Unit 6 Healthy diet Writing 教案
▲ 教材分析
作为本单元 “健康饮食”的延续和补充，本节课要求学生学习餐馆点评的结构，并能仿照范文，就自己曾经就餐的餐馆撰写一则餐馆点评。写作话题贴近生活，能很好的把课本知识与日常生活有机结合，能激发学生的学习兴趣，且达到学以致用的目标。
▲ 学情分析
1. 学生对描述餐厅基本情况的词汇虽曾接触，但由于缺乏归纳和使用，在写作时对词汇的 选用受到局限。
2. 学生对如何评价作文的了解非常有限，需要不断的示范和引导。
▲ 教学目标
1 能使用合适的形容词描述就餐经历。
2 掌握写餐馆点评的基本框架，并能模仿范文，就自己曾就餐的餐馆撰写一则点评。
3 能根据作文结构，内容要点、时态对短文进行初步的评价。
▲ 教学重点
学习餐厅点评的结构并模仿进行写作。
▲ 教学难点
就自己曾就餐的餐馆撰写一则点评。
教学过程
教学环节
教师活动
学生活动
设计意图
Step1 （Leading-in）
*brainstorm What can attract you to go to the same restaurant?
Make Ss recall their experience in restaurants.
导入，吸引兴趣。教师 的陈述和提问为学生的对话做铺垫。
Step2 (Vocabulary recalling)
Get the Ss to recall and classify words for the review.
Recall some words to review a restaurant.
词汇的回忆归类能为下文的说和写做好词汇基础的准备。
Step3 (Structure learning)
*Have the Ss read the sample writing * Have the Ss fill in the structure of a restaurant review.
Read the sample writing and write down the main parts of a restaurant review.
餐厅评价范文的展示，从内容和结构上为学生提供了写的参考。
Step4 (Writing)
*Have the Ss write a restaurant review *Offer help.
Task2: Writing Get down to writing.
通过模仿进行餐厅评价的写作。
Step 5 (Evaluation)
*Guide the Ss to give evaluation to an article, and then to that of themselves.
Task3: Evaluate other’s works and that of themselves.
在范例的指引下进行自评，以达到以评促写的效果
Step 6 (Conclusion)
Have Ss review what they have learned.
Review the useful words , sentences pattern and the structure of restaurant.
回顾课堂所学，加深印象
Homework
1. 抄写单词和短语：review, title, serve, pound, pie, service, seat；(be) prepared to do sth.。
2. 修改完善自己的作文。
3. 完成学评Writing的练习。
课件21张PPT。Unit 6 Healthy dietWriting词汇
1.评论n. _________________
2. 牛排n.___________________
3. 沙拉n.____________________
4. 轻音乐n.__________________
5.服务员n.____________________ steaksaladsoft musicwaiter前置性作业review / comment词汇
6.咸的adj._________
7.美味的adj.___________________
8.放松的adj._________________
9. 极好的adj.__________________
10.最好的adj.________________ delicious/yummywonderful/fantasticgreat/perfectrelaxedsalty词汇
11.提供v. __________________
12.服务n.___________________
13. 尽管adv. _________________
14.尤其，特别adv. __________
15.环境n.____________________ servicethoughespeciallyenvironmentserve1.有点
2.吃饭；用餐
3.对… 感到满意
4.对…友好
5.西餐
短语a little/ a bit
have a meal
feel great with/be satisfied with
be friendly to
western food
6.首先
7.另外；此外
8.通常；大体上
短语first of all
in addition
in general
1.咖啡馆提供西餐。 (serve)
_________________________________
2.在那里吃饭我们每人花了120元。(pay)
________________________________
3.轻音乐使人放松。 (make sb.+adj.)
_________________________________The cafe serves western food.We paid about 120 yuan a person to eat there. Soft music makes us relaxed.4.对我来说，三明治很美味.
或；
It is delicious for me to taste these Sandwiches.
5.下次还会再光临。
__________________________________
6.我一定会向朋友推荐这家餐馆。
_________________________________ The Sandwiches are delicious for me.I will go there to have meals again. I would certainly recommend it to my friends.学习目标:
1、能使用合适的形容词描述就餐经历。
2、掌握写餐馆点评的基本框架，并能模 仿范文，就自己曾就餐的餐馆撰写一 则点评。
3、能根据作文结构，内容要点、时态对短文进行初步的评价。
Unit6 WritingBrainstormingBrainstorm the question below.What can attract you to go to the same restaurant again?The Jiumaojiu Restaurant is new and clean,but a little noisy. The wheaten food is tasty and special. It reminded me of my trip to Shanxi. And the waiter is polite and friendly. We paid120 yuan for the meal. I think I will come again.
( A restaurant review)
cleanclean
quiet
comfortable
beautiful
convenient romanticdirty
awful
noisy
messy
delicious
special
fresh
tasty
yummysmelly
horrible
too hot
light/salty
淡、咸
yucky
难吃的 rude
lazy
unfriendly
impolite
impatientfriendly
helpful
polite
patient
passionate
How to write
a restaurant review?A restaurant review is about your experience of eating at a restaurant.
You can find this kind of review on the Internet easily.A restaurant reviewHow to write a restaurant review? Title
? Opening
? Introduction
? Review of the food
? Review of the service
? Recommendation Other possible points:
Location; atmosphere, price, cleanliness, parking, etc.Opening Introduction Title Review of the food Recommendation Review of the service TitleOpeningReview of the foodReview of the serviceIntroductionRecommendationWriting 假设昨晚你与父母到绿茵阁(The Greenery Cafe)吃晚饭，请根据表格内容为该餐厅写一则评价。
123456Sample writing Excellent English food at the Greenery Cafe
Last Sunday, my family and I have a dinner at the Greenery Cafe. The cafe serves western food.
First of all, the price was a bit expensive. We paid about 280 yuan to have a meal there. The café was clean, quiet. Especially soft music made us relaxed. The food was wonderful. The steak and the salad tasted delicious/yummy though the soup was too salty.
In addition, the service was perfect. The waiters were friendly to us, but a little slow.
In general, I feel great with the Greenery Café and I will go there to have meals again. I would certainly recommend it to my friends.
1. 抄写单词和短语：review, title, serve, pound, pie,
service, seat；(be) prepared to do sth.。
2. 修改完善自己的作文。
3. 完成学评Writing的练习。 Homework
