课件18张PPT。Writing (写作)Let’s describe the story!Write在一个晴朗的早晨,许多鹬鸟在海边寻找食物。many birdslook forfoodOn a sunny morning, many birds look for food on the seaside. 一只鸟妈妈让她的孩子去寻找食物,但小鸟害怕。a mother birdaskher childA mother bird asks her child to look for food, but the little bird is terrified.Writethe little birdterrified小鸟等着妈妈送来食物,然而妈妈走开了。the little birdwaitits motherThe little bird waits for its mother to bring food. However, its mother leaves.Writeleaveits mother因为小鸟肚子非常饿,所以不得不去海边找妈妈。the little birdhungryThe little bird is very hungry so it has to go to the seaside to find its mother.Writehave to一个海浪袭来,小鸟被淋湿(get wet)了。a sea wavecomeA sea wave comes and the little bird gets wet.Write小鸟再次躲进家里,不肯出来。the little birdThe little bird hides in its home again and doesn’t come out.WritehideWhat do you think the little bird will do next?
(你认为小鸟接下来会怎么做?)Discuss(讨论)中考作文考情分析中考作文评分要求第五档:(13~15分)全部或绝大部分要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。
第四档:(10~12分)全部或大部分要点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚。
第三档:(7~9分)大部分要点;语言有较多错误;尚能达意。
第二档:(4~6分)少部分要点;语言错误很多,只有个别句子可读。
第一档:(0~3分) 只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词。
How to write(如何写作)?叙事+翻译句子连接词50-70字讨论观点、结论句子连接词20-30字7-8个句子3-4个句子Conjunctions(连接词) On a sunny morning, many birds are looking for food on the seaside. A mother bird asks her child to look for food, but the little bird is terrified. The little bird waits for its mother to bring food. However, its mother leaves. The little bird is very hungry so it has to go to the seaside to find its mother. A sea wave comes and the little bird gets wet. The little bird hides in its home again and doesn’t come out.Conjunctions(连接词)1. 文章结构顺序:
firstly/first, secondly/second,
first of all, and then,
finally, in the end, at last
2. 并列补充关系:
what is more, as well as, not only…but (also), including
3. 转折对比关系:
however, but, although
on one hand…, on the other hand… Conjunctions(连接词)4. 因 果 关 系:
because, so, thus, therefore, as a result
5. 自己观点:
in my opinion, I think, I believe
6. 总结:
in short, in a wordHow to write a sentence(如何写句子)?在一个晴朗的早晨,许多鹬鸟在海边寻找食物。many birdslook forfoodOn a sunny morning, many birds look for food on the seaside. 小鸟太饿了。小鸟不得不再次出来,寻找食物。海浪再次袭来,像另外一只动物一样,小鸟躲进沙子里。在海水里,小鸟惊奇地发现了很多食物,并记住它们的位置。当海浪褪去之后,小鸟迅速地跑扑向它的食物。你从中学到了什么?要勇敢,要向别人多学习......Homework--WriteThank you!