Unit 4 Where’s my schoolbag? Section B 话题写作课件40张PPT

English Writing
写作训练
I’m Kitty.

Hello, everyone!
Nice to meet you!
Where is Kitty?
_____the box
in
_____the box
on
_________the box
next to
_________the box
above
_________the bed
under
What’s in the bedroom?
There is….
What’s +介词短语…?
There is/are….
My Bedroom
My Bedroom
要求： 仔细观察图片，以“My Bedroom”为题目写一篇短文，用 There be 句型描述图片中的物品，至少写出5句话。
My Bedroom
Showing Time
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
Your idea:
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
Your idea:
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
Your idea:
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
Your idea:
What’s next to the table? There is a chair.
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. What’s next to the table? There is a chair. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
Your idea:
We can divide(分成)the passage into three parts.
How can we make the passage better and better? (我们如何能使文章更好?)
Beginning
The structure of a good passage (好文章的结构)
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
Your idea:
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
Your idea:
Beginning
Ending
Beginning
Body
Ending
总领全文——引出话题
分层描述——诠释主题
总结全文——深化主题
What function does each part have? (文章各段的作用）
2. We can write a better beginning.
How can we make the passage better and better? (我们如何能使文章更好?)
We can divide(分成)the passage into three parts.
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
1、Topic Sentence ——主题句法
Two common kinds of beginning
2、Ask a question ——提问式
My Bedroom
Do you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me!
Two common kinds of beginning
2、Ask a question ——提问式
Two common kinds of beginning
1、Topic Sentence ——主题句法
3. We can write a better ending.
How can we make the passage better and better? (我们如何能使文章更好?)
We can divide(分成)the passage into three parts.
2. We can write a better beginning.
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.
1、Topic Sentence ----总结主题
Two common kinds of ending
2、Ask a question ——提问式
My Bedroom
….
….
Do you like my bedroom? Can you introduce yours to me?
Two common kinds of ending
Two common kinds of ending
1、Topic Sentence ----总结主题
2、Ask a question ——提问式
My Bedroom
Do you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me! There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. Do you like my bedroom? Can you introduce yours to me?
Which is better? Why?
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much. My Bedroom
Do you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me! There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. What’s next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? It’s on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. Do you like my bedroom? Can you introduce yours to me?
What’s your idea about the best passage?
Have a discussion in groups of four
(四人一小组进行讨论）
The standards of the best passage
Correct Expression 语言准确
Right Mind Logic 逻辑合理
Smooth Flow 条理清晰
4. Diverse Sentence Patterns 句式多样
5. Complete Structure 结构完整

You’re great！

CHANT
Good better best
Never let it rest
Till good is better
And better is best
Homework
要求：
1、仔细观察图片，以“My Bedroom”为题目，写出一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、结构完整的短文。
2、字数不得少于50词。