专题三十一 书面表达开放式（解析版）
开放式作文类似语文考试中的材料作文。试题给出一定的素材或主题，让学生在此基础上自由发挥，自由创作，不受“文体形式，内容要点”的限制。开放作文更能反映出考生的写作水平。
开放作文不同于传统的书面表达。传统的书面表达是一种控制性写作，即通过要点提示、图画、表格等命题形式来限定书面表达的内容、人称、时态、词数、文体等，使考生自由发挥的空间缩小，在一定程度上限制了考生的思维、想象等能力的发挥。而开放作文只给出一段素材或一幅图画，然后由考生在此基础上充分发挥想象，自由创作。
【考例1】（2018·全国I） 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：
(1).到达时间；
(2).合适的礼物；
【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇书信类应用文章。1.要点包括：(1).到达时间；(2).合适的礼物；2.时态：一一般现在时态和将来时为主；3.人称：二、三人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，使文章自然、流畅；5.适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章档次。
【考例2】（2018·全国II） 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：
(1)短片内容：学校的发展；
(2)放映时间、地点；
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, every one of you will be welcome to enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.
Student Union
June 8, 2018
【解析】这是一篇应用文—通知。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读通知，弄清通知所有信息和要求；2、根据写作要点，写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【考例3】（2018·浙江） 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
（1）. 口语能力：
（2）. 相关经验；
（3）. 应聘目的。
注意：
（1）. 词数80左右；
（2）. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Hearing that some volunteers are wanted to welcome the foreign students, I am gladly writing to apply for this job.
I do believe that I am very qualified for this voluntary work. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I have a good knowledge of English and I can communicate with native English speakers fluently. Secondly, I have some experience in accompanying foreign friends.
I do believe the volunteer work will enable me to practise English more fluently and broaden my horizons.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写应聘信。学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。1.内容包括：（1）. 口语能力：（2）. 相关经验；（3）. 应聘目的。2.时态：以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称；3. 注意恰当使用一些连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，使文章自然、流畅；4.适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章档次。
【考例4】（2017·全国卷Ⅰ） 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容：学习唐诗；
3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie，
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇电子邮件，1.要点包括：①时间和地点；②内容：学习唐诗；③课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2.时态：以一般现在时为主，人称：第二人称为主；3. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；4.适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章档次。
【考例5】 （2017·全国卷Ⅱ）
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．展览时间、地点；
2．展览内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper-cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
【解析】考查开放式作文，写一封信邀请信。邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术发展。
1.结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动的时间、地点；第三段详实地交代展览内容。2.时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3.人称：第一人称。
4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅5.适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章档次。
1. （百校联盟2018届高三一月联考） 假定你是李华。你校最近举办了一场运动会，请给你的美国笔友Jonah写一封邮件，介绍运动会的相关情况及比赛中一件令你难忘的事。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Jonah,
I have something exciting to tell you. Our school held a sports meeting at the school stadium last week. The event included all kinds of track and field competitions. Four boys from my class took part in the 4×100m relay race. Our team took the lead at first. But Wang Hui, the last to run, fell down suddenly when he took the stick from another boy. His knee was injured, but he stood up and kept on running towards the finish line. Deeply touched by his courage, all the audience cheered loudly. Although he was the last one to reach the finish line, our class was rewarded the Excellent Group Award because he didn’t give up.
Do you have anything interesting to tell me?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2. （河南省中原名校2018届高三第五次联考） 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对中国的竹子非常好奇。请写一封电子邮件介绍竹子的短文。内容包括：
1.竹子的外貌特点；
2.竹子的作用；
3.竹子的象征意义。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Peter，
I am very glad to know that you are interested in bamboo. Now, I would like to introduce it to you.
Bamboo is a kind of plant, which is hollow inside. It usually grows straight and thin, sometimes up to several meters with green leaves on it. Its tender young roots can be used as a kind of delicious food. People often use bamboo to build houses, or make desks, chairs and so on. Houses made of bamboo can be seen in some areas. Besides, bamboo can serve as food utensils, such as bamboo chopsticks.
Bamboo is very popular in our country. Because of its characteristics, it is often seen as a symbol of youth, modesty and nobleness.
Hoping my introduction can help you have a knowledge of bamboo.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 2022年北京-张家口冬奥会将如期在北京和张家口举行。为了确保冬奥会圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 个人情况；
2. 自身优势；
3. 服务承诺?
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：2022北京-张家口冬奥会 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.
Thank you!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as volunteer for 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games. I’m a boy of eighteen years old from a high school. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What’s more, I have other advantages – I’m especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help other. I’m willing to provide the best service for every athlete in Winter Olympic Games. Therefore, I think I’m suitable for serving the Games.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.
Thank you!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
4. 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友David约好一起去图书馆，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the library with you on Friday afternoon.
I have just found I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go to Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:00 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you. I should be available any time after school next week.
5.假定你是李华，下星期六你将在学校的英语晚会上担当主持人。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，向她咨询用英语主持晚会应该注意什么问题，并希望她抽空参加这个英语晚会。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I am Li Hua from NO. 1 Middle school. Next Saturday I have to be the host of the English evening in the school, but I am not sure how to do it well because this will be the first time I have done the job speaking in English. What should I pay attention to? Are there any special ways of saying things on this occasion, for example, any particular words or expressions that I have to be careful with?
I’m looking forward to your advice, and I do wish that you could spare enough time to come to the English evening.
Yours,
Li Hua
专题三十一 书面表达开放式（原卷版）
开放式作文类似语文考试中的材料作文。试题给出一定的素材或主题，让学生在此基础上自由发挥，自由创作，不受“文体形式，内容要点”的限制。开放作文更能反映出考生的写作水平。
开放作文不同于传统的书面表达。传统的书面表达是一种控制性写作，即通过要点提示、图画、表格等命题形式来限定书面表达的内容、人称、时态、词数、文体等，使考生自由发挥的空间缩小，在一定程度上限制了考生的思维、想象等能力的发挥。而开放作文只给出一段素材或一幅图画，然后由考生在此基础上充分发挥想象，自由创作。
【考例1】（2018·全国I） 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：
(1).到达时间；
(2).合适的礼物；
【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don't hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇书信类应用文章。1.要点包括：(1).到达时间；(2).合适的礼物；2.时态：一一般现在时态和将来时为主；3.人称：二、三人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，使文章自然、流畅；5.适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章档次。
【考例2】（2018·全国II） 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：
(1)短片内容：学校的发展；
(2)放映时间、地点；
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, every one of you will be welcome to enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.
Student Union
June 8, 2018
【解析】这是一篇应用文—通知。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读通知，弄清通知所有信息和要求；2、根据写作要点，写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【考例3】（2018·浙江） 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
（1）. 口语能力：
（2）. 相关经验；
（3）. 应聘目的。
注意：
（1）. 词数80左右；
（2）. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Hearing that some volunteers are wanted to welcome the foreign students, I am gladly writing to apply for this job.
I do believe that I am very qualified for this voluntary work. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I have a good knowledge of English and I can communicate with native English speakers fluently. Secondly, I have some experience in accompanying foreign friends.
I do believe the volunteer work will enable me to practise English more fluently and broaden my horizons.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写应聘信。学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。1.内容包括：（1）. 口语能力：（2）. 相关经验；（3）. 应聘目的。2.时态：以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称；3. 注意恰当使用一些连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，使文章自然、流畅；4.适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章档次。
【考例4】（2017·全国卷Ⅰ） 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容：学习唐诗；
3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie，
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇电子邮件，1.要点包括：①时间和地点；②内容：学习唐诗；③课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2.时态：以一般现在时为主，人称：第二人称为主；3. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；4.适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章档次。
【考例5】 （2017·全国卷Ⅱ）
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．展览时间、地点；
2．展览内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper-cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
【解析】考查开放式作文，写一封信邀请信。邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术发展。
1.结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动的时间、地点；第三段详实地交代展览内容。2.时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3.人称：第一人称。
4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅5.适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提高文章档次。
1. （百校联盟2018届高三一月联考） 假定你是李华。你校最近举办了一场运动会，请给你的美国笔友Jonah写一封邮件，介绍运动会的相关情况及比赛中一件令你难忘的事。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2. （河南省中原名校2018届高三第五次联考） 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对中国的竹子非常好奇。请写一封电子邮件介绍竹子的短文。内容包括：
1.竹子的外貌特点；
2.竹子的作用；
3.竹子的象征意义。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 2022年北京-张家口冬奥会将如期在北京和张家口举行。为了确保冬奥会圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 个人情况；
2. 自身优势；
3. 服务承诺?
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：2022北京-张家口冬奥会 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.
Thank you!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
4. 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友David约好一起去图书馆，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5.假定你是李华，下星期六你将在学校的英语晚会上担当主持人。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，向她咨询用英语主持晚会应该注意什么问题，并希望她抽空参加这个英语晚会。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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