课件28张PPT。By Guo Qing
From No22.Senior High SchoolWritingTomb-sweeping DayThe Spring FestivalThe Lanterns FestivalThe Mid-autumn FestivalThe Dragon Boat FestivalTomb-sweeping Day
Response-testing gamethe Cold Food Festival/the Hanshi Festival.JieZitui and his
mother were
burnt to death
by fire.It originated fromburn incenseclear away weeds
around the tombsvisit the graves of one’s ancestors
/dead family memberspay respect to the deadadd fresh soil
to the tombset out offerings
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