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短文改错
试题分析与技巧点拨
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1、 漏词符号:(∧),在其下面写出该加的词。
2 、多词符号: ( \ ),删除多余的词直接在原文中用斜线划掉
3、错词符号: (____),在错词下面划线修改。
4、改错题中只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
一定要数着点,别盲目多改。
短文改错 请规范答题
1. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. (2013陕西卷)
2. I was only four when she passes away. (2013新课标I)
3. Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. (2013浙江卷)
4. As I tell you last time, I made three friends here.(2015, 四川)
5. Tony was scared and begun to cry.(2015, Ⅱ)
went
passed
are
题型探究1:
told
began
一、动词形常见错误
时态:一般过去时与一般现在时错用。
语态:主动语态与被动语态错用
主谓不一致,单复数问题。
and 前后动词时态不一致。(and具有对称性)
缺少谓语动词(尤其缺be动词)
二、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的错误。
1. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. (2013辽宁卷)
pictures
2. Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut
down the use of energy in our country. (2012全国I)
effort
题型探究2:
3. Mom taught me some basic step of baking. (2015新课标)
4. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. (2013陕西)
steps
minutes
5. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledges. (2016 全国二卷)
knowledge
1. After waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently.(2013陕西卷)
2. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two weeks.(2012浙江卷)
3. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. (2012浙江卷)
4. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows at the bird. (2014陕西卷)
5. I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.(2012全国新课标)
interesting
immediately
less
题型探究3:
impatient
Unfortunately
三、还要注意形和副
注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。
1修饰名词、be动词、系动词要用形容词;
2修饰动词、形容词、副词、整个句子用副词;
3比较级和最高级的使用。
四、非谓语,细辨别
1. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.(2013 陕西卷)
2. I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing. (2012 陕西卷)
3. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. (2014 陕西卷)
4. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou.
(2011 全国课标卷)
taken
Feeling
题型探究4:
buying
having
这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有V-ing ,V-ed,和to do错误。
both
our
1. We must find ways to protect your environment. (2015新课标)
2. I knew that they would be worried about myself because I was so far away.(2012浙江)
3. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things went wrong, I got angry and broke it. (2012新课标)
4. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. (2016 四川)
5.My cousin Xiao Hong and I went to …We were all sent to a nearby hospital and …
me
them
题型探究5:
his
五、 代词格,细领悟
人称代词主格和宾格,物主代词的使用.
2.反身代词oneself的使用.
3.不定代词的使用.
4.both,all,either,neither,none的使用.
of
on
1. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six miles. (2012辽宁卷)
2. Every day , he spends too much time with his work.
(2013辽宁卷)
3. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend.
(2012辽宁卷)
4. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. (2013新课标I)
as
题型探究6:
六、介词短语常常考 习惯用法要记住
主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识,其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。
1. “We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. (2013辽宁卷)
2. Having tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. (2013新课标II)
3. My classmate and I are talking about how to do during the vacation.(2012全国新课标)
4. I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China.
(2013浙江卷)
5. He turned around and found where his parents were missing. (2015 新课标)
what
which
题型探究7:
what
which
that
七、句子成分多分析
不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;
不同的语境要选择不同的词语。
名词性从句: what/ that
定语从句: which/ that/ who
and
2. His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmates, my school or just everything else I love in the world. (2013浙江卷)
3. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. (2013陕西卷)
but
4. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. (2012浙江卷)
but
1. Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. (2012全国II)
题型探究8:
they
八、逻辑错误须关注
与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误,如称谓上的张冠李戴。
1. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.(2013辽宁卷)
2. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(2012浙江卷)
3. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. (2012陕西卷)
4. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it. (2011陕西卷)
5. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited here unless the road was clear. (2012辽宁卷)
so/and
so
a
until
题型探究9:
the
九、冠词、连词常光顾
常考的错误形式有:连词but, and, or和so的用法错误,以及冠词的用法错误。
1)不定冠词a和an互改;
2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改;
3)根据需要增删冠词。
Let’s summary!
短文改错应注意的问题
四不改:
①标点符号不改。
②大小写不改。
③词序错误不改,一词不改成两词 。
④在纲外生词不改。
文中出现带汉语注释的词,在句中不可能用错。
游戏规则:
在此环节有一张王牌和四张挑战牌,分别红桃、方片、梅花和黑桃。每个小组选派一名组长来抽挑战牌,红桃与方片为战队A进行PK,则剩下两个小组为战队B,回答的先后顺序由牌的大小来决定。最后由组长决定出站的人选,第一轮获胜的两对进入最后一轮的PK,两次PK的人不能为同一个人。最后获胜的小组方可得到最终的王牌。
A
B
?
【2013·四川卷】Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty,
but I tried hardly to do it.
Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her
to copy my answers.
After think for some time, I let her copy my answers.
还要注意形和副
还要注意形和副
动词形
非谓语细辨别
difficult
hard
asked
thinking
非谓语细辨别
But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office.
The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.
We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.
I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me
名词数
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
动词形
代词格,细领悟
both
test
the
or
did
(2002春季) My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’ t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He does not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.
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