课件38张PPT。 Writing Unit 1 Module 3 文本回顾： phrases
sentence structuresStep one: Check the phrases about the festivals
庆祝节日
纪念
给...提供
聚在一起
用...装饰
打扮
盼望
玩得开心celebrate festivals
in memory of
offer... To...
get together
decorate... with
dress up
look forward to
have fun with红包 农历新年 春节 舞龙灯 纪念某人v.
lucky money
the Lunar New Year
the Spring Festival
dragon dances
honour sb.
Step two : Sentence structures(句型） Read and identify(识别）the1st sentence structure 1 The most energetic and important festivals are the ones that look forward to the end of winter and to the coming of spring. 2 China and Japan have mid-autumn festivals, when people admire the moon and in China, enjoy mooncakes. 3 Some western countries have very exciting carnivals, which take place forty days before Easter.
Sentence structure: 定语从句（attributive clause)
主语+ 系动词+ the one(s) that
主句， +which/ when ...
Imitation:
春节就是一个辞旧(says goodbye to the past) 迎新的节日。
The spring festival is ____________________________
_____________________________________________the one that says goodbye to the past
year and welcomes the new year.
Read and identify the 2nd sentence structure
3 There are dragon dances and carnivals, and families
celebrate the Lunar new year together.
4 In European countries, people will usually decorate
churches with flowers and fruit, and will get together
to have meals.
Sentence structure: the compound sentences并列句 常用连接词：and,but,while,so, not only... but also Imitation（模仿）: 在春节来临之前，人们打扫房子并且用鲜花和春联（couplets)装饰房子来增加节日的气氛(atmosphere)。 Before the spring festival comes, _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ people clean the house and decorate it with
flowers and couplets to add to the festival atmosphere.Attention： add the attributive(定）, the adverbial(状） and the complement（补） to your expressions
假定你是李华，你的留学生同学Smith对中国传统春节
很感兴趣，想要了解春节的情况。请你写信向他介绍
中国的传统节日——春节。包括以下要点：
1)春节的意义；
2)春节的习俗；
3)邀请他和你一起过节。
注意：
1)词数100左右。
2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith，
_____________________________________审题： 1 时态 2 人称 3结构 一般现在时( simple present tense) 第一、三人称（春节）三段
假定你是李华，你的留学生同学Smith对中国传统春节
很感兴趣，想要了解春节的情况。请你写信向他介绍
中国的传统节日——春节。包括以下要点：
1)春节的意义；
2)春节的习俗；
3)邀请他和你一起过节。
注意：
1)词数100左右。
2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith，
_____________________________________Outline:
para.1 Purpose of writing the letter
para.2 The Significance and Customs of Spring Festival
para.3 Invitation
Para.1 The purpose of writing the letter?
你的留学生同学Smith对中国传统文化很感兴趣，想要了解春节的情况。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日——春节
Attention:
what is the purpose
to describe the reason or purpose briefly with one sectence
introduce Spring Festival to SmithPara1 对...感兴趣 告知 Translation: 得知你对中国春节感兴趣，我写信向你介绍它。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________ be interested in/ take/ show interest ininform sb. ofLearning that you take an interest in our Spring Festival, I am writing to inform you of it . Para. 2 The Significance and customs of Spring Festival
Point one: significance
1)The meaning
2) Time. （It begins from... to...)？
the 23rd of the 12th month in the Lunar Calendar --the Lantern Festival1The meaning
sentence structures：
主语+ 系动词+ the one(s) that ( 定语从句)/
主语+系动词+the occasion when
Translation：
这个最富有活力的春节是我们中国人享受全家团圆(family reunion) 的时刻(occasion)。
The most energetic and important spring festival is
___________________________________________
the occasion when we chinese enjoy the family reunion . Time： 连接句子： 1)It always begins from the 23rd of the 12th month in the Lunar Calendar to the Lantern Festival. 2)It lasts more than 20 days. Sentence structure: 主句+ during which... (定语从句） It always begins from the 23rd of the 12th month in the Lunar Calendar to the Lantern Festival, during which it lasts more than 20 days. Point two : activities / customs
1) clean the house thoroughly
2) prepare delicious food
3) purchase necessities ( food, clothes...)
4) stay up late on the new year’s eve
5) decorate the house with paper-cuttings,
couplets and lanterns
6) enjoy family reunion dinner
7)set off firecrackers
8) offer lucky money to the children
9) exchange greetings
10) visit friends and relatives frequently
多而杂？before the New Year's Eveafter New Year's Eveon new year's eveAttention:
1 time order
2 to stress “ busy”
3 the customs' purpose
4 a topic sentence is a must.
be busy in doing
be occupied with
be employed in doing忙1 人们走亲访友。 ___________________________, people __________________ visit relatives and friends _____________________________to exchange greetings. After the relaxation of the 1st daywearing new clotheswith gifts day after day时间状语动名词做后置定语状语，带着... Your time: 2 我们要扫房子，并用鲜花，剪纸，春联和灯笼来装饰它。 3我们的父母会（忙着）准备大量的食物，购买年货。 4 我们放鞭炮来庆祝我们的新年。 5 父母会给孩子们红包 Attention: 1 用并列句翻译 2添上时间，目的，或人们的心情
2 我们要扫房子，并用鲜花，剪纸，春联和灯笼来装饰它。
________________________, we will do a thorough
cleaning of the house, and decorate it with flowers,
paper-cuttings, couplets and lanterns
__________________________.
增添节日气氛
Before the new year's eveto add to the festival atmosphere.时间状语目的状语3 我们的父母会（忙着）准备大量的食物，购买年货。 Our parents ______________preparing plenty of food and do a new year's shopping. 4 我们放鞭炮来庆祝我们的新年。 we set off firecrackers to celebrate our new year. 最令人兴奋的时刻就是在除夕夜放鞭炮来迎接我们的新年 _______________________is to set off firecrackers _________________________ to welcome the new year. 心情的描述不可或缺are occupied in The most exciting momentat midnight on new year's eve5 父母会给孩子们红包
_______________________, parents offer some lucky money
to the children, ____________________ in the coming new year.
On the Spring Festivalhoping to bring good wishes 时间状语伴随状语---父母的希望Para.3 Invitation
key point: sincere invitation
我相信你一定会为这些精彩纷呈的庆祝活动着迷的，希望你能和我们共度春节来体验这些习俗(表明邀请的目的。
I am convinced that you are bound to _____________
the colorful celebrations, _______________________
___________________________________________
be addicted tohoping you can spend the Spring Festival in experiencing the customs with us. Presentation Time
根据要点完成作文： 作文中用上解释清楚的定语从句和丰富多彩的并列句及连接词让你的大作更流畅，连贯 1 para1: purpose 2 para2: the meaning of Spring Festival 3 para2: the time of Spring Festival 4 para2: Before the new year's eve 5 para2: on the new year's eve 6 para2: after the new year's eve 7 para2: describe your feeling( topic sentence) 8 para3: invitation ( 一句或两句）Enjoy the composition： Key points: 1 时间先后 2 定语从句 3 并列句 4 高级词汇 5 目的的表达方式 Learning that you take an interest in our Spring Festival, I am writing to inform you of it . The most energetic and important spring festival is the occasion when we chinese enjoy the family reunion .It always begins from the 23rd of the 12th month in the Lunar Calendar to the Lantern Festival, during which it lasts more than 20 days. Before the new year's eve,we will do a thorough cleaning of the house, and decorate it with flowers, paper-cuttings, couplets and lanterns to add to the festival atmosphere. Parents are occupied preparing plenty of food and do a new year's shopping while the chileren are delighted to set off firecrackers to welcome the new year. On the Spring Festival, parents always offer some lucky money to the children, hoping to bring good wishes to them in the coming new year. After relaxing themselves on the 1st day, people wearing new clothes begin to visit relatives and friends with gifts day after day to exchange greetings until Lantern Festival. Exhausted but delighted, we enjoy ourselves. I am convinced that you are bound to be absorbed in / be addicted to the colorful celebrations, hoping you can spend the winter vacation experiencing the customs with us. I will be honoured if you accept my invitation . Looking forward to receiving your early reply. mark：25Learning aims:
1 to recite the phrases in the textbook and translate the phrases
2 to write out the outline of the composition by discussing with other
students
3 to translate some sentences by making use of the sentence structures
and make our sentences longer
4 to finish a complete and fluent composition by adding some topic
sentences and connective word
Learning difficulties:
Making up sentences with sentence structures correctly , meaningful, colorful and coherent.Summary： 遣词造句： 解释清晰的定语从句， 丰富多彩的简单句，并列句Homework: Finish the composition . Thank You评测练习
作文题干：
假定你是李华，你的留学生同学Smith对中国传统春节很感兴趣，想要了解春节的情况。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日——春节。包括以下要点：
1)春节的意义； 2)春节的习俗； 3)邀请他和你一起过节。
注意：1)词数100左右。2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
根据要点完成作文（8人一组）： （作文中用上解释清楚的定语从句和丰富多彩的并列句及连接词让你的大作更流畅，连贯） 1 para1: purpose 2 para2: the meaning of Spring Festival 3 para2: the time of Spring Festival 4 para2: Before the new year's eve 5 para2: on the new year's eve 6 para2: after the new year's eve 7 para2: describe your feeling( topic sentence) 8 para3: invitation ( 一句或两句）
Enjoy the composition（作文赏析）： 要求： 注意：1 时间先后 2 定语从句3 并列句4 高级词汇 5 目的的表达方式 Dear Smith， Learning that you take an interest in our Spring Festival, I am writing to inform you of it . The most energetic and important spring festival is the occasion when we Chinese enjoy the family reunion .It always begins from the 23rd of the 12th month in the Lunar Calendar to the Lantern Festival, during which it lasts more than 20 days. Before the new year's eve,we will do a thorough cleaning of the house, and decorate it with flowers, paper-cuttings, couplets and lanterns to add to the festival atmosphere. Parents are occupied preparing plenty of food and do a new year's shopping while the children are delighted to set off firecrackers to welcome the new year. On the Spring Festival, parents always offer some lucky money to the children, hoping to bring good wishes to them in the coming new year. After relaxing themselves on the 1st day, people wearing new clothes begin to visit relatives and friends with gifts day after day to exchange greetings until Lantern Festival. Exhausted but delighted, we enjoy ourselves. I am convinced that you are bound to be absorbed in / be addicted to the colorful celebrations, hoping you can spend the winter vacation experiencing the customs with us. I will be honoured / will appreciate it if you accept my invitation . Looking forward to receive your early reply.
