课件14张PPT。甘肃省静宁县第一中学 夏青锋应用文写作之建议信一、简介
应用文是人们日常生活和工作中广泛使用的文体。
书信(邮件;建议信,感谢信,道歉信;投诉信,求职信,邀请信),
通知、日记、演讲稿、倡议书 如何算是一篇好文章?
-覆盖了所有的要点
-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,行文连贯,条理清楚。要点全词汇,句型 (高级)和语法多样化(较复杂)语言地道连接词 一、 Letter of advice(建议信)
三步式结构:
第一段:针对对方的信任简单表示感谢,指明建议的前提和事情的原委.
第二段:婉转地提出有针对性的建议。分层次分点,最多三条即可。
第三段:简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有帮助,仅供对方参考。1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to do…
我很高兴收到你的来信,问我关于……的问题
2. Thanks for trusting me. It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice.
谢谢你相信我,我很荣幸给你一些建议。
3. You are having difficulty in doing sth. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
你现在做某事有困难,然而,情况很容易改变如果你接受我的建议。下面是一些建议帮助到你。
1. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to do sth.
在我看来,做某事是非常明智的。
2. It is vital to do sth
这是重要的去做某事
3. I think it would be more helpful if you could do……
4.If I were you, I would do …
如果我是你,我会做……
5. I would like to suggest you should do……
我建议你做……
6. Only in this way, can you …
?
结尾
1. I believe you will take my advice into account.
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的
2. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的
3. I hope you’ll make great progress in …
我希望你能在……方面取得进步
假如你是Simon,你收到一封名叫Flower的网友发来的E-mail.她向你询问如何交友.请给她发一封E-mail,并提出建议.要点:
1.交朋友首先要对别人友善2.要使陌生人感到亲切,不管他在哪里,关心他胜过关心自己.3.与别人有分歧时,不吵架,要商量4.不要相信危机时刻背叛朋友的人,因为‘患难见真情’ 注意:词数100左右Dear Flower,
I’m glad to receive your email. You
asked me something about how to make
friends. The following is my advice.
Everyone needs friends, so how to
make friends is very important. First, you
must be friendly to others if you want to
make friends with them. Second, look
after others more than yourself whenever
you are, thus you will make the stranger
feel easy. Third, when you have different
opinions.you can discuss with others. I don’t think it’s necessary to quarrel with them.
Finally, you shouldn’t trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
I hope you’ll find these suggestions
helpful to you. Look forward to your reply.
I hope everything goes on well with
you and you’ll make a lot of good friends.
Yours truly,
Simon 假如你是李华,你的朋友杰克写信告诉你他不知如何与朋友相处,请你给他一些建议。根据以下内容,写一封100词左右的建议信。
1. 当朋友不高兴的时候,你要尽量安慰他们,并帮助他们解决问题;
2. 任何时候都不要忽略朋友,要对他们表现出关心;
3. 当朋友与你意见有分歧时,最好与朋友面对面地交流。当朋友帮助了你,要对他们表示感谢。Dear Jack,
You have asked for my advice about how to get along with friends and it is my pleasure to give you my suggestions. Firstly, when your friends are upset, you’d better calm them down and try to help them solve the problems. Secondly, you should be concerned about your friends rather than ignore them. Last but not least, when your friends disagree with you, it would be a good idea if you could communicate with them face to face, and when they help you, you should be grateful to them.
These are my personal suggestions, and I hope they will be helpful to you and I believe you will make more and more friends in the future.
Good luck!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua