模块2 Unit 4 Cyberspace communication workshop课件 (共33张PPT)

课件33张PPT。 Writing
——Introduce a city
课型：写作课
Lead-in（导入）
As a member of Luoyang, do you know how to introduce your hometown?Learning aims
（学习目标）
1.learn some key phrases
2.know some writing skills
3.Use the skills to introduce a city根据以下信息，制作一张宣传页，向游客简单介绍洛阳，内容包括：
1.地位（河南省第二大城市）、地理位置（河南的西部）和人口（大约6百万）
2.洛阳历史悠久，可以追溯到大约5000年前。同时，洛阳也是个旅游的好地方，这里有很多著名景观，如老君山和王城公园
3.词数100左右。
Review（前提检测）
1.位于…的西部
2.有着…的人口
3. 众所周知
4.一个做…的好地方
5.著名景点
6.追溯到be located in the west of…have a population of…as we all knowa good place to do …famous sightsgo back to Self-learning（自问自解）Luoyang is __________ the west of Henan Province.located in洛阳Luoyang is _________
________（第二大城市）of Henan.the second
largest cityLuoyang ______________________________ about 7million.has a
population of_______________________
(众所周知)，Luoyang has ___________
(历史悠久)。As we all knowa long history__________________
白马寺White Horse
Temple______________
老君山Laojun
Mount________
________
王城公园Wangcheng
Park_________a lot of _________
(著名景点) in Luoyang, such as
____________,______________ and so on.There arefamous sightsLaojun MountWangcheng ParkLuoyang is a good place _________（一个旅游的好地方）. to travleGroup-learning
（互问合解）
Task 1:sum up the structure of the writing
Task 2:grade the following writing 范文要求:
根据以下信息，制作一张宣传页，向游客简单介绍伦敦，内容包括：
1.伦敦的地位（英国首都）、地理位置（英国的东部）和人口（大约7百万）
2.伦敦是个繁忙的城市，人们很友好并且乐于助人。
3.伦敦的天气变化无常(changeable)，伦敦有很多著名景观，如伦敦博物馆和海德公园（Hyde Park）
4.词数100左右。 As is known to all, London is the capital of Britain, which is located in the east of Britain. It is a big city with a population of about 7million.

London is also a busy place. People here are usually friendly and helpful, but they are often in a hurry. What impresses visitors most is the changeable weather .That’s why the English people always talk about the weather. London has many beautiful parks ,gardens and other famous places of interest, such as London Museum and Hyde Park.

All in all, London is such a beautiful city. If you come here, you will enjoy yourself.The Structure
Part1:
Part2:
Part3:基本情况（地位，位置，人口）特点特色（景点）表达欢迎根据以下信息，制作一张宣传页，向游客简单介绍洛阳，内容包括：
1.地位（河南省第二大城市）、地理位置（河南的西部）和人口（大约6百万）
2.洛阳历史悠久，可以追溯到大约5000年前。同时，洛阳也是个旅游的好地方，这里有很多著名景观，如老君山和王城公园
3.词数100左右。
作文评分标准
第五档(很好):(21-25分)
1.要点全，应用较多复杂的语法结构和词汇，
2.有少许错误，完全达到了预期写作目的
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1.漏掉1、2个次重点，应用一定的复杂语法结构和词汇，
2.有些许错误，达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1.漏掉一些内容，应用了一些语法结构和词汇，连接成分简单，
2.有一些错误，但不影响理解。
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
1.漏掉一些主要内容，语法结构单调，内容不连贯
2.有一些影响理解的错误。
第一档(差):(1-5分)
1.跑题，或者漏掉很多主要内容 ，语法结构单调，内容不连贯
2.有较多影响理解的错误。格式错误名词单复数错误时态错误短语错误Further-learning
（再问深解）The way to make the text better :
1.Use some“beautiful”phrases.
2.Use the complex sentence1.As is known to all , London is the capital of Britain.
2.London is located in the east of Britain.
As is known to all, London is the capital of Britain , which is located in the east of Britain. Luoyang is the second largest city in Henan.
Luoyang is located in the west of Henan.
Luoyang is the second largest city in Henan ,which is located in the west of Henan.London is a very big city.
London has a population of about 7 million.
London is a very big city with a population of about 7million.Luoyang is a big city.
Luoyang has a population of about 6million.Luoyang is a big city with a population of about 6 million.London is a busy city.
London is a beautiful city.
London is a busy city, and it is a beautiful city as well.Luoyang is a city with a long history.
Luoyang is a busy city.
Luoyang is a city with a long history, and it is a busy city as well.Evaluation（评估）
Yichuan is a beautiful city in Henan, ______ is located ___ the east of Luoyang. It has a population ___ about 1 million. Yichuan is famous ___ its attractive view and its long history _______. Therefore, it is a good place ________(visit).whichofforto visitinas wellReflection（课堂反思）Think about how to introduce a city
1.writing steps
2.writing skills
Homework（作业）
1.finish the writing
2.find more “beautiful” phrases for the writing.Thank you !