【备考2019】中考作文秘笈 专题六 叙事描写类 (含答案)

专题六 叙事描写类
类别
要求
叙事描写类
记叙文是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、记小、状物、绘景为主要内容的文体。它又分为写人类记叙文和叙事类记叙文。写人类记叙文: 通过刻画人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表现主题。叙事类记叙文: 通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去时态，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键所在。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化。因此，多用动词，特别是动态强的行为动词是英语记叙文的又一个明显的语言特点。【版权所有：21教育】
【写作指导】
叙事类记叙文主要是叙述过去发生的事，因此叙事类记叙文以一般过去时为主，各种时态为辅，合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是英语叙事类记叙文的首要语言特征。写人类记叙文如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好记叙文要注意以下几点:21c
秘招1：头绪分明，脉络清楚?
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个“W”和一个“H”来展开，分别是why, what, when, where, who及how。
秘招2：突出中心，详略得当?
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。21教育名师原创作品
秘招3：用活语言，准确生动?
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。
写人叙事类
【开头句】
1.?Today I am glad to introduce?a teenager. His name is Cheng Xin.
2. I'm Li Hua and?I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself.
3.?There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between?my friend and me.
4. My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways.?Now let me tell you something about him.
5. I?visited?Hong Kong last summer holiday. It's a beautiful city and?I had a wonderful time?there.
6. Liang Ling, a 15-year-old girl, is a student in Class 1, Grade 9.
7.?How time flies! Three years has passed.?I will graduate from junior high school.?
8.?I still remember what happened between?my best friend Lin Tao and me.?
9. ?This is a photo that?is very special to?me.?
【中间句】
1.?He is a?helpful boy?who?often helps people around him.?
2.?He is very popular in?our school?because?he is polite to everyone.?
3.?As for my dream，I want to be a teacher，I'll make friends with my kids.
4.?Like many other?boys，I enjoy doing?sports，but maths and science are my favorite.
5.?My favorite memory of?my dad?is?that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes but he tries to let me find my own way, even though his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt.?
6. Though she is busy, she studies hard and gets good grades.
7.?I imagine that?she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome.?
8. Although I wasn't willing to do it, I still lent it to him because he was my best friend.?
9. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear.?I am proud of?you!”
【结尾句】
1. I would be very?thankful?if you could give me the chance.
2.?I am sure that I can be?a good volunteer at the International Dragon Competition.
3.?After reading?so many books, I get a lot of knowledge and also feel relaxed.?
4.?As a student, I think?I should always try my best to work for our school.?
5. This is my best dad. I love him and I'm so proud of him.
6.?I had great fun in?my last summer vacation.
7. Although I am not the best now，I will make every effort to?become a?top student?and I believe you will be proud of me.
8. She is great. Let's wish her a better future.
9. I am?looking forward to?seeing her/him!
10. Because I thought nothing was important than friendship.?What's more, I became very happy after I forgave him.?
11.?How lucky I am to?be his daughter!
事物介绍类【开头句】
旅游篇
1.?I'm glad to hear that?you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
2. You asked me about festivals in China.?Let me introduce?some important ones to you.
3.?I'd like to tell you something about?the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival and how I spent it this year.
阅读
1.?Nowadays，reading is becoming?more and more popular?among us.
2.?Of all?the suggested books,?I have decided to?choose?Secrets of English Words and Time for Kids.
3. The book I'd like to?share with?you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway.
4.?My dream shop?will be a bookstore. I love reading very much，so I want to have a big bookstore.?
5. In school we study many subjects,?such as?Chinese, English, maths, geography and so on. But my favorite subject is English.
共享单车
1.?Recently, there are a lot of shared bikes appearing on the street of Meishan. And they become more and more popular with people.
2. Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike'sharing is becoming?more and more popular inmany cities.?
【中间句】
旅游篇
1. If you come, you can?enjoy fresh air, blue sky?as well as?beautiful mountains and clear rivers.?
2. Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou?as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million.
3.?Many famous places of interest?like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting.
节日
1. The Dragon Boat Festival?falls on?May 5th this year. People all across China eat zongzi and dragon boat races?are held in?many places to remember a great ancient person Qu Yuan.
2.?On that day, we eat yuanxiao, go to watch lantern shows and dragon dances to pray for health and happiness for the whole year.
3.?To welcome the new year, we do some cleaning, buy new clothes, set off fireworks and visit our relatives.?
阅读
1. I like reading newspapers and magazines,?from which I get lots of?fun and learn about what's going on around the world.
2.?What I like most about the book is that?the fisherman never gives up when meeting difficulties.?
3. There will be a big reading room in it and people can sit in the chair to read their favorite books or magazines.
4.?Knowing?English makes my traveling much easier.?I can make many foreign friends, too.
【结尾句】
1.?This tells us?that?nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.
2.?I hope you can come to?China next year and spend the festival with me.
3.?Besides, reading can help me know more about the outside world and make me enrich my knowledge. That's why my dream shop is a bookstore.
4. ?I will continue to study hard in my English studies and improve it to a higher stage.
对于表达观点类作文，文章的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点一一比较着来写。
写事记叙文
The__________ (事件)happened____________ (时间和地点), and I still remember the______ (事件). At that time, I was_________ (动词+ ing:做的事情). It was a sunny day and things were awfully_________ (形容词) before it happened. Then__________ (事件)drew my attention. I saw________ (详细说明事件), and to my__________ (表达感受的名词)，_______ (当事人) was _________ (正在进行的动作). It did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that I would___________ (自己的感受). Whenever I look back on what happened that day, I think it is right to_______ (理应采取的措施或态度一). What's more, it is important for us to________ (理应采取的措施或态度二).
夹叙夹议记叙文
The____________ (事件) happened________(地点和时间). I saw_________(详细描述事件), and to my_______________ (表达感受的名词) , the(事情)has become __________ (形容词). I am __________ (心理感受类的形容词)that_______ (事情的后续进展). I think that__________ (自己的观点). If I/we do that, ______________ (名词)will be better and better.

典例一（2018福建）旅行能让人放松，亲近大自然，欣赏不同的美景，品尝各地的美食，结交各地好友。请以“My Trip to ”为题，根据以下要求,用英语写一篇短文，记叙你的一次旅行。
注意：1. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.词数 100 词左右，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名，否则不予评分。
My Trip to_____________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：
1. 从题目“My Trip to ”可知本文的文体为记叙文；
2.文章主要记叙自己的一次旅行，因此时态用一般过去时；人称以第一人称为主；
3.词数 100 词左右，文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名。
我的香港之旅
要点提示素材串联
开头：引入主题 上个暑假去了香港，玩得很开心（enjoy myself）
正文：具体讲述旅
1. 乘飞机去，在那待了七天（by plane);
2. 第一天去了迪士尼（visit Disneyland）；
3. 第二天晚上去了维多利亚港（the Victoria Harbor）；
结尾：感受及愿望 旅行很棒，想再次去香港（a wonderful trip）
【高分范文】
My Trip to Hong Kong
I visited Hong Kong last summer holiday. It’s a beautiful city and I enjoyed myself there.
I went there by plane and stayed there for seven days.On the first day, I visited Disneyland and played different kinds of games. They were very interesting and I had a good time. On the evening of the second day, I visited the Victoria Harbor. It was also wonderful. The other days, I visited other places, such as Hong Kong Avenue of Stars. I also ate delicious food and it’s very different from ours.
What a wonderful trip I had! I’d like to visit it again one day.
典例二（2018贵州铜仁）3月12日那一天，你和 Lingling 还有 Lucy 去植树，请你根据以下写作要点写一篇英文日记。
写作要点：
1. 今天是植树节，你和朋友们去植树；
2.你挖树坑，Lingling 和 Lucy 去提水浇树；
3.不一会儿，你们就栽了好几棵树，这时你看到远处有人在折小树；
4.你去阻止他，你认为……
写作要求：1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.词数 100 词左右，文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名，否则不予评分。参考词汇：挖树坑 dig the holes
March12th Sunny
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.从写作要求可知本文的文体为记叙文；
2.文章主要记叙自己的在 3 月 12 日的植树经历，因此时态用一般过去时；人称以第一人称为主；
3.词数 100 词左右，文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
我的香港之旅
要点提示素材串联
开头：引入主题 3 月 12 日，植树节（Tree Planting Day）
正文：具体讲述 挖树洞（dig the holes)，为小树浇水（carry water for the
植树经历 young trees）；看到有人折树苗上前阻止了他（stop him from breaking the trees ）；
结尾：感受 人人都应爱护环境，为自己所做的事情骄傲（be proud of）
【高分范文】
March 12th Sunny
It is March 12th, Tree Planting Day. Today, my friends Lingling, Lucy and I went to plant trees. I dug tree holes while Lingling and Lucy went to carry water for the young trees. In a short time, we planted several trees and we were very happy. But suddenly I saw someone breaking the young trees far away. I ran over to stop him from breaking the trees and told him to protect them. The man was ashamed and went away. I think everyone should love and protect the environment, and I am proud of what I have done today.
典例三（2018浙江丽水）某英文网站正在开展以“包容、谅解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。
要求:1. 短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，100 词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总字数）
2.短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
3.短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
提示词语：hurt, realize, forgive(原谅)， happy
I still remember what happened between
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.本文要求描述生活中原谅他人的一次经历，文体属于记叙文；
2.文章是描述生活中原谅他人的一次经历，时态主要用一般过去时；人称应用第一人称；
3.词数 100 左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
原谅他人的一次经历
要点提示素材串联
开头：引出话题 我仍然记得我的同桌玛丽和我之间发生了什么事
（between...and...）
正文：事情发生 经过：玛丽从我身边走过，撞了我的胳膊，我手上的杯子掉的经过，结果 在地上摔成了碎片（hit ...on the arm, break...into pieces）
结果：几天后，玛丽来向我道歉。我知道她不是故意。（apologize to, on purpose）
结尾：我的感受 感受学会理解和原谅是加强友谊的好方法（a good way to）
【高分范文】
I still remember what happened between my deskmate Mary and me. One day, I was drinking water with my valuable cup. It was at that time that Mary passed me and hit me on the arm. So I dropped my cup onto the floor, breaking it into pieces. I was so angry that I yelled at her. And then, we didn’t speak to each other. After several days, Mary came over to apologize to me. I realized she didn’t do it on purpose. So I thought I was supposed to forgive her. We hugged each other and smiled. From then on, we became best friends.
In my opinion, learning to understand and forgive is a good way to strengthen our friendship.
A
幸福无处不在。幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是来自老师赞许的目光，幸福是……每个人都有自己的幸福。某英语网站正在征集英文稿件，请以“My Happiness”为题，写一篇 100 词左右短文。
写作要求：1.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.词数 100 词左右，文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名，否则不予评分。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
假如你是Mike,后天是父亲节,请你根据下面所给信息,写一封信,回忆去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的难忘经历,作为一份送给父亲的特殊礼物。
注意:1. 信中应包含所提供的信息,并展开合理的想象;
2. 信中不能出现真实的姓名;
3. 词数:80词左右。(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Dear Daddy,
It's a gift for Father's Day when you are reading it.
I still remember the day last summer when___________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Now, I want to say; I love you, Daddy. You raise me up!
Happy Father's Day!
Yours,
Mike
C
同学们，初中三年的学习生活即将结束，你还记得那那些发生在学校的感动你的瞬间吗？也许是一次老师和你的长谈，也许是一次同学对你的帮助， 也许是一次运动会中的奋力拼搏，也许是一次艺术节中精彩表演……现在请把感动你的一个瞬间记录下来，珍藏在你的记忆力。
注意:1. 信中应包含所提供的信息,并展开合理的想象;
2. 信中不能出现真实的姓名;
3. 词数:80词左右。(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
D
如今的教育提倡“立德树人”，即“德育为先。以人为本”。我们中学生要努力成为一名品学兼优的人。在我们的身边不乏具有优秀品质的人，他们勤劳勇敢，坚持不懈，乐于助人……请讲述他或她的一个故事 ，并谈谈我们应该如何做，才能成为一名德才兼备的学生。
注意:1. 信中应包含所提供的信息,并展开合理的想象;
2. 信中不能出现真实的姓名;
3. 词数:80词左右。(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
E
父爱如山。在你的成长过程中，你与父亲之间有什么难忘的事情吗？我们应该如何回报我们的父亲？如何与他们和睦相处？
注意:1. 信中应包含所提供的信息,并展开合理的想象;
2. 信中不能出现真实的姓名;
3. 词数:80词左右。(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A
I will never forget what happened when I was in Grade 9. I got a bad mark at a math test. I was too afraid to tell my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what had happened. Then they told me that they believed I could do better next time. They also encouraged me to keep on trying. I was very moved and proud of being their child. So I made up my mind to work harder.
I think happiness is the deep love from parents.
B
Dear Daddy,
It's a gift for Father's Day when you are reading it.?
I still remember the day last summer when early in the morning. But,unluckily,it began to be cold and tired. So I couldn't help complaining. But you told me not to give up and put your coat on me softly,“We will reach the top.” You really cheered me up. What beautiful nature that I had never seen.?
Now,I want to say:I love you,Daddy. You raise me up!?
Happy Father's Day!?
Yours,
Mike
C
I believe no matter how time flies , I will always remember the touching moment when Mr. Wang talked with me and gave me a new beginning of my life .He was not only my teacher but also my sunshine in my heart.
Before Mr. Wang became our Chinese teacher, I had been known as a “problem student”. Both the teachers and parents decided to give me up .However, Mr. Wang didn’t abandon(放弃) me. He was always patient with me in my schoolwork and he guided me to do a lot better . Whenever I couldn’t understand anything he explained things to me clearly. he always told me “you can do it !”because of him I put in more effort . Then I passed the exam for the first time, he congratulated me and encouraged me to make progress little by little. Then he asked me if there was anything he could do for me . The moment we finished our talking , I felt a new life started .
It’s the first time when someone really cared about me and found advantages on me . With her help , I gradually overcome my mistakes and changed into a better one . And the encouragement will be in my heart forever.
D
There are a lot of people who are with excellent qualities. Their behaviors show us how to be hard-working , persistent(坚持不懈的) and helpful .
Lang Ping , a famous Chinese volleyball player and coach , made a great contribution(贡献) to the success of our women’s volleyball sport. When she was a player, she won lots of championships（锦标赛） .Although she has got a lot of hurts after the retirement（退休）, she has done an even better job as a coach . Nobody will forget how the volleyball girls won the championship under huge pressure in Rio Olympics because of her insistence（坚持）.
As a student , we shouldn’t just study hard . We also have to spend some time in helping others, doing volunteer work, learning from good models and so on . Only in this way can we be a good student with knowledge and morals .
E
As a good saying goes “Father’s love is like a mountain”. No matter how time flies , my father’s image in my heart only increases more and more. Let me share the most unforgettable one with you to show how much my father loves me
What impressed me most is that I used to be a ping pang player. My dad trained me so hard . Though he was tired after a day’s work. Once , I lost a game and I felt so sad that I want to give up . Even I was worried that my father might be disappointed. There was a heave weight on my shoulders . To my surprise and relief, my father said nothing ,sitting quietly with me . The next morning, I found a piece of paper . It said “Never give up , dear .I am proud of you forever ” Many years has passed since that thing happened to me, but I was moved deeply. How lucky I am to be his son .
According to my experience, I want
to give the teenagers some advice. First ,we should study hard to get good grades . Only in this way can they be happy truly. Next , if we meet some difficulty , we should try our best to deal with . Most importantly, we should love and take care of them . Such as chatting with them and doing some housework. Because we have grown up now .