2018-2019学年中考英语复习---英语写作指导教学课件 (共40张PPT)

课件40张PPT。English Writing
中考英语书面表达《课程标准》五级“写”的要求 1．能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材。 2．能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导
下进行修改。 3．能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。 4．能简单描述人物或事件。 5．能根据图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。 AB书面表达考查特点中考书面表达的主要形式：记叙文(以叙事或描写来叙述人或事物。)
应用文（ 包括：书信、日记、通知、便条及贺卡等 。）
说明文（以简洁的文字介绍事物的形状、性质、结构、变化、特征等。）
议论文（通过摆事实、讲道理，直接表达作者的见解和主张。）

　　

记叙文是中考最常见的一种书面表达文体记叙文的主要描述对象：１．写物 ( objects ) ２．写人 (persons) ３．写事 (things)How to write a past thing?主要特点
记叙为主 稍加议论 旁带说明能力要求
时间顺序空间顺序逻辑顺序Writing skills书面表达六步法　　一、审题:
确定基本要素:5W1H
何 何 何 为 如 何
时 地 人 何 何 事
　When: _______ Who :_______ Where : _______ What : _______　Why :_______ 　How : _______
　　
　　　　　　　　　　时态；人称请以“A Visit to a Farm”为题，根据提示写一次愉快的参观．
提示：１．今天早上你和你的同学在校门口集合，一起做车去参观了一家农场．
　　　 ２．在农场里你们野炊，唱歌跳舞，下棋，说笑话，讲故事，玩的非常高兴．
　　　 ３．结尾已给出.
要求：１．可围绕主题适当发挥，但应包含所给要点．
　　　 ２．词数60左右，所给结尾不记入总数．
…The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers.
书面表达经典示例二、抓要点
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　
　
　
met ··· bus 　　visited a farm　　　 　　　　　 　 　　　　　played chess danced ···sang　　 　told jokes ···stories had a picnic动词确定主要行为 What happened?Key points：关键词：played chess 【写作导图】A visit to the villagewhen
时间where
地点who
人物what
事件this morning/todaya farmwevisited a farmTense
时态danced ···sangtold jokes ···storieshad a picnic一般现在时; 第一人称三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位 Who did what?


　　　　　　常用连词:
and、so/because、although/but
however、not only···but alsoWho: met ···bus 　　　 visited a farm　　　 　　　　　 　 　　　played chess danced···sang　　 　
told jokes ···stories had a picnic第四步 连句成文词与词搭配 　　句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾 顺序: time order 注意: 简单句、复合句 Key points：　
　visited a farm 　 met ···bus 　　　 　　　　　 had a　picnic　 played chess 　　
danced···sang　　told jokes···stories
Time order:
Today···early in the morning ···　then··· at noon ···
After a short rest··· 　　　the time passed quickly···连词成句　连句成文
Five “w” and one“H”： When: Today Who: We Where: Farm What: Visit a farm Why: Ｐlay How: By bus 　　　第五步 查错改错时态是否正确
主谓是否一致
要点是否全面
人称是否正确
语序问题
是否符合语言习惯　
固定短语 We visited the farm today. Early in the morning we went there together by buses. The farm workers welcomed us. Then the head of the farm showed we around. We were happy to see the crops and vegetables grew well. At noon we had a picnic lunch. After a short rest, we have great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We had a well time. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. 找错并改正:amet at the school gate andbususgrowinghadgood Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say good-bye to the workers. 范文　A Visit to a Farm第六步 誊写书写规范 卷面整洁
卷面潦草 涂改较多! 书面表达书写注意事项

书写规范，t和e，a和u，v 和r，g和y区分开来。
注意 标点符号。
卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！书面表达中存在的问题 一、审题不清，匆忙草就
二、基础不牢，语用错误。
1.语序错误 He often on foot goes home.
He every day works hard.
I am in Grade 8, Class 5.
2. 动词用法错误 I like play basketball.
He can sings songs.
3. 代词错误 He favorite animals are pandas.
He name is Tom. He’s name is Tom.
4. 汉式英语 He best likes animal is giraffes.
There are three boys are swimming in the river.
There is going to have a football match in our school.
There are twenty people agree with me.



5. 时态错误 They go to HK last Sunday.
Tomorrow we are meet at the school gate
6. 人称错误 I like pandas because it is cute.
7. 连接词的错误 Because I was ill, so I didn’t go to school that day.
8. 搭配错误 He is friendly for us.
9. 形容词和介词的用法错误
I often by bike to school. I for your idea.
10. 冠词错误 His mother is worker.
You are good boy.
11. 单复数 I think she is one of the best singer in the world.
12.逻辑关系混乱
At the age of seven, his grandfather died.
13. 错词 belive; fell lonely,
从评分细则看得分规则书面表达的总体要求 切中题意，条理清楚，语句通顺连贯，语言准确得当，书写工整。
评分原则和五个档次1.本题总分15分，按五个档次给分。
2.评分时，现根据文章内容和语言初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，结合内容和语言表达，综合给定分数。
3.考生可以根据要点适当发挥，加入自己的观点。
4.词数少于80的，从总分中减去1分。 5.拼写错误多，书写较差以致影响表达，在所确定档次的分数范围内，减去1分。第五档（很好）：（15-13分）完全完成规定任务，要点全面，或发挥新意有亮点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。
第四档（好）：（12-10分）完成规定任务，涵盖基本要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档（一般）：（9-7分）基本完成任务，写出一些内容，语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。
第二档（较差）（6-4分）未能完成规定任务。只能写出个别要点，语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。
第一档 （差)：（3-0分）与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词。上周五英语统考书面表达 评卷的总体原则是：“重表达”。考生应
严格按试题提示的要求去写。需要表达的
内容要点要完整表达，不可偷工减料、随
便删减。同时，根据表达的需要，要适度
地增添细节，以完善要点。 1.注重主题句的写作2.兼顾全文的衔接3.划分文章的段落headbodytailOpeningEndingBody 书面表达逻辑 过渡词
时间先后顺序first, second, next, finally, at last, first of all
转折：however, but, while, although, unless….
因果：because, so, because of, so that, therefore,
as a result….
并列：and, too, either…or…, both…and…, as well as,
条件：if, unless, if possible, if so, if necessary….
补充递进：not only…but also…, not…but…, in this way, what’s more, in other words, besides, at the same time, on the other hand, on one hand….
强调总结：That is to say, in a word, in short ,
in my opinion….
举例：for example, such as, as you know, as we all know, like, according to…. How to get on well with others
As we know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways?
First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to commuicate with each other and share our happinness and sadness. What's more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get along well. （2012年中考满分作文） 书面表达亮点
闪光高分单词
(1)adj.困难的
黯然低分词：difficult hard
闪光高分词：challenging 有挑战性的
(2)adj.美丽的
黯然低分词：beautiful pretty
闪光高分词：attractive 吸引人的; amazing迷人的;
闪光高分句子
从 句 宾语 状语 定语
谚 语 English saying
句 型 There be ,疑问句，被动语态等等 Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成
Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量
It‘s never too old to learn.活到老学到老
No pains, no gains. 没有付出就没有收获
To make the impossible possible.
Failure is the mother of success.
First things first.
Rome was not built in a day.
East or west, home is the best.
Well begun, half done.
Facts speak louder than words.
To live is to learn, to learn is to better live.
审题，抓点
造句，成文
改错，誉写
1.书写务必要规范，留下第一好印象。2.审清题后再动笔，不慌不忙列提纲。3.分段分层要清晰，谁主谁次把握好。 4 适当克隆和“抄袭”，考前备料攒信息。5.养成检查好习惯，火眼金睛纠错误。
小结：How to write ?Homework复习本课要点
背诵精彩范文预祝各位同学在中考中
考出自己的水平，
考出自己的风采。