牛津深圳版（广州沈阳通用）九年级英语下Module 2 Environmental problems Unit 3 The environment Writing 教学课件 (共46张PPT)

(共46张PPT)
Your school is going to encourage students to protect the environment by introducing a cartoon character called Gary Green. He will act as a role model for the students.
The following pictures show a day in the life of Gary Green. Look at the pictures and discuss how he tries to protect the environment.
B Use the outline and expressions below to write an introduction to Gary Green.
Paragraph 1 What does Gary Green do in the morning How does he go to school
Paragraph 2 What does Gary Green do after he washes his hands and when he leaves the classroom
Paragraph 3 What does Gary Green do when he does his homework
Paragraph 4 What does Gary Green think people should do
take a shower, not a bath
ride a bike
turn off the tap
switch off the lights
use both sides of the paper
Every morning, Gary Green starts his day by ____________ instead of a bath. Then he ___________ to school. At school, after Gary Green _______ his hands and when he _____ the classroom, he _______ the tap immediately. When he does his homework, he uses ________ of the paper.
In the evening, Gary Green think people should ________ because ________ for the environment.
taking a shower
rides a bike
washes
leaves
turns off
both sides
be green
it’s good
Every morning, Gary Green starts his day by taking a shower instead of a bath. Then he rides a bike to school. At school, after Gary Green washes his hands and when he leaves the classroom, he turns off the tap immediately. When he does his homework, he uses both sides of the paper.
In the evening, Gary Green think people should be green because it’s good for the environment.
WRITING
〖经典例题〗
Simon和Jenny两兄妹的节水意识很强。他们是Lemon Middle School的节水小模范。请你根据下面的图片及文字提示，写一篇 文章介绍一下他们，给校报投稿。在投稿中介绍一下他们的日常 节水方法，同时也在文章最后号召大家加入节约用水的行列。
Save our world
要求: 1. 必须包括所有内容要点，行文 连贯，表达清楚，书写规范； 2. 词数:80词左右。
参考词汇： 冲厕所 flush the toilet
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〖思路点拨〗
谋篇布局：
本篇习作是提示类作文,要求考生根据图片及所给中文提示,按一定文体写出一段语意连贯、表达正确的短文。这类作文随意发挥的空间较小,基本是根据提示整理出要点,然后将要点组成语义连贯的文段。那么,我们该如何处理这类书面表达呢？ 写好这类作文， 要做到四个确定:
(1)确定体裁(记叙文)； (2)确定时态(介绍Simon和Jenny的节水方法，以一般现在时为主)； (3)确定人称(以第三者的身份介绍别人，故采用第三人称)； (4)确定要点(列举Simon和Jenny的节水方法)。 另外,我们应注意: 找全要点后，不要根据所给的提示内容，呆板地一一列举，逐字逐句翻译。要使用连接词灵活表达。必要时,我们也可以自由发挥，做一些适当补充。
遣词造句: 第一步：一起来复习一些与本篇写作任务相关的短语。汉译英。 1. 淋浴 ______________　　　　　　　　 2. 刷牙 _______________　　　　　　　 3. 拖地 __________________　　　　　　　　 4. 洗衣服 __________________　　　　　 　　　 5. 关掉 ____________________　　　　　　　　 6. 扔掉 _____________________　　　　　　　　
take a shower
brush one’s teeth
sweep the floor
wash the clothes
turn off / switch off
throw away
第二步：一起来复习一些与本篇写作任务相关的句子。补全句子。 1. 这是一个节约用水的好办法。 It is a good way ______ ______ _______ . 2. 你会使用这台新洗衣机吗？ Can you _______ this new ________
________ 3. 不要浪费一滴水。 Don’t _______ a drop of water.
to save water
use washing machine
waste
4. 我们应该尽量回收一些东西，而不是把
它们扔掉。 We should try to recycle some things 　　　 　 _______ ________ throwing them away. 5. 让我们行动起来！ Let’s _________ _________ !
instead of
take action
〖范文展示〗
Water is important to us. Simon and Jenny, brother and sister in our school, are good examples of saving water to us. How do they save water They always take a shower instead of a bath because a shower uses less water. They also never brush the teeth with the tap on.
To save water, they don’t use the washing machine when they wash a few clothes. In addition, after washing clothes, they use the waste water to sweep the floor or flush the toilet. In short, there are many things we can do to save water. As students, we also can do something to save water like Simon and Jenny. Let’s take action.
〖仿真任务〗A
地球是人类赖以生存的环境，我们生活在这个特殊的星球里，保护好环境就是保护好我们自己。请以“A good way to protect the environment”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 要求： 1. 请给出一个保护环境的办法； 2. 给出至少两点说明用这一办法的理由。
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One possible version:
A good way to protect the environment As we all know , the Earth is our home. However, environmental pollution is
getting more and more serious. So it’s really necessary for us to do something to protect our environment. And I think the best way is to plant more trees.
Trees can help protect our environment a lot. First, trees can help stop soil from moving into rivers. Second, trees can help make our air clean. Third, trees are helpful in keeping the Earth from getting warmer and warmer.
In short, trees are closely connected with our life. We should plant as many trees as possible.
解题指导：
该篇书面表达要求写一个保护环境的办法并给出理由。因此，首先要确定写什 么样的办法，然后还要明确这一办法为什么可以保护环境，对保护环境有哪些好处。在写作中，可能用到的词汇和句型有：as we all know, get more and more serious, it’s necessary …, I think …, first, second, third, stop … from doing, be helpful in, in short, as many … as possible等。
〖仿真任务〗B
假如你是Steve，在每年4月22日的“世界地球日(World Earth Day)”, 你校都会号召学生参加一些环保活动。你的网友Susan对你校今年地球日的活动很感兴趣，向你询问活动情况。请你根据下面的提示写一封邮件向她介绍你们的活动安排。
要求: 1. 邮件应包括表格中所有要点，可适 当发挥； 2. 词数：80左右(邮件开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数)。
【要求】
1. 包括全部提示内容，可作适当发挥；
2. 词数：80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Susan,
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Yours, Steve
One possible version:
Dear Susan, You want to learn something about World Earth Day activities in my school. Now let me tell you what we will do. On April 22nd, all teachers and students will take part in two different activities. In the morning, we will go to clean up the parks in our city.
Different classes will be responsible for different parks. In the afternoon, we will put up posters to call on people to turn off the lights for an hour in the evening. The activities are helpful. They can help protect the environment. Yours, Steve
I.用所给的关键词或短语造句，使其成为一个句意完整、语法正确的句子。
1. I; try my best; to do; what; I; can; in; my; school life
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I try my best to do what I can in my school life.
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2. I; always; remember; to; turn off; the; tap
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3. I; be used to; switch off; all the lights; before; leave the classroom
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I always remember to turn off the tap.
I am used to switching off all the lights before leaving the classroom.
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4. I; never; waste food; because; I; know; that; we; shouldn’t; waste; any resources; around us
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I never waste food because I know that we shouldn’t waste any resources around us.
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5. I; hope; everyone; can; start with; small things; to; protect our environment
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I hope everyone can start with small things to protect our environment.
II.书面表达。
请写一篇关于你在学校学习生活的文章。内容包括在学校的生活中，你是如何保护环境的。例如节约用电、用水、不剩饭等等。
要求：80词以上，可适当发挥。
写作本篇作文可能需要用到的词汇、短语及句型：
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词汇：importance, protect, environment, wash， remember, waste, resource, besides 短语：try one’s best, turn off, switch off, in addition,
句型：finish doing …，I’m used to doing …，I hope ...
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As a middle school student, I know the importance of protecting the environment, so I try my best to do what I can in my school life. Every time I finish washing hands, I always remember to turn off the tap. And I’m used to switching off all the lights before leaving the classroom. In addition, I never waste food because
I know that we shouldn’t waste any resources around us. Besides, saving water, electricity and food is not only what I need to do, but also the thing I always tell other students. I hope everyone can start with small things to protect our environment.
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笔试部分
V. 书面表达(共1题，15分）
如今，越来越多的人知道保护'环境的重要性，并以实际行动为保护环境贡献自己的力量。 请你根据自己的实际生活，以How to protect the environment为题，写一篇80词以上的作 文，谈谈你是如何保护环境的。
How to protect the environment
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How to protect the environment
Nowadays, the environmental protection is becoming necessary in our daily life. As for me, I have some useful ways to share with you.
First, we should put litter into the trash bin instead of dropping it everywhere. And it’s best to pick up the litter on the ground when we see it.
Second, we can go to school or work on foot or by bus. It can not only protect the environment, but also be good for our health. Third, we should save the paper, the water and so on. The used water can be used to wash the toilet. Last, we can protect the trees and plant more trees so that they can make the air clean and fresh.
I think if everyone takes proper action to protect the environment, our world will be much better and more beautiful.
　
【书面表达写作指导】
　　本次书面表达话题是学生所熟悉的，所以写作难度不大，每个学生至少能提出两三点保护环境的方法。写作时，应注意使用first, second等词使文章衔接得当且有条理。文章完成后，要通读全文，检查语法是否正确、要点是否齐全。