课件33张PPT。Communication WorkshopUnit 11 How to write a letter for advicecontents导入新课 1收集素材 3 4审题构思 2连句成篇 5 6译写单句检查润色 7 8评估总结定稿誊写建议信特征ProblemAdviceReason审题与构思 假如你叫李华,是一位高中生。请你用英语给报社写一封信,反映如下情况并谈谈你的想法: 注意:1.信的开头和结尾已给出;2.词数:120左右
Dear Editor,
①I'm a senior high student. ②Now many students use mobile phones. ③They think it's a fashion to use mobile phones. ④Besides, it's very convenient to get in touch with their families and friends by using mobile phones. ⑤But some students break the rules in class. ⑥They bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ring of mobile phones in class. ⑦Some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phones.
⑧In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge. ⑨Therefore quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons. ⑩Those with mobile phones shouldn't take mobile phones to the classroom. ?We are supposed to concentrate on our studies. ? The school should make a rule to forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom.styletenseperson审题words Examining work Para.1Paragraph PlanPara.2Para.3ElementsConclusionStructure1.手机 2.方便的 3.?保持交流?
4.破坏纪律? 5.?手机铃声
6.?浪费宝贵时间 7.?发短信
8.?我认为 9.?获得知 10.?因此
11.?应 12.?集中注意力 13.?制定规则
14.?禁止 15.?除此之外 16.?甚至A.建议信开头常用句式?(照应材料,表明写作意图)??
1.I'm writing to express my views concerning ...
2.I’ll?try?to?make?some?conductive?suggestions.???
3.I?am?writing?to?you?for?the?purpose?of?-----
4. ?I?will?try?to?make?some?suggestions?here.?B.?表达建议(body)?
1.first,firstly,secondly….then,after?that,in?the?end.finally.Meanwhile,?what’s?more...?
2.I?think?it?would?be?more?beneficial?if?you?could?…
?3.?I?would?like?to?suggest/recommend?that…?
4.??I?suggest?that…????
5.?In?my?opinion,?it?would?be?wise?to?take?the?following?actions.?
6.?When?it?comes?to?such?a?situation,?I?would?like?to? suggest?that?you?can…?C.建议信结尾常用句式??
1.?I?believe?you?will?take?my?advice?into?account/consideration.?
2.?I?hope?you?will?find?these?proposals/suggestions??practical/useful/ helpful.?
3.?I?would?appreciate?it?very?much?if?you?could?consider?my? suggestions.?
4.??I?feel?that?it?would?be?beneficial?if?you?stick?to?it.?
5.?In?the?end,?I?will?be?glad?if?you?find?my?suggestions?useful.?
6.?I?hope?that?my?suggestions?are?helpful?for?sth./sb..?
7. I?will?be?looking?forward?to?your?reply.??
8.Please?take?good?consideration?of?my?advice.?Thanks.??D.写作中常用连接词:?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
(1)表选择关系或对等关系的连接词:?
either…or…,neither…nor,?or,?as?well?as…,?and,?both…and…?
(2)表因果关系或对等关系的连接词:
therefore,?so,?as?a?result,?as?the?result?of?…,because?of,?due?to?…,owing?to,?thanks?to等。??
(3)表时间顺序的连接词:
the?moment,?as?soon?as,?at?first,?then,?later,?meanwhile,?at?the?beginning,?in?the?end,?before?long,?for?the ?first(second…)time,?the?minute等。??
(4)表转折关系的连接词:
yet,?but?,?while,?on?the?contrary,?on?the?other?hand,?however,?at?the?same?time(然而)等。???
(5)表解释说明的连接词:
that?is,?that?is?to?say,?in?other?words,?such?as,?for?instance,?and?so?on,?etc.等。
(6)表递进关系的连接词:
not?only…but?(also),?what’s?more,?what's?worse,?besides,?in?addition,?worse?still,?moreover,?above?all等。??
(7)表示总结的连接词:
in?a?word,?on?the?whole,?in?short,?briefly,?in?brief,?to?sum?up,?in?all??
E.学习用从句:
1、定语从句??:先行词+关系词+定语从句?;
2、副词性从句:各类状语从句;
3、名词性从句:宾语从句、主语从句、表语从句、同位语从句译成单句连句成篇Question Did?I?use?linking words?to?connect?sentences?检查润色Ask yourself:(1)Did?I?leave?anything?out??
(2)Did?I?use?any?beautiful?expressions??
(3)Did?I?have?any?grammar?and?spelling?mistakes????????????????
(4)Did?I?use?any?linking words???Sample writingWriting Exchangewriting techniquesBeautiful?sentences定稿誊写评价和总结