Unit 7 How much are these socks? Section B 创新写作指导（13张PPT）

Unit 7 How much are these socks?创新写作指导
【首尾呼应法写广告词】
★1. 开门见山进行宣传，多为号召性语言。
如：Come and buy your clothes at great sale! Come and look at the clothes for yourself...
★2．介绍产品物美价廉，有各种样式可供选择，针对不同人群有不同样式，达到激发顾客购买欲望的目的，细节要具体到品种、颜色、价位等句式可有：
品种：Do you need...? / Do you like…？/ For…，we have…/ You can buy…/ We sell…
颜色：We have…in…
价位：We have…at very good prices．/We have…only for…/We sell...only for...
★3．画龙点睛，首尾呼应，再次号召：Come to buy some good clothes!
【易错点提示】
在写价钱的时候，注意美元“$”，元“RMB”的符号，如果用符号，钱数要跟在其后，yuan单复数同形，而dollar的复数需加~s。
【典例】毛毛服装店开张了，请你根据提示写一篇60词左右的广告。
要求：①广告简单易懂，同时突出商品的亮点。
②要求灵活运用所学过的单词、短语及句子。 ③要写清商品及价格。
【参考词汇】：
单词：store, hat, bag, socks, skirt, sweater. price, yourself, color
短语：at a very good price, bags for sports, football socks,
come and see, have a look at..., different colors
句子：We have...for... For boys, you can buy... For girls, we have...
【思路点拨】
(1) 体裁: 说明文。
(2) 人称: 第一人称。
(3) 时态: 一般现在时。
【写作模板】
【范文欣赏】
Maomao Clothes Store Sale!
Come and buy your clothes at Maomao Clothes Store!① Do you like hats?② We have black and blue hats for Y12. We have sweaters at a very good price-only￥60 ! Do you need bags for sports?③ We have great bags for only￥45.④ For boys, you can buy football socks for only￥8. For girls, we have skirts in different colors⑤for only￥18!
Come to our store now! ⑥
点评：全文简单明了，开篇点明服装店名称，用了号召句型如句①；后又用几个疑问句引出所谈商品如句②和句③，亲切而自然，句式灵活；句子运用准确如句④，We have...；短语运用也恰当如⑤in different colors，让人印象深刻，语言流畅，重点突出；最后句⑥与首句呼应，再次点题。
1. 假设你服装店现特价出售衣、帽、鞋、袜等，请根据以下提示写一篇促销广告。（50词左右）
提示：
1.我们有女孩穿的不同颜色的T恤衫，仅售8美元。
2.我们有便宜的帽子，仅售3美元。
3.我们有质量很好的运动鞋，仅售5美元。
4.我们有男孩穿的短袜，仅售4美元。
【参考范文】
Sale at Huarun Clothes Store
Come and buy your clothes at Huarun’s great sale! We sale all our clothes at very good prices. For girls, we have T-shirts in all colors for only 8 dollars. Do you like hats? We sell hats at a good price for only 3 dollars. And shoes for sports are only 5 dollars. For boys, we have socks for only 4 dollars each. Come to Huarun Clothes Store now!
经典范文展示
Miss Charm的服装店开张了，请你根据提示写一篇60词左右的广告。
提示：①我们有黑色和蓝色的帽子，只要12元；
②我们有60元一件的毛衣；
③我们有运动包45元一个；
④我们还有8元一双的足球袜和各种颜色的裙子，只要18元。

Come and buy your clothes at Miss Charm's Clothes Store！①Do you like hats？We have black and blue hats for 12 yuan.We have sweaters at a very good price.Only 60 yuan！②Do you need bags for sports？We have great bags for only 45 yuan！For boys，you can buy football socks for only 8 yuan.For girls，we have skirts in all colors for only 18 yuan！Come to Miss Charm's Clothes Store now!
【点评】根据提示翻译，要有条理性，尽量使用学过的句子。写作中要注意语言要有吸引力，也就是所写出的句子要有足够的“煽动性”，如①、②两处的句子若省略掉，该篇作文也能算是一篇好作文，但是若加上的话，该篇作文就更贴近生活，具有现实意义了。
热点作文练习
假如你在淘宝网上开了一家名为“乐淘”的店铺，在店内出售各种各样的衣、帽、鞋、袜等。请你根据下图提示写一则销售广告，宣传自己的店铺。
要求：50词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Letao Clothes Store
Welcome to Letao Clothes Store！We have many clothes at very good prices.Do you like T?shirts？They are only ￥35.Do you need a hat？We sell hats in all colors for ￥15.Do you want socks and shoes？Socks are only ￥2 and shoes are only ￥20.Come and see for yourself at Letao Clothes Store!