课件26张PPT。北师大 高二 (5) Unit 13Enjoy an English song as usualUnit 13
Communication WorkshopWriting
Describing a Person Words to learnpart-time 兼职的
block 街区
salty 咸的satellite TVsatellite clawpeas yoghurt honeycarrotsWords to learnThe boy is sitting on his father’s lap.chewing gumWords to learnShe’s got wrinkles on her forehead.They’re great companions and are devoted to each other.Words to learn 动物或鸟的爪子
酸乳酪, 酸奶
咀嚼
卫星;人造卫星
皱纹
前额
大厦;街区
专心致志于,现身于
含盐的,咸的
同伴,伴侣
claw yoghurtchewsatellitewrinkle forehead blockdevotesalty companion description
b) background
c) relationships with neighbors
d) family lifeParagraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4 1. Read the passage and match these headings with the four paragraphs.Before you start2. Answer these questions about
Zhu Jinping.1) What does Zhu Jinping look like?
2) What does she like?
3) What is she like?She has got short, grey hair and clear brown eyes. She is quite short, a bit thin and she’s got lots of little wrinkles on her forehead.She likes children and animals, especially cats.She’s cheerful, generous and helpful.外表喜好性格1.Discuss the difficulties you have in writingWritingDon’t know how to write it.
Don’t know what to write.Don’t know what linking words to use.Lack enough vocabulary and
suitable sentence patterns.2. Now write a description of a person you like. Follow the stages below and you will get the solution.Stage 1
Decide who you are going to write about – someone in your family, a friend or a famous person.
Stage 2
Write some notes in the form of a diagram.AppearanceCharacterRelationshipsLikesDislikesDescribing
a personlong/short/shoulder-length black/blond/brown/dark/grey/red/ white/straight/wavyUseful vocabularyHair: Age:in her/his teens/twenties/thirties,
old, middle-aged, youngbeardmoustachewrinklesspecial
featuresgood-lookingoverweighttallshortthinGeneral physical
appearance:Personality:Aggressive, anxious, athletic, cheerful, creative, confident, generous, hard-working, helpful, honest, independent, kind, lazy, nervous, neat, organised, outgoing, patient, relaxed, reliable, selfish, shy, sociable, strong, weakLikes/Dislikes:animals, chess, computers, playing/listening to music, playing/watching sport, reading, traveling, watching videos.Stage 3
Write four paragraphs.Para 1
Introduce the person and give a bit of background, e.g. where he/she was born, where he/she lives now, his/her job, his/her likes and dislikes.
I’m going go write about my grandmother. She is called Zhu Jinping and she lives with my grandfather in a flat in…Para 2
Describe the person’s physical appearance (not too many details), personality and character.
Grandma has got short, grey hair and clear brown eyes. She is a very cheerful woman. In fact, she is always smiling!Para 3
Give some examples of the person’s behaviour or relationships with other people.
She is very popular with her neighbours, maybe because she is so helpful. For example, she often looks after children for people in her apartment block.Para 4
Give some examples of the person’s family life.
Grandma and grandpa often argue, especially about food.Linking: Giving ExamplesShe loves animals, especially dogs.
She hates junk food such as hamburgers.
She is helpful. For example, she often looks after children for people in …
Tense: The Present Simple Conclusion:the ways to write a composition:
Look for enough materials before writingHomework Polish your writing and hand it in tomorrow.
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