us to do more activities , which in turn can enhance our academic achievements.First and foremostIn addition向一位外国朋友介绍中国的基本情况：
面积：960万平方公里，是世界第三大国
民族：56个民族，其中汉族(the Han Ethnic Group)是最大的一个，占94%
河流：许多大河流，其中最重要的河流有长江、黄河
经济状况：曾经落后于世界许多国家，但随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返，所有中国人都为此感到自豪。 HomeworkThank you! 1. 众所周知，中国有960万平方公里的土地， 是世界第三大国。
2. 中国有56个民族，其中汉族(the Han Ethnic Group)是最大的一个，占94%。
3. 中国有许多大河流，其中长江、黄河是最重要 的河流。
4. 曾有一段时间，中国的经济落后于世界许多 国家。
5. 随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去 不复返，所有中国人都为此感到自豪。
【5个句子】* Group work: 根据写作内容，构思正确的定语从句。1. 众所周知，中国有960万平方公里的土地，是世界第三大国.
As is known to all, China, with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest country in the world.3.中国有许多大河流，其中长江、黄河是最重要的河流。
There are many big rivers in China, the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.2. 中国有56个民族，其中汉族(the Han Ethnic Group) 是最大的一个，占94%。
China has 56 peoples , among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, accounting for 94% of the whole.4. 曾有一段时间，中国的经济落后于世界许多国家。
There was a time when China's economy was far behind many other countries’ in the world.5.随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返，所有中国人都为此感到自豪.
With the development of economy, the days are gone when the Chinese people were looked down upon, which all Chinese are proud of. As is known to all, China, with an area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest country in the world. China has 56 peoples, among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, accounting for 94% of the whole. Besides, there are many big rivers in China, the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River. There was a time when China's economy was far behind many other countries’ in the world. However, with the development of economy, the days are gone when the Chinese people were looked down upon, which all Chinese are proud of.Thank you!