中考英语作文复习

中考英语作文复习
怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获取高分呢？
一、写作要点
“一审”即审题。
“二写”即列纲。
“三连”即连句成文。
“四改”即修改润色全文。
审题：做到三审

体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么
时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。
列纲：做到三思
词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
连句成文

根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。
文章分3段：
综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题
正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话
结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华
修改润色全文做到三查
要点、拼写、语法是否连贯
看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
连词： 连贯句子
1)表层次
first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly, to begin with, to start with, what is more, last, also, and then, next, besides At first; at last; in the end… then/next/after that…
when/while/as soon as/not… until…
in addtion finally On one hand ....on the other hand， each/one coin has two sides，
连词： 连贯句子
2)表转折；but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of， fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time…
3)表递近：in addition, besides, moreover, what’s more
4)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to, for, since, owing to, as a result (of), hence, thus
5)例证 for example, for instance, such as
连词： 连贯句子
6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.;
表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…;
7)总结 As I see, As for me ，As we all know, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact , in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up,
二、各类作文常用框架
1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to…..
On the one hand,…On the other hand,…
What’s more,…
In a word,/In short,….
2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about….
Different people have different opinions.
A thinks….
B thinks differently.….
As for me,/In my opinion, ….
All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
3、写信，建议
总-分-总
I’m adj to hear that you…
Here is some advice for you.
Firstly,….
Secondly,….
Finally,….
In a word,…If you…, you will…
习作点评
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
　　?What exactly your hobby is;
　　?When and how you became interested in this hobby;
　　?Why you enjoy your hobby;
　　?About your hopes and plans for the future.
　　写作要求：
　　1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。
　　2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。
　　3.词数60-80.
[学生习作A]
　　My hobby is read books. When I was seven years old. I became interested in reading books. I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me how to be a good person. Books even can solve many problems for me. I will read more good books to improve myself.
①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
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[点评]：档次12-14分。
①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。
②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者
但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自
然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。
③有少量错误。
[学生习作B]
　　My hobby is reading. Reading books is very enjoyable. When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before. I went to bed every night. The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself. Little by little I became interested in reading. I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world. When I read books, I can enjoy the beautiful sentences. At the same time I can improve my writing. I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.
①开门见山、点题。
　　②真情流露，理由充分。
　　③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡
自然、
　　④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
　　 [点评]：档次17-19分。
　　①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。
　　②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实
感，文章有感染力。
　　③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错
误，是一 篇高质量的作文。
高分突破
①文体：记叙文。
　　②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.
　　③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。
三、提高写作的方法
1、造句
Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves.
使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋叶之静美
2、摘录好句、积累名言谚语
学习
A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。 A good book is a good friend.好书如挚友。 All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。 All things are difficult before they are easy.凡事总是由难而易。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之计在于晨。
Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。。
Doing is better than saying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。 Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。
Every minute counts.分秒必争。 Easier said than done.说得容易，做得难。
Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。
Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。
It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。
Never say die.永不言败。
No pains, no gains.没有付出就没有收获。
Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。 Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 The early bird catches the worm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
健康 An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，不用请医生。 Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。 Health is better than wealth.健康胜过财富。
Health is happiness.健康就是幸福。
议论文 Every coin has two sides.事物有两面性
Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。
Money isn't everything.钱不是万能的。 Many heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠，赛过诸葛亮。 You cannot eat your cake and have it.鱼与熊掌，不可得兼。
Unity is strength.团结就是力量。
Think twice before you do.三思而后行。
句型转换，句式多样性
Tom is a student.
He is 16 years old.
He likes running
Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running.
多使用短语
I got up quickly.
I got up as quickly as possible.
He studies English well.
He is good at English.
He does well in English.
扩写
The girl likes reading.
The pretty girl likes reading novels.
The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.
The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.
句子的衔接词

并列关系：and，or，either ... or，both ...
and，not only ... but also. as well as
转折关系：but，however，yet，although
条件关系：if, whether，unless
时间关系：when，as，before，after，
while，until，since，as soon as
因果关系：because，as，since，for，so
范文点评
In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.?
In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. (But) she does housework and works hard in the factory. (When) I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. (When) I am ill, she looks after me carefully. (In a word), I will (not only) thank my mother for giving me life, (but also) thank her for helping me. (So) I love my mother very much.?
采分点 满分 可给分值
1.内容充实，
覆盖要点
（内容、要点）
7 6-7 描述所有信息，内容合理、丰富
3-5 描述了大部分信息，内容比较合理
1-2 描述了小部分信息，内容不合理
0 没有作答或描述内容与主题无关
2.用词适切，语法正确，句型多样（词汇、语法、句型） 7 6-7 用词适切，句型变化多样且有效，完全或
基本没有语言错误
3-5 用词基本适切，句型较为单一，有少量语
言错误但不影响理解
1-2 有较多语言错误，一定程度上影响理解
0 有大量语言错误，影响了理解
3.结构紧凑，意思连贯（语意、连词、指代） 4 3-4 行文连贯，连接词使用恰当，指代清晰
1-2 行文不够连贯，连接词使用不够恰当，
指代不够清晰 0 没有连贯的意识
4.书写规范，词数适宜
（标点符号、大小写、词数） 2 2 大小写、标点正确,词数达标,书写规范整洁
1 …有部分错误，词数达标，书写尚可辨认
0 …错误较多，语言应用不规范，词数严重不足，书写难以辨认
卷面、书写