高中英语译林版模块九Unit 1 Other countries, other cultures writing课件（21张）

课件21张PPT。How to write a good summary!Steps for writing a summary(步骤)ReadFindRewriteJoinRead the passage for overall content (通读全文领略大意).Reread carefully, find out the topic.Write in our own words.In our final draft, insert transitional words and phrases where necessary. (用连词连接各部分)Details ExamplesRepetitionsAn example It was dusk and as I walked alone through the mountains of Greece, I came across six large wolves that were feeding on the body of a dead animal. I had heard many stories about wolves as a child and it was this animal that I feared more than any other.
As I approached, the wolves left the body and started walking towards me, one after another. They stopped about 20 metres from me and stared. The animals looked both beautiful and terrifying. As I drew nearer, the lead wolf raised its head and let out a loud howl. The awful cry rang out across the silent valley. A more frightening sound I had never heard. I was almost certain it signalled death.
Every moment I expected to see the pack dash at me. I knew my only hope was to show my courage. I walked past the line of wolves, like a general moving among his soldiers. They howled out again. But when they saw that their war-cry did not cause me to change my direction or make me run, they feared to come after me; so they let me pass and returned to the dead animal.
Had I turned back or tried to run away when they marched out to meet me I am certain the whole pack would have attacked me in a moment. But my show of courage scared them and kept them back．
Find the answers the author the mountains of Greece duskcame across six large wolves and they let me pass It’s important to show courage when faced with danger.What is the passage about?An experienceUseful sentencesThe passage is mainly about…
The author tells us a story that...
The story is mainly about…and it tells us that…
The author tells us a story about a …
According to the passage, the hero in the story…Possible versions: 1) The story is mainly about the frightening experience of the author’s meeting six large wolves and how he showed his courage and walked past them bravely when faced with danger. (30)
2) The author tells us his experience that he bumped into six large wolves and that because of his courage he walked past them safely without being attacked. (27)Attention:Read and understand the passage.
Find the topic sentence and key words. Paraphrase the original sentences instead of copying them. 改写而不是抄袭。
Omit the details and reduce the examples. 省略细节和缩减例子。
Don’t include your own opinion. Simplify the descriptions. Control the number of the words. 各种从句非谓语倒装句型with复合结构强调句型省略句型祈使句型虚拟语气How to upgrade a paragraph?Practice makes perfect!
Let’s have a try!Rewrite the following paragraph The picture shows that two men are trapped on a flooded island. In order to get out of the difficult situation, they adopt different attitudes to their ambitions. One of them just get lost in fantasy that he could have a boat to get across while the other invests his efforts in realizing his dream.
非谓语倒装句型省略句型各种从句虚拟语气with复合结构强调句型A Sample On the picture are two men trapped on a flooded island, one of whom leaning against a big tree dreams of there being a boat to cross the sea while the other invests his efforts in realizing his dream.倒装分词后定 （
）There being 复合结构It’s your turn to write a paragraph Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine.
Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod with bait, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didn’t catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff, preparing to go back home.
Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldn’t believe my ears. “Yes. It’s very important to be patient,” the old man said. “Don’t consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.” Suddenly, I understood what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didn’t move and waited for the right moment to reel it in. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish.
On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.Follow the stepsStep 1 Finish the task individually (check the spelling and grammatical mistakes on our own)
Step 2 Exchange with our desk classmates
Step3 Discuss within groups, polish up the passage and sort out the best one
Step4 Present the passage to the class
Step5 Grade the passages
Step6 Polish up the passage Rome was not built in a day! It’s vital for us to seize every chance to improve ourselves! It is a long way to go to get to our destination.听力完形填空阅读理解I am a slow walker , but I never walk backwards;
I devote every single day to my study.
I firmly believe nothing is impossible;
I am confident of myself;
I am proud of myself.
Success is ours for the taking!
I can! Yes, I can! Yes, I can!!Am I willing to seize every chance to improve myself?
Am I confident to write a good summary?
What have I learnt from my teammate?
Can I take an active part in a team?
Self-assessmentThank You