高中英语复习北师大版选修模块8 Unit 23 Conflict communication workshop作文讲解与提升课件(共26张PPT)
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| 名称 | 高中英语复习北师大版选修模块8 Unit 23 Conflict communication workshop作文讲解与提升课件(共26张PPT) |  | |
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课件26张PPT。Unit23 communication workshop 作文讲解与提升Homework : A letter of complaint高考评分标准第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，覆盖所有的内容要点，用了丰富的语法结构，语法与高级词汇有少些错误，全篇流畅，连词使用较好。第四档（16-20） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，语法和词汇基本正确，有少些错误，主要是想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。第一档 （1-5） ：未完成试题规定的任务，只是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白写什么。0分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。第三档（11-15） ： 大错（时态、句子结构等）超过五六处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预期目的。书写潦草、字数不够 或未能传达读者任何信息，得 分 0 卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言 错误多;层次不清;得 分5Not good!思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文 无遗漏信息点（审题）
篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词
句式多样
地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？ 强调句倒装句
with复合结构advanced
sentences定语从句名词性从句非谓语动词常用谚语
被动句…一、主动句与被动句的互换。 操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.
Immediate measures should be taken to deal with the present financial crisis.
二、将陈述句改为倒装句。 操作难度★★★★ 写作效果★★★★1. I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.
Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.
2. We did not realize our mistakes until at that time.
Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes. 3.Though I’m weak, I will make the effort. (一般) Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. (高级)三、将简单句改为强调句。
操作难度★★★
写作效果★★★★1. Smoking did great harm to his health.
2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.
It was smoking that did great harm to his health.
It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents.四、将两个简单句合并为复合句。 操作难度★★★★★写作效果★★★★★1.定语从句（限制性和非限制性定语从句）
1 The woman is a teacher.
They wanted to visit the woman.
The woman whom they wanted to visit is a teacher.
2 I know the girl.
The girl’s mother is a teacher.
I know the girl whose mother is a teacher.
3 This is a truck.
It is made in China.
This is a truck which / that is made in China.
2. 主语从句
1) His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.
most was his wonderful performance on the stage.
2) It satisfied me. Our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.
our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.
3) I learned from the story that as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.
as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.What impressed meWhat satisfied me is thatWhat I have learnt from the story is that【推荐句型】：
What surprisesastonishedsatisfiedimpressed me is that…
What I would like to suggest advise put forward is that…
What matters most is that …
What I learnconclude from the story is that…五、 with 引导的短语或者复合结构 操作难度★★★★ 写作效果★★★★★With + 宾语+ adj./ adv./介词短语/to dodoingdone
常用句型
with a population of….
with a total area of…
with a long history of… years
1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用主语从句）
2. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
3. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇 It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help.
5.I won’t believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句）
6.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and…）
No matter what he says, I won’t believe. Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.7．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
8.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)
9.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)
10. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the more…the more)
No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.We all think highly of him .The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.但是值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。多看 多背 多模仿 多翻译Homework:How to beautify your composition?Please use what we have learnt to rewrite the letter of complaint
愿同学们像这匹骏马，驰骋在高考的征程中，创造自己的辉煌！Good Luck To You
篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词
句式多样
地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？ 强调句倒装句
with复合结构advanced
sentences定语从句名词性从句非谓语动词常用谚语
被动句…一、主动句与被动句的互换。 操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.
Immediate measures should be taken to deal with the present financial crisis.
二、将陈述句改为倒装句。 操作难度★★★★ 写作效果★★★★1. I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.
Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.
2. We did not realize our mistakes until at that time.
Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes. 3.Though I’m weak, I will make the effort. (一般) Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. (高级)三、将简单句改为强调句。
操作难度★★★
写作效果★★★★1. Smoking did great harm to his health.
2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.
It was smoking that did great harm to his health.
It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents.四、将两个简单句合并为复合句。 操作难度★★★★★写作效果★★★★★1.定语从句（限制性和非限制性定语从句）
1 The woman is a teacher.
They wanted to visit the woman.
The woman whom they wanted to visit is a teacher.
2 I know the girl.
The girl’s mother is a teacher.
I know the girl whose mother is a teacher.
3 This is a truck.
It is made in China.
This is a truck which / that is made in China.
2. 主语从句
1) His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.
most was his wonderful performance on the stage.
2) It satisfied me. Our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.
our school dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.
3) I learned from the story that as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.
as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.What impressed meWhat satisfied me is thatWhat I have learnt from the story is that【推荐句型】：
What surprisesastonishedsatisfiedimpressed me is that…
What I would like to suggest advise put forward is that…
What matters most is that …
What I learnconclude from the story is that…五、 with 引导的短语或者复合结构 操作难度★★★★ 写作效果★★★★★With + 宾语+ adj./ adv./介词短语/to dodoingdone
常用句型
with a population of….
with a total area of…
with a long history of… years
1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用主语从句）
2. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
3. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇 It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help.
5.I won’t believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句）
6.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and…）
No matter what he says, I won’t believe. Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress.7．He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
8.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)
9.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)
10. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the more…the more)
No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.We all think highly of him .The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.但是值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。多看 多背 多模仿 多翻译Homework:How to beautify your composition?Please use what we have learnt to rewrite the letter of complaint
愿同学们像这匹骏马，驰骋在高考的征程中，创造自己的辉煌！Good Luck To You