【备考2019】中考作文秘笈 专题一 观点看法类 (含答案)

专题一 观点看法类
类别
要求
观点看法类
观点看法类书面表达旨在测试学生的英语书面表达能力。中考的书面表达是一种指导性写作。试题对写作的目的、对象、体裁及字数都有明确的规定。在近几年的中考写作中，表达观点类文章的比重占得越来越多，出题形式也多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等多种类型，但文章实际上都是议论文，有时是夹叙夹议类文章。
要想写好该类书面表达我们要注意以下要点： 1、观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。 2、层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。 3、最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。 4、通常采用一般现在时。 5、语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。
秘招1：审题并确定要点?
仔细审题，确定文章的体裁、主题、人称以及时态。根据背景材料，确定出文章的体裁和主题；由体裁和主题来确定文章的人称和时态?(观点看法类人称多用第一人称，时态多以一般现在时为主)；根据文章的要点要求确定文章的结构以及内容。
?秘招2：理逻辑?
这里的逻辑指的是逻辑词，在作文中十分受欢迎，而且中考阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进、转折和总结的逻辑词。
一般来说，这类文章内在的逻辑关系十分清晰。它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头，"承"就是承接，"转"是转折，"合"是综合或总结。
秘招3：写后五查?
五查：单词拼写、标点符号错误；人称、时态、语态错误；修改句子结构和逻辑错误；考虑语篇结构；句式的变化和词汇的丰富
对于表达观点类作文，文章的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点一一比较着来写。
　　对比观点作文写作摸板：
　　The topic of主题?? is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it.
　　Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一? . What's more, 理由二???? . Moreover,? 理由三???? .
　　While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一??? . Second(Besides),理由二?? . Third(Finally), 理由三?? .
　　From my point of view, I think 我的观点??? . The reason is that 原因??? . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former(later)is surely a wise choice.

典例一 (2018甘肃武威)假定你叫李梅,是一名中学生。市交通委倡议打造绿色环保交通,推出城区公共自行车项目。你们班就“Are the Public Bicycles Necessary？”这一话题开了一次班会。请你就你们班对此话题的讨论写一篇 100 词左右的短文。公共自行车是必要的吗?
要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息,语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；
2.题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇：1. be convenient for 2. reduce 3. waste
Are the Public Bicycles Necessary？
We all have heard that our city government has had a project to improve our environment. 40,000 bicycles will be placed in the city._______________________________________________________
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细读所给表格及文字提示,提取以下信息：
1.从题目“Are the Public Bicycles Necessary?”可知本文是一篇议论文；
2.在陈述赞同方和反对方观点时,用第三人称,在陈述自己的观点看法时用第一人称；时态使用一般现在时；
3.词数：100 词左右,题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数。
公共自行车项目是否有必要？
要点提示 :素材串联
开头：引出话题 政府通过公共自行车项目来改善环境（improve）
赞同方的观点：
1. 方便外出（convenient；go outside）
2. 减轻交通拥堵（reduce the traffic jams）
3. 保持健康（keep healthy）
正文： 反对方的观点：
1. 没有足够的自行车道/站,使用不方便（bicycle lines or stations）
2. 浪费钱,可将钱投入到买更多的公交车和建更多的地铁上（a waste of money）
1. 长期来看,它是一种好的行为（in the long term）
结尾：发表个人观点 2. 政府会采取一些措施完善这个项目（take some measures ）
【高分范文】
Are the Public Bicycles Necessary？
We all have heard that our city government has had a project to improve our environment. 40,000 bicycles will be placed in the city. Our classmates have different opinions about it.
Some students believe that it is convenient for us to go outside. It will reduce the traffic jams to some extent. Meanwhile, we can keep healthy by riding bicycles. However, some students are against it. They think that there aren’t enough bicycle lines or stations for people to use. And it is also a waste of money to build them. They suggest that the money should be used to buy more buses and build more subways.
As far as I am concerned,I agree that the project is helpful. It is a good deed in the long term. And I believe that our government will take some measures to improve the project.
典例二 （2018湖北随州）时下很多同学喜欢用 QQ 或微信聊天,对于这种现象同学们有不同的观点。假如你叫李东,请你根据下面表格内容的提示,写一封 100 词左右的信交给英语报社编辑 Mr. Chen, 陈述同学们的观点及理由,并附上你的观点及理由。
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细读所给表格及文字提示,提取以下信息：
1.给英语报社编辑 Mr. Chen 写一封信,因此文体为应用文；
2.在叙述同学们的观点用第三人称,阐述自己的观点用第一人称；表述观点时态用一般现在时；
3.词数：100 词左右（开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数）。
网上聊天是否有必要
要点提示 素材串联
开头：引出话题
今天我们讨论了对中学生来说网上聊天是否有必要的这一话题（chat online；necessary）
赞成：
1. 放松自己（relax oneself）
2. 方便与朋友联系（keep in touch with...）
3. 交许多朋友（make lots of friends）
反对：
正文：叙述同学
1. 聊天内容无聊（boring）们的观点
2. 浪费时间（a waste of time）
3. 甚至有同学用 QQ 发作业答案 （put the answers to the homework online）
结尾：叙述自己 每件事情都有两面性；有时可以网上聊天,但不能花费太多
的观点和理由 时间（every coin has two sides）
【高分范文】
Dear Mr. Chen,
How is everything going? Today, in our English class, we discussed whether it is necessary for middle school students to chat online. Some agree while others don’t. Those who think it’s good to chat online think they can relax themselves. Meanwhile, they can keep in touch with their friends and make lots of friends. However, some of the students think chatting online is too boring and it’s a waste of time. What’s more, some students even put the answers to the homework online. It’s bad for our study.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. It’s convenient for us to do that. We can chat online sometimes, but we can’t spend too much time doing that.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Dong
典例三（2018湖南常德）对于“碰到作业难题,是否应该向老师请教”这个问题,同学们持有不同的观点。请你根据下表内容的提示,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,陈述同学们的观点及理由,并谈谈你的看法。
要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息,语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇：1. explain 2. communicate with 3. be laughed at The students of our class have different ideas about whether
we should ask teachers for help with homework
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
细读所给的文字和表格提示,可以提取以下信息：
1.本文主要是要陈述同学们支持和反对向老师请教的观点以及自己的观点和理由；
2.时态：陈述观点和理由应用一般现在时；
3.人称：阐述他人观点和理由用第三人称；陈述自己观点和理由用第一人称。
碰到作业难题,是否应该向老师请教
要点提示 素材串联
开头：引出话题 学生对于是否该向老师请教持不同的观点（whether）
赞同者：老师讲解地清楚,易于理解（explain clearly）增加与老师交流的机会（communicate with）
正文：陈述赞同者和不赞同者： 性格内向,羞于开口（too shy to ask）
赞同者的观点怕被同学嘲笑（be afraid , laugh at）
对于我来说,我赞成向老师寻求帮助, 从中可以得到
结尾：陈述自己的观点 更多的学习方法,解决问题更简单,节省做作业的时间。（ask for help, solve problems）
【高分范文】
The students of our class have different ideas about whether we should ask teachers for help with homework problems.
Those who prefer to ask teachers for help think that teachers can explain clearly and the students can understand easily, and it will be a good chance to communicate with teachers. However, some disagree. On the one hand, they are too shy to ask teachers for help. On the other hand, they are afraid to be laughed at by others.
As for me, I would like to ask teachers for help. I can get more ways for my study. It is easier to solve the problems with their help, and I can save more time to do homework. Teachers can help me a lot.
A
你班于上周就“音乐、美术是否应该纳入中考”为题展开了一场讨论, 同学们各抒己见。请你根据下表的提示内容,结合你自己对此事的看法,以 “Whether Music and Art Should Enter the Entrance Examination for the High School”为题用英语给校报写一篇 100 词左右的短文。要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息,语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；
2.题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇：1. opinion 2. attention
Whether Music and Art Should Enter the Entrance Examination for the High School
Last week, we had a discussion about whether Music and Art should enter the Entrance Examination for the High School. Students have different opinions.___________________________
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B
假如你是 Li Hua,你被评为学校的“美德少年”,初中三年的学习生活即将结束,你远在英国的表妹 Linda 即将回国学习,她来信请你就即将开始的初中生活给她提出一些建议,请根据下面的要点提示,写一封 100 词左右的回信。内容要点如下：
努力学习知识；关注社会新闻；培养兴趣爱好；
经常与家人交流；知错就改；
遵守规则；注意安全；乐于助人;
你的建议 ……
要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息,语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；
2.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇：1. pay attention to 2. communicate 3. ready Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to hear that you will come back to China and study in my school next term. Here are some suggestions for you._________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes, and I’m looking forward to seeing you earlier.
Yours,
Li Hua
C
面临中考，我们的作业越来越多，学习任务也越来越繁重。有些同学认为作业多有利于学习，帮助我们考出好成绩；而另一些同学认为作业多休息不好，学习的效率反而不高。请写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。
提示：useful, efficiently, go over, develop one’s mind (开发思维)
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)
Nowadays, we students have a lot of homework. That makes ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
D
俗话说得好，身体是革命的本钱。只是一味地埋头苦学可不成，加强体育锻炼，保持一个健康的体魄才是正道。然而，在上周，某中学的一位学生在长跑训练中突然晕倒(fall in a faint)。此事件引发热议：部分家长认为现在的中学生体质弱，长跑(long-distance running)消耗体力太大，不应该被列入中考体测项目；另外一部分家长则认为，正因为现在孩子们体质弱、锻炼少，才需要长跑训练。
假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自己的亲身经历，说出 2至3条理由来说服家长们 (只需选择一方观点表达即可)。
要求：?1.词数不少于80词；
2.提示词正、反方均可使用，仅供参考；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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E
英语课上，你们班就中学生进网吧上网现象进行讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
提示：
(1) What are the advantages and disadvantages of getting online?
(2) What do you think of getting online for middle school students?
(3) How should students get online properly?
要求：?
(1) 演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，并做适当发挥；
(2) 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
(3) 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many students like________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A
Last week, we had a discussion about whether music and art should enter the entrance examination for the High School. Students have different opinions.
Some students support the idea. They think they should pay more attention to art. On the other hand, these two subjects can develop their skills. Moreover, they can improve the taste of their life.
However, other students hold the opposite opinion. They insist they have too many subjects to learn. They will be more worried about their grades. What’s more, they don’t have enough sleep.
In my opinion, I welcome this change because it will encourage us to find fun in our life and make our life full of joy.
B
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to hear that you will come back to China and study in my school next term. Here are some suggestions for you
At school, you should study hard and pay attention to the social news. In your free time, you can develop some hobbies, which will make your school life wonderful.
At home,you should communicate with your families. You must correct the mistakes that you’ve made. When you go out, you must follow the rules in public. To keep yourself safe,you mustn’t go anywhere dangerous. Besides, you should be ready to help those who are in need. It is helpful for you to make more friends. What’s more, you should be polite to everyone,which will make you get on well with others.
Best wishes, and I’m looking forward to seeing you earlier.
Yours,
Li Hua
C
In all, doing some homework of suitable amount is necessary and more helpful to the Senior High School Entrance Exam.
Nowadays, we students have a lot of homework. That makes?us very tired, and some students think having?too much?homework?is bad for?our health. But I think a lot of homework is necessary to the tests we will take.
I think homework can help us to?go over?what we have learned in class. And homework can?develop our mind?and improve our abilities to solve problems. Anyway, homework can help us to?get better grades.
I think we’d better?arrange our time?properly?so that?we can do the homework better and find time to relax.
In all, doing some homework of suitable amount is necessary and more helpful to the Senior High School Entrance Exam.
D
Exercising?plays an important role in?our daily life. As a student, I hold the view that long-distance running should be listed in the exam. Because it can bring us students many advantages.
I was?in bad health?and easily got ill when I was in primary school. And I didn’t like sports or PE classes. The doctor?advised?me?to?take more exercise. So my father led me to run 5 kilometers every morning in the park. With my father’s and the doctor’s help, I made a great change. Now I become healthier and more energetic.
In fact,?the main reason why the student?fell down?in the training is that he lacks exercise. He?pays so much attention to?his study that he has little time to?take exercise.?Therefore, long-distance running is necessary for students. Firstly, it canbuild up the body?and keep us healthy. Secondly, it can help us?get rid of?the pressure and make us relaxed. Thirdly, it can prevent diseases and make us?keep fit. Finally, it can also?strengthen our will.?All in all,?long-distance running should be listed in the exam.
E
Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many students like?getting online very much. They can also learn more knowledge and how to use the modern machine—computer. They can get more information. It can make them clever to play?different kinds of?games easily. But some students may?get lost in playing games.?Some even?make friends online.?They often?chat or send emails to each other.?It takes them too much time.
So I don’t think they should get online when they are studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.