高中英语译林版模块九Unit 1 Other countries, other cultures写作课件（35张）

课件35张PPT。
How to polish up the Composition（1）遇难心不慌，遇易心更细。Learning aims1.to learn six writing skills in a composition
2 to use writing skills polish up a composition Dividing of science and art is an important choice for every senior high school student. Some students support it. First, it can reduce the pressure of students. Second, they can spare more time to learn their favorite subjects.
However, the rest of the students do not agree with it. First, students believe they do not develop the whole knowledge system. If they can not form it, they will not use their knowledge well. Second, it is hard for them to find jobs in the future.
In my opinion, senior high students should divide the science and art. It not only does harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot. Therefore, the thing that we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16 marksPlease give me a score(分数)①②③④⑤⑥ Some students support it. (原文)
some students ____ in _____ ____ it.
It is hard for them to find jobs in the future. (原文)
They have ______ __ ______jobs in the future.
1.We are considering the matter of money
We are ________ the matter of money ____ __________.
2.Computers are very important in our life.
Computers ____ ____ very important ______ in our life.
aretakingfavorofplayconsiderationintoarole单词不如短语妙difficultyinfindingTask 1: change words into phrases Dividing of science and art is an important choice for every senior high school student. Some students it. First, it can reduce the pressure of students. Second, they can spare more time to learn their favorite subjects.
However, the rest of the students do not agree with it. First, students believe they do not develop the whole knowledge system. If they can not form it, they will not use their knowledge well. Second, they jobs in the future.
In my opinion, senior high students should divide the science and art. It not only does harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot. Therefore, the thing that we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________are in favor of have difficulty in finding② They can spare more time to learn their favorite subjects.
More time can be spared by them to learn their favorite subjects.
Which sentence can get a higher score？英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态；英语中经常用是事物或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，使你的句子更地道。如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整篇文章句型丰富。The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present problem.
Immediate measures should ___ _____ to deal with the present problem.
People suggest that they should put off the conference.
people suggest that the conference should __ ___ ___
___ ___ ___________ that the conference be put off.
(it 做形式主语)
3. We can borrow five books at a time, and we can keep them for ten days.
Five books can ___ ________at a time and they can
___ _______ for ten days.
主动不如被动好 beIt suggestedistakenoffputbekept be be borrowed Task 2: rewrite sentences using passive voice(被动) Dividing of science and art is an important choice for every senior high school student. Some students are in favor of it. First, it can reduce the pressure of students. Second, to learn their favorite subjects..
However, the rest of the students do not agree with it. First, students believe they do not develop the whole knowledge system. If they can not form it, they will not use their knowledge well. Second, they have difficulty in finding jobs in the future.
In my opinion, senior high students should divide the science and art. It not only does harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot. Therefore, the thing that we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________More time can be spared by them③ It not only does harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot.
____ ____ _____it harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot.
Not 倒装(inversion)是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在写作文时我们需掌握倒装最基本的三种形式。如何应用倒装，有如下方法和技巧。 onlydoes Task 3: rewrite sentences using inversion (倒装)1.否定词开头：1. I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.
____ ____ ___understand the importance of English at that time.
2.We had no sooner finished our dinner than the electricity was cut off.
_____ _________ ________ we finished our dinner than the electricity was cut off.
3. We did not realize our mistake until at that time.
______ ______ at that time _____ we realize our mistake.
Hardly could I sooner Nohad until Not did 把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。2.地点状语开头Some beautiful flowers stand on the bank.
On the bank ______ some beautiful flowers.
Our library lies in the center of our school.
In the center of our school ______ our library.standlies_____________________________Do you think this sentence is good? Why? In the center of our school lies our library， which is between the garden and the teaching building.
在地板上的是我的小妹妹，今年12岁。
On the floor is my little sister, who is 12 year old this year.
Discussion 3.Only的倒装句：I can improve my English only in this way.
Only in this way ___ __ _______ my English.
He realized he had made a big mistake only when you get to the top of the mountain.
Only when you get to the top of the mountain ______ _____ ___________ he had made a big mistake.
陈述不如倒装巧I canimprove_________________didherealize__________________________________________________________________ Dividing of science and art is an important choice for every senior high school student. Some students are in favor of it. First, it can reduce the pressure of students. Second, More time can be spared by them to learn their favorite subjects..
However, the rest of the students do not agree with it. First, students believe they do not develop the whole knowledge system. If they can not form it, they will not use their knowledge well. Second, they have difficulty in finding jobs in the future.
In my opinion, senior high students should divide the science and art. it harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot. Therefore, the thing that we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.
________________________________________________________________________Not only does④ students believe they do not develop the whole knowledge system.
___ ____ the whole knowledge system _____ students believe they do not develop.Itisthat强调是一种修辞手法，作为高级句型常在作文当中使用， 是人们为了表达自己的意愿或情感而使用的一种形式。强调的方式有很多种，最重要的是it is/was … that,可强调句子的主语 ,状语和宾语等。__________________________________Task 4: rewrite sentences using stressed sentences (强调句)1. Smoking did great harm to his health.
____ _____ ________ ______did great harm to his health.
2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.
___ ____ _____ ____ _____ _____ our money is earned by our parents.ItwassmokingthatworkhardthroughisItthat3. 正是老师们帮助我们成长的。
It is our teachers that/who help us grow up.
4.正是在那个美丽的地方我第一次见到她。
It was in the beautiful place that I met her for
the first time.
We met her for the first time in
the beautiful place
简单不如强调高 Dividing of science and art is an important choice for every senior high school student. Some students are in favor of it. First, it can reduce the pressure of students. Second, More time can be spared by them to learn their favorite subjects..
However, the rest of the students do not agree with it. First, the whole knowledge students believe they do not develop. If they can not form it, they will not use their knowledge well. Second, they have difficulty in finding jobs in the future.
In my opinion, senior high students should divide the science and art. Not only does it harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot. Therefore, the thing that we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.
________________________________________It isthat⑤ The thing that we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.
_____ we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.What 名词性从句是语法中难点的难点，却也是 写作文增分添彩的重点，种类和形式有许多种，我们目前要掌握的就是what 引导的主语从句在作文当中的运用。_________________________________________________Task 5: rewrite sentences using subject clauses(主语从句)
1) His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me most.
_____ _______ _______most was his wonderful performance on the stage.
2) It satisfies me. Our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.
_____ _______ _____ ___ _____ our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.
3) I learn from the story that if we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.
_____ _______ ______from the story ___ ___ if we have patience, confidence and perseverance（毅力）, we can realize our dreams.WhatWhatimpressedmesatisfiesmeisthatthatislearnI What最使我兴奋的是我最终通过了考试。
What excited me most was that I went through the
exam at last.
我今天想说的是只要你努力学习，你就会通过考试。
What I want to say today is that as long as you
work hard, you will go through the exam.主语从句很重要 Dividing of science and art is an important choice for every senior high school student. Some students are in favor of it. First, it can reduce the pressure of students. Second, More time can be spared by them to learn their favorite subjects..
However, the rest of the students do not agree with it. First, it is the whole knowledge that students believe they do not develop. If they can not form it, they will not use their knowledge well. Second, they have difficulty in finding jobs in the future.
In my opinion, senior high students should divide the science and art. Not only does it harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot. Therefore, we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.
___________________what⑥ If they can not form it, they will not use their knowledge well.
Not _______ it, they will not use their knowledge well.forming 几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成分词结构这个最大的亮点(Highlight)。Task 6: rewrite sentences using non-finite verbs (非谓语)1. If you work harder, you will do better in the exam next time.
harder, you will do better in the exam next time.
2. Because my friend was frightened of losing his job, he said nothing to the police.
__________ of losing his job, my friend said nothing to the police.Working Frightened 3.The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
__________ the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.
4.当面对难题时，他向我求助。
When facing the difficult problem, he turned to me for help.
When faced with the difficult problem he turned to me for help.
When he faced the difficult problem, he turned to me for help.
从句不如分词傲Hearing Dividing of science and art is an important choice for every senior high school student. Some students are in favor of it. First, it can reduce the pressure of students. Second, More time can be spared by them to learn their favorite subjects..
However, the rest of the students do not agree with it. First, it is the whole knowledge that students believe they do not develop. , they will not use their knowledge well. Second, they have difficulty in finding jobs in the future.
In my opinion, senior high students should divide the science and art. Not only does it harm to students’ development, but also the whole nation will suffer a lot. Therefore, what we need to do is that we must take effective measures to take the place of dividing of science and art.
Not forming it
值得提醒的是，我们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。多看 多背 多模仿 多翻译怎么做：Tips: 1.We bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,_______ and ________ all the way.
(有说有笑）
2. Great changes took place in our hometown between 1998 and 1999.(使用强调句型)
Task 7 rewrite these sentences using the writing skills learnt today It was between 1998 and 1999 that great changes took place in our hometown.talking laughing
3．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.4. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Task 8 DiscussionHow to polish up this composition with the writing skills learnt. When we face this situation, we should take action to use water resources. On the one hand, our government should make powerful laws and strengthen supervision . On the other hand, we students should also do our share, such as not leaving the water running. Water is precious to human beings. We can improve the situation only when everyone takes their responsibility!

Faced with this situation, what we should do is to take immediate and effective measures to make the best of water resources . On the one hand, powerful laws must be made by the government and supervision should be strengthened. On the other hand, it is we students who should also do our part, such as not leaving the water running. Water is precious to human beings. Only when everyone takes their responsibility can we make the most of the water .
Summary单词不如短语好
主动不如被动妙
陈述不如倒装巧
简单不如强调高
从句不如分词傲
主语从句很重要Homework 1. Rewrite your composition by yourself.
2. Finish the rest of the composition “Live on water, save on water” Thank you，good bye愿同学们像这匹骏马，驰骋在高考的征程中，创造自己的辉煌！Good Luck To You