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2019中考英语写作学案： 关于plan
1.写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务: 假如你很有计划，执行力也很强，在和你的美国朋友Jane分享了第一个新年计划之后，她表示对你的其他三个计划也很感兴趣。请根据所给提示，写一篇短文介绍你的另外三个计划，并说明你打算如何去做以及为什么这么做。
My other three resolutions 1. Improving my physical health 2. Improving my relationships with family and friends 3. Doing better at school
思路点拨:
1.?定基调
体裁：说明文
时态：一般将来时为主
人称：介绍自己新年打算做的事情时用第一人称。
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
计划二 My second resolution is about improving my physical health. (1)__________(我打算多吃水果蔬菜、多做运动) because they are good for my health.
计划三 My third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends. ◆My parents both like tennis. (2)__________(我计划培养和他们相同的爱好). Then I can often play tennis with them. Doing more things together will make us all happy.◆(3)__________(我计划更多地关心并帮助我的朋友们). I hope we will have a better relationship.
计划四 My last resolution is about how to do better at school. (4)__________(我打算上课更加认真地听讲，作业完成得更好). It can help me get better grades.?
表决心 I’m sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best!
3.?巧衔接
本文要写三个新年计划，自然会使用与其语义相关的词项，如My resolution is ...，I am going to，It can help me ...?的表达。这也是一种衔接手段，即词义搭配。此外，文中连用4个be going to ...?结构，表示打算做某事，这是使用平行结构使文章衔接的手段，这样做能使文章节奏匀称、紧致。
4.?添佳句?
Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者事竟成。
5.?成篇章
Hey, Jane! Here I want to share my other three resolutions with you.
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答案
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) I am going to eat more fruit and vegetables and play more sports
(2) I am going to take up the same hobby as them
(3) I am going to care about my friends more and help them more
(4) I am going to listen more carefully in class and do my homework better.
5.?成篇章
Jane! Here I want to share my other three resolutions with you.
My second resolution is about improving my physical health.?I am going to eat more fruit and vegetables and play more sports because they are good for my health.
My third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends. My parents both like tennis.?I am going to?take up the same hobby as them. Then I can often play tennis with them. Doing more things together will make us all happy. Also,?I am going to?care about my friends more and help them more. I hope we will have a better relationship.
My last resolution is about how to do better at school.?I am going to?listen more carefully in class and do my homework better. It can help me get better grades.
Well, where there is a will, there is a way. I’m sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best!
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2019中考英语写作学案：关于habits
1. 写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2. 写作任务：假如今天英语课上你们就“habits”这个话题进行了讨论，
课后老师要求你们写自己的习惯。请用英语写一篇短文介绍自己的好习惯和坏习惯完成此次写作任务。
思路点拨：
1. ?定基调：
体裁：介绍自己的好习惯和坏习惯，属于说明性质的文体。
时态：介绍日常习惯时，用一般现在时。
人称：写个人习惯时，用第一人称。
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
引出话题 Everyone has his own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits.
习惯 好习惯 (1) I ______________(经常帮忙做家务). (2) I ______________(总是独立完成作业). (3) I ______________(每天吃水果蔬菜). (4) I ______________(看牙医) for teeth cleaning twice a year. (5) I ______________(上学从来不迟到).
坏习惯 (6) I never do some reading. (7) I ______________(经常使用互联网) deep into the night. (8) I eat junk food ______________(一周三到五次). (9) ______________(我几乎从不运动).
3.?巧衔接
罗列好习惯和坏习惯时可用and, also等词作为列举的连接纽带，从写好习惯转到写坏习惯时可用however作为对比和转折的连接纽带。
4.?添佳句
Good habits will benefit people forever.
好习惯使人终生受益。
Old habits die hard, so I’ll start changing before it’s too late!?旧习难改，因此我会尽早改。
5.?成篇章
Everyone has his own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits.
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参考答案
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) often help with housework
(2) always finish my homework by myself
(3) eat fruit and vegetables every day
(4) go to the dentist
(5) never arrive late for school / am never late for school
(7) often use the Internet
(8) three to five times a week
(9) I hardly ever exercise / play sports
5.?成篇章
Everyone has his own habits. Here are my good habits and bad habits.
I have a lot of good habits. I often help with housework and I always finish my homework by myself. I eat fruit?and?vegetables every day.?Also, I go to the dentist for teeth cleaning twice a year. I never arrive late for school. Good habits will benefit people forever.?However, I have some bad habits too. I never do some reading. I often use the Internet deep into the night.?And?I eat junk food three to five times a week.?Also?I hardly ever exercise. Old habits die hard, so I’ll start changing before it’s too late!
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2019中考英语写作学案：关于My friends
1.写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务: 为了提高英语写作能力，你和你的美国笔友Jack约定你每周就一个话题写一篇短文发给他，他对你的作文进行点评指导。假如这次的话题是“My friends”，请你写一篇英语短文介绍你的两位朋友(一位与你相似，一位不同于你)，然后发给Jack。
思路点拨
1.?定基调
体裁：描述与朋友之间的异同，属于描写性质的文体。
时态：描述人物现在的情况，用一般现在时。
人称：描述他人时，用第三人称。
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
引出话题 I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda.
介绍朋友 和你相似的朋友 (1) Jenny ______________(和我相似) in some ways. (2) We both ______________(长着小眼睛，戴眼镜). (3) We are both ______________(个子高，有点胖). (4) We are both ______________(外向的). (5) Both of us enjoy ______________(一起读书).
和你不同的朋友 (6) Linda ______________(和我不同). (7) She ______________(长着乌黑的大眼睛). (8) She ______________(比我矮、瘦). (9) She ______________(比我安静). (10) At school, we are both hard-working, but she ______________(更加努力), so she always ______________(取得比我更好的成绩).
表达观点 I don’t care if friends are the same as me or different (11)______________(只要他们好).
3.?巧衔接
(1)写我和朋友相同点时可用and和also罗列；还可运用词汇的重复使前后句衔接自然，语意连贯，如similar to, we both, we are both, both of us等。
(2)从写和我相似的朋友转到写和我不同的朋友时，以及在写某一点Linda与我不同时，可用but作为对比和转折的连接纽带；此外，还可重复使用含有than的比较级的句子来描述与朋友之间的不同，句式的重复也可使文章更衔接。
4.?添佳句
Good friends are like stars. You don’t always see them, but you know they are there.
挚友犹如天上的星星。你不时常看见，但是你知道他们在那儿。
5.?成篇章
I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda.
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参考答案
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) is similar to me
(2) have small eyes and wear glasses
(3) tall and a little bit heavy
(4) outgoing??
(5) reading together
(6) is different from me??
(7) has big black eyes
(8) is shorter and thinner than me
(9) is quieter than me
(10) is more hard-working; gets better grades than me
(11) as long as they’re good
5.?成篇章
I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda.
Jenny is?similar to?me in some ways.?We both?have small eyes and wear glasses.?We are both?tall and a little bit heavy,?and we are both?outgoing.?Also, both of us?enjoy reading together.
But?Linda is different from me! She has big black eyes. She is shorter and thinner?than?me. Linda is quieter?than?me. At school, we are both hard-working, but she is more hard-working, so she always gets better grades?than me.
I don’t care if friends are the same as me or different as long as they’re good. I think good friends are like stars. You don’t always see them, but you know they are there.
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2019中考英语写作学案：关于My life in 20 years
1.写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务: 本周你校要进行有关畅想未来的英语演讲比赛。请以“My life in 20 years”为题，从二十年后你所从事的职业、居住地周围环境、业余活动等方面畅想，写一篇演讲稿为此次比赛做准备。
思路点拨:
1.?定基调
体裁：应用文(演讲稿)；演讲稿的主体部分为说明文
时态：一般将来时
人称：第一人称
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
我二十年后的生活 职业 (1) I think ____________________(我将会成为一所著名大学的老师).
居住地周围环境 I’ll live in my dream city — Beijing because there will be more jobs in the big city. (2) ____________________(我将在大学附近买一个大的公寓套房). (3) In the neighborhood ____________________(将有更多的树和花) and there will be no pollution.
业余活动 (4) In my free time, ____________________(我将不做家务) because my robot will help me do it. (5) ____________________(我将和我的学生一起去野营). I’ll travel around the world with my friends in a self-driving car. (6) ____________________(我将乘坐火箭去月球) for my vacations.
3.?巧衔接
???????本文要描述自己二十年以后的生活，自然会多次用到句型I will ...，这种平行结构的重复使用可以达到连接上下文的目的。另外，本文是从不同角度畅想未来生活，所以可用and, then, even, what’s more等表示语义增进，以使行文过渡自然、流畅。
4.?成篇章
Hello, everybody! My name’s Zhao Xuan. My life in 20 years will be fantastic and wonderful.
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That’s my life in 20 years. Thank you.
参考答案：
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) I will be a teacher in a famous university
(2) I will buy a big apartment near my university
(3) there will be more trees and flowers
(4) I won’t do the housework
(5) I will go camping with my students
(6) I will fly rockets to the moon
5.?成篇章
???????Hello, everybody! My name’s Zhao Xuan. My life in 20 years will be fantastic and wonderful.?I think?I will?be a teacher in a famous university.?And I will?live in my dream city — Beijing because there will be more jobs in the big city.?Then I will?buy a big apartment near my university. In the neighborhood there will be more trees and flowers and there will be no pollution. In my free time, I won’t do the housework because my robot will help me do it.?I will?go camping with my students.?I will even?travel around the world with my friends in a self-driving car.?What’s more,?I will?fly rockets to the moon for my vacations.
That’s my life in 20 years. Thank you.
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2019中考英语写作学案：关于zoo
1.写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务：假如你是一位导游，近日有来自美国的外宾团要来参观你们市，第一站参观的是鑫海动物园，请你根据以下提示提前准备要介绍的内容。
提示：最好的地方——鑫海动物园
◆规模大(占地面积约210,000 m2)
◆动物数量多(约1000只)
◆种类丰富
注意：适当运用最高级和比较级
思路点拨：
1.?定基调
体裁：介绍某地，属于说明文。
时态：一般现在时。
人称：介绍某地，可用第三人称。
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
告知游览地点 Hello! Welcome to my town! It is (1)______________(最大最漂亮的市) in our province (省). There are many good places to visit but I think the best place is Xinhai Zoo.
介绍游览地点 规模 The zoo is new and it is (2)______________(比其他两个动物园大) in our province. It is about 210,000 m2.
动物数量 The number of animals is the largest in our province. There are about 1,000 animals in total (总共).
动物种类 ◆The zoo has the most kinds of animals.◆We have (3)______________(最可爱的熊猫), the funniest monkeys and the biggest elephants.◆The tortoises (乌龟) are (4)______________(比其他动物慢) but they are the most interesting.◆Do you want to see (5)______________(最危险的动物)?◆Come and see the wildest (最野性的) lions and the scariest tigers.
祝福语 At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.
3.?巧衔接
文中写动物种类丰富时，可以重复使用最高级，关键词的重复是一种很好的衔接手段。
4.?添佳句
It is our first stop and it will be an unforgettable stop.
它是我们参观的第一站，也将是难忘的一站。
5.?成篇章
Hello! Welcome to my town!
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At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.
参考答案
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) the biggest and most beautiful town
(2) bigger than the other two zoos
(3) the loveliest pandas
(4) slower than other animals
(5) the most dangerous animals
5.?成篇章
Hello! Welcome to my town!?It is the biggest and most beautiful town in our province. There are many good places to visit but I think the best place is Xinhai Zoo. It is our first stop and it will be an unforgettable stop.
The zoo is new and it is bigger than the other two zoos in our province. It is about 210,000 m2. The number of animals is the largest in our province. There are about 1,000 animals in total. Also the zoo has the most kinds of animals. We have?the loveliest pandas, the funniest monkeys and the biggest elephants. The tortoises are slower than other animals but they are the most interesting. Do you want to see the most dangerous animals? Come and see the wildest lions and the scariest tigers.
At last, I hope your trip will be an enjoyable one.
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2019中考英语写作学案：关于优缺点
1.写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务：英语课上老师让你们分组讨论各自朋友存在的问题。你的朋友有三个问题，第一个你已帮他解决。请根据提示向你的小组陈述他的第二个问题和第三个问题并给出建议。
提示：
问题二：闲暇时间总是玩电脑游戏，不运动，父母不高兴；
问题三：学习很努力，可是成绩不理想。
思路点拨：
1.?定基调
体裁：说明文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
人称：第一人称和第三人称
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
引出话题 My friend also has two other problems.
问题二及建议 ★In his free time he always plays computer games and doesn’t play sports. (1)________________(这让父母不高兴).★I think he should promise his parents that he will play computer games only once a week. (2)________________(如果他遵守诺言), his parents will understand him.
问题三及建议 ★Although he works hard at all subjects, he doesn’t get good grades. (3)________________(他害怕和老师谈这个问题).★I think he should tell his teacher his problem. (4)________________(如果他的老师知道这件事，他或她会帮他) find out what’s wrong with him and help him solve the problem.
3.?巧衔接
(1)?陈述朋友的问题时可用the second one和the third one来罗列这两个问题，并体现这两个问题之间的顺序关系。
(2)?问题二中的事情导致父母不高兴，在成文时，为避免重复，可用指示照应词that指代前一句话的内容，这样做不仅使前后句紧密连贯，而且使语言简洁。
(3)?使用平行结构I think he should ...?及If ..., ... will ...?能使文章节奏匀称，使上下文成为有机统一体。
4.?成篇章
My friend also has two other problems.
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参加答案
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) That makes his parents unhappy
(2) If he keeps his promise
(3) He is afraid to talk to his teacher about it
(4) If his teacher knows it, he or she will help him
4.?成篇章
My friend also has two other problems.
The second one:?In his free time he always plays computer games and doesn’t play sports. That makes his parents unhappy.?I think he should promise his parents that he will play computer games only once a week.?If?he keeps his promise, his parents?will?understand him.
The third one:?Although he works hard at all subjects, he doesn’t get good grades. He is afraid to talk to his teacher about it.?I think he should?tell his teacher his problem.?If?his teacher knows it, he or she?will?help him find out what’s wrong with him and help him solve the problem.
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2019中考英语写作学案：关于影评
1.写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务：今天英语课上老师让你们观看了Zootopia?(《疯狂动物城》)这部电影，并让你们对这部电影进行评论，请写一篇英语短文来完成你的影评。
思路点拨：
1.?定基调
体裁：议论文
时态：写影评用一般现在时。
人称：写故事梗概时可用第三人称，表达自己观点时可用第一人称。
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
电影名称及类型 Zootopia?is (1)___________(一部有教育意义且激动人心的动画片).
故事梗概 ◆The movie is about a rabbit, Judy. Judy (2)___________(想成为) the first rabbit police officer when she is a kid although all the other animals think it is impossible (不可能的). However, through her? hard work, (3)___________(她的梦想实现了).◆When a strange (奇怪的) thing happens in the city of Zootopia, Judy decides to solve (处理) the difficult case (案件) (4)___________(尽管她只有48小时来完成). With the help of Nick, Judy (5)___________(查明) the truth (真相) of the case.◆(6)___________(她变得非常出名) in the city.
自己的观点 I like the movie because it tells us that we should have our dreams and work hard for them.
3.?巧衔接
文中写故事梗概时可以用一些表示时间过渡的词语来体现故事的脉络，比如when, later, at last等，这些词语的运用使文章衔接自然、流畅。
4.?添佳句
As the lyrics of this movie’s theme song say, I won’t give up no I won’t give in. Till I reach the end and then I’ll start again.
正如电影主题曲的歌词所说：我绝不会屈服，绝不会放弃。直到我抵达终点，我会重新出发。
5.?成篇章
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参考答案
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) an educational and exciting cartoon movie
(2) wants to be? (3) her dream comes true
(4) although she only has 48 hours to finish it
(5) finds out? (6) She becomes very famous
5.?成篇章
Zootopia?is an educational and exciting cartoon movie. It is about a rabbit, Judy. Judy wants to be the first rabbit police officer?when?she is a kid although all the other animals think it is impossible. However, through her hard work, her dream comes true.?Later?when a strange thing happens in the city of Zootopia, Judy decides to solve the difficult case although she only has 48 hours to finish it. With the help of Nick, Judy finds out the truth of the case.?At last?she becomes very famous in the city.
I like the movie because it tells us that we should have our dreams and work hard for them. As the lyrics of this movie’s theme song say, I won’t give up no I won’t give in. Till I reach the end and then I’ll start again
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2019中考英语写作学案：关于最喜欢的东西
1.写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务：某英文杂志新设栏目《在线烹饪》并公开征集稿件，内容主要是介绍你最喜欢的食物及制作方法。假如你最喜欢的食物是蛋炒饭，请写一篇短文向该杂志投稿。
思路点拨：
1.?定基调
体裁：说明文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第二人称
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
引出话题 Hello, my favorite food is rice fried with eggs. Here I will tell you how to make it.
制作步骤 ◆Get everything ready. You need some cooked rice, two eggs, some oil (油), (1)_______________(一些牛肉片和一个洋葱).◆Break the eggs into a bowl and stir (搅动). And (2)_______________(把洋葱切碎) and put it on a plate.◆Pour some oil into the pan (平底锅). When it’s hot, (3)_______________(把鸡蛋倒进锅里并炒两分钟). After that, add the cooked rice, the onion and beef pieces and mix them together, and (4)_______________(再炒两分钟).◆(5)_______________(加一些盐) and mix them together. Your rice fried with eggs is OK.
3.?巧衔接
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4.?成篇章
Hello, my favorite food is rice fried with eggs. Here I will tell you how to make it.
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参考答案
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) some beef pieces and an onion
(2) cut up the onion / cut the onion up
(3) pour the eggs into the pan and cook for two minutes
(4) cook for another two minutes
(5) Add some salt
4.?成篇章
Hello, my favorite food is rice fried with eggs. Here I will tell you how to make it.
First,?get everything ready. You need some cooked rice, two eggs, some oil, some beef pieces and an onion.
Next,?break the eggs into a bowl and stir. And cut up the onion and put it on a plate.
Then,?pour some oil into the pan. When it’s hot, pour the eggs into it and cook for two minutes. After that, add the cooked rice, the onion and beef pieces and mix them together, and cook for another two minutes.
Finally,?add some salt and mix them together. Your rice fried with eggs is OK.
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2019中考英语写作学案：关于邀请函
1.写作步骤：定基调—列提纲、写句子—巧衔接—添佳句—成篇章
2.写作任务：假如你是刘金，你的笔友Dale本周五要来拜访你，为表示欢迎，你准备举行一个派对。你想邀请你班交换生Betty来参加，请给她发一封邀请函。
思路点拨：
1.?定基调
体裁：应用文(邀请函)
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
人称：第一人称和第二人称
2.?列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
邀请原因、派对时间及地点 My penfriend Dale is coming to visit me this Friday. (1)_________________(我将在家举办一个欢迎派对). It will be at 8:00 on Saturday morning. (2)_________________(我想邀请你参加派对).
活动安排 (3)_________________(你不必带食物和饮料). My parents will provide everything. After the meal, (4)_________________(我们可以唱歌或跳舞). I’m sure we’ll have fun.
期待回复 Please reply to me by e-mail by Friday afternoon to (5)_________________(让我知道你是否能来).
3.?巧衔接
???????本文要写一封邀请函，将会用到与其语义相关的表达，如would like to, invite you to, reply to, look forward to等，这是通过语义搭配作为一种衔接手段。
4.?成篇章
Dear Betty,
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I look forward to seeing you.
Liu Jin
参考答案
2.?列提纲、写句子
(1) I will have a welcome party at my home
(2) I would like / want to invite you to the party
(3) You don’t need to bring any food or drink
(4) we can sing or dance
(5) let me know if you can come
4.?成篇章
Dear Betty,
My penfriend Dale is coming to visit me this Friday. I will have a welcome party at my home. It will be at 8:00 on Saturday morning. I?would like to invite you to?the party.
You don’t need to bring any food or drink. My parents will provide everything. After the meal, we can sing or dance. I’m sure we’ll have fun.
Please?reply to?me by e-mail by Friday afternoon to let me know if you can come.
I?look forward to?seeing you.
Liu Jin
