专题二十九 书面表达文字提纲式
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提纲作文是高考书面表达的考查热点之一。命题者把材料分割成信息块,用独立的文字信息表示出来。这类题型中有较多的文字说明,对考生的表述思路有较明确的规定。形式以书信、报道、通知、日记等为主,内容贴近学生生活。
【考例1】(2018·天津卷)
61. 假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点;
(2)邀请他的原因;
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris, ?
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics.?
What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know you've just won first prize in the Robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.
The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect.
I'm looking forward to your reply.?
Yours,
Li Jin?
【解析】考查提纲类作文
1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。 2.文章要点: ①说明写邮件的目的(代表兴趣小组发出邀请);②介绍比赛的时间和地点;③邀请他的原因(Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖);④告知Chris训练计划将发送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。
【考例2】(2018·北京) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
(1) 表示欢迎;
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学;
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:(1). 词数不少于50;
(2). 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是提纲类作文,文章要求写回信,为英国朋友介绍北京的大学情况。写作时除了要包含最基本的内容要点:表示欢迎、推荐大学和建议做准备之外,还应该考虑题干中的与文化相结合的上大学的准备,比如语言和读书等。写作时注意英语的思维习惯,以一般现在时为主,尽可能实用多样的语法结构,语言要简练,尽量地道。【考例3】(2018天津春)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生发的帖子,得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言:
(1)鼓励他来中国留学;
(2)说明来华留学的好处(如:加深对中国的了解,对个人发展的益处等);
(3)表示愿意进一步提供帮助。
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
Hi, Chris,
I learned about the message you posted on the Internet that you have the intention to come to China for college, which makes me delighted because I believe it would be a great opportunity for you to enrich your life as well as broadening your mind.
There are many advantages of studying in China. First of all, there are many remarkable universi-ties in China for you to choose to attend and you can experience the rich Chinese culture. Second, it is an extremely meaningful experience for you, providing you with a wonderful platform where
you can not only learn more about China but also promote your personal abilities.
Don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any more help.
【解析】本文为跟帖留言,属提纲类作文。
1.以第一人称为主体人称;以一般现在时和一般过去时为主体时态。 2.根据内容要点可分三段来写:①鼓励Chris来华留学;②说明来华留学的好处;③表达自己的意愿:愿意进一步提供帮助。
【考例4】(2018·全国III)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:
1. 学校的体育场馆;
2. 主要的运动项目;
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意:1. 词数100左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】 本题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活话题。
1.以第一人称的口吻介绍学校的体育场馆和主要的运动项目;时态以一般现在时为主。 2.可采用三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目的;第二段:具体介绍试题给出的三个要 点,其中第二个要点可采取列举的方式,第三个要点除了写自己喜欢的体育运动,还要阐述喜欢这项体育运动的原因;第三段:总结并发出邀请。
【考例5】(2017天津)
假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
(3)希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you. With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in preparing for it. Meanwhile, owing to my great interest in sports, I pay close attention to the 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. And the good news I want to tell you
is that I have become a volunteer for it. In order to have a good performance, I have made a lot of preparations for it. After school, I often surf the Internet to get more information about the history and culture of Tianjin. I also practice my oral English every day.
I do hope you can revisit Tianjin someday.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文。
1.人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。 2.写作要点:①介绍自己的学习和生活;
②告诉Mrs. Green你已成为第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍你为此所做的准备;
③希望Mrs. Green重访天津。
【考例6】(2017天津春)?
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友 Chris 正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大会”在 CCTV 播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响;
(2)介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);
(3)表达对 Chris 学习中国文化的祝愿。
注意:(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Competition
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to reply to your letter.Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to
know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been broadcast on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry.
In your letter, you mentioned that you are eager to know about Chinese culture. I think the best way to learn about it is to read some relevant books. I’d like to recommend a book to you. The book, entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry. The poems in the book can reflect the Chinese history and culture,
many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of the ancient Chinese. And they can also improve your appreciation of Chinese poetry.
I think the book is a good choice for you. I believe you will understand the poems easily and effi-ciently. Wish you to enjoy the book and know more about China.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,属于书信体。主要使用第一、三人称,以一般现在时为主体时态。
文章可分三段来写:首段简单介绍“中国诗词大会”在 CCTV 播出后的反响;第二段可具体推荐一本书;第三段表达自己的祝愿。
解题技巧
1、细读提示,认真审题,把握体裁
审题应包括:审体裁,高考书面表达题的体裁一般有记叙文、说明文和应用文等;审格式,特别注意掌握应用文(书信、通知、演讲稿等)的格式;定人称,根据命题内容需要,对人称进行合理的选择定位;定时态,英语的动词与汉语的动词用法有很大的差别,是考生常出错误的地方。
2、紧扣主题,组织要点
虽然提纲作文的“要点”似乎已经定好了,但在认真审题,弄清楚题意的基础上,仍要逐个地、完美无缺地把内容要点列出来。
3、选词造句,初步成文
在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上,根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则,按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序选词造句,然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。
4、仔细审核,查漏补缺
写作时,由于时间仓促,加上心情紧张和粗心,难免出现错漏现象,如漏掉内容要点,字母大小写不准确,单词拼写有误,习惯用语搭配不当,时态混乱,主谓不一致以及母语干扰造成的中文式英语等。所有的这些问题,都值得考生在定稿前认真检查、仔细核对、及时修补,力争做到全文信息齐全、结构合理、语句表达准确。
1(2018天津和平区二模)
假如你是高三学生李津,请你代表你的同学们,结合下面所提供的信息给你们的外教Mr. Black写一封电子邮件,向他提出一些建议。
要点:
1.表达问候并说明大家都很喜欢上他的课;
2.今天受同学的委托向老师提几点建议;
3.想了解美国同龄人的学习和生活情况;
4.想了解美国一些著名大学的信息。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾已经写出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:同龄人peer
Dear Mr. Black,
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Good luck!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
2.(南昌市外国语学校2019届高考英语复习卷1)成语是中国文化的重要组成部分,它能用简单的词语表达出丰富且深刻的寓意。假定你是李华,你的外国笔友?Peter对中国成语很感兴趣,向你咨询有关中国成语的信息。请你写封邮件,介绍成语相关内容:
1、成语的特点;
2、学习成语的益处;
3、自己学习成语感受和体会。
Dear Peter,
I am glad that you are interested in?Chinese idioms.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Lihua
3.(2018天津高三下学期第二次联考)
假设你是李津,是天津某中学高三学生。你的加拿大笔友Susan正在学汉语,她给你发来邮件,询问你3月23日的英语考试情况并请你给她推荐一本汉语读物。请你给她回复邮件,要点如下:
1.表示感谢;
2.介绍你3月英语考试的详情(如心态、答题情况及考后反思等);
3.推荐《红楼梦》(A Dream of Red Mansions)并表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.邮件的开头、结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,要点齐全,语句通顺。
Dear Susan,
I’m more than delighted to hear from you.???
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Yours,
Li Jin
4.(天津市河东区2018届第一次模考)假如你是李津。你于2018年2月20日在网上订购了一本英国原版书Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (£10.00),一周后收到,发现书存在质量问题。请给客服部经理写封投诉邮件,说明情况和要求。要点如下:
☆商品名称、订购时间及价格;
☆何时发现何种质量问题(印刷错误,缺页等);
☆要求退款或换货,建议改进产品质量。
注意:⑴请使用规范英语,词数不少于100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
⑵可适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。
Manager
Customer and Service Department
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to you to make a complaint about your product._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
5.(湖南师范大学附属中学2018届高三上学期第二次月考)假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会将举行迎新联欢晚会,请你给外籍教师Tom写一封邀请函。内容包括:1.晚会时间7:00 p.m.—9:00 p.m. next Friday;
2.晚会地点Students' Meeting Hall;
3.表演内容;
4.邀请对方参加表演以及询问对方的意愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邀请信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing?__________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.(河南省郑州市第一中学2018届高三上学期第二次月考) 假定你是李华,你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老师家做客,但是她不知道中国人做客有哪些传统,她给你发了一封电子邮件,请你给她一些建议。请你依据下列要点,给她回复一封电子邮件。
要点如下:
1.适当地送一些礼物;
2.介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
注意:
1.词数100左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
I have received your email.You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope you will enjoy yourself ill your teacher's home.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
7.(2017天津红桥区二模)?
假定你是中学生李津。一个来自英国的中学生代表团在你校举办英语文化节(English Cultural Festival)期间来访,并受邀观看英文戏剧表演(English Drama Show)。请你根据以下写作要点代表学校写一篇欢迎词。
1)表示对客人的欢迎;
2)介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容、时间、地点等);
3)表达对客人的祝愿。
注意:
1)词数不少于100;
2)可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3)称呼已给出,请写欢迎词正文。
Dear British guests,
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8.(2017天津十二所重点中学二模)?
假如你是育才中学的李津,即将高中毕业。你打算报考香港大学,学习环境科学(Environmental Science),但有一些事情不太清楚,因此要给该校写一封电子邮件,咨询以下相关事宜:
1.如何才能被该校的相关专业录取;
2.是否需要参加专门的英语考试;
3.该校的奖学金、学费、食宿安排和生活费用等情况。
注意:1.邮件必须包括以上内容,可适当增加细节;
2.词数不少于100。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a senior student from Yucai High School and soon I will graduate.???
? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
9.(2017天津南开区三模)?
为了吸引更多的留学生到你校学习,校学生会决定拍摄一部反映学校生活的短片,现正在招募学生演员。请你以学生会的名义,根据以下提示撰写一个通知。
(1)此次活动的目的;
(2)演员需要具备的条件:沟通能力强,擅长英语……(可以适当发挥);
(3)短片的内容简介;
(4)最后报名期限:下周一前到学生会报名。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)通知格式已给出,不计入总词数。
NOTICE
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Students’ Union
10.(2017天津河北区二模)?
假如你是某外国语学校的学生李津,第九届金砖国家峰会(The Ninth BRICS Summit)将在你居住的城市举办。组委会现正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容包括:
1.个人情况:年龄、性别;
2.个人条件:擅长英语和法语,关注时事、政治和经济,善于交际,乐于助人,熟悉本地;
3.本人承诺:提供最佳服务。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Jin. ??
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I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
11.(河北省保定市2018届高三上期末调研)假设你是校学生会主席李华,新年到来之际,为了帮助学校留学生们更好地了解中国文化,学生会将举办一场新年联欢会。请用英语写一个通知,主要内容包括:
1. 时间:下周五晚6:00—8:00;
2. 地点:教学楼101室;
3. 内容:学习包饺子;比赛用筷子;中国校园歌曲串烧、观看武术表演等。
注意:1.词数不少于100
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
12. (安徽省亳州市2017-2018学年高三期末质量检测) 假如你是李华,前天你收到英国笔友Kathy发来的电子邮件,说她很想报名参加即将在当地举办的“汉语民歌演唱比赛(Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest)”活动,但信心不足。请你给她回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.鼓励她积极报名参加; 2.帮助分析参加的意义; 3.给她提几点建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Kathy,
I am glad to know that_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
13. (黑龙江佳木斯一中2018届高三上第五次调研)假设你是李华,从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告,欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件中请参加。
内容主要包括:
自我介绍(包括中英文能力),
参加意图(帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化,
希望获准。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总次数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
14. (重庆市九校联盟2018届高三第一次联考)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友David准备组织一个“走进中国(Approach to China”的活动,他写信请你帮忙策划一下活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素,以便让他的同学更好地了解中国。请你用英文写一封回信。
要求:1. 100字左右;
2. 需包括至少两个中国元素,可适当增减细节。
参考词汇:一带一路倡议One Belt and One Road Initiative;吉祥物mascot
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15. (福建省龙岩市2018届高三上期末)你校将于4月26日“世界知识产权日”(The World Intellectual Property Day)举办一次以“科技让校园生活更美好”(Science Makes Life Better on Campus)为主题的创意作品展。假定你是李华,请你代表学校学生会写封邮件,邀请美国交换生Henry参与展评活动。
内容包括:
1. 目的:尊重知识、崇尚科学;
2. 展评时间、地点、内容;
3. 报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1. 词数100左右,内容包括主要要点;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
专题二十九 书面表达文字提纲式
(解析版)
提纲作文是高考书面表达的考查热点之一。命题者把材料分割成信息块,用独立的文字信息表示出来。这类题型中有较多的文字说明,对考生的表述思路有较明确的规定。形式以书信、报道、通知、日记等为主,内容贴近学生生活。
【考例1】(2018·天津卷)
61. 假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他普在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点;
(2)邀请他的原因;
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris, ?
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics.?
What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know you've just won first prize in the Robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.
The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect.
I'm looking forward to your reply.?
Yours,
Li Jin?
【解析】考查提纲类作文
1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。 2.文章要点: ①说明写邮件的目的(代表兴趣小组发出邀请);②介绍比赛的时间和地点;③邀请他的原因(Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖);④告知Chris训练计划将发送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。
【考例2】(2018·北京) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
(1) 表示欢迎;
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学;
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:(1). 词数不少于50;
(2). 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是提纲类作文,文章要求写回信,为英国朋友介绍北京的大学情况。写作时除了要包含最基本的内容要点:表示欢迎、推荐大学和建议做准备之外,还应该考虑题干中的与文化相结合的上大学的准备,比如语言和读书等。写作时注意英语的思维习惯,以一般现在时为主,尽可能实用多样的语法结构,语言要简练,尽量地道。【考例3】(2018天津春)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生发的帖子,得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言:
(1)鼓励他来中国留学;
(2)说明来华留学的好处(如:加深对中国的了解,对个人发展的益处等);
(3)表示愿意进一步提供帮助。
注意:
(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
.
【参考范文】
Hi, Chris,
I learned about the message you posted on the Internet that you have the intention to come to China for college, which makes me delighted because I believe it would be a great opportunity for you to enrich your life as well as broadening your mind.
There are many advantages of studying in China. First of all, there are many remarkable universi-ties in China for you to choose to attend and you can experience the rich Chinese culture. Second, it is an extremely meaningful experience for you, providing you with a wonderful platform where
you can not only learn more about China but also promote your personal abilities.
Don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any more help.
【解析】本文为跟帖留言,属提纲类作文。
1.以第一人称为主体人称;以一般现在时和一般过去时为主体时态。 2.根据内容要点可分三段来写:①鼓励Chris来华留学;②说明来华留学的好处;③表达自己的意愿:愿意进一步提供帮助。
【考例4】(2018·全国III)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:
1. 学校的体育场馆;
2. 主要的运动项目;
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意:1. 词数100左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】 本题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活话题。
1.以第一人称的口吻介绍学校的体育场馆和主要的运动项目;时态以一般现在时为主。 2.可采用三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目的;第二段:具体介绍试题给出的三个要 点,其中第二个要点可采取列举的方式,第三个要点除了写自己喜欢的体育运动,还要阐述喜欢这项体育运动的原因;第三段:总结并发出邀请。
【考例5】(2017天津)
假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
(3)希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you. With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in preparing for it. Meanwhile, owing to my great interest in sports, I pay close attention to the 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. And the good news I want to tell you
is that I have become a volunteer for it. In order to have a good performance, I have made a lot of preparations for it. After school, I often surf the Internet to get more information about the history and culture of Tianjin. I also practice my oral English every day.
I do hope you can revisit Tianjin someday.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文。
1.人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。 2.写作要点:①介绍自己的学习和生活;
②告诉Mrs. Green你已成为第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍你为此所做的准备;
③希望Mrs. Green重访天津。
【考例6】(2017天津春)?
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友 Chris 正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大会”在 CCTV 播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响;
(2)介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);
(3)表达对 Chris 学习中国文化的祝愿。
注意:(1)词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Competition
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to reply to your letter.Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to
know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been broadcast on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry.
In your letter, you mentioned that you are eager to know about Chinese culture. I think the best way to learn about it is to read some relevant books. I’d like to recommend a book to you. The book, entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry. The poems in the book can reflect the Chinese history and culture,
many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of the ancient Chinese. And they can also improve your appreciation of Chinese poetry.
I think the book is a good choice for you. I believe you will understand the poems easily and effi-ciently. Wish you to enjoy the book and know more about China.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,属于书信体。主要使用第一、三人称,以一般现在时为主体时态。
文章可分三段来写:首段简单介绍“中国诗词大会”在 CCTV 播出后的反响;第二段可具体推荐一本书;第三段表达自己的祝愿。
解题技巧
1、细读提示,认真审题,把握体裁
审题应包括:审体裁,高考书面表达题的体裁一般有记叙文、说明文和应用文等;审格式,特别注意掌握应用文(书信、通知、演讲稿等)的格式;定人称,根据命题内容需要,对人称进行合理的选择定位;定时态,英语的动词与汉语的动词用法有很大的差别,是考生常出错误的地方。
2、紧扣主题,组织要点
虽然提纲作文的“要点”似乎已经定好了,但在认真审题,弄清楚题意的基础上,仍要逐个地、完美无缺地把内容要点列出来。
3、选词造句,初步成文
在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上,根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则,按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序选词造句,然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。
4、仔细审核,查漏补缺
写作时,由于时间仓促,加上心情紧张和粗心,难免出现错漏现象,如漏掉内容要点,字母大小写不准确,单词拼写有误,习惯用语搭配不当,时态混乱,主谓不一致以及母语干扰造成的中文式英语等。所有的这些问题,都值得考生在定稿前认真检查、仔细核对、及时修补,力争做到全文信息齐全、结构合理、语句表达准确。
1(2018天津和平区二模)
假如你是高三学生李津,请你代表你的同学们,结合下面所提供的信息给你们的外教Mr. Black写一封电子邮件,向他提出一些建议。
要点:
1.表达问候并说明大家都很喜欢上他的课;
2.今天受同学的委托向老师提几点建议;
3.想了解美国同龄人的学习和生活情况;
4.想了解美国一些著名大学的信息。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾已经写出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:同龄人peer
Dear Mr. Black,
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Good luck!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Black,
I am Li Jin, one of your students. At first, I would like to thank you for your wonderful teaching skills and humorous teaching style on behalf of all my classmates. We really like your class. Then I want to make some suggestions about your class.
We hope you can introduce more information about the USA at class, because you are an American who knows the USA well. On the one hand, we want to learn about American teenagers’ life. For example, what lessons do they have? What do they do in their spare time? On the other hand, it is some information about famous universities in the USA that we desire to learn about. You know, some of us want to study abroad in the future. Those are our suggestions. Thank you for your teaching again.
Good luck!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信体的电子邮件,属于应用文。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主体时态。依据内容要点可分两段来写:
1.表达问候并表明大家喜欢上他的课;然后表明自己想代表同学们提几点建议。
2.具体的建议:①想了解美国同龄人的学习和生活情况;②想了解美国一些著名大学的信息。
2.(南昌市外国语学校2019届高考英语复习卷1)成语是中国文化的重要组成部分,它能用简单的词语表达出丰富且深刻的寓意。假定你是李华,你的外国笔友?Peter对中国成语很感兴趣,向你咨询有关中国成语的信息。请你写封邮件,介绍成语相关内容:
1、成语的特点;
2、学习成语的益处;
3、自己学习成语感受和体会。
Dear Peter,
I am glad that you are interested in?Chinese idioms.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Lihua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms. Chinese idioms, mainly consisting of four Chinese characters, have been appealing to those absorbed in the Chinese language because they are an important part of Chinese culture. The benefits of learning them can be listed as follows.
First, with many of Chinese idioms widely used in our daily life, having a good knowledge of them contributes to better understanding both spoken Chinese and written Chinese. Second, they usually possess vivid and profound meanings, making what you try to convey more convincing.
As far as I’m concerned, I have a preference for the interesting stories behind some of the Chinese idioms. Not only are they interesting, but also they tend to teach some wisdom, which helps me a lot.
I sincerely hope you can learn them well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一篇电子邮件:成语是中国文化的重要组成部分,它能用简单的词语表达出丰富且深刻的寓意。假定你是李华,你的外国笔友?Peter对中国成语很感兴趣,向你咨询有关中国成语的信息。请你写封邮件,介绍成语相关内容:成语的特点;学习成语的益处;自己学习成语感受和体会。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:Chinese idioms,(中国成语);be listed as follows如下所列;having a good knowledge of(对---精通);vivid and profound meanings(生动和深刻的含义);As far as I’m concerned,(以我看来)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
3.(2018天津高三下学期第二次联考)
假设你是李津,是天津某中学高三学生。你的加拿大笔友Susan正在学汉语,她给你发来邮件,询问你3月23日的英语考试情况并请你给她推荐一本汉语读物。请你给她回复邮件,要点如下:
1.表示感谢;
2.介绍你3月英语考试的详情(如心态、答题情况及考后反思等);
3.推荐《红楼梦》(A Dream of Red Mansions)并表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.邮件的开头、结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,要点齐全,语句通顺。
Dear Susan,
I’m more than delighted to hear from you.???
???? ??? ?
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Susan,
I’m more than delighted to hear from you. I’d like to express my sincere thanks to you for your great care for me. Just as you know, it was on March 23 that I took the English examination, where I kept a peaceful state of mind all the time, and I did well in the exam. This exam not only helped me find out my weaknesses in English study but also inspired my confidence in facing the coming challenges, which, undoubtedly, is of great benefit to me.
As for the Chinese reading material, I strongly recommend the novel A Dream of Red Mansions to you, for it is one of the four classical novels in China and is thought highly of by people at home and abroad. You are sure to fall in love with it the moment you set about reading it. I do hope you can make great progress in your Chinese study.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
1.本文体裁为书信体的电子邮件;
2.以第一人称为主体人称;以一般现在时和一般过去时为主体时态;
3.文章依据内容要点可分三段来写。第一段表示感谢;第二段介绍3月23日英语考试的详情;第三段推荐《红楼梦》一书并表达祝愿。
4.(天津市河东区2018届第一次模考)假如你是李津。你于2018年2月20日在网上订购了一本英国原版书Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (£10.00),一周后收到,发现书存在质量问题。请给客服部经理写封投诉邮件,说明情况和要求。要点如下:
☆商品名称、订购时间及价格;
☆何时发现何种质量问题(印刷错误,缺页等);
☆要求退款或换货,建议改进产品质量。
注意:⑴请使用规范英语,词数不少于100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
⑵可适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。
Manager
Customer and Service Department
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to you to make a complaint about your product._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to make a complaint about your product. I placed an order by the Internet for a copy of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows on February 20th, 2018, which is priced at 10 Pounds. A week later I received a package from your company and as I unpacked it, to my surprise, I found the back cover of the book missing. Although it won’t affect my reading of the story, I do wish to have a perfect copy.
I request that you send me another copy as soon as possible. And of course I will return the copy in my hands back to you. This incident shows there is room for improvement concerning your quality control. I do hope you could look into the matter and find out what caused it.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【解析】李津于2018年2月20日在网上订购了一本英国原版书Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (£10.00),一周后收到,发现书存在质量问题。请给客服部经理写封投诉邮件,说明情况和要求。文章以第一人称和第三人称为主,用一般现在时来写。要点包括:☆商品名称、订购时间及价格;☆何时发现何种质量问题(印刷错误,缺页等);☆要求退款或换货,建议改进产品质量。写作时要表达清楚,条理清晰,要点全面,态度诚恳。
5.(湖南师范大学附属中学2018届高三上学期第二次月考)假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会将举行迎新联欢晚会,请你给外籍教师Tom写一封邀请函。内容包括:1.晚会时间7:00 p.m.—9:00 p.m. next Friday;
2.晚会地点Students' Meeting Hall;
3.表演内容;
4.邀请对方参加表演以及询问对方的意愿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邀请信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing?__________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing?Currently,in order to welcome the new students,an evening party will be held in our school. As the Chairman of the Students' Union,I'm writing to invite you to join us.
Here is a brief schedule.First,it will be held in the Students' Meeting Hall from 7:00 p.m. to 9:00 p.m. next Friday.Additionally,there will be many wonderful performances presented by the teachers and students,such as singing,dancing,performing plays and so on.Everyone is longing for your coming,and it would be more cheerful if you could give a performance.
I sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation and I have the confidence that we students would be extremely delighted to see you.Please let me know your decision if it is convenient for you.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】1.确定文章的体裁,这是一封邀请函。2.确定文章时态的基调,介绍将要发生的迎新晚会,应该以一般将来时为主。3. 给文章划分基本段落,文章的基本段落分为三段。内容要点有:①.写信的目的;②.介绍迎新晚会的时间地点和内容;③.询问对方的意愿。
6.(河南省郑州市第一中学2018届高三上学期第二次月考) 假定你是李华,你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老师家做客,但是她不知道中国人做客有哪些传统,她给你发了一封电子邮件,请你给她一些建议。请你依据下列要点,给她回复一封电子邮件。
要点如下:
1.适当地送一些礼物;
2.介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
注意:
1.词数100左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
I have received your email.You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope you will enjoy yourself ill your teacher's home.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Lucy,
I have received your email.You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China.Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese.
Firstly,when you visit a Chinese family,you'd better bring some gifts.In China,it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand.So,you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk.What's more,table manners are also of great importance.We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes.When at table,you should not begin eating first,but follow the host or the senior one.Sometimes,the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions,and you should show your appreciation.
All in all,just as the old saying goes,"When in Rome,do as Romans do."
I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher's home.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老师家做客,但是她不知道中国人做客有哪此传统,她给你发了一封电子邮件,请你给她一些建议.请你根据下列要点,给她回复一封电子邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:适当地送一些礼物;介绍中国的餐桌礼仪.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
7.(2017天津红桥区二模)?
假定你是中学生李津。一个来自英国的中学生代表团在你校举办英语文化节(English Cultural Festival)期间来访,并受邀观看英文戏剧表演(English Drama Show)。请你根据以下写作要点代表学校写一篇欢迎词。
1)表示对客人的欢迎;
2)介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容、时间、地点等);
3)表达对客人的祝愿。
注意:
1)词数不少于100;
2)可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3)称呼已给出,请写欢迎词正文。
Dear British guests,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear British guests,
It’s my great honor to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school. We are excited to have you here during our English Cultural Festival.
As scheduled, we have English Drama Show this evening. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in speaking and listening. Most of the plays we will perform are by famous authors, such as William Shakespeare and Charles Dickens. The show will begin at eight o’clock tonight in the school hall. You are welcome to take part in it. I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence.
We hope you’ll have a pleasant time during your stay here.
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的欢迎词。写作时可分三步:首先表示欢迎,其次介绍该项活动的具体情况,最后表达祝愿。
8.(2017天津十二所重点中学二模)?
假如你是育才中学的李津,即将高中毕业。你打算报考香港大学,学习环境科学(Environmental Science),但有一些事情不太清楚,因此要给该校写一封电子邮件,咨询以下相关事宜:
1.如何才能被该校的相关专业录取;
2.是否需要参加专门的英语考试;
3.该校的奖学金、学费、食宿安排和生活费用等情况。
注意:1.邮件必须包括以上内容,可适当增加细节;
2.词数不少于100。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a senior student from Yucai High School and soon I will graduate.???
? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
???
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a senior student from Yucai High School and soon I will graduate. I plan to apply to Hong Kong University. So I??m writing to consult you about getting admitted into your university. I am very interested in Environmental Science, a famous major in your university. Because of the popularity of environmental protection, I plan to choose it as my major, hoping to make contributions in this field. I wonder how I can be a student in your university and whether I need to take some special English tests. How can I apply for the scholarship and how much will I have to pay for my education? What about the accommodations and living expenses?
Your timely reply would be much appreciated.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书信体。以第一人称为主体人称,以一般现在时为主体时态。
9.(2017天津南开区三模)?
为了吸引更多的留学生到你校学习,校学生会决定拍摄一部反映学校生活的短片,现正在招募学生演员。请你以学生会的名义,根据以下提示撰写一个通知。
(1)此次活动的目的;
(2)演员需要具备的条件:沟通能力强,擅长英语……(可以适当发挥);
(3)短片的内容简介;
(4)最后报名期限:下周一前到学生会报名。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)通知格式已给出,不计入总词数。
NOTICE
? ???___________
? ???___________
? ???___________
?
Students’ Union
【参考范文】
NOTICE
In order to attract more foreign students to study in our school, the Students’ Union has decided to recruit some students to make a short English film to introduce and promote our school. If you want to show your talent in this film, you need to have some related qualities. First of all, you need to have a good communicating ability so that you can cooperate well with the whole team. Besides, you must be good at English, especially spoken English. What’s more, if you have ever participated in similar activities before, it will be an advantage.
The film is about our campus life, such as having lessons in the classroom, playing basketball in the playground, having lunch in the dining hall and so on. If you are interested in this activity, please sign up for it at the Students Union before next Monday. We are expecting your participation and contribution.
The Students’ Union
【解析】本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的通知,主题为招募拍摄反映学校生活的短片的演员。文章应以一般现在时为主体时态。
10.(2017天津河北区二模)?
假如你是某外国语学校的学生李津,第九届金砖国家峰会(The Ninth BRICS Summit)将在你居住的城市举办。组委会现正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容包括:
1.个人情况:年龄、性别;
2.个人条件:擅长英语和法语,关注时事、政治和经济,善于交际,乐于助人,熟悉本地;
3.本人承诺:提供最佳服务。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Jin. ??
??_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
???
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Jin. I am writing this letter as I would like to volunteer to help at the Ninth BRICS Summit. I’m an 18-year-old boy from Tianjin and I’m studying at a foreign language school. I would love to help out when the Ninth BRICS Summit takes place in my hometown. To begin with, I have a good knowledge of both English and French. My main interests also happen to be politics, the economy and current affairs. Furthermore, I’m skilled at
communicating with others. I’m captain of the debate team and I always enjoy helping others. Last but not least, there is no doubt that I’m familiar with our city, which will surely be of great importance to the job.
If given the chance, Ill spare no effort to provide the best service to those who need it. I would appreciate it if you could respond to my application.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【解析】本文为提纲式作文。要点已给出,考生需要合理组织材料、遣词造句,适当地使用衔接词和过渡词。文章以第一人称为主体人称,以一般现在时和一般将来时为主体时态。
11.(河北省保定市2018届高三上期末调研)假设你是校学生会主席李华,新年到来之际,为了帮助学校留学生们更好地了解中国文化,学生会将举办一场新年联欢会。请用英语写一个通知,主要内容包括:
1. 时间:下周五晚6:00—8:00;
2. 地点:教学楼101室;
3. 内容:学习包饺子;比赛用筷子;中国校园歌曲串烧、观看武术表演等。
注意:1.词数不少于100
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Notice
As New Year is around the corner, we are going to hold a New Year party. It intends to help the overseas students have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
During the party, the Chinese campus songs will be presented in the form of good mixture. You will have to compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks. Meanwhile, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings. Also you can enjoy Chinese martial arts (wushu) performance. The party is scheduled in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday. Make sure you won’t miss it. All of you are welcome.
12. (安徽省亳州市2017-2018学年高三期末质量检测) 假如你是李华,前天你收到英国笔友Kathy发来的电子邮件,说她很想报名参加即将在当地举办的“汉语民歌演唱比赛(Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest)”活动,但信心不足。请你给她回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.鼓励她积极报名参加; 2.帮助分析参加的意义; 3.给她提几点建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Kathy,
I am glad to know that_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Amanda,
I am glad to know that you are interested in the Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest to be held in your hometown. It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.
Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose. What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. What's more, in the activity you can make more friends who are interested in learning Chinese. If you want to do a great job, you should do more practice before the contest. Of course, it is a good idea to listen to some Chinese music programs before the contest so that you can get a much better understanding of Chinese fold music.
I am sure you can do a good job! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
13. (黑龙江佳木斯一中2018届高三上第五次调研)假设你是李华,从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor) 的广告,欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件中请参加。
内容主要包括:
自我介绍(包括中英文能力),
参加意图(帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化,
希望获准。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总次数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.
I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and Tm excellent at it. Besides, I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I’m willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
14. (重庆市九校联盟2018届高三第一次联考)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友David准备组织一个“走进中国(Approach to China”的活动,他写信请你帮忙策划一下活动内容并介绍一下有中国特色的元素,以便让他的同学更好地了解中国。请你用英文写一封回信。
要求:1. 100字左右;
2. 需包括至少两个中国元素,可适当增减细节。
参考词汇:一带一路倡议One Belt and One Road Initiative;吉祥物mascot
________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear David,
I’m glad to know that you are launching a campaign “Approach to China” aiming to introduce your peers to a thriving China and be of some help.
From my perspective, the activities may range from Chinese calligraphy competition to paper cutting, martial arts, appreciation of Beijing Opera and so on. As for Chinese elements, the Great Wall with a long history symbolizes the national fighting spirits while high-speed railway representing the cutting-edge technology takes the lead in the world. China’s booming economy is marked with bicycle sharing and One Belt and One Road Initiative.
By the way, mascots like pandas and Monkey King will enjoy great popularity among participants.
Wish your campaign a success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
15. (福建省龙岩市2018届高三上期末)你校将于4月26日“世界知识产权日”(The World Intellectual Property Day)举办一次以“科技让校园生活更美好”(Science Makes Life Better on Campus)为主题的创意作品展。假定你是李华,请你代表学校学生会写封邮件,邀请美国交换生Henry参与展评活动。
内容包括:
1. 目的:尊重知识、崇尚科学;
2. 展评时间、地点、内容;
3. 报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1. 词数100左右,内容包括主要要点;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Henry,
I’m delighted to tell you that our school is going to hold an exhibition that focuses on the theme “Science Makes Life Better on Campus”, so I am writing to invite you to join in it.
The exhibition will take place in our school art gallery on April 26th. The World Intellectual Property Day aimed to encourage students to respect knowledge and advocate science. Everyone present will feel amazed to see lots of fantastic creative works from us students. I feel that you would have something unique to display in this exhibition. If you want to have a go, you are required to register online at Science@hotmail by April 1st.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua